Date: 25 Sep 2013 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 18
So, the Stanleys own the General store and Jessica the bitch ist their daughter. How very 'Little House on/at/of the prairie' of you. I don't know the correct title, in Germany it was 'our little farm' and I despised Nellie.
I like your story a whole lot, even if there is no prairie where I come from, but so many cows and pigs, that it is Called germans meat-belt.
With the best wishes from germany
Date: 25 Oct 2012 10:24 AM Title: Chapter 90: Epilogue
I usually don't review nor comment on the stories I read but with this one I am compelled to do so. I am hispanic living in a town in which I am the only Hispanic so the fact that you wrote some of it in Spanish was a treat for me!
This story not only has a well thoughtout outline but It was developed nicely. Words fail me, Es una de las mejores historias que he leido. Gracias! = It is one of the best stories I have read. Thank you!
Vilma L. DiGilio