Date: 25 Jul 2010 2:25 PM Title: lost, hurt, pain, and acceptance
Getting good! I like that fact that you're keeping Edward violent most people end that streak to soon. I enjoy your writing, can't wait for the update.
[Report This]Date: 25 Jul 2010 1:33 PM Title: preface
Darkward - Why Bella? Why Then did he take her Chapter 1? Emmett got Rose! do we find how and when? Is Alice in this universe? In the 9 Months what happened to the children? Lots of questions don't expected answers hope they are answered in future chapters. Please update and complete.
Author's Response:
and you r right those r going to be answered soon.
Date: 25 Jul 2010 1:01 PM Title: lost, hurt, pain, and acceptance
I can't wait until you update! i hope it's soon because i loved it.! can't wait to see where you take this this is officially one of my fav's
Date: 25 Jul 2010 12:51 PM Title: re live and be damned
oh no i'm so mad you ended this here. i wonder those edward have other children with other women? why bella?
[Report This]Date: 25 Jul 2010 12:31 PM Title: preface
loved it! keep the updates comming...are you on fanfiction?
Author's Response:
yes i do and i am going to move all of my stories to this sight though
Date: 18 Jul 2010 10:03 PM Title: re live and be damned
intresting chapter intresting
Date: 17 Jul 2010 11:21 AM Title: preface
great chapter. i love this story.
Date: 17 Jul 2010 8:16 AM Title: re live and be damned
wow. great great great chapter. i really love this story
Date: 14 Jul 2010 5:32 PM Title: re live and be damned
Wow, good chapter! I'm always on Edward's side, no matter what. Can't wait for your next update!
Author's Response:
wow good to know, ...thnx for the review
Date: 14 Jul 2010 5:31 AM Title: re live and be damned
i am really liking this story, even though edward is cruel, jeez he is still hottt.
Date: 08 Jul 2010 5:38 PM Title: preface
this was freaking awesome :)
Date: 08 Jul 2010 5:20 PM Title: preface
OOOOOH LET THE GAMES BEGIN! He's going to catch you Bella, hellloooo. I love me some Dark Edward. Update soon!
Date: 08 Jul 2010 2:29 PM Title: preface
dude tht wuz freaking awesome
Date: 08 Jul 2010 3:16 AM Title: preface
i hate when people always make edward the good guy, sometimes its intriguing to see him play the bad guy...and thats what you are doing update soon im really enjoying the story. hopefully he turns good though :)
Author's Response:
well alot of ppl like when edward is the good guy but i wanted to switch it up alittle. go into the dark side lol. thnx 4 the review
Date: 08 Jul 2010 1:59 AM Title: preface
That was really good and I think you should do the whole cat and mouse thing with bella and edward. Bella runs somewhere Edward finds her, but Edward lets her run away a few times then catches her and takes her to italia but somhow she is able to get away with her children.
Author's Response:
yea thnx i was going to do that in the later chapters but in the first few its going to show. bella and edwards relation ship before that. thnx for the review.
[Report This]Date: 07 Jul 2010 11:45 PM Title: preface
This is interesting. Look forward to more.
Author's Response:
great i hope you like the next chapter also