Date: 21 Sep 2010 8:54 AM Title: Chapter 56
I think the longer this story is the better there is so much going on and I want to know about all of them and what is happening. I think the story is moving along just great it helps that you update alot if you didnt then I think you may lose some but not me I am a die hard LOL. Thanks for keeping us informed.
Poor Edward will be emberised to see Emmett for a bit who else would Emmett think Edward was thinking about what a silly boy LOL What did Carmen say?
[Report This]Date: 21 Sep 2010 5:58 AM Title: Chapter 56
I don't think it is moving to slow at all. I think the worry is it will be ending too soon. Good luck this week. Hope to see updates next week meg say hi on the forums. Meg
[Report This]Date: 21 Sep 2010 3:02 AM Title: Chapter 56
*snickers at Emmett* OMG! What a sight that must have been! Wet, naked, Cowboy Edward? In the midst of...?
I may have to re-read the rest of the chapter as I got a bit...distracted at the beginning. Dunno why...
Hugs,
Gwen
Date: 21 Sep 2010 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 56
I like the way you are telling the story. Alice has some history making her scared of marrying a sheriff. The history of the outlaw. Well that has to be delbt with. That will clear her problem up. Life in those days was not prissy. People were Strong, Focused, and simple by nature.
Bella and Edward have to get focused on where they will live. Those conversations need to start. I can not remember her age. The fact she already has money seems to help with a place of their own. Edward has a second chance now to build what he lost.
Emmet will be lonely if he does not make peace with Rose. Perhaps Bella and Edward will chose to live close to him. His ranch is his not a family one passed down.
Good job. I enjoy your writing style.
Date: 20 Sep 2010 10:50 PM Title: Chapter 56
that was funny between edward and emmett
[Report This]Date: 20 Sep 2010 10:40 PM Title: Chapter 56
Great chapter! I love this story, and, am always pleased to see an update ~ when ever you post! Thank You!
[Report This]Date: 20 Sep 2010 9:49 PM Title: Chapter 56
I hope sometime in the future Edward can possibly get some of his land back from the other ranger.
Date: 20 Sep 2010 9:38 PM Title: Chapter 56
loved the chapter and the pace you are going. i won't lie and say that i don't wish you were writing more. I wish that you were writing even faster because I want more of the story but I can appreciate that you are really churning out the chapters at a fast pace, faster than other authors. so keep up the great work.
Date: 20 Sep 2010 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 56
love the story and you are not going to lose me so cant wait to read more
Date: 20 Sep 2010 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 56
excited to see what happens next on the ranch ! keep the chapters comming
Date: 20 Sep 2010 8:32 PM Title: Chapter 56
Ahhh for question 3. I get it now. Duh
Date: 20 Sep 2010 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 56
I like your pcing, I have been enjoying the story great deal.
Date: 20 Sep 2010 12:07 PM Title: Chapter 55
ow Alice is a bad girl
Date: 19 Sep 2010 11:58 PM Title: Chapter 55
Lovely story, very enjoyable. The pace is perfect and the characters come alive. I look forward to your next update. Thanks!
Date: 19 Sep 2010 5:52 AM Title: Chapter 55
How long is this story going to be?
Date: 18 Sep 2010 9:21 PM Title: Chapter 55
Well that's pretty interesting. Never expected that she was wanted for murder. Wonder how that will work out???
Date: 18 Sep 2010 9:11 PM Title: Chapter 54
ha ha he had to go get Carmen to talk to Bella. I'm surprised he still wanted to be in the room. :0)
Date: 18 Sep 2010 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 53
He loves her too :0) Great chapter!
Date: 18 Sep 2010 8:53 PM Title: Chapter 52
Poor Edward. What a sad story. But now he knows that Bella loves him :0)
Date: 18 Sep 2010 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 51
Oh wow wonder why the land no longer belongs to Edward???
Date: 18 Sep 2010 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 50
Awww ya gotta love big brother Emmett getting Bella her own horse. :0)
Date: 18 Sep 2010 8:22 PM Title: Chapter 49
ha ha I just read you A/N and the part where you said "No Jacob is obviously not Bella's present" made me laugh. Guess we'll find out what the gift is in the next chapter. :0)
Date: 18 Sep 2010 8:11 PM Title: Chapter 48
hmmm wonder what Bella's present is???
Date: 18 Sep 2010 12:42 PM Title: Chapter 55
hmm...didn't expect that. look forward to more.
[Report This]Date: 18 Sep 2010 5:18 AM Title: Chapter 55
Alice killed someone??? There has to be more to the story.
Date: 18 Sep 2010 4:10 AM Title: Chapter 55
Ooooo!!! Bad, bad Alice! Enjoying your story!!!!
Date: 18 Sep 2010 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 55
oh that was just evil incarnate.
Date: 18 Sep 2010 2:06 AM Title: Chapter 55
Such a fun story to read and so clever :)
Date: 17 Sep 2010 11:02 PM Title: Chapter 55
never saw that happening
Date: 17 Sep 2010 9:59 PM Title: Chapter 55
Oh No!! poor Alice what ever is she to do???
Date: 17 Sep 2010 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 55
intresting cant wait till the next chapter
[Report This]Date: 17 Sep 2010 6:43 PM Title: Chapter 55
WOW, can't wait for the back story there!!!! I wouldn't necessarily call this a cliffie since you gave us so many answers as to what is going on with Alice. Now if you would have ended before telling us what was on the paper she stole from Jasper's desk, that would have been evil!!!!!
You are the only reason I ever look forward to Mondays!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 17 Sep 2010 6:29 PM Title: Chapter 54
I love Carmen, very cute chapter!!! I thought it fit in great with your story. To me, an outtake should be something in the past to explain a part of the current story or something in the future that alludes to what the characters are up to now. For example, Carmen's comment "we'll talk later" would make a perfect outtake as it is alluded to in the current story but not necessary to keep the story going. Can't tell you enough how much I love this story and look forward to each chapter.
Date: 17 Sep 2010 6:00 PM Title: Chapter 55
It has to be a mistake or self defence. I see this is our puishment for all the last chapter you pumped out lol
Date: 17 Sep 2010 5:46 PM Title: Chapter 55
whoa, did not see that coming
[Report This]Date: 17 Sep 2010 5:36 PM Title: Chapter 55
Yes, you are evil! But, we all love you anyway! Have a good weekend!
[Report This]Date: 17 Sep 2010 4:15 PM Title: Chapter 55
Oooooooh EXCELLENT!!!
[Report This]Date: 17 Sep 2010 4:01 PM Title: Chapter 55
Not evil. At all it was GREAT. I'm betting Jazz will not care one bit in the end, but only if she tells him. I wonder will they find out when she defends someone and see what a good shot she is? Loved it!
[Report This]Date: 17 Sep 2010 3:28 PM Title: Chapter 55
*dances around* Now THERE'S the flyer!!! And yes. It was. *pouts*
Hugs,
Gwen
Date: 17 Sep 2010 2:58 PM Title: Chapter 55
Good Chapter - but it still doesn't explain why Alice was ok with marrying Emmett but not Jasper?
[Report This]Date: 17 Sep 2010 1:08 AM Title: Chapter 54
I got a good laugh from Em in this chapter. Carman helped too, she is direct.
[Report This]Date: 17 Sep 2010 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 53
I am sure her blush is going to stay for awhile and come back when she sees Edward again, lol.
[Report This]Date: 17 Sep 2010 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 52
What a sad story, poor Edward.
[Report This]Date: 17 Sep 2010 12:38 AM Title: Chapter 51
How did his family lose their land? If they died then why didnt the land go to Edward? Interesting.
[Report This]Date: 17 Sep 2010 12:33 AM Title: Chapter 50
Good present.
Date: 17 Sep 2010 12:27 AM Title: Chapter 49
Well the authors note answers alot of my questions, lol. I wonder if it is James that was watching them or maybe it was a female?
Date: 16 Sep 2010 11:28 PM Title: Chapter 54
Well, as I said before the moral climate was different during that time. Bella's age has something do with it. I have forgotten her age. She will not give into sex before marriage, I do believe. She may do alot of everything else but no sex.
Now I wonder why he hasn't told her about....TANYA.
The rest of the tin.
Date: 16 Sep 2010 11:00 PM Title: Chapter 54
well I'm all for bela and edward getting married soon, you know for emmett's benefit ;)
[Report This]Date: 16 Sep 2010 10:56 PM Title: Chapter 54
OMG that was funny. Poor Emmett.
[Report This]Date: 16 Sep 2010 9:58 PM Title: Chapter 54
I seriously lol for a good ten minutes on this chapter.I could actually see Emmett trying to have "the talk".And then wanting to kill Edward.lol oh God to hilarious.
Awesome chapter.
Date: 16 Sep 2010 9:56 PM Title: Chapter 54
The funniest chapter yet.
[Report This]Date: 16 Sep 2010 9:56 PM Title: Chapter 53
Awww our babies are making that final turn.I think I even cried a little.It was so sweet and tender how he treated her.
I'm so excited now to be getting to that point in the story where they come together,wonder how big brother Em will take all this.
[Report This]Date: 16 Sep 2010 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 54
Ok that was not an Outtake! It was so needed!!!! Poor Em and Bella... So hard to want to do right, but not sure what to do.
Hee Hee I loved Em's reaction at the End.. I foresee another chat with Edward and Em / and / Carmen and Bella! She needs someone to educate here on things that her Mother in their prim and proper raising may have left out.
If Em is really worried, maybe her should give Bella some French Letters as his next gift?
Loved the chapter. Is it sad that I am a bit sad the weekend is almost here because it will be a break from LH?
- Meg
[Report This]Date: 16 Sep 2010 7:22 PM Title: Chapter 53
The lemon drop was sweet and tart... poor Edward got the tart part. It was just perfect for the beginning of more E&B action. - Meg
Date: 16 Sep 2010 6:29 PM Title: Chapter 54
Really cute chapter! The mortification between bro and sis is too funny! And, Carmen delighting in the topic ~ really fun!
Date: 16 Sep 2010 5:46 PM Title: Chapter 54
i would to have an outtake about bella's thoughts about what emmett was saying. that would be funny
Date: 16 Sep 2010 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 54
It's fine, I like it!!!
Hugs,
Gwen
Date: 16 Sep 2010 3:49 PM Title: Chapter 54
loved it. very funny of big brother emmett. i hope the wedding is soon too!
[Report This]Date: 16 Sep 2010 3:47 PM Title: Chapter 54
yey,for the up and coming alice info.
loved the ch. nothing worse than a big bro having the sex talk with his sister,feel so sorry for bella.
look forward to next up-date,bye .c.
[Report This]Date: 16 Sep 2010 3:06 PM Title: Chapter 54
Fun chapter! I'm glad it's in the story and not an outtake.
Date: 16 Sep 2010 2:37 PM Title: Chapter 54
LMAO Emmett trying to have the sex talk priceless lol
Date: 16 Sep 2010 2:11 PM Title: Chapter 54
well i think it would b4e difficult to discuss sex with my brother but he shouldnt reaqlly talk hes been doin it with rosie! cant wait till the next chapter
Date: 16 Sep 2010 1:39 PM Title: Chapter 54
loved it emmett having to talk to her like that was funny
Date: 16 Sep 2010 1:26 PM Title: Chapter 54
lol for em's sex talk. Remind me of Charlie.
Date: 16 Sep 2010 12:04 PM Title: Chapter 53
love it love it love it so cant wait to read more please update soon this is a really great story
Date: 16 Sep 2010 5:38 AM Title: Chapter 53
that was one sweet dry hump, lol.
Date: 16 Sep 2010 3:09 AM Title: Chapter 52
Ah, so sweet. Great chapter.
Date: 16 Sep 2010 2:31 AM Title: Chapter 53
You get the gold star. Keep them coming... BUT back in the day.. People didnt just fool around. Women were much more chast. So if this progresses in their relationship it will be marriage. She is a good girl.
Date: 15 Sep 2010 11:59 PM Title: Chapter 53
oh you tease me with talk of three chapters. love where the story has gone.
[Report This]Date: 15 Sep 2010 11:08 PM Title: Chapter 53
Oh my fair Damsell you are too kind!!!! I miss you guys too and will come out to play in the forums real soon! Even though I can't participate like I want to right now, I hope you realize how much I love this story and can see that I have made an effort to review each chapter. You have made me one very happy girl lately with all of the Edward and Bella romancing, not to mention extra chapters!!!!!
Wow, who knew a fully clothed bump and grind make-out session could be so HOT!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 15 Sep 2010 10:21 PM Title: Chapter 53
THREEE in one day??? You'll make me giddy if you do!
Hugs,
Gwen
Date: 15 Sep 2010 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 53
That is a nice first sexual experince for Bella and blue balls for Edward
[Report This]Date: 15 Sep 2010 10:06 PM Title: Chapter 53
awwww,thats it, no stopping them now lol.
great story,can't wait for more,would love to know what miss alice is hiding,when are we going to find out?
again,thanks for great story,i so want more,bye.c.
Date: 15 Sep 2010 9:16 PM Title: Chapter 53
im happy that they are getting along very well and that was hot even with the clothes on! cant wait till the next chapter
Date: 15 Sep 2010 9:07 PM Title: Chapter 53
I'm glad they're relationship has progressed like it has. I'd hate for it to be dragged out forever like in some stories that are full of angst.
Date: 15 Sep 2010 9:06 PM Title: Chapter 53
Poor Edward!!! LOL And poor Innocent Bella.... As much as I love me some sexy times with E & B I wanna know whats up with Alice and WHY OH WHY she is saying no to Jasper
Date: 15 Sep 2010 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 53
Hell yeah 3 in one day would be perfect!! The lemon drop was superb!!
Date: 15 Sep 2010 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 52
Thank goodness Emmett came along before Malory got all the land.
[Report This]Date: 15 Sep 2010 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 52
*squees in delight* Love this chapter!
Hugs,
Gwen
Date: 15 Sep 2010 7:23 PM Title: Chapter 51
You are awesome! love this story. Edward use to own it all????
Date: 15 Sep 2010 7:16 PM Title: Chapter 52
AAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHH!! You stopped there? LOL. Can't wait for the next update. I am so glad to hear Edward's past and glad that Bella stayed, like she always does and should do. It wasn't as bad as I had imagined, but not good just the same. Love it.
[Report This]Date: 15 Sep 2010 5:30 PM Title: Chapter 52
Awe... That explains A TON! Well the ILY from Bells and searing kiss from Edward. What a good chapter. I bet the pouch has a ring.
I see why Mallory is so hostile to Emmett and Edward. Thank God Edward found Emmett to help turn his life around.
I guess the lemon drop is in the next chapter? - Meg
Date: 15 Sep 2010 4:43 PM Title: Chapter 52
kinda what I thought happened to him
[Report This]Date: 15 Sep 2010 3:32 PM Title: Chapter 52
Wow! Great backstory!!! Loved the chapter and the I love you was very sweet!
Date: 15 Sep 2010 3:26 PM Title: Chapter 1
Wonderful chapter. They need to know each others pasts to move on with their relationship and make it work. Maybe something bad could happen to the Malory's and Bella could help Edward get back part of his families land for their own place?
[Report This]Date: 15 Sep 2010 3:17 PM Title: Chapter 52
Great chapter. It's helpful to know more background.
Date: 15 Sep 2010 3:13 PM Title: Chapter 52
wow, poor Edward.
Date: 15 Sep 2010 3:09 PM Title: Chapter 52
great chapter. he was young and stupid but nothing she couldn't see past thank goodness. look forward to more edward and bella especially since she admitted to loving him.
Date: 15 Sep 2010 3:04 PM Title: Chapter 52
wonderful chapter
Date: 15 Sep 2010 1:25 PM Title: Chapter 51
oh wow. I can guess where this is going.
Date: 15 Sep 2010 1:13 PM Title: Chapter 51
You are awesome! Good chapter!