Date: 05 Aug 2010 11:52 PM Title: Chapter Four- No Longer a Figment of the Imagination
I'm so glad he finally found her!
Date: 05 Aug 2010 2:29 AM Title: Chapter Three- Waking Life
I don't usually enjoy Bella as dominant fanfics..... but I love this story....Hope you update SOON!!!!!!!!!!!! :)
Date: 04 Aug 2010 9:18 PM Title: Chapter Three- Waking Life
Wow! I just started reading this and rushed through these chapters, wishing there was more. And i don't usually enjoy Bella as dominant fics, though I enjoy the other way round normally. But this is intriguing and interesting, and the anticipation of what's going to happen is killing me! smile. There's so much I want to know, so many questions. it's fantastic.
Date: 02 Aug 2010 5:44 AM Title: Chapter Three- Waking Life
totally love this story i am totally hooked on dommella and subward. i actually write my own story called Plain Jane by day Domme by Night.
So my bet is that Bella is Anthony and Masen's teacher
Author's Response: Oh yay! I might have to check it out and no she's not the twins teacher.. I love the concept of Domella and subward..I think it's about time. Time to whip some delicious Edward butt *licks lips* Thanks for the review babe, and I'm going to stop by and show you some love as well!
Date: 31 Jul 2010 4:58 AM Title: Chapter Three- Waking Life
He isn't imagining things, a part of him might be wishing he was though. And mystery girl? yes, she has been missed, she needs to show herself and soon!!!! Edward is about to loose his mind, and having to look after his siblings won't make things easier for him.
There's also this new side of Edward we just found about, it is great. Even if he know will have to ask a favor because of it. It will be worth it.
Date: 30 Jul 2010 9:57 PM Title: Chapter Three- Waking Life
can wait till the next one
Date: 30 Jul 2010 12:28 AM Title: Chapter Three- Waking Life
edward robert cullen??????
Author's Response: LoL yep! Edward, Anthony, Masen, Cullen...Those are Esme and Carlisle's Boys
[Report This]Date: 30 Jul 2010 12:15 AM Title: Chapter Three- Waking Life
Hooked on the story! Thanks for a great read!
[Report This]Date: 29 Jul 2010 11:56 PM Title: Chapter Two- Obsessive Compulsive Disorder
Love it!
Date: 21 Jul 2010 11:46 AM Title: Chapter Two- Obsessive Compulsive Disorder
:)
Date: 21 Jul 2010 11:07 AM Title: Chapter One- Theory of Relativity
:)
Date: 21 Jul 2010 10:49 AM Title: Prolouge-My Mistress
:)
Date: 21 Jul 2010 4:28 AM Title: Prolouge-My Mistress
Wow she is ruthless how can she do without him for 3 weeks???
Date: 21 Jul 2010 4:22 AM Title: Chapter Two- Obsessive Compulsive Disorder
this is going to be fun.. can't wait for more.. gReat job
Date: 20 Jul 2010 11:10 PM Title: Chapter Two- Obsessive Compulsive Disorder
He is truly obsessed by this mystery girl. The one that didn't fall for him immediately, one who was confident enough to turn him down and didn't look back. All these doesn't go down well with Edward. So now he is trying to erase her, to replace her. It isn't working. Will he see her again? How long will he be lurking around the coffee shop? Maybe if he said something to someone, he might find her faster.
Date: 15 Jul 2010 8:01 PM Title: Chapter One- Theory of Relativity
Sounds good so far, like it when bella isnt so mousy
Date: 13 Jul 2010 8:23 AM Title: Chapter One- Theory of Relativity
ok not really much I can say about this chapter. So they meet and Bella doesnt want to currupt him thats it. ummm still hoping that he turns into the Dom though. Can you give me a clue on that. I just cant stand for him to be the one in pain and in the prologue she was mean as hell to him.
Author's Response: Aweee I know what you mean about Edward being hurt, but he enjoys it. I hate to give to much away....are you sure you want to know all that I have planned?
Date: 13 Jul 2010 8:04 AM Title: Prolouge-My Mistress
Ok I love BDSM storie but I dont like Bella being the Dom. I dont know what it is but I dont like it. I dont like they way she is treating him. I am wondering if the whole story will be her being the dom or are the tables going to turn and he will be her dom? I am hoping this is the case so I can enjoy this story to its fullest.
Author's Response: I know how some people don't like Edward being the sub, and Bella will be knocking his cocky ass down a peg or two. I hope I can keep you entertained. I like domella in some cases where she is the strong sexual aggressor. My hope is to show a love story and not just smut...trust me...it's already playing out and my head and I can't wait to get there. Much love!
Date: 13 Jul 2010 3:46 AM Title: Chapter One- Theory of Relativity
I'm all for the slow burn.
And I love that she blew off his arrogant ass. ;)
Date: 12 Jul 2010 7:52 PM Title: Chapter One- Theory of Relativity
Interesting, Edward is intelligent, and used to getting what he wants, and fast.
He has his priorities and ideas, and seems to be more than happy with his life. But this small, not so random, encounter has him stunned and confused.
This small woman exuded so much confidence that it shocked him, and how she is gone. However, something tells me, they will meet again and that perhaps, Emmett might have something to do with said meeting.
Date: 10 Jul 2010 7:00 AM Title: Prolouge-My Mistress
I like it! Damn! Bella can dish it out!!!
Date: 09 Jul 2010 11:15 AM Title: Prolouge-My Mistress
Can't wait for more chapters!
[Report This]Date: 09 Jul 2010 7:37 AM Title: Prolouge-My Mistress
Really good! Can't wait!
Date: 09 Jul 2010 1:41 AM Title: Prolouge-My Mistress
She has complete control over him. She seems to take a lot, and give not that much in return. She has to give him something for him to be so anxious. What? I would like to find out.
[Report This]Date: 08 Jul 2010 9:12 PM Title: Prolouge-My Mistress
love twitter no love the start of your story yes.
[Report This]Date: 08 Jul 2010 8:59 PM Title: Prolouge-My Mistress
You are such a awesome writer! I can't wait to read more and see where you take this very hot story and to find out more about why she wot let him touch her lokks very good
Date: 08 Jul 2010 8:54 PM Title: Prolouge-My Mistress
I don't know about the no touching thing. How is that going to play out? I'm getting intrested. It seems that Dommella is making a rise in the FF world.
Date: 08 Jul 2010 8:53 PM Title: Prolouge-My Mistress
Sorry - not for me. I like some bdsm but prefer Domward & Subella or equality but not Subward.
Date: 08 Jul 2010 8:34 PM Title: Prolouge-My Mistress
mmmm.... i always love sub edward. he's so much more interesting than sub bella