Date: 15 Sep 2010 6:06 AM Title: Chapter 51
Nice additions to the story line. Building on Edward and Bella. Thank you for prompt updates.
Date: 15 Sep 2010 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 51
yet you left it off at that spot....ARGH!!
Please update soon :D
Date: 15 Sep 2010 1:38 AM Title: Chapter 51
can't wait for more
Date: 15 Sep 2010 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 50
love it and wished that i had a black horse
[Report This]Date: 15 Sep 2010 1:22 AM Title: Chapter 51
Great chapter! I'm really looking forward to learning more about Edward's past.
Date: 15 Sep 2010 12:56 AM Title: Chapter 51
well thats an intreting turn of events! cant wait to see what happened with him loosing the land! keep the chapters comming
[Report This]Date: 14 Sep 2010 11:46 PM Title: Chapter 51
You have know idea how much I love you right now and yes you are ALL KINDS OF AWESOME!!!! I am having the worst week ever and the extra little update today was so freaking awesome!!!! Yay for writers block!!!!! LOL. You know I have all kinds of mad love for your Edward and Bella and the progress today was simply beautiful. I am so happy Edward is finally going to share his past with Bella (totally didn't see that little twist coming and can't wait to hear the rest of the story). I hope he carves their initials in the tree by his parents, that would be so sweet! So THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU!!!!!!! And LOVE YOU LOVE YOU LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 14 Sep 2010 10:57 PM Title: Chapter 51
glad you kept on going !
love the story and its gathering up nice in its details and speed. wonder how the masens lost their land?
loking forward to more
Date: 14 Sep 2010 10:45 PM Title: Chapter 51
Ooooh this is getting so good!
Date: 14 Sep 2010 10:01 PM Title: Chapter 51
Wow, what a revelation!
[Report This]Date: 14 Sep 2010 8:51 PM Title: Chapter 51
Wow! Just Wow! not at all what I expected. Can't wait to know what happened. Thanks for the 2 chapters in one day!
All was his. How When Why What happened? How long till we find out. Sorry about your writers block... well not really. :-) Till tomorrow or so...
Date: 14 Sep 2010 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 51
Hmmm.....what a mystery..hope he explains. I know whatever the reason it won't change her love for him.
[Report This]Date: 14 Sep 2010 8:32 PM Title: Chapter 51
Ooo, wasn't at all expecting that! (Me likey.)
Hugs,
Gwen
Date: 14 Sep 2010 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 51
oh jeez, can edward get any sweeter. i just wanna give him a big hug amongst other things ....evil grin......
[Report This]Date: 14 Sep 2010 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 50
The gift was wonderful! The only bad thing less of an excuse to ride with Edward. ;-) I like the new Name! Eclipse seems to suit the mare.
This was a perfect lunch break!
Date: 14 Sep 2010 6:18 PM Title: Chapter 50
Are you going to explain the legend?
[Report This]Date: 14 Sep 2010 6:07 PM Title: Chapter 50
A horse!!! Of course..... why else would you need the blacksmith! Lol, cute name for the horse too. I have a horrible feeling something is going to happen while Edward and Bella are on their way back to the ranch. No bueno : ) just kidding, I know the angst is coming.
Your updates are the highlight of my day, thanks for keeping my spirits up!!!!
Date: 14 Sep 2010 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 50
awww sweet chapter
Date: 14 Sep 2010 5:24 PM Title: Chapter 50
I was so hoping it was a horse. Would you do an outtake of the legend????
Date: 14 Sep 2010 4:27 PM Title: Chapter 50
very nice chapter
Date: 14 Sep 2010 2:53 PM Title: Chapter 50
that was a pretty sweet surprise. good chapter.
[Report This]Date: 14 Sep 2010 2:44 PM Title: Chapter 50
*sighs happily* Nice way to start my day!!!
Hugs,
Gwen
[Report This]Date: 14 Sep 2010 12:35 AM Title: Chapter 49
*laughing hysterically* "No, Jacob is obviously not Bella's present."
Oh. Thank. God. *wipes tears*
Seriously. Book Jacob = annoying. Screen Jacob = extremely annoying. (Taylor, however, does seem sweet. Like a puppy. *snickers*)
Hugs,
Gwen ("Spoons Valley" makes me smile/laugh EVERY. SINGLE. TIME.)
Date: 13 Sep 2010 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 49
no I'm guessing that it is either Mr Cope or James as the watcher.
[Report This]Date: 13 Sep 2010 9:41 PM Title: Chapter 4
I feel for Rose. I hope she will someday allow Emmett to help her.
[Report This]Date: 13 Sep 2010 9:39 PM Title: Chapter 49
In the shadows I would bet it is James. It would give me great pleasure to see Bella cause harm to James.
I hope Jacob is coming to the Ranch to help keep it safe.
Oh Alice.. I so want her back story and WHY she is denying herself her love for Jasper. Is that coming soon!
Poop I wanted to know the gift. !!!
- meg
[Report This]Date: 13 Sep 2010 9:08 PM Title: Chapter 48
OK I am VERY happy that Edward has talked to Emmett. I also love that Em has realized how strong Bella is. I am looking forward to Bella and Edward talking about his past. I want to know what it is, and why does he feel so guilty. I like that Em has a positive view on Edward and not fighting him on his love for Bella.
The troubles on the ranch. I just feel like it is something to do with the railroad backers.
Oooo her gift.. I can't wait to see what it is!
Thanks for the Updates... Meg
Date: 13 Sep 2010 8:25 PM Title: Chapter 49
Thanks for clearing things up. I think i am going to go crazy with all the secerts you keep lol.
[Report This]Date: 13 Sep 2010 6:54 PM Title: Chapter 49
Cute chapter, but you know I live a little E&B but LOVE lots of E&B!!! : ) What exactly are those boys up to with Bella's gift and what does the blacksmith have to do with it????? James lurking in the shawdows is giving me the creeps. I hope his fascination is more with Edward (past history) then with Bella).
Date: 13 Sep 2010 4:34 PM Title: Chapter 49
love it and can't wait for more
Date: 13 Sep 2010 4:06 PM Title: Chapter 49
Is it a horse HUH HUH is it????
[Report This]Date: 13 Sep 2010 12:19 AM Title: Chapter 48
Good chapter.
[Report This]Date: 11 Sep 2010 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 47
Ah, hah! Was suddenly reminded of reading about those old b/w weekly serials (usually Westerns)---where each episode ended in a cliffhanger. I think this is like that! (And I highly approve!)
Hugs,
Gwen
Date: 11 Sep 2010 11:56 AM Title: Chapter 48
look forward to more.
Date: 11 Sep 2010 7:08 AM Title: Chapter 48
What is Bella's present ???? :) I need to know lol. What bad things could our perfect Edward have done????
Date: 11 Sep 2010 6:18 AM Title: Chapter 48
I love this story and the fact you update often. Thanks for being commited to your story.
Well written.
Date: 11 Sep 2010 5:37 AM Title: Chapter 48
Sorry I haven't been on the forums lately, I just really don't know what to say. I do have to say that I am really enjoying your story and can't wait to see more E&B interaction. Hope you have a great weekend and can't wait for the nexy update.
Date: 11 Sep 2010 4:14 AM Title: Chapter 48
nice chapter, and oh edward ain't he just a sweetie pie.
Date: 11 Sep 2010 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 48
hmm wonder what the surprise is
Date: 11 Sep 2010 3:37 AM Title: Chapter 48
aww edward loves her :)
[Report This]Date: 11 Sep 2010 2:39 AM Title: Chapter 48
Considering how biased you know I am, this is my favorite chapter thus far! Lol! Thank you for a sweet ending to a craptastic week!
Date: 11 Sep 2010 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 48
love it and can't wait to see what her gift is
[Report This]Date: 10 Sep 2010 4:47 PM Title: Chapter 47
That was funny that Jasper drank hair tonic. LOL
[Report This]Date: 10 Sep 2010 4:41 PM Title: Chapter 46
It cant be that bad. I guess that Alice broke the law somehow.
[Report This]Date: 10 Sep 2010 4:35 PM Title: Chapter 45
I am so happy for Jasper. Now he has to find out about Alices past. And who shot Em.
[Report This]Date: 10 Sep 2010 4:29 PM Title: Chapter 44
Thank goodness I thought Jasper went crazy and shot Em. But who did shoot him?
[Report This]Date: 10 Sep 2010 4:22 PM Title: Chapter 43
Jasper shot him??!!! I sure hope not.
[Report This]Date: 10 Sep 2010 4:16 PM Title: Chapter 42
That was too cute. I really like their time on the horse before the ranch.
[Report This]Date: 10 Sep 2010 4:08 PM Title: Chapter 41
Who was that at the end of the chapter? Hmmm.. Why cant Alice be with Jasper and does it have anything to do with that paper she stolefrom the Sherriff desk?
[Report This]Date: 10 Sep 2010 4:00 PM Title: Chapter 40
Why isnt Alice happy? She is free now.
[Report This]Date: 10 Sep 2010 3:54 PM Title: Chapter 39
Edward just seems so shy too, lol.
[Report This]Date: 10 Sep 2010 3:46 PM Title: Chapter 38
Jasper is going to be so happy when he finds out that Alice isnt going to marry Em.
Date: 10 Sep 2010 3:46 PM Title: Chapter 47
Oh my hair tonic, classic. Keep up the wonderful writing.
[Report This]Date: 10 Sep 2010 3:39 PM Title: Chapter 37
Poor Bella, you can tell she misses their parents and is worried for Em. She just needs to give it time.
[Report This]Date: 10 Sep 2010 3:30 PM Title: Chapter 36
Good chapter, my heart was breaking for Em.
[Report This]Date: 10 Sep 2010 3:24 PM Title: Chapter 35
Go Bella, I am glad she told Em.
[Report This]Date: 10 Sep 2010 3:14 PM Title: Chapter 34
Poor Alice, but I have a feeling it willbe good for her to be in town near Jasper. Also wasnt itgreat how Bella stopped the horse, too bad she got hurt.
[Report This]Date: 10 Sep 2010 3:06 PM Title: Chapter 33
OO no, I hope no one is hurt to badly.
[Report This]Date: 10 Sep 2010 2:57 PM Title: Chapter 32
Rose is so stubborn. If it doesnt bother him then it shouldnt bother her.
[Report This]Date: 10 Sep 2010 2:46 PM Title: Chapter 31
I cant believe that caused a fight. AI guess that is how it was in the wild west.
[Report This]Date: 10 Sep 2010 2:39 PM Title: Chapter 30
Em got caught, maybe now he will admit he doesn love Alice.
[Report This]Date: 10 Sep 2010 2:28 PM Title: Chapter 29
I wish Alice would just tell Em it is not going to work out.
[Report This]Date: 10 Sep 2010 2:20 PM Title: Chapter 28
I wish Em would just say he wants to marry Rose. They are to perfect together.
[Report This]Date: 10 Sep 2010 2:11 PM Title: Chapter 27
I wish Rose would have warned him, I just know something bad is going to happen.
[Report This]Date: 10 Sep 2010 2:04 PM Title: Chapter 26
I just dont see why Rose wouldnt take Em up on his offer.
[Report This]Date: 10 Sep 2010 1:55 PM Title: Chapter 25
I guess they are going to go after Bella to teach him to do waht they want about the railroad.
[Report This]Date: 10 Sep 2010 1:48 PM Title: Chapter 24
Alice does have her way.
[Report This]Date: 10 Sep 2010 1:39 PM Title: Chapter 23
LOL, at least Alice is trying to save Bella from them.
[Report This]Date: 10 Sep 2010 1:31 PM Title: Chapter 22
Its good that they are getting to talk a bit.
[Report This]Date: 10 Sep 2010 1:22 PM Title: Chapter 21
Aww, giving her the kitten was a sweet thing for Edward to do.
Date: 10 Sep 2010 6:07 AM Title: Chapter 47
Another good chapter.
Date: 10 Sep 2010 5:45 AM Title: Chapter 46
Good chapter again.
Date: 10 Sep 2010 5:28 AM Title: Chapter 45
Hope some interaction between B/E soon.
Good chapter.
Date: 10 Sep 2010 5:23 AM Title: Chapter 47
I am dying to find out what is up with Alice. Did she lie about her background of being raised by the nuns??? Is she relatied to outlaws????
Date: 10 Sep 2010 5:16 AM Title: Chapter 44
Good chapter.
Date: 10 Sep 2010 5:08 AM Title: Chapter 43
Oh nooo...hope is not Jasper
Date: 10 Sep 2010 4:37 AM Title: Chapter 42
The kiss was beautiful.
Let se what's next
Date: 10 Sep 2010 4:25 AM Title: Chapter 41
Good chapter again.
Date: 10 Sep 2010 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 40
Another good chapter.
[Report This]Date: 10 Sep 2010 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 47
What a wonderful story. I read it all after work today. Sorry for no reviews, but I'm reading on my phone. Can't wait to see where you take this. I hope e&b do not have too much angst. Let someone be a positive in the drama. I fear Bella will be attacked by James or Jake.
I hope rose will soon warm to another life. I hope it will not be all drama and then end.
I have very much enjoyed your style of writing. Thanks for sharing. Meg
Date: 10 Sep 2010 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 39
Good chapter.
Date: 10 Sep 2010 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 38
It was agood chapter.
Date: 10 Sep 2010 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 37
Another good chapter.
Date: 10 Sep 2010 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 36
Good chapter again.
Date: 10 Sep 2010 2:24 AM Title: Chapter 35
Good chapter.
Date: 10 Sep 2010 12:26 AM Title: Chapter 34
Good chapter