Date: 06 Jan 2018 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 19
So I know that it's been a long time since you updated. But please hurry
Date: 04 Jan 2017 7:54 PM Title: re live and be damned
Hello, just got introduced to this story. Will you complete it here or is it on another site ?
Date: 16 Jul 2015 8:14 PM Title: Chapter 19
I love it!!! But i want an update 😞😞
Date: 23 Dec 2014 11:06 AM Title: Chapter 19
Really great chapter.
Date: 25 Jun 2014 6:48 PM Title: A Beginning
hello
hast thou forsaken your fic? I will love to read more.
thank you for your answer
Date: 23 May 2014 5:16 AM Title: preface
Reallllll good. I like it. Didn't know you had this in you lol good job. I'll talk to you more about it tmrw I can't wait to read more. Ps. Edward is a complete ass
Date: 23 Feb 2014 5:24 AM Title: Chapter 19
I'm so intrigued with this story. I don't think anyone has ever written the Cullen boys to be such dirt bags! Bella has become so strong & I can't wit to see where you take the rest of this story. Will Bella & Edward actually get along or will Edward get put in jail?
Date: 23 Feb 2014 4:50 AM Title: A Beginning
Finally Edward has maybe done one thing right.
Date: 23 Feb 2014 4:07 AM Title: Chapter 16
He is going to lose his mind when he finds out that all the kids are with Bella.
Date: 23 Feb 2014 2:53 AM Title: tired of it
The Calvary is coming!
Date: 23 Feb 2014 2:43 AM Title: another path
She always makes laugh when she questions why she gets turned on.
Date: 23 Feb 2014 2:18 AM Title: leaving hatred
I hope Charlie doesn't turn her over to Edward.
Date: 23 Feb 2014 2:06 AM Title: abandon and sacrifice
Are the kids still looking for her or did Edward catch them & bring them home? I can't believe Alice ran.
Date: 23 Feb 2014 1:55 AM Title: head start
Dang Bella Edward wouldn't have found you so quickly had you shot Jasper dead!
Date: 03 Jul 2013 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 19
J'ai hate de lire la suite merci pour cet excellent chapitre
Date: 27 Jun 2013 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 19
Wow! I wonder how things are going for Edward and Bella? Seemed like a good family breakfast!
Date: 25 Jun 2013 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 19
Excellent chapter, I'm looking forward to the wedding. Thank you for the update:)
Date: 24 Jun 2013 6:10 PM Title: Chapter 19
keep going. love this story!!
Date: 24 Jun 2013 3:01 PM Title: Chapter 19
Thanks for the update. Looking forward to more
Date: 24 Jun 2013 10:26 AM Title: Chapter 19
looking forward to more
Date: 24 Jun 2013 7:03 AM Title: Chapter 19
Can't wait for more.
Date: 23 Jun 2013 1:13 AM Title: A Beginning
WOW, that was a fight! Now that prince hum! Fine as hell, you go girl.
Author's Response:
lol i love this review haha... and yes the prince is very fine... just wait until the wedding night! ;)
-love sinister!
Date: 21 Jun 2013 2:59 PM Title: re live and be damned
Avez vous abandonne cette histoire? je suis impatiente de lire merci
Author's Response:
no i havent abandoned the story i just haven't had time to type up and post the next chapter sorry! but i will try soon my schedule has just been all over the place thank you for the review
- love sinister!
Date: 29 May 2013 9:20 PM Title: A Beginning
Umm. I'm trying to follow but:
What is the plot if Bella doesn't kill edward?
Date: 29 May 2013 3:56 AM Title: A Beginning
I like the story cant wait to read more.
Date: 06 May 2013 7:56 AM Title: A Beginning
I hope this has a happy ending. Cause I would have poked his eyes out of his head or slit his throat while he was sleeping.
Date: 05 May 2013 5:50 PM Title: A Beginning
please keep going
Date: 05 May 2013 5:43 AM Title: A Beginning
I am truely loving reading this very captivating & intriging story. This story truely is beautifully well written & am always imaptiently waitng for the next update. I definatly give this story a 9 star rating!!
This story is not showing up under most recent any longer!! It showing u haven't updated since Dec 12th which I know is untrue because u were only at ch 44 not 45!! Many people who are reading this story is not going to realize it has be updated or new chapters have been posted since then PLEASE FIX U PROBALLY HAVE CHANGE DATE 4 IT SHOW UP UNDER MOST RECENT BUT PLEASSSSSSSSSE FIX THIS AWSOME STORY!!! I had to do a search for this story to even check if it had been updated. Thanks 4 all ur hard work!! This is truely an such an amzingly well written story than so many people don't even realize it has been update & will believe it hasn't be updated since then ssssooooooooooooooo please fix!!!
Author's Response:
hey thanks for the review and i am not sure on how to change it back to most recent... if you know how i would love to change it thank you again love sinister!
Date: 05 May 2013 2:46 AM Title: A Beginning
looking forward to more
Date: 04 May 2013 4:11 PM Title: preface
Elle est super cette histoire j'espere avoir bientot la suite merci
Date: 10 Apr 2013 4:10 AM Title: preface
please update again!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
I am sorry for taking forever to update this year has been very crazy for me but i will be updating soon sorry for making you wait so long
Date: 31 Dec 2012 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 17
OMG when is the next chapter?
Jad
Date: 01 Dec 2012 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 17
WTF she is not suppost to be that weak little girl she was trained to kick ass not be a little bitch. She should wait till he takes his pants down and shove a corkscrew up his ass and turn his prostate into overies.
Author's Response:
lmfao yeah i know right, but hey she will get him
Date: 01 Dec 2012 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 17
looking forward to mroe
Date: 01 Dec 2012 3:12 PM Title: Chapter 17
OMG, wonderful chapter. I feel so bad for B, but that is her life. She don't have one outside of E. It's been proven over and over again.
Date: 20 Sep 2012 7:15 PM Title: Chapter 16
edward you lost that reunion please update soon
Date: 16 Sep 2012 5:58 PM Title: Chapter 16
Edward is well...he's hot!n he bites too!!
Date: 09 Sep 2012 3:30 PM Title: Chapter 16
well i guess edward missed that reunion
Date: 09 Sep 2012 10:43 AM Title: Chapter 16
OMG, he is going to kill her!
Author's Response:
lmbo hahaha maybe
Date: 08 Sep 2012 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 16
looking forward to more
Date: 02 Aug 2012 8:46 PM Title: reversed
this was really good and it kept me on edge he whole time i loved it
Date: 02 Aug 2012 5:56 PM Title: lost
the kids are beautiful
Date: 02 Aug 2012 9:37 AM Title: lost, hurt, pain, and acceptance
this is so fuckin sad i feel so sorry for B but i cant bring myself to stop reading
Date: 02 Aug 2012 9:14 AM Title: preface
uhhhhh this is really intence but soooo fucking good please keep going
Date: 28 Jun 2012 5:08 PM Title: reversed
omG!i'm glad you continue dis story...it's fucking amazing...
Date: 12 Jun 2012 5:09 AM Title: reversed
This has definitely had its cringe worthy moments but ala in all it has been really good. It read quickly and time progressed quickly as well. Looking forward to the newest interaction between the NEW Bella and Edward when he finds out that she now has all of her children back and intends to kill him.
Date: 09 Jun 2012 4:42 PM Title: lost, hurt, pain, and acceptance
This story is really good, I'm enjoying it
Date: 09 Jun 2012 3:25 PM Title: preface
Liking this on to the next chapter
Date: 08 Jun 2012 2:41 PM Title: reversed
looking forward to more
Date: 21 Apr 2012 11:38 PM Title: Chapter 13
Love the kid pix. I used to know a lady that had 25 children.
Date: 10 Nov 2011 12:28 AM Title: tired of it
Awesome love to see Bella standing up for herself I hope nshe cives him hell he certainly never hesitated to give it to her ,
Date: 17 Jul 2011 1:27 PM Title: tired of it
nice turn of events. i thought bella would be a weeping willow and wallow back to 'eddie boy' for her kid's safety. but her 'oh, hell no, you did it now f**ker" attitude is brilliant. nice job.
Date: 16 Jul 2011 6:35 AM Title: tired of it
Love it, looks like Edward is going to get it now, can't wait.
Date: 14 Jul 2011 12:25 AM Title: tired of it
YOU GO BELLA! So happy to see this update!
Date: 13 Jul 2011 9:17 PM Title: tired of it
well im excited for the next chatper
Date: 13 Jul 2011 1:09 PM Title: tired of it
I'll tell you what i think. I think i want MORREEEEE LMAO
Date: 13 Jul 2011 10:52 AM Title: tired of it
way terminator to go
Date: 01 Feb 2011 7:53 AM Title: Chapter 11
well, good chapter as always i am wondering how many children in totall bella have why bella stop her body to be pregnant again , thanx for writting
Date: 19 Jan 2011 2:04 PM Title: another path
Wow. Dark, dark Edward, but I strangely like it. He really does have super sperm!
Date: 13 Jan 2011 5:14 PM Title: preface
like the kids and y he doesnt like them .....?
Author's Response:
well he loves his kids he just hates that some of them has inherited bella's sympathy. he hates when they feel guilty for something because to him it's all a sign of weakness. and as u saw in chapter 6 he hates weakness.
Date: 12 Jan 2011 5:48 PM Title: another path
I LOVE A NASTY EDWARD
Date: 12 Jan 2011 2:03 PM Title: Chapter 13
Could ugive a break down ofwho edward dislikes or ikes and y because as ive read ive tryed 2 do it myself but keep getting lost
Author's Response:
sure i just need to know what it is ur asking. like about his kids or other people bella knows
Date: 11 Jan 2011 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 13
why does Edward have to be so sadistic if he rally loves her why can't he show it she can't love him with the the things he's done.
Author's Response:
because if out of the blue he changes into a sweet loving husband and they live happily ever after whats the point in that. everybody rights stuff like that. my story will be something you wont expect especially the ending you will probably be pissed but i live for that lol
thnx for the review
Date: 11 Jan 2011 2:32 PM Title: Chapter 13
All her kids are cute. I thought he wouldn't want her anymore if she couldn't have kids. That seems to be all he wants from her. So he still wants her even without anymore kids or is he gonna get someone else who can have children while still trying to hold on to Bella?
Date: 11 Jan 2011 7:45 AM Title: another path
I so sad about Charlie - at least he saw Bella again and some of his grand children.
What happened to James?
Emmett learing at his neice - not nice. I am not supprised Alice was caught - she didn't believe Bella.
Thank you for the story and the update on all the kids.
Date: 11 Jan 2011 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 13
wow!!! poor bella no wonder her ovaries don't work anymore, that a lot of kids! Edward and Bella have such a love hate relation and it certainly makes the story a hell of an interesting one!
Date: 11 Jan 2011 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 13
That child have popped out some babies.
Date: 11 Jan 2011 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 13
Wow theyre so pretty i love this story edward is so sexy on hos own way
Date: 11 Jan 2011 3:30 AM Title: another path
WOW, heavy!!!!
Date: 11 Jan 2011 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 13
that's alot of gotdamn kids. anmd i'm mad you fooled me. had me screaming with excited for nothing lmao!!!!!
Date: 11 Jan 2011 3:24 AM Title: another path
he is one f***ed up man poor bella update update update soon
Date: 11 Jan 2011 3:21 AM Title: another path
well i hope that she dosent do anything stupid! cant wait to see what happens next
Date: 11 Jan 2011 3:14 AM Title: another path
Please keep updating thanks love bad Edward..........hehe
Date: 11 Jan 2011 3:04 AM Title: another path
is she really barren? or did she just say that to get him to stop?
Author's Response:
yea she's done sorry!
Date: 10 Jan 2011 2:08 PM Title: Chapter 11
I can't help my self.
It is brilliant. I want to
see her happy with her
children. All of them! :)
Date: 10 Jan 2011 12:37 PM Title: preface
Very interesting! :)
Date: 10 Jan 2011 9:35 AM Title: Chapter 11
loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! update soon!
Date: 10 Jan 2011 2:48 AM Title: Chapter 11
Love this story, I know Edward is a bastard but I love the cat and mouse chase.
Date: 10 Jan 2011 1:22 AM Title: Chapter 11
Damn she has madd kids but they are all beautiful. I want to see them all together again now that they are older. It seems like most of them look like her. Hey what happened to Jasper's son that she had? Was Joseph the one that belonged to Jasper?
Author's Response:
yes it was.
thnx for the review
Date: 10 Jan 2011 12:54 AM Title: Chapter 11
well i hope he finds her and she kills him! cant wait till charlie and alana find bella ! i hope the kids believe her!
Date: 10 Jan 2011 12:34 AM Title: Chapter 11
Damm can wait fir more
Date: 10 Jan 2011 12:27 AM Title: Chapter 11
wow i did not expect that from james. ty for updating i love this story is so different!!!
Date: 09 Jan 2011 11:51 PM Title: Chapter 11
Edward is evil very evil but I am so glad you let Bella learn to defend herself.
Date: 01 Jan 2011 9:20 PM Title: leaving hatred
Oh my, well your story is sure something. I am actually not sure whethe I should say I love it, but it has something captivating. But what I love about your story is the relationship between Bella and her children. Although I find it a bit irritiating of her amount of children. Anyway, I think my favorite if Anabella and Alana, because they stay loyal to their mother and still love her. And the scene of Alana meeting her grandfather was really sad. It was a bit short, but nonethless sad because she has finally someone in her life besides her siblings.
I would love if Bella would be finally be able to meet her beloved children, actually this is the only reason I keep reading it. I am rooting for their reunion. She sure deserved it. So please, update in soon time,
PS: Anabella is really beautiful
xoxo
Date: 30 Dec 2010 8:59 PM Title: leaving hatred
oh god I wonder how the others are going to get out. She found Charlie!? awesome.
Date: 30 Dec 2010 4:57 PM Title: abandon and sacrifice
hi dear , wow i am so happy that you up date your story , well, well i see james is good guy
Date: 29 Dec 2010 5:54 PM Title: leaving hatred
this is quite a story a bad Edward a fighting Bella I am hoping that in your next chapter you would have enpowered Bella more by letting her learn self defense and how to protect herself and her children man her kid is bad and thats the one edwrd does not like ? does he take more to the ones that resemble kids him thats sick , kids can't help who they look like are we going to have a chance to see all the times Edward gets Bella pregnant when she is away from him?
Author's Response:
yes you will. it will be in the out takes because there is alot of stuff i took out because if i would have kept going with all that stuff we wouldn't even be on bella being out of the house yet.
thnx for the review!
Date: 29 Dec 2010 3:01 PM Title: leaving hatred
thanks good chapter
Date: 29 Dec 2010 2:55 PM Title: leaving hatred
well im glad that they are starting to go out and find their mother! keep the chatpers comming
Date: 29 Dec 2010 1:15 PM Title: leaving hatred
You are killing me. Update sooooonnnn!!!!
Date: 29 Dec 2010 1:06 PM Title: leaving hatred
Curious to see what the kids will tell Edward. I think that is great she went to Charlie!
Date: 29 Dec 2010 11:40 AM Title: leaving hatred
i love it thats what i think and i want more.
Date: 25 Dec 2010 6:01 AM Title: abandon and sacrifice
Damn! so close to being free.
Date: 14 Dec 2010 6:12 PM Title: so close but so far away
Wow!!!! I have been readding non stop and I really have to clean my house.... I dont know what to do. I just have to know what happens.
Date: 14 Dec 2010 1:03 PM Title: abandon and sacrifice
can you please show some kindness of Edward, it really breaks my heart that he keeps on beating bella. are you sadist or something? lol.. please for goodness sake and besides Christmas is fast approaching and maybe for the love of God.. thanks anyways