[Report This]Date: 06 Oct 2010 4:20 PM Title: Chapter 68
OMG! How the heck are they going to break the news Edward? Between Bella & Eleazar, he is going to go ballistic. Do you hate me? Because I think you are trying to kill me with anticipation! : )
Date: 06 Oct 2010 3:32 PM Title: Chapter 68
oh my gosh ! thank you so very much for giving me this ! you really are so sweet thank you!
love the story and i love how you keep leaving it in cliffys even if at the same time i am like "nooooo!!!" at my screen lol
and again thank you for posting it and the happy birthday :o)
Date: 06 Oct 2010 3:29 PM Title: Chapter 68
well i hope that they figure out whos doing all of this cant wsait till hte next chapter
Date: 06 Oct 2010 1:56 PM Title: Chapter 68
oh holy hell in a hand basket! the crap has hit the fan . i can do nothing but pace the room now, so edward better make his horse go faster. oh jeez never mind about the pacing, now my mind is in the gutter, never use edward and faster in the same sentence................................................
Date: 06 Oct 2010 1:28 PM Title: Chapter 68
oh man wait until they find out what happened at home..not gonna be pretty
Date: 06 Oct 2010 1:27 PM Title: Chapter 68
good chapter. looking forward to the next.
Date: 06 Oct 2010 1:27 PM Title: Chapter 68
yes yes I'm anxious for more! :0)
Date: 06 Oct 2010 1:11 PM Title: Chapter 68
you have me on the edge of my seat. can't wait for more
[Report This]Date: 06 Oct 2010 7:19 AM Title: Chapter 67
WHAT THE HELL!! Oh please tell me that they are going to suffer the most aweful pain from Em and Edward!!!!
[Report This]Date: 06 Oct 2010 5:14 AM Title: Chapter 67
Wow, I cant believe they killed Carmens husband!! Poor Carmen. I sure hope Bella doesnt meet a terrible fate, James sure is a crazy sob.
Date: 06 Oct 2010 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 67
Ok.. keep writing .. not angry. Just keep the story going.
Alice, should have been able to grab his gun and shoot him. He would not have guessed she .. had it in her.
Bella is not weak . She will have to be strong for this. Oh my gosh Edward and Emmet hurry up.
Date: 06 Oct 2010 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 67
ooohhh I hope bella gets to kill james.grrr if he rapes her though....you and me gonna have "special" words
Date: 06 Oct 2010 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 66
ugh. damn cattle rustler cheater pants people
Date: 06 Oct 2010 2:36 AM Title: Chapter 67
i want more right now
[Report This]Date: 06 Oct 2010 1:27 AM Title: Chapter 67
i can't believe you shot Eleazar, gosh i hope he doesn't die, that would be just too much. and my oh my, hope someone heard them talking about james so they'll have a name so they can go get bella, edwards going to be so sad :(
update soon (if you can) can't wait to see what happens next!!
Date: 05 Oct 2010 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 67
Edward will be so angry when he finds no Bella!
[Report This]Date: 05 Oct 2010 11:39 PM Title: Chapter 67
OMG...PLEASE LET BELLA BE OK AND DON'T LET THEM RAPE HER OR ANYTHING. PLEASE LET HER ESCAPE OF SOMEONE SAVE HER IN TIME. IT WOULD BE SO AWESOME IF WHEN ALICE WAKES UP SHE'S SUPER PISSED AND GO'S BACK TO HER OLD GUN TOTING WAYS TEMPORARILY AND KICKS SOME SERIOUS ASS!!! POOR CARMEN. I'M HOPING THAT ELEAZAR REALLY ONLY GOT SHOT LIKE IN THE SHOULDER OR SOMETHING SO THAT HE STILL LIVES.
[Report This]Date: 05 Oct 2010 9:46 PM Title: Chapter 67
Oh God I did not see this coming at all.Poor Eleazar!!I hope he doesn't die,it will crush Carmen.I have NO doubt in my mind that Edward,Emmett, and Jasper will get their paybacks on James and Laurant.Poor guys will not know what hit them.
Bring on the drama!!!
Date: 05 Oct 2010 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 67
wow that was intense...poor eleazar
Date: 05 Oct 2010 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 67
Oh no, I heart broken over poor Eleazar. I'm sure James will get what coming to him. Great chapter, as always.
Date: 05 Oct 2010 6:30 PM Title: Chapter 67
The boys are sure gonna have their work cut out for them when it comes to getting her back. Can't wait til the next post!
Date: 05 Oct 2010 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 67
Oh wow I didn't see any of that happening at all! How's Bella going to get out of this? Hope Elezar gunshot wound isn't as bad as it sounds and that he'll live. I kind of felt something like that was going to happen though when he and Carmen were having their loving moment. So sad.
Date: 05 Oct 2010 6:08 PM Title: Chapter 66
Oh wow when it rains it pours! Poor Emmett!
Date: 05 Oct 2010 6:01 PM Title: Chapter 65
I knew it. I knew something bad was going to happen. Can't wait till they catch James. :0)
Date: 05 Oct 2010 5:53 PM Title: Chapter 64
ha ha I think thats one of the best engagements I've ever read! Great chapter! Now something bad is going to happen isn't it??? :0)
Date: 05 Oct 2010 5:48 PM Title: Chapter 67
so sad and scared for what will happen next.
Date: 05 Oct 2010 5:44 PM Title: Chapter 63
Carlisle and Esme are so funny. :0) Is Edward going to ask Bella on their way back to the ranch???
Date: 05 Oct 2010 5:42 PM Title: Chapter 66
oh man...they just can't win. Better the barn than the house though.
Date: 05 Oct 2010 5:37 PM Title: Chapter 62
Looks like James is up to no good.
Date: 05 Oct 2010 5:30 PM Title: Chapter 61
Great chapter! I love that he asked Em for Bella's hand. I knew he would but I didn't know it would be this chapter. :0) Can't wait to see how he asks and of course she's gotta say yes.
Date: 05 Oct 2010 5:26 PM Title: Chapter 67
Awesome...More, more, more.
[Report This]Date: 05 Oct 2010 5:23 PM Title: Chapter 67
OMG! Heart failure.... Poor Carmen & Eleazar, : ( I HATE James! I am going to go cry in peace now, people are giving me funny looks.
Date: 05 Oct 2010 5:20 PM Title: Chapter 67
its my birthdy tomorrow ....... and its not for a guilt into updating its really the truth but hey if it gets me an update i'll shout out my age to the whole village lol
another 2 fab chapters even better for getting em in 1 day ! bravo
Date: 05 Oct 2010 5:12 PM Title: Chapter 67
OMFG I knew he was after one of the girls should of know it was Bella but what is the conection??? OMG please let Eleazar live I cant think of poor Carmen without him. Edward and Emmett are going to go crazy when they find out that the killing of the cattle was just to get them away from the house.
Date: 05 Oct 2010 5:01 PM Title: Chapter 67
Oh no! Now that Bella has heard their names, they are not going to be content to leave her. I hope that the boys see the smoke from the barn fire and rush off to the rescue!
Date: 05 Oct 2010 4:41 PM Title: Chapter 67
So glad you were able to post...I cant wait for the next chapter but if Eealzar dies I might have to go into mourning for a few days.
[Report This]Date: 05 Oct 2010 4:01 PM Title: Chapter 66
c'mon,has no one realised that mallory's have had nothing happen to them(hardly).....if this is their way to get the railroad through that way ,are they trying to bankrupt emmet,thought they needed there buisness to get them there, they are needing to sort out the volturi bro's and mallory's men,james etc..... can't wait to see what happens next..bye.c.
Date: 05 Oct 2010 4:01 PM Title: Chapter 66
You're lucky I like you and this story. Blackmailers shouldn't be rewarded. *blows raspberry*
Date: 05 Oct 2010 3:36 PM Title: Chapter 66
Great chapter! Kind of hoping since the men are all away that it'll be up to the women to kick some ass! Lol, great chapter.
Date: 05 Oct 2010 3:28 PM Title: Chapter 66
What else the cattle and now a fire????? James wants one of the girls I think he must know Alice because of her past and he is just a sick fuck.
Date: 05 Oct 2010 3:27 PM Title: Chapter 66
Aw mean ending place! But I love the story and it just keeps getting better and better. :-)
Date: 05 Oct 2010 3:20 PM Title: Chapter 66
That was mean!! This story is getting so good...please post the next chapter soon!!
Date: 05 Oct 2010 3:16 PM Title: Chapter 66
damn a fire too...what the heck..how are those women gonna fix that
[Report This]Date: 05 Oct 2010 3:04 PM Title: Chapter 66
The barn is on fire??!! Then that means that whoever did it is most likely still there. This doesnt seem to be looking good for the girls.
Date: 05 Oct 2010 2:52 PM Title: Chapter 66
I'm loving this story. I can't wait to see what happens.
There aren't a whole lot of stories out there that take place in the 1800's that are a Bella and Edward fic that take place on a ranch or farm. I can count on one hand how many I have read.
Anyway this story is well written and I love that you are able to up-date every day or every few days; depending on the situation. You are a wonderful author. Keep up the great work!
Date: 05 Oct 2010 2:29 PM Title: Chapter 66
Wow! When it rains, it pours! I was just thinking what else could go wrong? Plenty!
Date: 05 Oct 2010 2:26 PM Title: Chapter 66
oh goodness, trouble trouble everywhere. if this keeps up then their will be nothing left but just the guys and the ladies with just their knickers ....snorts and giggles...............mmmmmmmmmmmm, edward in nothing but his knickers..............uh oh sorry got carried away lol.
[Report This]Date: 05 Oct 2010 1:58 PM Title: Chapter 66
Oh no, they planned all the boys leaving to tend to the herds so they could do this. Thank God
Alice is there to help out.
Date: 05 Oct 2010 1:48 PM Title: Chapter 66
you're right but i do love some good cliffy's
Date: 05 Oct 2010 1:30 PM Title: Chapter 66
post post post!!!!!! good as always...
Date: 05 Oct 2010 3:10 AM Title: Chapter 65
so sweet i can not wait for me and hubbie to turn into that cute little old married couple! almost 18 years and still kickin!
Date: 05 Oct 2010 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 64
yay emmy got eddie to just do it! kinda awesome case of foot in mouth deseise eh em?
Date: 05 Oct 2010 2:44 AM Title: Chapter 63
oh boy eddie is gonna pop the question on the ride home!
Date: 05 Oct 2010 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 62
yay soon to be momma e! boo creepy stalker james!
[Report This]Date: 05 Oct 2010 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 65
*happy, contented sigh* I heart Carmen.
Hugs,
Gwen
Date: 05 Oct 2010 2:23 AM Title: Chapter 61
well it is pretty much official now. who hears wedding bells?
Date: 05 Oct 2010 12:45 AM Title: Chapter 60
yay alice and jasper are now on their way to their happily ever after!
so now we have edward and bella down and about to pop the question.
alice and jasper already engaged and on the way to the alter.
all that's left is for em to get his girl. and he has already told rose he's commin for her.
then they all have to find the bad guys and live happily ever after! awwwww.....
Date: 05 Oct 2010 12:32 AM Title: Chapter 59
oh jasper you sneeky little shit! alice is gonna have your balls! and not in the happy way. but still very well played sherriff! well played indeed
Date: 05 Oct 2010 12:24 AM Title: Chapter 58
ok there are a lot of creepy peeping toms in this town. *shudder* but hey alice and jasper are having some happy feel good time!
Date: 05 Oct 2010 12:15 AM Title: Chapter 57
my guess? it is the mallory's and the volturi's that are up to no good here.
Date: 05 Oct 2010 12:06 AM Title: Chapter 56
aww eddie is gonna ask for her hand soon. i bet his momma's ring is what hedid not show bella in the tin.
Date: 04 Oct 2010 11:56 PM Title: Chapter 55
so she is a swidler and a murderer. wow.i wonder what the real story is? she grew out from under her daddy's rule, realized it was wrong, took a vow to the church in an effort to changer her way, then daddy came back, or someone recognised her and she had to deend herself?
Date: 04 Oct 2010 11:47 PM Title: Chapter 54
oh my goodness too funny! em should learn not to ask questions you don't really want the answer to! heehee. and he better learn that before he has his own daughter!
Date: 04 Oct 2010 11:39 PM Title: Chapter 53
oh boy i remember the days of playing around with clothes on!
[Report This]Date: 04 Oct 2010 11:12 PM Title: Chapter 65
This is such an awesome story!
I'm so glad Edward finally asked Bella to marry him! But poor Emment , I really hope he and Rosalie will be alright...and the ranch! Love it!
[Report This]Date: 04 Oct 2010 10:52 PM Title: Chapter 65
This will be a big hurt to the ranch.
Date: 04 Oct 2010 9:05 PM Title: Chapter 52
Poor eddie but atleast he is getting the girl!
Date: 04 Oct 2010 8:58 PM Title: Chapter 51
Wow all of it was eddie's?! What happened?
Date: 04 Oct 2010 6:58 PM Title: Chapter 65
Great chapter! :)
Date: 04 Oct 2010 6:56 PM Title: Chapter 50
Aha! I was right!
Date: 04 Oct 2010 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 49
Well if em is not immpressed with his friend and brother likin on bella ia m pretty sure he would not get her a jacob! Heehee that is too funny! And eddie sure as hell would not be down with sharing!
Date: 04 Oct 2010 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 48
Em seems to be warming up to the idea of eddie and bella. I wonder what the gift is? Her own horse is my guess.
Date: 04 Oct 2010 6:25 PM Title: Chapter 47
Has alice escaped from jail? A mental hospital? Did she get charged with beating someone up? Whatever it is she has shied away from the law ever since she arrived...
Date: 04 Oct 2010 6:10 PM Title: Chapter 46
So who. Will find out what alice did. First? Bella? Esme? Jasper?
Date: 04 Oct 2010 6:09 PM Title: Chapter 65
Always read this story and look forward to it everyday! just wanted to let you know i don't often review but thought you deserved to know you have lurkers who love this story too!
Date: 04 Oct 2010 4:33 PM Title: Chapter 65
love it and can't wait for more
Date: 04 Oct 2010 4:23 PM Title: Chapter 65
good chapter
[Report This]Date: 04 Oct 2010 4:08 PM Title: Chapter 65
Loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Thanks for giving a little more to the Carmen and Eleazar back story. Of course it left me wanting more but you have a way of doing that to me!!! Given that sweet little moment between the two, I am very fearful something will happen to one or the other in the very near future. : ( Gosh, I hope I am way off.
Hahaha, more fun at Jasper's expense!!!! Love it! I suppose Emmett went to go get his women(well, I am hoping anyway).
Congratulations for being featured and earning a blue coffee cup, you deserve it!!!! See you in the forum (soon!)
Date: 04 Oct 2010 4:08 PM Title: Chapter 45
Well hot damn! Now jasper has to find out about alice's past
Date: 04 Oct 2010 3:59 PM Title: Chapter 44
Well holy hell! Who was doin the shootin?
Date: 04 Oct 2010 3:49 PM Title: Chapter 65
Talk about ruining the moment talk of weddings and now dead cows what are they going to do cant wait for more. You deserve the reviews I think everyone that reads should review but that is just me I feel you take your time to write a wonderful story It is the least I can do is tell you I am liking it.
Date: 04 Oct 2010 3:30 PM Title: Chapter 65
ugh poor cattle
Date: 04 Oct 2010 2:51 PM Title: Chapter 65
uh oh emmett is gonna be on the war path when he finds out his cattle is dying. that snake james needs a good butt-whooping. lol great chapter
[Report This]Date: 04 Oct 2010 2:44 PM Title: Chapter 65
awww,I cried so hard when Eleazar said that to Carmen,that had to be the sweetest thing.I am such a sap sometimes *wipes eyes*.
Uh oh,the cattle are dying,no worries they'll catch James and the crew.*crosses fingers*
[Report This]Date: 04 Oct 2010 2:44 PM Title: Chapter 65
I llove your story and always cant wait to read more
Date: 04 Oct 2010 12:27 PM Title: Chapter 43
well holy shit did jasper shoot em? or someone else?
Date: 04 Oct 2010 12:18 PM Title: Chapter 42
well things are moving forward for one of the couples...
Date: 04 Oct 2010 12:11 PM Title: Chapter 41
oh eddie if bella is understanding about rose i am sure she will not mind what you do for a living! stupid man!
Date: 04 Oct 2010 12:02 PM Title: Chapter 40
heehee now maybe we will find out why jasper being a law man is so horrible to alice.