[Report This]Date: 29 Sep 2010 4:06 PM Title: Chapter 62
I am sick with anticipation!
Date: 29 Sep 2010 3:00 PM Title: Chapter 62
ugh. Poisoning the water is just crazy. Hmmm So Gun in pocket or a ring for someone.....or a picture of someone who died......so many possibilities.
Date: 29 Sep 2010 2:56 PM Title: Chapter 45
Yay! I can't wait to read more about Alice and Jasper -- I hope she's not stubborn or has silly ideas in her head that would keep them apart!
Date: 29 Sep 2010 2:46 PM Title: Chapter 44
Good for Bella -- she had every right to go looking for Emmett! I am glad that Emmett had that epiphany!
Date: 29 Sep 2010 11:43 AM Title: Chapter 39
Its really sweet to think of Bella nestled all nice and snuggly against Edward on a horse. Wish it was me!
[Report This]Date: 29 Sep 2010 3:57 AM Title: Chapter 61
So glad he is going to ask her.
Date: 29 Sep 2010 2:01 AM Title: Chapter 61
YEAH!!!! he is gonna ask her
Date: 29 Sep 2010 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 21
Yeah! Great story so far -- I can't wait to read more about Edward and Bella getting to know each other.
Date: 29 Sep 2010 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 19
Poor Rosalie! I feel so bad for her.
Date: 29 Sep 2010 12:38 AM Title: Chapter 15
Good for Carmen for telling Edward that he had embarrassed Bella. I really want them to start talking again. Also, it would be nice if Edward brought her a kitten as a piece offering. I know you have already written most of this story, so I will read on to see if it happens.
[Report This]Date: 29 Sep 2010 12:30 AM Title: Chapter 61
Squeeeeee!!!!! *giggles*
Hugs,
Gwen (Yes, I am such a romantic sap!!!)
Date: 29 Sep 2010 12:12 AM Title: Chapter 12
Poor Alice and Jasper...I hope that Emmett realizes that it wouldn't work sooner than later.
Date: 28 Sep 2010 11:54 PM Title: Chapter 10
I can't wait to find out what Alice did...I love that Jasper was in love at first sight. I also want to know more about Emmett/Edward/Bella.
Date: 28 Sep 2010 11:14 PM Title: Chapter 2
Aw, I am so glad their reunion was so sweet. Back off Jasper -- where's Edward???
Date: 28 Sep 2010 9:29 PM Title: Chapter 61
When you end this and I know you are getting close as you are wrapping each situation up. Please think of the next ranch. Maybe Edwards & Bella's. You write so well you are quick on updates.. I will miss this.
Date: 28 Sep 2010 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 61
im happy hes finally asking her for her hand in marrage i cant wait till the next chapter
Date: 28 Sep 2010 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 1
I love the start of this. I am looking forward to seeing what happens when she and Emmett meet again.
Date: 28 Sep 2010 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 61
I love Edward in this story- he's so sweet, but not overpoweringly sappy. Can't wait for the proposal chapter. I also love Alice and Jasper last chapter.
[Report This]Date: 28 Sep 2010 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 61
Oooooooo!!! I hope he asks her soon!! That means we'll get a honeymoon soon!! Lol!!! I know....I'm a perv!! Can't help it!!!
[Report This]Date: 28 Sep 2010 7:16 PM Title: Chapter 61
I'M A LITTLE DISAPPOINTED TO FIND OUT THAT EDWARD HAD BEEN WITH ROSIE. I KNOW HE'S BEEN WITH WOMEN IN THE SALOON BUT THAT'S KIND OF WEIRED, AWKWARD, AND KINDA NASTY WITH EMMETT BEING IN LOVE WITH HER AND ALL. I WONDER HOW BELLA WOULD TAKE IT IF OR WHEN SHE FINDS OUT. I WOULDN'T BE TOO HAPPY WITH THAT WERE ME. JUST SAYIN'...LOL
Author's Response:
Hi! Thanks for the review, but I just wanted to let you know that Edward has NOT been with Rosie. She took care of him as in she wouldn't leave him passed out drunk on the floor kinda thing, she never, ever took care of him in a sexual way. He said he just considered her a friend. Sorry if that wasn't clear.
Date: 28 Sep 2010 6:54 PM Title: Chapter 61
So excited can't wait.
Date: 28 Sep 2010 5:13 PM Title: Chapter 61
lol like she'll say no.
Date: 28 Sep 2010 5:07 PM Title: Chapter 61
Edward is shocked. I cant wait till he asks her
Date: 28 Sep 2010 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 61
Awwwwwwwwwwwwww :-)
[Report This]Date: 28 Sep 2010 4:06 PM Title: Chapter 61
YAY this makes me soooo happy.
Date: 28 Sep 2010 3:14 PM Title: Chapter 61
Wow i have been gone a few days and not been able to read and review. jasper and alice have finally got things fixed and edward asked for permission to marry bella. poor emmett is still trying to sort out rosie. great chapters and things are getting interesting.
[Report This]Date: 28 Sep 2010 2:18 PM Title: Chapter 61
OMG,I did NOT see that one coming.You are one sneaky devil you are.Poor Em,*shakes head*,he's so in love with with Rosie,but I know you have somethin up you sleeve,so I'll just sit back and wait.
Date: 28 Sep 2010 2:09 PM Title: Chapter 61
aww that was so sweet how he welcomed him to the family..
[Report This]Date: 28 Sep 2010 1:42 PM Title: Chapter 61
OMG, I am so excited! See you in the forum in a couple hours
Date: 28 Sep 2010 1:22 PM Title: Chapter 61
great chapter. glad to see edward moving forward towrds a life with bella. of course she will say yes.
[Report This]Date: 28 Sep 2010 6:02 AM Title: Chapter 60
Great chapter.
[Report This]Date: 28 Sep 2010 3:49 AM Title: Chapter 60
Thank goodness, I knew he would still marry her. I still want to know about Bella and Edward. Also is Rose going to quit being stubborn and marry Em?
[Report This]Date: 27 Sep 2010 9:55 PM Title: Chapter 60
OK now i am in tears. That was so sweet of Jasper. I understand why Alice did what she did. I am sure that any one of us would do the same thing for a child. Great chapter. Please update again soon!
Date: 27 Sep 2010 8:23 PM Title: Chapter 60
Well didn't see those two developments coming. Now Bella and Edward.
Thank you for being so good and updating often. I do look forward to this story. Will be so sad when it ends. Not many period pieces. This is well written.
Date: 27 Sep 2010 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 60
YAY!!!!!!! :)
Date: 27 Sep 2010 7:54 PM Title: Chapter 60
see her worrying was for nothing
Date: 27 Sep 2010 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 60
How could anyone loss interest in this story. I am so happy to know what Alice did I knew she was not a bad girl. I cant wait to see what happens next.
[Report This]Date: 27 Sep 2010 7:16 PM Title: Chapter 60
What's to lose interest in? I love this story, can't wait for the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: 27 Sep 2010 6:14 PM Title: Chapter 60
Great chapter! It just feels like the right timing to wrap up/resolve some of the conflicts in the story. I have no doubt that there is more to come and I'll be here, ready to read about it!
Date: 27 Sep 2010 6:10 PM Title: Chapter 60
awww that is so sweet
[Report This]Date: 27 Sep 2010 5:25 PM Title: Chapter 60
Wow, awesome chapter! I knew Jasper wouldn't care about her past. I loved the fact she smacked him around some too. Please have someone in a future chapter ask him how he got a shiner. Too funny! Would love to see them make a trip to the Big E ranch to officially announce their engagement.
Date: 27 Sep 2010 4:49 PM Title: Chapter 60
aww.. love that jasper.
Date: 27 Sep 2010 4:35 PM Title: Chapter 60
I knew if she had killed someone that there had to be a reason and I had a feeling that Jasper wouldn't care. I'm so glad she came out and just told him the truth and said yes this time when he asked her to marry him. :0)
[Report This]Date: 27 Sep 2010 4:29 PM Title: Chapter 60
Gah! So freaking SWEEEEET!!! *sigh*
Hugs,
Gwen
Date: 27 Sep 2010 4:22 PM Title: Chapter 60
Yay, I knew it'd be ok once she told him. I know that's not the end of things for Alice's problem I'm sure. Can't wait for Edward to pop the question to Bella too.
Date: 27 Sep 2010 4:18 PM Title: Chapter 59
ha ha smooth Jasper smooth :0)
Date: 27 Sep 2010 4:07 PM Title: Chapter 58
That was fun. :0) Wonder who this person in the shadows is.... and is it the same one that was watching Edward and Bella???
Date: 27 Sep 2010 4:06 PM Title: Chapter 60
lol Like it will be that easy to hide.
[Report This]Date: 27 Sep 2010 2:16 PM Title: Chapter 59
Way to save the day Jasper.
Date: 27 Sep 2010 12:50 PM Title: Chapter 56
Giving her the carved rose was soooo sweet! The beginning was funny when Emmet caught Edward in the shower. (although I did feel embarrased for Edward too) ha ha
Date: 27 Sep 2010 10:30 AM Title: Chapter 59
Oh that Jasper is pretty sneaky. Hope it works in his and Alice's favor.
Date: 27 Sep 2010 4:29 AM Title: Chapter 59
oh shit didn't see that one happening
Date: 27 Sep 2010 2:31 AM Title: Chapter 59
That is one way to get Alice to marry him lol
Date: 27 Sep 2010 1:49 AM Title: Chapter 59
Lol, Jasper's slick. I know it's not fair to Alice that he used the situation, but she needs to open up to him about what's holding her back. Hopefully this will be the push she needs.
[Report This]Date: 27 Sep 2010 1:27 AM Title: Chapter 59
Ha! Good move Jasper!
Two small typos that seemed to jump out: "Woah" should be "Whoa" and in the sentence, Alice, having noticed Japser’s entrance, looked . . . should be Jasper's
[Report This]Date: 27 Sep 2010 1:19 AM Title: Chapter 59
oh shizz!! cant wait for the update!!!
Date: 27 Sep 2010 12:54 AM Title: Chapter 59
Jasper's is a evil genius cant wait for more
Date: 27 Sep 2010 12:54 AM Title: Chapter 59
Yippee, a double treat this weekend. Oh I love your Edward. He is so romantic! I hope Esme makes it to the end. I can't imagine it being very common for someone if her age that has never given birth before to do so. I thought of those two brats but given the time of day, I ruled them out. Well, it looks like Jasper got himself a bride. Lol!!!
Date: 27 Sep 2010 12:36 AM Title: Chapter 59
Shotgun wedding!!! WHOO HOO!!!!
Date: 27 Sep 2010 12:34 AM Title: Chapter 59
Jasper is just so smart!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 27 Sep 2010 12:30 AM Title: Chapter 59
Wow! Go Jasper!!! And here I was all swoony over Edward's sweetness about babies...
Hugs,
Gwen
Date: 27 Sep 2010 12:30 AM Title: Chapter 59
hmmm and they were out that late just being good students.....yea right.
[Report This]Date: 26 Sep 2010 8:50 PM Title: Chapter 58
I'm sorry to hear you are not feeling well. Ear infections are the worst! Thanks for the extra chapter this weekend. It was a lovely surprise. Both boys made me swoon. Now you said "pairs of eyes" meaning two and it's to late for it to be any of the students. This can not be good! Hope you feel better soon! : )
Date: 26 Sep 2010 11:47 AM Title: Chapter 58
First, I'm sorry you are sick ~I hope you get well quickly! Great chapter!
Date: 26 Sep 2010 6:51 AM Title: Chapter 58
Sorry you are sick but thanks for thinking of us and posting. Who is watching them there is a peeping tom in town???
[Report This]Date: 26 Sep 2010 5:59 AM Title: Chapter 58
I wonder who is watching them threw the windows??? I wish she would just tell Jasper the story.
[Report This]Date: 26 Sep 2010 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 58
Oh my sweet lovin goin on with Jasper and Alice,mmm mmm.Oh but we do have a peepin tom,oh naughty, lovin honey.
So glad Em isn't given up on Rose,how sweet and Romantic is that.aww gotta love that teddy bear.
Date: 26 Sep 2010 2:02 AM Title: Chapter 58
well i think its her dad! cant wait till the next hcapter
Date: 26 Sep 2010 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 58
love it and i wonder who was watching them
Date: 26 Sep 2010 1:33 AM Title: Chapter 58
Aww honey, sorry you didn't feel well, but glad you updated. :)
[Report This]Date: 26 Sep 2010 1:24 AM Title: Chapter 58
Great chapter! I'm so glad that Emmett and Jasper aren't giving up!
[Report This]Date: 26 Sep 2010 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 58
Wow! Great chapter! I'll be over in the corner having a drink and a hug with Rose. I think she needs it after Em's sweet pledge!
As for Jasper & Alice? I think they're doing fine---minus the pervs watching! LOL.
Hugs,
Gwen (Feel better soon, Damsell!)
Date: 26 Sep 2010 12:51 AM Title: Chapter 58
hmmm wonder who's gonna start trouble for ms Alice.
Date: 25 Sep 2010 10:00 PM Title: Chapter 1
I like it so far, just wondering if it's an E/B or J/B story. Only one way to find out. ;)
[Report This]Date: 24 Sep 2010 11:03 PM Title: Chapter 57
Gosh, I love a determined man!!!! He'll break her down one way or the other. I loved how you brought the other charactors of the original story in as some of Alice's students, very clever!!!!! Also looks like Alice may be able to piece together whats going on with all the troubles around town and add valuable insight. I hope she comes clean with Jasper soon because we all know love will win out in the end and it won't matter one way or the other to him.
I hope you were able to finish up your other projects like you wanted and know how much you were missed. You know you are the drug dealer to our crack habit, right???? Can't wait til next week so I can get my fix ; ) XOXOXO
[Report This]Date: 24 Sep 2010 10:53 PM Title: Chapter 56
After a very long and stressful week I finally found time to read your updates and I have to say this chapter made me swoon! The Emmett and Edward shower scene, hysterical!!!!! But the little Edward and Bella reunion was very sweet. I thought the initial carving on the rose was a very romantic touch. I am so happy to see Edward thinking about the future instead of worrying about the past!!!!
Date: 22 Sep 2010 10:12 PM Title: Chapter 57
Excellent chapter... l think I know why it was OK or A to marry Em but not OK to marry J. I'll keep it to myself to see if I'm correct later. Love the fic. I hope you get your RL stuff complete to your satifaction. I look forward to your updates. I look at your forum but I'm not sure what to do with it.
Date: 22 Sep 2010 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 57
OMG yes thank you, you finally brought in my fav character Alec!!!!!
Date: 22 Sep 2010 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 57
I will miss you this week. I look forward to this posting. Good story line.
Romance building, and it is truly a romance not a f..fest.
Thank you,
[Report This]Date: 21 Sep 2010 8:50 PM Title: Chapter 57
Poor, sweet Jasper! I want to hug him!
Hugs,
Gwen
[Report This]Date: 21 Sep 2010 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 57
Poor Jasper, I think if Alice toldhim he would find some way to help her.
Date: 21 Sep 2010 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 57
excellent chapter and i don't think i got to review for the last chapter because real life got in the way,,,,, but poor edward, he really needs his release....snickers.....
Date: 21 Sep 2010 5:20 PM Title: Chapter 57
So sad not to see you for the rest of the week but I understand there is more to life that this but not much for me LOL. I feel so sorry for Alice and Jasper he is trying so hard to win her heart and she is trying so hard to keep her heart closed off to him.
Date: 21 Sep 2010 5:07 PM Title: Chapter 57
look forward to more.