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Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2010 11:56 AM Title: Chapter 39

poor eddie all that way with a hard on!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2010 11:48 AM Title: Chapter 38

bella and em are ok and now em has an ally in his corner to help him get his rosie.

still wonder about alice's past...

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2010 11:25 AM Title: Chapter 37

i wonder what the letter is about? telling his momma about rosie? asking for advise? or maybe just saying he missed home and his family?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2010 11:17 AM Title: Chapter 36

well em is gonna have to do something to get things going in the direction he wants them to go.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2010 11:10 AM Title: Chapter 35

the first real kiss! woohoo!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2010 6:00 AM Title: Chapter 34

well both girls are ok and now alice will be in town closer to jasper. heehee

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2010 5:53 AM Title: Chapter 33

well it looks like once the dust clears, and the girls are found to be all right - i hope, em may have found the someone else to marry alice. kinda hard to hide your feelings when faced with your sweety in danger of stampeding horses huh jasper.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2010 5:41 AM Title: Chapter 32

looks like now bella needs to have a talk with em. brother bear deserves to be happy.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2010 5:22 AM Title: Chapter 31

well bella what are you gonna do? confront em? confront alice? or confront rose?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2010 5:16 AM Title: Chapter 30

well now em knows of the plot against him and rosie knows em still wants her. and bella knows her brother has a side thing going, i wonder what she will do with that information?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2010 5:00 AM Title: Chapter 29

well it looks like bella isn't the only one who gained a sister emmy did too. i wonder how long until alice and em figure out the other feels the same sibling love not romantic love...?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2010 4:52 AM Title: Chapter 28

aww looking up at the same night sky...

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2010 4:39 AM Title: Chapter 27

poor rose thinking of herself as being less than bella and alice.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2010 4:28 AM Title: Chapter 26

well rose is doin what she feels she must. we all have to make our way somehow and back then options were slim for the ladies. but now she can help her emmy bear!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2010 4:18 AM Title: Chapter 25

he farted in church! heehee! poor alice must have been mortified.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2010 4:10 AM Title: Chapter 24

three hours em, three hours! heehee

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2010 4:00 AM Title: Chapter 23

poor alice! but very quick thinking getting em roped in to listening to the drivel! heehee

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2010 3:49 AM Title: Chapter 22

wonder if emmy is worried about bella and edward going out for a ride or if he is still upset over rose.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2010 3:42 AM Title: Chapter 21

aww they are gonin on a date... kinda. wonder if any talk of feelings will come up?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2010 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 20

girls go shopping and the boys go off to discuss business. oh the olden days...

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2010 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 19

poor emmy! poor rose! rose is trying to do the right thing by em with her reputation and em just doesn't care he wants his rosie.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2010 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 18

oh boy emmy gave alice a free 'get whatever you need'card?!?!?!? boy does not know what he is in for!

i wonder what the meeting em is going to to is all about?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2010 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 17

a glimmer of hope for poor eddie. and a lookinto alice's controlling nature for emmy.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2010 2:53 AM Title: Chapter 16

well both of the boys have some sweet tlkin to do with miss bella.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2010 2:42 AM Title: Chapter 15

well the wise words of a woman have yet again enlightened the unknowing man. i wonder what eddie will do to apologise?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2010 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 14

gotta say it again - i love carmen! she is just what these boys need to keep them in line. even if she does so outta fear. heehee

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2010 2:25 AM Title: Chapter 13

well looks like bella and alice have made a much needed friend in eachother. i wonder how the boys's night went...?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2010 1:22 AM Title: Chapter 12

great first impression em! now i wonder is alice a wanted woman? what did she stuff in her pocket?

Reviewer: shiloh8 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2010 12:42 AM Title: Chapter 64

This is a great story!  Keep up the good work!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2010 11:53 PM Title: Chapter 11

alice sure is a spit fire and seems to have poor jasper wrapped around her little finger already. i wonder how much of a shock it will be when he finds out she is ment for em?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2010 11:45 PM Title: Chapter 10

well holy hell what did little alice do?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2010 11:37 PM Title: Chapter 9

my goodness i love carmen! poor eddie all smitten with bella and trying to stay alive while getting beats from em. and emmy havin his family jewels all beat up wonder if he needs a kiss to make it feel better.

and poor bella is gonna need some wild west friendly clothes soon!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2010 11:28 PM Title: Chapter 8

holy fuck you make me giggle! that would be too funny! and poor bella, so mortified. heehee

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2010 11:22 PM Title: Chapter 7

oh boy the handsome stranger coming in to save the fair lady!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2010 11:15 PM Title: Chapter 6

well emmy i am pretty sure that a certain sherrif will be more than willing to take this new little filly off of your hands. heehee

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2010 11:07 PM Title: Chapter 5

time to take a look around and see the new homestead.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2010 11:01 PM Title: Chapter 4

oh rose! always quick to act tough so you don't have to be hurt by others. what are you gonna do now?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2010 10:54 PM Title: Chapter 3

oh i like carmen! she is so what emmy needs. and em fallin all over his words trying to be a gentleman around bella?!? too funny.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2010 10:38 PM Title: Chapter 2

well the who and the why are out there and jas feels like an ass. seems like em is a might embarased about the mail order bride thing and wants to keep it away from bella.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2010 10:29 PM Title: Chapter 1

oh boy emmy is waiting on a mailorder bride and is getting his baby sister instead! this should be fun!

Reviewer: lovebitessobiteback Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2010 9:14 PM Title: Chapter 3

I would not be surprised if Carmen is related to Alice some how.  They seem to act the same and they both have black hair and it would explain how Alice and Jasper will meet.   Oh that was funny when Emmett was going to say 'scare the piss out of a hardened man'.

Reviewer: pappy73 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2010 3:32 PM Title: Chapter 64

AWWWWW.Edward proposed,even though big teddy Em kidda jumped the gun, it was so sweet, it got all weepy.I'm glad Em could share it with his baby sis though, that made it that much sweeter.

 

Reviewer: aborealis7 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2010 2:27 PM Title: Chapter 64

Pleasantly surprised, and, a little misty eyed myself!

Reviewer: westernem Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2010 8:59 AM Title: Chapter 60

freaking finally, yay!!

Reviewer: westernem Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2010 6:30 AM Title: Chapter 15

ah hope they figure out that alice would rather be with jasper, who would also approve of that change in situations and that emmett should be with rose, no matter how horrid she might be every once and a while.

 

really cute story, love reading it!

Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2010 5:51 AM Title: Chapter 1

I have to say for a bit i was thinking this is progressing quite slow but i must say that it still kept me reading.

I hope you update soon

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2010 1:02 AM Title: Chapter 64

Leave it to Emmett LOL  Alice and Jasper still did not get to tell everyone

Reviewer: gabys Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2010 12:33 AM Title: Chapter 64

Loved it, great chapter.

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2010 12:10 AM Title: Chapter 64

if i was edward i would have killed emmett for jumping the gun but i love it

Reviewer: Coleen561 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2010 11:49 PM Title: Chapter 64

Wow!  That was great!  I loved it!  That has to be one of the best, funniest, and sweetest Edward proposals, ever!  Definitely a "10" coffee cup rating.

Reviewer: ginabella59 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2010 9:38 PM Title: Chapter 64

Still waiting for the nexts chapters

Reviewer: ginabella59 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2010 9:28 PM Title: Chapter 63

Good chapter again.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2010 9:11 PM Title: Chapter 64

Bless you!  My favorite writer. You keep the story going. Get side things at work and then keep that main story going.

 

 

Reviewer: ginabella59 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2010 8:39 PM Title: Chapter 62

Another good chapter.

Reviewer: XXDEBBIECULLENXX Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2010 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 1

Ha! Got to love Emmett.x Loved it!

Reviewer: ginabella59 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2010 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 61

Good chapter again.

Reviewer: debs2crazy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2010 7:37 PM Title: Chapter 64

I didnt see Em letting the cat out of the bag, but that was priceless. Good chapter.

Reviewer: ginabella59 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2010 6:52 PM Title: Chapter 60

Yesssss. let see what's next

Reviewer: ginabella59 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2010 6:35 PM Title: Chapter 59

I hope she'll say yes.

Good chapter.

Reviewer: ginabella59 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2010 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 58

Good chapter.

Reviewer: ginabella59 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2010 6:04 PM Title: Chapter 57

Good chapter again.

Reviewer: ginabella59 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2010 5:44 PM Title: Chapter 56

Another good chapter.

Reviewer: ginabella59 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2010 5:19 PM Title: Chapter 55

Good chapter again.

Reviewer: lfcpam Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2010 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 64

figures emmett would ruin the moment LOL  edward is just so freakin sweet

Reviewer: ginabella59 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2010 4:31 PM Title: Chapter 54

Good chapter.

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2010 4:03 PM Title: Chapter 64

You know I always thought Jasper kinda sucked with is trying to eat Bella and all but I was seriously going to have to hurt him for proposal blocking. Since the rest of the chapter and the proposal was so sweet, I will let him live, for now anyway! LOL See you in the forum in a bit!

Reviewer: Ezzy Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2010 3:35 PM Title: Chapter 64

wow what a proposal!! can't wait to read the next chapter

Reviewer: GwenCooper426 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2010 3:31 PM Title: Chapter 64

OMG!!!  I LOVE Carmen!!!  That was just priceless!

*crazy giggles*

Hugs,

Gwen

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2010 2:58 PM Title: Chapter 64

LOL for Emmett

Reviewer: laylieb Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2010 2:43 PM Title: Chapter 64

Nice!!

Reviewer: 22amazing Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2010 2:15 PM Title: Chapter 64

lol, leave it to emmett to mess things up, well not really .now everyone can celebrate two engagements instead of one. it's too bad rosalie won't marry emmett because then they could celebrate all three at the same time.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2010 2:00 PM Title: Chapter 64

way to go big brother!!  Although can't really blame him it was an honest mistake.  I cried a little.  It was very sweet.  Hope alice and jasper don't get ruffled by the mistake.

Reviewer: jaclynheartz Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2010 1:57 PM Title: Chapter 64

Loved the engagement! :)

Reviewer: Chicsarah Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2010 12:55 PM Title: Chapter 64

You did have me fooled.  I can't believe that Emmett just ruined Alice and Jasper's news though...I hope they get a little celebration, too!

Reviewer: ginabella59 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2010 6:44 AM Title: Chapter 53

Wow this chapter was beautiful.

Reviewer: ginabella59 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2010 6:22 AM Title: Chapter 52

Good chapter.

Reviewer: ginabella59 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2010 6:06 AM Title: Chapter 51

It was a good chapter again

Reviewer: ginabella59 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2010 5:54 AM Title: Chapter 50

Another good chapter.

Reviewer: ginabella59 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2010 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 49

Good chapter again.

Reviewer: ginabella59 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2010 4:47 AM Title: Chapter 48

Good chapter.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2010 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 63

thank you once again.

Reviewer: debs2crazy Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2010 1:41 AM Title: Chapter 63

That was a nice visit. I knew Bella would see that there was more to the nun story.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Sep 2010 7:48 PM Title: Chapter 63

good chapter.

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Sep 2010 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 63

Cute chapter! Good to see the girls together again. Can't wait for Alice & Jasper to visit but am a total nervous nelly knowing bad things are going to start happening. Hopefully nothing will happen to proposalblock Edward! I was worried Alice & Jasper' announcement would make Edward wait, so I was glad the girls kept it a secret for the time being.

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Sep 2010 6:09 PM Title: Chapter 63

:)

Reviewer: Chicsarah Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Sep 2010 6:01 PM Title: Chapter 63

I can't wait for Edward's surprise!

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Sep 2010 5:57 PM Title: Chapter 63

very funny jasper running from little alice. can't wait for more

Reviewer: GwenCooper426 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Sep 2010 4:23 PM Title: Chapter 63

Ooo, tackle hugs!  ; )  

Now why do I have the feeling that all this is just the calm before the storm?

Gwen

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Sep 2010 4:03 PM Title: Chapter 63

nice filler chapter

Reviewer: gabys Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Sep 2010 2:52 PM Title: Chapter 63

Great chapter.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Sep 2010 2:44 PM Title: Chapter 63

That was a cute chapter sometime men should stay out of the kitchen lol not in my house if my hubby didnt cook sometime we would starve lol.  Is he going to ask Bella on the way home to marry him I cant wait???

Reviewer: debs2crazy Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 30 Sep 2010 12:11 AM Title: Chapter 62

That is really terrible, they will lose all the cattle.

Reviewer: Chicsarah Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2010 11:40 PM Title: Chapter 62

Oh no, poor cows!  I hope that James and Laurent are strung up for this!  I am glad to be caught up now! 

Reviewer: Chicsarah Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2010 11:33 PM Title: Chapter 60

I am so glad that is all resolved.  Now we have to make things good between Emmett and Rose.

Reviewer: TwiAggie94 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2010 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 57

Oh Alice.... Oops with the slip of the tong. Good Job Jazz... I hope he will be ok when he knows the truth.

Sorry I have been away... I will be back to the forum once I am caught up. Meg

Reviewer: gabys Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2010 6:54 PM Title: Chapter 62

Great chapter.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2010 5:52 PM Title: Chapter 62

So excited for Esme hope she carries the baby ok.  So James and Laurent are poisening the water???  What is James secert

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2010 5:46 PM Title: Chapter 62

:)

Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2010 4:52 PM Title: Chapter 62

good chapter.

Reviewer: GwenCooper426 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2010 4:48 PM Title: Chapter 62

Oh, no!  Poor cows!!!  James, I hate you.

No hugs for you,

Gwen

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