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Reviewer: BellaVeyron Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2014 12:39 AM Title: Chapter 110

isn't it sexist that no unatteded females can go, but males can? this is the 21 century...

Reviewer: bysena Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2014 10:14 AM Title: Chapter 1

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Reviewer: Vitzy Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2014 10:06 PM Title: Chapter 110

Just gets juicier and juicier! This story disappeared off ff so imma be checking here regularly, in hope that you've updated :)

-Vitzy-

Reviewer: twilightteacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2014 12:48 PM Title: Chapter 110

I'm so disappointed that yet another story seems to be abandoned. After 2 years and with only "a couple" of chapters to go. Why do writers do this? I love this story and hope someone will finish this. What a shame the author doesn't care about all the readers she is disappointing .

Reviewer: BellaVeyron Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2014 6:30 AM Title: Chapter 103

clearly bella is edwards bitch, she may as well be a slavw! oh well, to ech his or her own.

Reviewer: vasco3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2014 9:33 AM Title: Chapter 110

esta hstoria es fantastica ya quiero leer mas

Reviewer: Kirb Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2014 3:02 AM Title: Chapter 110

Hi Louise... * waves hello! * 

First and foremost, here's hoping you are well. So... I know this is your story, and have no doubt preparations and work for it/about it/around it take up lots of your time. And perhaps you've lost interest. Or perhaps life has just gotten in the way. But by golly, I MISS YOUR STORY...  :(    

Its not a stretch to imagine there are zillions of us out there feeling the same. Virtual strangers that we are, we have no right to moan or beg for anything. But we hope. And send good vibes your way. And cross our fingers that we'll see you, Bella and Edward here again soon. Cause we remain on pins and needles waiting to see what happens next!  You've blessed us with an amazing story and it would be so sad to never see the end.   Thank you...

 

Reviewer: megawill Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2014 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 1

I miss reading this story. You are in my thoughts, I hope that everything is okay with you. 

Reviewer: azzato Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2014 6:20 AM Title: Chapter 110

I think I have patient long enough for you to finish this story -  when will it be completed -  are you even interested completed it at all.

 

Reviewer: SarcasticBimbo Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2014 10:51 PM Title: Chapter 110

You have a wonderful story going on here, I truly look forward to your next update whenever that may be. :-)

Reviewer: pcirish Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Mar 2014 5:47 PM Title: Chapter 110

love it update soon plzzz  :)

 

Reviewer: cofey Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Mar 2014 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 109

hi

hoping ur well and everything is ok ... pls update soon

xo

Reviewer: dap Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Mar 2014 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 110

Dear lady, I miss your wonderful story. Hope all is well.

Reviewer: Selene Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2014 7:27 PM Title: Chapter 110

Is Alice really being a arogant bitca or is someone whispering in her ear about Bella?

I love this story, I'm glad I found it again and had a few days to read the whole thing. I was heartbroken when I couldn't find it on fanfic.net anymore. I hope you haven't given up on it, because it really is a great story.

The Ds stuff is great too. So often the story is about Edward being a Dom, seeing Bella and then introducing/seducing her into. Sometimes with her liking it, sometimes with Edward ending up going vanilla. But here it's really both their choice, seperate from each other. And they're both reveling in it, so suitable matched for each other, both at 'normal' boy/girl-friend and as Dom/Sub. I love that, and I really hope to see more of this story.

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Mar 2014 5:51 AM Title: Chapter 110

well here I am, at the end of what you have written so far. at the beginning of this chapter, you said it was so long that you had to break it up into 2 parts. i don't understand why months have gone by without you giving us that 2nd part unless you hadn't written it yet. no complaints, not really, I am just hoping to be released from this cliff I am standing on before too much longer. I know RL comes first. I do. Just venting. I really LOVE this story and hope you not only finish it, but write the sequel you've spoken of. 

Reviewer: kaycross1184 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2014 11:00 PM Title: Chapter 100

Ugh. Just finished rereading the story. Again. For the fourth or fifth time. Still can't wait for the next update. The suspense is killing me!

Reviewer: rmcrms5 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2014 10:18 PM Title: Chapter 110

I'm missing your story, but won't ask when the next update is because I know it'll happen when it happens. Hope life is treating you well!

Reviewer: Ms_T_Switzerland Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Feb 2014 10:02 PM Title: Chapter 110

Hi Louise,

I see Fanfiction has pulled this story.  IDIOTS!!!! I'm so glad that it is still on here though.  I have been checking non-stop for an update but I see nothing yet ;( Please let us, your fans which are many, know that you have not given up on this.  It is soooo good and i've read it eight times so far.  Hope RL is going okay and you are well.  Please let us know you are still with us and going to continue.  

lots of love.

Reviewer: roselynne Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Feb 2014 3:57 AM Title: Chapter 1

I am realy missing my favorite story i have been reading for the past 2 1/2 please dont give up on it

 

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Feb 2014 1:47 AM Title: Chapter 107

I'll say! That was just chock full of information on a lot of things. I must say it did cross my mind that Quil might want Edward to train him.....it seems that he's taking it casually, Quil is, what with his offhand remark about him and Clare not being "full time" at this. I sort of took that to mean that they just want to play at it and not immerse themselves in the lifestyle. Maybe they just don't realize, like Edward said, it's not about "acting" submissive, or dominant for that matter. It's about who you are inside.....but wtf do I know anyway. I know that I really enjoy reading this story. A lot!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Feb 2014 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 106

mixed chapter. loved the shower, it came out wonderfully! not so much the stuff about Caius that still has to be dealt with. Still, what I remember most is Bella's realization about James and how her family is so close knit. It's wonderful to have that.

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Feb 2014 11:08 PM Title: Chapter 105

Well haven't you  just thrown some very twisty curves into the mix here....with just 5 more chapters written in this story, I eagerly await the resolution of all this.  I sincerely hope you carry on with this story....

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Feb 2014 9:14 PM Title: Chapter 104

I love everything about this story. I do. I never cease to be amazed at each new thing I read. I love the definition of "slut-talk".  Since I know Edward never hits Bella for punishment, I wonder what hers will be for her slow reactions....you talk about wrapping this story up....it is at 110 chapters now and not yet marked complete. I'm dying to know where this goes from here, but very grateful for the wonderful story you've given us so far!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Feb 2014 8:39 PM Title: Chapter 103

oh jeez! is Dougie going to rat her out for the head giving contest thing they had going? the manipulation?  and what did Bella do wrong that Demetri yelled at her for?  not going to him fast enough? hmmmm....

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Feb 2014 7:16 PM Title: Chapter 102

they're not taking the 18 y/o's to the club are they?  I hope Bella doesn't get here bare ass spanked while they are there....Edward wouldn't do that, I know....I think I know. No, I know. He and Riley are going to talk about the plan later, I remember. James just gets more and more disgusting the more we find out about him, doesn't he? Ugh!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Feb 2014 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 101

Damn he's good!  He won by just a hair....love the friendship between Bella and Dougie. It's sooooo good!  Love Riley's idea for Bella's public outing....love this story! When will it be finished? Will you still write the sequel? I'm sorry to hear you and your family got caught up in Mother Nature's tantrum.....hope you all are OK!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Feb 2014 5:20 AM Title: Chapter 100

I loved this chapter.  I love Dougie!  His openness about his past has given Bella something that she so desperately needs! Not only does she have a friend and cohort in Dougie, but also  someone she may be fully able to share her past with.  Then maybe she can let Edward in too, in those ways, like the tampon thing, that she can't do yet.  This was a wonderful experience.  Leah liked him too!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Feb 2014 4:24 AM Title: Chapter 99

I'm not sure if I wrote anything about chapter 98 or not. It was almost too overwhelming and I read it twice. I love how you explain your rationale in your A/Ns. It helps this ignorant girl understand things better. Although I am aroused by reading about playroom time, it also disturbs me somewhat, especially the level of pain.  This chapter was fluff by comparison. I enjoy both but it was nice to have a reprieve from the intensity....I wonder who her babysitter is.

Reviewer: Joreily2805 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2014 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 1

Please update soon missing this story so much x

Reviewer: yagalinus0420 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2014 7:30 AM Title: Chapter 110

Hhhhhmmmm.....that is a great question....how did she get a baseball scholarship.....and note who gives the scholarship....Victor Salvatore! Now we know why Caius has it in for Bella!!!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2014 5:18 AM Title: Chapter 98

that chapter was so full of different things that i don't know where to begin to respond.  as I am reading this, there are only 12 chapters left that you've written, so for you to say this was the last "usual" chapter kind of makes me sad in a way.  You mention a sequel, but as of today 1/28/14 there is not only no sequel, but this story isn't even finished. I guess I need to be in for the long haul....I love all of this...the bratty Alice thing makes me a bit sad as I think Edward means to cut her out if she doesn't treat his Bella right.....and what can I say about the playroom stuff...it's why I read stories like this. you are very good at writing this stuff. makes me wonder, but I know you don't talk about personal stuff.  Keep writing, I'll keep  reading and gladly.

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2014 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 97

I agree with Edward in that being pregnant doesn't excuse her treatment of Bella and how she spoke to Edward about Bella.  Suck it up and take responsibility for her behavior, is what I say!  Love Vinny, he's so precious....can't wait to see more of the "usual".....

Reviewer: noomom Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2014 9:36 PM Title: Chapter 11

Hope all is well and that you can update soon!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2014 4:23 PM Title: Chapter 96

wow I was kind of blindsided by Alice's attitude. Is she pregnant? That would explain her being so up and down with her emotions.....or is that just the real her coming out? Is she jealous that she's not the only female getting attention anymore?  IDK....the photo shoot was very nice and Jacob's reaction was hilarious.....I'm glad I found time mid-week to squeeze in reading another chapter....

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2014 4:57 AM Title: Chapter 95

Fabulous chapter! So much going on!  Leah is going to film the BJ???  Oh geez, this is playing dirty on Bella's part, isn't it?  I love that!  I'm betting on Bella...

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2014 4:16 AM Title: Chapter 94

I think officer Hawk is an OK guy. I'm sure he deals with people all the time with whom he needs to be an asshole to get anything done. Maybe it's his natural bent.....I still think he's just doing the job as he sees it needs to be done.  All the pieces of this puzzle keep growing closer together....I didn't see Bella's hesitancy at selling her house as having anything to do with how she feels about Edward. She's learning how to trust again and it's a slow process. His idea of renting it out is a nice compromise. I felt she was open to that.....little does she know he has already bought her engagement ring. Is he waiting to ask until this is all settled with who is out to get Bella?  Maybe he needs to do it sooner.....j/s...love the story, LOVE the story and am starting to read the OTs.

Please accept me into your FB group. I am Judy Edson Sokolowski

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jan 2014 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 93

Their growing closeness is a pleasure to see....The mystery element of the story is entertaining too, right  along with the sexy stuff....

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jan 2014 9:17 PM Title: Chapter 92

I wonder if James is behind prodding Karen to hurt Bella....I wonder if Mike and Jess are really dead, not just gone.....so many possibilities.  It's good to see Bella finally dealing with all the pent up pain  that James cost her....emotional pain, walls meant to protect her are now keeping her defiant, but no more....I hope.   Very emotional and revealing chapter!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jan 2014 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 91

It has to be one of the 3...Mike, or Jess, or Karen.  My bet is on Karen.  Damn straight she's grounded!  If she has an ounce of self-preservation in her body, she will now get that.....

I have made a request to get into your FB group but so far it's not granted.....

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jan 2014 6:21 PM Title: Chapter 90

I'm wondering if someone disconnected the aforementioned hose in her car while she was in the market.....I sure hope Demetri is the good guy he appears to be for Bella's sake...

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jan 2014 5:54 PM Title: Chapter 89

This is one of those chapters that is like the glue that holds the whole story together.  The everyday details of their lives together where they, more or less, live like any other family does comes shining through here.  I'm sure there are hints of things to come but I'd rather enjoy it as a whole and not pick it apart.....if you don't mind....

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jan 2014 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 88

I'm going to stop here for today.  I would read this 24/7 if it were practical, which it is not.  I'm serious!  I had to read this chapter as I hadn't remembered about the patch of hair thing....I know she shaved it so it wouldn't show with her leather dress being so tight....It's so bad that Rosalie has to go back and testify. I hope it doesn't put too much of a strain on her with her pregnancy. Will you write those chapters?  Is your blog still up? I can't seem to find it....anyway, see you tomorrow...

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jan 2014 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 87

A full and rich chapter!  Every new scene enchants and arouses me. This is truly an eye-opening story for me.  Enjoyable doesn't half cover it....

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jan 2014 12:21 AM Title: Chapter 86

The fact that people keep referring to what happens in their lifestyle in this story as disgusting and degrading, or whatever, makes me wonder why in the hell they keep reading the story if they feel like that. I am at a loss to know why that is.....

This reader loves reading about these things and even though you issue a disclaimer every chapter, I learn more with each chapter I read. I read lots of different stories but must admit these are my favorite. They touch a place in me I didn't know was there.  Each portrays the life a bit differently and I'm fairly sure they mimic RL in that way.  I may be mistaken as I have no first hand knowledge, but there are similarities and things that ring true throughout all of them.  Very enjoyable to read about, for me.

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jan 2014 10:59 PM Title: Chapter 85

This chapter revealed all those mundane plot details that are vital in making up this story right along with the D/s stuff.  I love that this story has both.   Once again, at the risk of sounding like a broken record, I need to say that I fervently hope you finish this one day.  I know life comes up and must be addressed. I too have that to deal with.  Those who have been reading this longer than I have faith you will finish, so I will make every attempt to trust that you will. Thank you for all you give us.

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jan 2014 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 84

I love the advice that Emmett gave Edward on the way to golf. 

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jan 2014 2:36 AM Title: Chapter 83

I'm not mad at Edward, not at all.  I get that he needed to show her the literalness of her behavior and how it played out to the bitter end.  I don't get what part in this lesson the cane played.  I guess I'll figure that out when the time comes.

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jan 2014 2:08 AM Title: Chapter 82

I can't guess at anything because I know nothing about this life style except that reading about it winds up my libido and makes me aroused beyond anything I have known. I'm an old woman so that says a lot. I very much enjoy reading this story whether it is information about the drama going on or the sex scenes, or the behavior modification that doms practice. That all is done with love is what astounds me....

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jan 2014 12:19 AM Title: Chapter 81

Fascinating, mesmerizing, titillating, and oh so educational!  Just an explosion of pleasure for the senses, this chapter was....I loved the yellow flogger with the roses at the tips....

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jan 2014 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 80

Reading this chapter made my clit ache. Damn!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jan 2014 10:54 PM Title: Chapter 79

Oh dear! We are getting a plethora of information these last 2 chapters!  I'm loving it!  I really don't feel bad at all for Jessica. Everything she did was for spite in retaliation for Edward's perceived rejection of her in favor of Bella.  She deserves what she gets.  I can't help but feel that Karen is planning something more sinister than I can imagine  for Bella.  I wouldn't care to guess what that might be....

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jan 2014 10:15 PM Title: Chapter 78

wow that was a LOT of information packed into this chapter!  I had no idea about where James $600/mo was going.  I totally agree with Charlie in that Bella needs to come clean about James and press charges, for her sake and for the sake of any past and future victims of James'.  I just keep being blown away by this story and all it's twists and turns and intricasies.....

Reviewer: h_viki Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jan 2014 4:26 PM Title: Chapter 110

I loveeee your story! Please update it soon! 

Reviewer: Sailor girl Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jan 2014 1:00 PM Title: Chapter 1

I have been reading your story and enjoying it almost two years.   I hope you will continue.   I know many of us would love an update from you about the story but more importantly to know you are ok.  

 

 

 

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jan 2014 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 77

i'm glad to see some semi-closure for Rose....Bella kicking Emmett's ass was fun to watch.....still with you all the way in this story.

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2014 4:26 AM Title: Chapter 76

yes. that was definitely a relief to read.  i believe the previous chapter was my favorite, but this one runs a close second.  will she revert to manipulative behavior?  maybe. probably. but maybe not, and maybe with more clarity about it sooner.  I always love their sexy romps....

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2014 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 75

staggeringly beautiful. i'm overwhelmed. this is truly an honest and true way to live. i don't think i have it in me to be that humble.....wonderful story!

p.s. every time i review a chapter, i giggle a bit when i push the "submit" button.

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2014 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 74 (1st half)

It seems they are both learning here....

Reviewer: Tess Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2014 12:15 AM Title: Chapter 109

I miss you so much.  Hope you are well.  Thinking of you and my favorite story.  Hope whatever has kept you from the keyboard is in the past and you are well and healthy.

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jan 2014 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 73

more family time, but mixed with D/s stuff too. I'm trying to be as casual as I can in reading all you've written so far because i know when I get to chapter 110 that I will want more.  I know you will finish this, you've said as much, and others in the group have hinted that they think so too, but damn, every time I risk reading a WIP, I get nervous that I will be left hanging. Some affect me more than others, and this one will devistate me if I don't get to know the end. No pressure! LOL! Really, just stream of consciousness rambling. I really love this story!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jan 2014 3:57 PM Title: Chapter 72

nice fluff....nice change of pace in a family setting!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jan 2014 3:27 PM Title: Chapter 71

I really like how Edward dealt with Jasper's questions.  He did well explaining in terms Jasper could relate to.  I must admit that I agree with Edward about the medical profession and am currently experiencing that phenomena myself. Medicare is JUST like that.....on with the story. I am loving the ride....

Reviewer: ssbksmm Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jan 2014 6:48 AM Title: Chapter 110

more please :)

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jan 2014 12:57 AM Title: Chapter 70

I looked for your group on FB but it wasn't there. Guess I'm too late, even though this story is still not marked complete.  LOVED the baseball game.  LOVED that Bella figured out the story of Jessica and Mike.  LOVE this story!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jan 2014 12:02 AM Title: Chapter 69

It must be difficult to get used to being in sub mode all the time, even when it's not the "usual" time....I wonder what her punishment will be.....then again, I know nothing about the life firsthand so I probably should not say anything.  I love that Esme put her hair in braids. What a wonderful way to let Bella know she wasn't mad at her!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jan 2014 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 68

This story just keeps getting better, deeper, more conplex, yet simpler at the same time.  While the submissive has her tasks to fulfill and her own self to know and love, the dominant too has his tasks. The creativity needed to give the submissive exactly what she need astounds me....I will read more tomorrow...

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jan 2014 2:20 AM Title: Chapter 67

another very enjoyable chapter!  He thinks of the most inventive things to push her limits.....I like that!  Had to laugh a lot at the purple vibrator left out in plain sight....

Reviewer: lectora1010 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jan 2014 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 110

Hello,

 

I love diamond in the rough story!

Could you please let me know if you are going to post another chapter any time soon or if you are going to stop writing? 

I relly hope that you could continue and I hope that all your peronal life goes well as it should :)

 

THANK YOU!!! for taking a lot of your time for us.

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jan 2014 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 66

Back to reality now....I wonder what the PI found....I'll read more on the weekend...

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jan 2014 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 65

not much to say about this chapter. it's all good. the only thing I wonder is what's up with James' mother?

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jan 2014 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 64

Poor Jake (the dog) he was happy yet bewildered and tired!  LOL.. I'm very glad that Leah and Edward had their talk, their first one, and hopefully Leah will back off Bella now....

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jan 2014 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 63

Should one of them have found Bella and Edward in that motel room, they would have never understood what was happening. They would have thought Edward was just like James. I thank God I don't live in a small town!  Edward did what he knew Bella would need and took care of her....I see that! 

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jan 2014 1:25 AM Title: Chapter 62

wow what a chapter. I'm very proud of Bella for slapping James, but I think she should have pressed charges, then and now.  She is taking blame for what happened to her by being ashamed for everyone to know what he did to her.  I don't know what Jared's problem is.....Is he jealous of Edward?  great read, this chapter was...

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jan 2014 4:21 PM Title: Chapter 61

I love how he changed her memories of the woods behind the school!  Perfect!  I also love how you are going slowly here, giving us every detail about their lives and building a solid story.

Reviewer: Kaylin Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jan 2014 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 110

I'm so excited for more! 

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jan 2014 5:03 AM Title: Chapter 60

on that note, my day has ended and I need sleep for work tomorrow.  I'm over half way through what you've written so far and mesmerized by this story. I'm not a fast reader, but let me tell you, I'm reading it in every spare minute that I have. Please Please Please finish it someday....

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jan 2014 4:37 AM Title: Chapter 59

this was a warm, comforting, and quite reveling chapter. bella seems relaxed with her friends, but its clear too that she didn't let them in on the horror of James until it was too late.....LOVE the way Edward soothes and comforts her.....

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jan 2014 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 58

fun and lively and full of all sorts of things, heavy and light. what a fun chapter, especially the end where Paul's big mouth just let all kinds of cats out of the bag...I love it!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jan 2014 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 57

beautiful, relaxing and exhilirating day! I wonder about the significance of her dream....guess I'll have to read another chapter!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jan 2014 1:52 AM Title: Chapter 56

well THAT was intense!  I like that he made the point there at the end about treating her as childish as she behaved. I hope she gets it....I do and I'm not a sub....

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Date: 14 Jan 2014 1:02 AM Title: Chapter 55

just when she thinks  he won't put her on a leash, he comes back with one....this should be interesting.....love their day in Victoria....and now I'm confused about the bands. I thought she said she didn't bring them, but then she put them on.....

Reviewer: Flora Mile Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2014 11:31 PM Title: Chapter 110

loved the last couple of chapters

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2014 9:56 PM Title: Chapter 54

I enjoyed this chapter as an out of the ordinary one.....all fitting into this story  nicely. Love the lemons and the playtime too, but this balances all that out to show their complete life, not just the sex.  wonderful job.

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Date: 13 Jan 2014 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 53

I never thought Bella and Aro had a sexual relationship. I always though of it as an uncle-niece kind of thing and I was right.....Was Edward jealous of Bella and Aro laughing together in the kitchen? Seems like he got over that quickly.....hmmmm, if running away got me fucked hard like that, I would surely run away with regularity....

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Date: 13 Jan 2014 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 52

another flawless chapter.....not much on my mind this time.....LOVE the story!

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Date: 13 Jan 2014 7:27 PM Title: Chapter 51

So now there's another woman thrown into this mix of who might have broken into Edward's house.  Jessica could have gotten the default code from Mike....and why is Mike saying he isn't with Jessica?  Caius is an absolute pig and I'm wondering what he has to do with all this except wanting Bella.....I think Bella did absolutely the right thing when she spoke to, answered Jessica's threats, through speaking to Rosalie. Technically she WAS speaking to a family member, albeit about the bitch Jessica and what she was saying about Bella.....you weave a great tale, dear!

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Date: 13 Jan 2014 6:45 PM Title: Chapter 50

I'm not buying Irena's little act for a second! She wants something. She was fishing for information. I wonder how she and Caius tie in with Mike, of all people. I seem to remember Mike making inappropriate gestures of some kind toward Bella, or am I wrong?  You gave us a little, only for it to pose more questions! Clever of you.....again, I say there is NO SUCH THING as too much smut. Not for me!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2014 6:12 PM Title: Chapter 49

I thought it might be Heather breaking into their house, but now I wonder how she would have been able to get the default code....I truly love how your are giving us a full picture of how their relationship is developing, bit by bit. I know that you will write more than double the amount of chapters you have so far because, as of this reading, the story is up to 110 and still not complete. I can't tell you enough how I totally enjoy reading it.  One of the best D/s stories ever!  And who said there was too much sex...silly person....

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Date: 13 Jan 2014 12:18 AM Title: Chapter 48

The fact that Heather left the shelter that morning speaks volumes about her probably being the one who broke in. The only thing we don't know now is why....

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Date: 12 Jan 2014 11:40 PM Title: Chapter 47

I was pissed at Officer Hawk too. It seemed almost like he was blaming Bella for what happened to her, then and now. Is he an abuser too?  Was it a woman who broke into their house? Heather seems like a long shot, but could it have been Tanya?

Ooh, even my clit was tingling reading that last description of what Edward was doing to Bella....I don't understand why he said, "We're even" when her mini orgasm at the removal of her clit clip wasn't anything she could control...

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jan 2014 11:14 PM Title: Chapter 46

oh god, that pinky mouse story was gross and almost made me puke!  I shiver just writing this.....

What's Bella going to do now that that damned clip has to stay on longer while Edward goes to check out the triggered alarm? Love Jasper and Alice's obvious prejudice at even the thought of the BDSM lifestyle....well I don't love it, I actually find them quite narrow-minded....

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jan 2014 10:44 PM Title: Chapter 45

Why was Tanya at a family gathering? I don't get it. Sorry. She's just a nasty bitch....I'm very much into the story and can't help but to read it in all my spare time.  Why can't Bella remember to take care of herself?  Causing herself injury in NOT in anybody's best interest, no matter what the urgent pressing want it...

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Date: 12 Jan 2014 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 44

her conversation with Leah must have rattled her into forgetting not to lift heavy things....

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Date: 12 Jan 2014 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 43

she went off into subspace....I've heard and read much about that state but never felt it personally....it sounds wonderful....

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Date: 12 Jan 2014 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 42

on to the usual....nice chapter. I like that Bella and Jane have a friendship that is Bella's alone....

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Date: 12 Jan 2014 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 41

as far at buying the Twilight movies went, I bought one of each....didn't want to miss a thing....the I bought them all again once I got my blu-ray player.....no such thing as too much Twilight...

I love how their relationship is progressing...how she is owning up to mistakes right away now, how he considered the money spent for groceries, how she considers what Jane says and adjusts it to her own self....it's all coming along nicely....

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jan 2014 8:18 PM Title: Chapter 40

Great insight gained here....I love the way he called her out on her bad acting and that she copped to it with a laugh....I wonder what her punishment wil be....gotta go for now...be back tomorrow...

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jan 2014 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 39

reading your story just always brings my emotions to the surface, whatever they are.  i understand that Edward is struggling too with what he saw in those pictures. I'm glad Jane pointed that out to Bella....these 2 are finding their way through some pretty deep and long-buried pain...it's a marvel to read your wonderful words describing this....the picture jumps out at me vividly...

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Date: 11 Jan 2014 5:38 AM Title: Chapter 38

well that was intense....i just have to keep reading...is she pregnant?

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Date: 11 Jan 2014 5:12 AM Title: Chapter 37

I have been reading this all day, I just can't put it down....now my lover is due to arrive within the hour and I must go.....damn this is a good story. PLEASE finish it one day, won't you?

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