Date: 16 Sep 2016 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 45
Ok the only thing I don't like is having Bella suffer in public. That's just mean.
Date: 15 Sep 2016 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 41
Loved it as usual.
Date: 15 Sep 2016 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 38
Wow that was so emotional. Great writing.
Date: 14 Sep 2016 3:57 PM Title: Chapter 34
Very sexy having Bella dress Edward. Where in the hell is Stehan getting his info? James is lurking around.... Is he the friend Felix wants an application for? Not sure what Leah's problem is.... Jealousy?
Date: 14 Sep 2016 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 31
Too funny "emmie". Love it.
Date: 14 Sep 2016 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 29
Omg that's just crazy.
Date: 13 Sep 2016 3:11 AM Title: Chapter 26
If feel the Bella does about God.... I know there is a higher being but I come from a bad childhood and have a hard time with "free will". Why does God let bad things happen to child. What is with Bella's gym bag????
Date: 12 Sep 2016 2:14 PM Title: Chapter 23
Why does Bella not have Seth with her at all times? He could be a big asset to the center and protect and warn Bella of any harm.
Date: 12 Sep 2016 12:54 AM Title: Chapter 16
Oh my that was such a great chapter. And we finally met Tanya.... The bitch that she is.
Date: 11 Sep 2016 4:44 AM Title: Chapter 14
Theat was so good. I am afraid James and Tanya are going to show their ugly sides.
Date: 11 Sep 2016 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 13
Absolutely love your story.
Date: 04 Sep 2016 2:06 PM Title: Chapter 1
Please oh please continue really really soon. I love this story and wish it was my life and or a movie lol. Can't wait to read more
Date: 04 Sep 2016 2:04 PM Title: Chapter 110
Please oh please continue really soon. I love this story, and wish it was a movie cuz that would be hit if they got it right. Of course with different character names lol. But I look forward to reading more of this fabulous story.
Date: 13 Aug 2016 1:53 AM Title: Chapter 110
I just re-read this whole thing! Can't wait for more!
Date: 02 Aug 2016 1:09 PM Title: Chapter 110
Your story quickly became one of my favorites. I just love a story that makes me both laugh and cry. I hope one day you will be able to finish the story, I'm anxious to find out who's behind all of their problems.
Date: 22 Jul 2016 1:19 AM Title: Chapter 109
I love this story. I've reread it 6 times it's amazing. Please update again soon.
Date: 10 Jul 2016 8:51 AM Title: Chapter 1
Just checking in again to ask you to please put us out of our misery and finish this story.... as well as start the next one. LOL. I truly hope you are well.
Sharon
Date: 10 Jul 2016 12:51 AM Title: Chapter 110
Hi, I just wanted to say how much I enjoyed your story! I used to read it on the Fan Fiction site but then you disappeared, I was very glad to find you on here! Excellent writing, I hope to see more soon!
Date: 08 Jun 2016 2:39 AM Title: Chapter 7
I'm hoping you're ok and I look forward to solving the mystery.
I don't have the address to the blog, but it is buried here in one of the reviews. But there are a couple of more chapters posted there
Date: 27 May 2016 9:29 PM Title: Chapter 110
Amazing story I had started reading it on fanfiction.net and then it disappeared. I really hope you intend on finishing it thanks
Date: 21 May 2016 8:33 AM Title: Chapter 110
Please oh please!!! Finish this story. It has taken me months to get this far, and I have thoroughly enjoyed it. I desperately want to know how it ends. I have loved the relationship between Edward and Bella and I too loved these characters in Twilight and would love for them to have this kind of relationship in real life. But doubtful that will ever happen have throughly engrossed myself in the possibilities that could have happened, your imagination has been really appreciated. I can't believe you haven't finished the last 5 chapters when you have taken the time to write 110. So please oh please I beg you just finish this happy ever after for all your fans. It is a tremendous story and I want to read to the end. Please let me know if you will, I'm sure you just came to a block and needed some time out, but hopefully this will spur you on to finish it. I will be forever grateful. Yours Sally with much admiration..
Date: 01 May 2016 8:07 PM Title: Chapter 101
i hope you continue this story cause i love to read it
Date: 13 Apr 2016 5:29 AM Title: Chapter 14
Hey, just wanting to make sure that RL is what's keeping my favorite writer from updates. Been such a long time that even though I'm dying to know what is going to happen in this most amazing story, I'm more concerned about you the fabulous author. Please just shoot us a message to let us know you're doing well and the 411 of this story. Thanks. 💗💖💋
Date: 13 Apr 2016 5:27 AM Title: Chapter 6
Hey, just wanting to make sure that RL is what's keeping my favorite writer from updates. Been such a long time that even though I'm dying to know what is going to happen in this most amazing story, I'm more concerned about you the fabulous author. Please just shoot us a message to let us know you're doing well and the 411 of this story. Thanks. 💗💖💋
Date: 08 Apr 2016 1:13 PM Title: Chapter 1
Please please please finish this amazing story. Amen! *wink*
Date: 02 Mar 2016 5:05 AM Title: Chapter 109
love this story, what happened r u going to finish it
Date: 29 Feb 2016 6:10 PM Title: Chapter 44
Please please continue. This is my all time favourite story. Please.
Date: 22 Feb 2016 6:15 AM Title: Chapter 1
Hope all is well wit you...Just wondering if you are abandoning its story? I check on your blogspot every now and then hoping for an update. I understand how busy life can get...but I truely hope you choose to finish this. Thank you for sharing!
Date: 15 Dec 2015 6:25 PM Title: Chapter 1
hello,
i hope you will come back and finish this story, i love and would like to know the end of it
thank you for sharing it with us
Date: 28 Nov 2015 8:29 PM Title: Chapter 1
I know it's been awhile but I hope you come back to finish this story. Please!
Date: 26 Nov 2015 5:33 PM Title: Chapter 6
i love this story i just wanted to know if you are going to finish it thank you for time
Date: 04 Nov 2015 1:59 PM Title: Chapter 1
I hope you are doing well, and are planning to update this amazing story soon. I have read and reread it too many times to count and really would appreciate if its not left unfinished. Please update soon... Or alteast give us some kind of information about its progress.
Date: 06 Oct 2015 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 110
Hi, nice story...I've read all 110 chapters and all 23 chapters of the extras, last summer. I hope that life's going well and that you'll have time to update this story and it won't remain forever incomplete. Best wishes!
Date: 02 Oct 2015 6:27 AM Title: Chapter 1
One of my all time favorites, I hope to see it completed as I am beyond invested in this story. Even if it's been pulled to be published - maybe just a heads up would be nice. I look forward to seeing where this goes, it's been my late night companion for weeks and I hate to just leave it without a resolution. I hope RL is just busy and our author is doing well. Trying my best to be patient - this story is awesome.
Date: 14 Sep 2015 7:36 AM Title: Chapter 110
are you going to finish this wonderful story? I have enjoyed it so much it's a shame not to bring it to conclusion.
Date: 04 Sep 2015 5:20 AM Title: Chapter 110
Are you going to planing to postanytime in the near time have alway injoy this story
Date: 27 Aug 2015 4:51 AM Title: Chapter 110
This story is so amazing. It is definitely one of my favorite fanfics of all time. I know that you haven't updated recently, but I really hope that you choose to finish. I can't wait to know what happens!
Date: 27 Aug 2015 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 38
What is up Leah's ass?
Date: 12 Aug 2015 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 2
Sounding good so far..... I'm hooked.
Date: 21 Jul 2015 11:33 AM Title: Chapter 26
Loved Jane and her wisdom and friendship.
Date: 19 Jul 2015 5:49 AM Title: Chapter 1
After all this time with no update I'm worried about you PLEASE let us know that all is well and that RL or writers block is the reason you've been away but as much as I would love an update I'd much rather know your OK. READ YOU SOON ♥
Date: 17 Jul 2015 8:29 AM Title: Chapter 23
I like Edward's punishments. Very fitting.
Liking your story. Beta is doing a great job.
Date: 17 Jul 2015 5:42 AM Title: Chapter 2
i love this story i just want to know if you are going to finish it thank you for your time :0)
Date: 16 Jul 2015 10:59 AM Title: Chapter 19
I love the tattoo shop name. Good choice to use it. May even bring them business. Lol.
bravo to you and your beta foe such fine work.
Author's Response:
I debated about using a Real Live Shop, and then I spoke with a friend who is a business owner and he said the same thing you did ... Maybe it will bring them some more business and Hey who would turn down FREE advertising ...anyway, thanks for reading and I am hoping to get the last few chapters done to put this story to rest, soon ...
Date: 15 Jul 2015 11:59 AM Title: Chapter 18
Wow...tough crowd. And these are Edward's friends?
Date: 15 Jul 2015 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 16
Lots of fun with the Cullen's. I enjoyed their day together.
As for Bella's emotions.... A bit of an anomaly. It's hard to figure out. She seems so strong and confident and then weepy and scared.
Van outside of Bella's -- is it James or just a red herring?
Date: 14 Jul 2015 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 13
I love the intensity that you bring to Edward's character. Love the lemons.
Date: 13 Jul 2015 11:10 AM Title: Chapter 11
Wow...he really left her in a bad way. Smug bastard. ;)
Date: 12 Jul 2015 12:29 PM Title: Chapter 7
Getting hot now....awesome
Date: 12 Jul 2015 12:28 PM Title: Chapter 6
You give us such long, full chapters. Thank you. Can't wait for more.
Date: 12 Jul 2015 6:16 AM Title: Chapter 1
Love the different pov's. Your first chapter was very good. I can't wait to read more.
Date: 06 Jul 2015 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 110
are you going to update soon? I want to see what happens next!
Date: 28 Jun 2015 10:45 AM Title: Chapter 110
I know you hasn't posted in quite some time here or on your blog, just wanted to let you know your fans are still really supportive of this story and have hopes you finish it because it is a remarkable story. I know I would also love to see it published. :) hope all is well.
Date: 25 Jun 2015 6:12 AM Title: Chapter 1
I love your story. I have read it several time. I hope you have a chance to update soon and finish the story. Thank you for your work
Date: 01 Jun 2015 10:03 PM Title: Chapter 110
I love this story so much and have re-read what you have many times. I was wondering if you will be working on it again? I hope so :-)
Date: 17 May 2015 1:55 PM Title: Chapter 110
Hi I really love this story I hope you will be able to update soon
Date: 11 May 2015 3:25 PM Title: Chapter 110
I am waiting for the next chapter i am dying here of suspense when is next update 5/10/2015
Date: 09 May 2015 7:23 PM Title: Chapter 1
I'm reading this story for the third time before I read chapter 112 on your blog. Waiting for the ending so I can read yet again from beginnning to end.
Absolutely love the story, one that sits in my mind for ages after I have read it.
Keep at it
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Date: 07 May 2015 12:18 PM Title: Chapter 26
I cannot believe this is your first fic! It is so detailed and well written and erotic with depth. I love this Edward and Bella...thank you!
I am reading this very slowly because I see it isn't complete and while you have over 100 chapters, I am a very voracious reader. Seeing all the little clues such as almost being run down in the alley, light shining in her living room window, utility van on her street (as seen by Edward) and Seth's collar, it is my most profound wish that your Bella not suffer anymore pain and abuse outside of flashbacks, dreams and sharing. How much can she take. Even I want to shield her from that. Please...😉 Finally, the way you wrote Edward's punishments for the phone, food and sleep were creative and not cruel due to the fact that an impact instrument would have normally been used.
I look forward to journeying through the pages. Please complete this. Thank you for you creativity and hard work.
Miss G
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Date: 04 Apr 2015 11:44 PM Title: Chapter 110
Hmm, Victor Salvatore... Caius Salvatore... Look forward to more! X
Date: 04 Apr 2015 9:49 PM Title: Chapter 108
That woman with the stroller, is that karen? There were pictures in that envelope of Bella and Edward jogging and I'm sure that there was also a woman running with a stroller that day in the park... Love to see how this all links up!
Date: 28 Mar 2015 8:05 PM Title: Chapter 110
Louise . . . pl . . plea. . . .please . . . .please finish this wonderful story. . .
Date: 22 Mar 2015 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 53
What a FANTASTIC chapter!!! I'm not going to want this story to end.
Date: 20 Mar 2015 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 10
I'm reading the beginning for the second time, and I am understanding the story on a much deeper level. I have read through chapter 34, and I'm "all in" for sure! I really love how you write, and find myself thinking of the story throughout my work day. Thank you for your efforts. I'm really, really tied up in your words at this point.
Date: 20 Mar 2015 12:40 AM Title: Chapter 110
I'm reading this story again and really look forward to seeing some more of it.
Date: 13 Mar 2015 6:55 AM Title: Chapter 11
She has a thing for anal sex after being raped there and for sure never experiancing anything good with James? This completely confuses me.
Date: 11 Mar 2015 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 110
Saw on your blog that you posted up to chapter 114 over there, and wondering if you´ll ever update here...I understand RL can get in the way...
Date: 08 Feb 2015 5:57 AM Title: Chapter 110
Found you at TWCS. I know you have a real life but still hope you will finish this unique story. Will read it again (4th time) and hope life will allow you the desire and time to send another chapter our way. Thank you again.
Sharon
Date: 01 Feb 2015 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 1
PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE finish this fic!!!
Date: 23 Dec 2014 10:26 PM Title: Chapter 23
Your words are both awe inspiring and heart breaking.
Date: 02 Dec 2014 10:13 PM Title: Chapter 110
this is the second time i have read this story you are very talented. can not wait to see what happens next. alice is really annoying . thanks for all the time and effort you put in to this story and the characters.
Date: 24 Sep 2014 9:28 PM Title: Chapter 110
Hey,
I started to read this fic on Fanfiction.net and then I couldn't find it again so am ecstatic to have found it on twcs. I love everything I have read and am just wondering when the next chapter is going to be posted? I can't wait!!!!!!
Hugs and Kisses
Eeffle_Luna
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Date: 07 Sep 2014 6:52 PM Title: Chapter 1
She's updated on her blog. It's up to chapter 112. :)
Date: 04 Sep 2014 3:09 AM Title: Chapter 109
Please update soon. I have missed them so much. What happens next?
Date: 01 Sep 2014 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 109
Ty for today's update on your blog!! Can't wait til they get to the basement. I have a feeling bellas butt will be sore
Date: 28 Aug 2014 7:00 AM Title: Chapter 110
PlEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEase this is the one story i HAVE to end. MY FAVORITE STORY EVER.....please finish..
Date: 09 Aug 2014 3:10 AM Title: Chapter 47
Who the hell is Helen?? Is she in on this? I cant see Tanyas crazy ass doing shit but yeah, I freaking love your story and i cant wait to read the rest :)
-T
Date: 07 Jul 2014 8:44 AM Title: Chapter 110
I've just had an opportunity to read this, you are an amazing writer. I noticed that you haven't updated in a while,please update soon!!
Date: 30 Jun 2014 6:15 PM Title: Chapter 1
Holy smokes- I found a new chapter on your blog! WOOHOO!!!! I didn't even know you updated. (I come here every once in a while, thinking perhaps I've missed something along the way, and I saw a reviewer mention the new chapter 111 update.) Thank you, thank for not giving up on this story. Perhaps you dont think it true, but I'm certain you have a great following, and huge masses of people have not only not forgotten, but crave this story's completion. You surely have made many happy with your continuation. This is hands down one of my favorites - ever. It's so nice to see the pieces starting to come together. Thanks again... - K
Date: 29 Jun 2014 10:43 PM Title: Chapter 1
I found the link to chapter 111 (at your blog) from an earlier review. Thanks so much for updating. Some of the answers are falling in place. I can hardly wait to see what the next chapter holds. Are you not going to continue with updating on TWCS? Thanks for your wonderful writing. This is one of my very favorites---and I've been reading fanfiction for four years (many, many stories).
Date: 22 Jun 2014 1:16 AM Title: Chapter 110
Hello,
Thank you thank you thank you. I founfd your story last week and have been deligently reading it ever since. I am sorry I didn't comment on each chapter I just couldnt stop reading. I love this story. It is amazingly well written and ties in so many subplot so well it is fantastic. I play at being a submissive somewhat like Roselie in your story and it was amazing and very moving to see someon who had gone through a sexual trama still want to act submissive. I hav overcome my old feeling of wondering is I was a freak but it was very empwering to see that in a story. I am amazed at how well you are pulling everything together. I hope yor life slows down so you can keep working on the story. For now I think I will go back and reread it to make sure i didn't miss anything in my zest to keep reading. I also love how you are providing so many exapmles and ideas about D/S lifestles. It is an amzing piece of work. Thank you.
Date: 19 Jun 2014 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 110
i really hope you finish this story really looking forward to it i love it i have read and reread it at least 4 times just waiting for the rest of it
Date: 14 Jun 2014 8:05 PM Title: Chapter 110
Very well written.
Date: 07 Jun 2014 1:51 AM Title: Chapter 110
have just seen your update on your blog
very good glad you updated love this story
chap 111
Date: 31 May 2014 4:36 AM Title: Chapter 110
This story rocks! I followed the link to your website and found chapter 111, which you posted in May 2014, and I was pleasantly surprised.
http://lmlx8sdiamondintherough.blogspot.com/2014/05/chapter-111.html
Date: 30 May 2014 12:08 AM Title: Chapter 110
I am reading this for the second time now and it's so beautifully involved its like a new story.
I am so looking forward to seeing where this goes and watching their relationship get better and can't wait for you to update.
I hope you are still writing and can't wait for another update.
I'm sure that I'll read it yet again when it's finished.
Date: 27 May 2014 1:27 AM Title: Chapter 110
I just got to the last page and went..."WHAT"...where's the rest. I'm lost without the ending. Please finish your work. It's wonderful and I truly love it. Thank you!
Date: 23 May 2014 5:56 PM Title: Chapter 110
for some reason i wasnt able to comment on your blog, and had to get a new account due to pw problems on here. but since u have updated i just wanted to say TYTYTY!! i am glad u didnt give up on us and leave us hanging :) love ur story reading it a 2nd time since its been so long between updates. ty for sharing!!!
Date: 05 May 2014 11:06 PM Title: Chapter 110
I have read this story a few times and will continue until it comes to a fitting end. The characters in this story deserve to have a finish to their story, it is a wonderful story of perserverence and love. Could you please let us, your many many fans know if and when you plan to finish it? Waiting until then..................
Date: 27 Apr 2014 11:43 AM Title: Chapter 1
just finished all chapters so far and i have to say that it's a such a good story. can't wait to see more of it :)
Date: 24 Apr 2014 10:43 PM Title: Chapter 110
Please finish, I am waiting with bated breath and will pass out soon x
Date: 24 Apr 2014 9:57 PM Title: Chapter 110
Are you going to be finishing this story I just finished an need more lol it's a very well written story please I hope you finish it
Date: 14 Apr 2014 8:57 AM Title: Chapter 3
Another great chapter
Date: 14 Apr 2014 8:47 AM Title: Chapter 2
Great story.I love Edward"s confidence.
Date: 14 Apr 2014 8:30 AM Title: Chapter 1
I love this story.
Date: 13 Apr 2014 12:10 AM Title: Chapter 1
I just reread this story with hopes that more chapters had been posted. Please Please finish this story. You have done an amazing job with this story and we are desperate to know the outcome. :(
Date: 11 Apr 2014 6:55 PM Title: Chapter 110
love this story are you going to finish it i hope you are ok