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Reviewer: Edwardlov3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Dec 2020 11:01 AM Title: Chapter 110

Please update this story soon it is wonderful so far and you are a fantastic writer and hope you keep nurturing your creative gift!☘

Reviewer: Edwardlov3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Dec 2020 11:01 AM Title: Chapter 110

Please update this story soon it is wonderful so far and you are a fantastic writer and hope you keep nurturing your creative gift!☘

Reviewer: Darkxgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Dec 2020 9:55 PM Title: Chapter 110

I originally found this story on FF and I loved it. The story has been in my bookmarks for a long time. I probably re-read it once every year or so and always secretly hope that there will be a new chapter every time I come back to it. I'm sure I'm not alone when I say that I would love to know how the story ends!

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2020 3:23 PM Title: Chapter 5

I think this is my third time reading I Loved it but sure wish you had finished

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2020 1:55 AM Title: Chapter 2

I think this is my third time reading I Loved it but sure wish you had finished

Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2020 4:39 PM Title: Chapter 9

Loved it!

Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2020 2:54 PM Title: Chapter 8

Loved it

Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2020 2:24 PM Title: Chapter 7

Loved it!

Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2020 1:46 PM Title: Chapter 6

Loved it!

Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2020 6:02 PM Title: Chapter 5

Loved it! Poor Bella!

Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2020 6:30 PM Title: Chapter 3

Loved it!

Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2020 6:15 PM Title: Chapter 2

Loved it!

Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2020 5:57 PM Title: Chapter 1

Loved it!

Reviewer: cina24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2020 5:48 AM Title: Chapter 110

I absolutely love this story and hope you start posting again.  

Reviewer: cina24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2020 5:47 AM Title: Chapter 110

I absolutely love this story and hope you start posting again.  

Reviewer: cina24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2020 5:47 AM Title: Chapter 110

I absolutely love this story and hope you start posting again.  

Reviewer: cina24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2020 5:53 PM Title: Chapter 98

That van he saw while running has always been in the back of my mind.  Shit maybe she doesn't remember.  Poor Emmett I feel so bad for him having to just sit by and watch.  Bella and her tantrum hahahahaha.  Loved it. 

Reviewer: cina24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2020 5:52 PM Title: Chapter 98

That van he saw while running has always been in the back of my mind.  Shit maybe she doesn't remember.  Poor Emmett I feel so bad for him having to just sit by and watch.  Bella and her tantrum hahahahaha.  Loved it. 

Reviewer: Happy2beme Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2020 6:09 PM Title: Chapter 110

Did you quit writing this story? It is so good.

Susan Neumann

Smn46@roadrunner.com

Reviewer: Happy2beme Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2020 6:08 PM Title: Chapter 110

Did you quit writing this story? It is so good.

Susan Neumann

Smn46@roadrunner.com

Reviewer: Happy2beme Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2020 6:08 PM Title: Chapter 110

Did you quit writing this story? It is so good.

Susan Neumann

Smn46@roadrunner.com

Reviewer: Happy2beme Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2020 6:08 PM Title: Chapter 110

Did you quit writing this story? It is so good.

Susan Neumann

Smn46@roadrunner.com

Reviewer: Happy2beme Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2020 6:08 PM Title: Chapter 110

Did you quit writing this story? It is so good.

Susan Neumann

Smn46@roadrunner.com

Reviewer: Happy2beme Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2020 6:08 PM Title: Chapter 110

Did you quit writing this story? It is so good.

Susan Neumann

Smn46@roadrunner.com

Reviewer: Happy2beme Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2020 6:08 PM Title: Chapter 110

Did you quit writing this story? It is so good.

Susan Neumann

Smn46@roadrunner.com

Reviewer: sweet little cannibal Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2020 5:12 PM Title: Chapter 1

Love the story, the writing, wow! Did you turn it into a published book? If so I would buy it, please share the title! Hope you're doing well.

Reviewer: sweet little cannibal Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2020 5:12 PM Title: Chapter 1

Love the story, the writing, wow! Did you turn it into a published book? If so I would buy it, please share the title! Hope you're doing well.

Reviewer: cullen1901 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2020 12:44 PM Title: Chapter 110

I love this story and wanted to know if you are going to finish it?

Reviewer: cullen1901 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2020 12:44 PM Title: Chapter 110

I love this story and wanted to know if you are going to finish it?

Reviewer: cullen1901 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2020 12:44 PM Title: Chapter 110

I love this story and wanted to know if you are going to finish it?

Reviewer: cullen1901 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2020 12:44 PM Title: Chapter 110

I love this story and wanted to know if you are going to finish it?

Reviewer: cullen1901 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2020 12:44 PM Title: Chapter 110

I love this story and wanted to know if you are going to finish it?

Reviewer: cullen1901 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2020 12:43 PM Title: Chapter 110

I love this story and wanted to know if you are going to finish it?

Reviewer: cullen1901 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2020 12:43 PM Title: Chapter 110

I love this story and wanted to know if you are going to finish it?

Reviewer: cullen1901 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2020 12:43 PM Title: Chapter 110

I love this story and wanted to know if you are going to finish it?

Reviewer: cullen1901 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2020 12:43 PM Title: Chapter 110

I love this story and wanted to know if you are going to finish it?

Reviewer: cullen1901 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2020 12:43 PM Title: Chapter 110

I love this story and wanted to know if you are going to finish it?

Reviewer: cullen1901 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2020 12:43 PM Title: Chapter 110

I love this story and wanted to know if you are going to finish it?

Reviewer: cullen1901 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2020 12:42 PM Title: Chapter 110

I love this story and wanted to know if you are going to finish it?

Reviewer: Funsizedwitch Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2020 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 110

Please update!!! I'm on the edge of my seat!!! I adore this story so very much! Much love!

Reviewer: vfloyd Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2019 8:00 PM Title: Chapter 110

Just wondering if this story has been updated somewhere because we got so close to wrapping it up and getting all the answers, then nothing here for over 5 years. Is it going to be completed?

Reviewer: Twins storms Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2019 9:14 PM Title: Chapter 1

I was just wondering  when will you finish  this story.  

Reviewer: Twins storms Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2019 9:14 PM Title: Chapter 1

I was just wondering  when will you finish  this story.  

Reviewer: Trace6119 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2019 4:37 PM Title: Chapter 110

Are you going to finish this  or is it being posted elsewhere?

Reviewer: Trace6119 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2019 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 110

Are you going to finish this  or is it being posted elsewhere?

Reviewer: Trace6119 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2019 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 110

Are you going to finish this  or is it being posted elsewhere?

Reviewer: Ezzy Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2019 1:13 PM Title: Chapter 110

Oh how I have loved reading this story! I can't wait to read more and find out how everything comes together and I can't wait to see if Bella and Edward get their happy ending or not (I hope they be happily ever after though with all that they have been through)!

Reviewer: Bellnedward0 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Nov 2018 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 110

Please update this story it is so wonderful!!!

Reviewer: Bellnedward0 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2018 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 43

Aww so sweet 

Reviewer: Bellnedward0 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2018 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 43

Aww so sweet 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2018 1:38 AM Title: Chapter 110

I hope you come back to this someday.

Reviewer: Tabitha Finch Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2018 9:55 PM Title: Chapter 3

How did he graduate and not get into a residency program?  Especially if he was doing pediatrics?  Was he a complete bonehead?  I’m starting to doubt Edward’s intelligence!  LOL!  This simply cannot be!

Reviewer: Tabitha Finch Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2018 9:55 PM Title: Chapter 3

How did he graduate and not get into a residency program?  Especially if he was doing pediatrics?  Was he a complete bonehead?  I’m starting to doubt Edward’s intelligence!  LOL!  This simply cannot be!

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2018 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 110

Finish plz plz plz

Reviewer: Kitacullen89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2018 8:57 AM Title: Chapter 110

I would love to see this updated or finished

Reviewer: TwiCullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2018 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 60

Very good

Reviewer: Blueandsilverphoenix Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2018 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 16

Amazing story

Reviewer: TwiCullen Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2018 10:50 AM Title: Chapter 6

Wow...that has got to be the most fucked up, insensitive remark I’ve ever read from an author. If you bothered to research; you might have learned that men having undersized penises is often caused by medication taken while their mother was pregnant, it’s a birth defect. How incredibly heartless and cruel you are. Do you make fun of ‘Little People’ or people with Psoriasis too? How much courage does a man have to have to be intimate with someone when they know they are less than average size? Having a small dick doesn’t make a man a bad lover anymore than having a big one makes them a good one. I’d rather be with a man who cares and knows how to work with what he’s got. Being a good lover is about skill! 

Reviewer: TwiCullen Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2018 10:22 AM Title: Chapter 6

Wow...that has got to be the most fucked up, insensitive remark I’ve ever read from an author. If you bothered to research; you might have learned that men having undersized penises is often caused by medication taken while their mother was pregnant, it’s a birth defect. How incredibly heartless and cruel you are. Do you make fun of ‘Little People’ or people with Psoriasis too? How much courage does a man have to have to be intimate with someone when they know they are less than average size? Having a small dick doesn’t make a man a bad lover anymore than having a big one makes them a good one. I’d rather be with a man who cares and knows how to work with what he’s got. Being a good lover is about skill! 

Reviewer: Mlw76 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2018 11:53 AM Title: Chapter 1

I see there's a lot of people asking for more...so I realize  I'm just adding to the requests.  I love this story.  It's so well thought out, every detail.  I would love to read the rest of it.  Do you think you'd consider posting soon?  Many thanks!

Reviewer: rachaelmalfoy Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jan 2018 4:00 PM Title: Chapter 110

I love this story and I just spent the last 4 days rereading it! Please finish it!!!

Reviewer: triplejjjones Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2018 1:15 AM Title: Chapter 110

Love your stort. Sorry to see you haven't post in a long time. Hope you finish one day

Reviewer: Blueandsilverphoenix Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2018 7:31 PM Title: Chapter 14


Reviewer: Sukiethree Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 27 Dec 2017 11:45 AM Title: Chapter 110

HI Louise

I have read this story including the additional 2 chapters on your blog many times and love it.

You said in one of your answers to reviews that there were only a few chapters left and I would love, love, love to read the rest.

I want to know how it ends, who's behind all the threats, and how they get on with the rest of their lives.

Real life definitely intrudes on writing time but if you could just tell us when we might see an update I would be so grateful

Thanks for writing such a wonderful story

Sue (sukiethree)

Reviewer: jamiesmummy Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2017 7:37 PM Title: Chapter 110

Hi I love your story but it's been ages since you have updated. Please update soon really want to know what happens next

Reviewer: elke Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2017 5:07 AM Title: Chapter 110

This is one of my very favorite few stories, out of many that I have read and enjoyed.

I hope the author is well and also hope she can finish this one...on a day soon.  It is so very interesting, sweet, erotic and also mysterious. The only way to improve on it, is to finish it.  It has one of my very favorite Edwards!  The writing is perfect to me.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2017 3:42 AM Title: Chapter 1

I want you to know that you are missed.  PLEASE come back and finish this amazing story. Your readers miss you and your story. 

Reviewer: irishwitch Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2017 2:42 AM Title: Chapter 1

yes!  So good to hear from you and I'm looking forward to rereading this once complete.  be well and please post soon!

Reviewer: opheliatodd Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jan 2017 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 110

Hi, I know it's been awhile, but will you ever continue?  I just reread what you have posted and really enjoyed this story so far. Cheers. 

Reviewer: arty66 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jan 2017 4:24 PM Title: Chapter 1

It's really been an long while! Will you ever continue this story? Please let your fans (especially me :)) know ...



Author's Response:

I have been working on the last chapters,I have 3 done and will post them soon ...thanks, and I am glad you like the story, but I am one of those people who finds pleasure in something and then moves on to something else but I have been feeling the pull to get these characters out of my head and have been writing again ....so in answer to your question... Yes, my Edward and Bella will come to a close. 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: hazza20190 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2016 6:17 PM Title: Chapter 110

professor Victor Salvatore 

Reviewer: hazza20190 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2016 5:13 PM Title: Chapter 99

DOUGIE!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: cina24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2016 8:01 PM Title: Chapter 105

What a GREAT update.  Loved that Bella finally got her fruity pebbles.  Conversation was interesting to sat the least.   Who is the bother?  I don't believe that Charlie isn't Bella's dad.  Can't wait to read the next updat... off I go!

Reviewer: cina24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2016 11:22 PM Title: Chapter 91

Oh my....  

Reviewer: cina24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2016 12:53 AM Title: Chapter 83

I thought he was a bit harsh.  But I'm not hating him (yet). 

Reviewer: cina24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2016 12:15 AM Title: Chapter 71

Too funny!

Reviewer: cina24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Sep 2016 3:10 AM Title: Chapter 69

Not sure why Edward would care.... he will be golfing. 

Reviewer: cina24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2016 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 64

Loved Edward and Leah's talk.... I think they both needed to clear the air between them. 

Reviewer: cina24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Sep 2016 10:15 PM Title: Chapter 60

Ewwwww we finally meet it. 

Reviewer: cina24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Sep 2016 9:41 PM Title: Chapter 59

Yes I definitely can see Leah's side. 

Reviewer: cina24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Sep 2016 8:22 PM Title: Chapter 58

We go to different beaches on our vacations and we look for sea glass.  Can't believe Paul said that infront of Charlie.  

Reviewer: cina24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2016 2:34 PM Title: Chapter 55

No not a leash and collar. 

Reviewer: cina24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2016 2:00 AM Title: Chapter 49

Mike or caruis 

Reviewer: cina24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Sep 2016 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 48

Office Hawk is an ass. 

Reviewer: cina24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Sep 2016 7:09 PM Title: Chapter 47

I'm thinking Heathe is really Victoria and she is doing his dirty work. 

Reviewer: cina24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Sep 2016 6:45 PM Title: Chapter 46

Ewwww pinky mouse description was so nasty.  

Reviewer: cina24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Sep 2016 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 45

Ok the only thing I don't like is having Bella suffer in public.  That's just mean. 

Reviewer: cina24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Sep 2016 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 41

Loved it as usual. 

Reviewer: cina24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Sep 2016 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 38

Wow that was so emotional.  Great writing.  

Reviewer: cina24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Sep 2016 8:25 PM Title: Chapter 35

Ofcourse 

Reviewer: cina24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Sep 2016 3:57 PM Title: Chapter 34

Very sexy having Bella dress Edward.  Where in the hell is Stehan getting his info?  James is lurking around.... Is he the friend Felix wants an application for?  Not sure what Leah's problem is.... Jealousy?  

Reviewer: cina24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Sep 2016 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 31

Too funny "emmie".  Love it. 

Reviewer: cina24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Sep 2016 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 29

Omg that's just crazy.  

Reviewer: cina24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Sep 2016 8:04 PM Title: Chapter 28

Loved it

Reviewer: cina24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Sep 2016 3:11 AM Title: Chapter 26

If feel the Bella does about God....  I know there is a higher being but I come from a bad childhood and have a hard time with "free will".  Why does God let bad things happen to child.   What is with Bella's gym bag????  

Reviewer: cina24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Sep 2016 2:14 PM Title: Chapter 23

Why does Bella not have Seth with her at all times?  He could be a big asset to the center and protect and warn Bella of any harm. 

Reviewer: cina24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Sep 2016 12:54 AM Title: Chapter 16

Oh my that was such a great chapter.  And we finally met Tanya.... The bitch that she is. 

Reviewer: cina24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2016 4:44 AM Title: Chapter 14

Theat was so good.  I am afraid James and Tanya are going to show their ugly sides. 

Reviewer: cina24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2016 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 13

Absolutely love your story. 

Reviewer: Ree155 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2016 2:06 PM Title: Chapter 1

Please oh please continue really really soon. I love this story and wish it was my life and or a movie lol. Can't wait to read more 

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