Date: 23 Feb 2014 5:24 AM Title: Chapter 19
I'm so intrigued with this story. I don't think anyone has ever written the Cullen boys to be such dirt bags! Bella has become so strong & I can't wit to see where you take the rest of this story. Will Bella & Edward actually get along or will Edward get put in jail?
Date: 21 Jun 2013 2:59 PM Title: re live and be damned
Avez vous abandonne cette histoire? je suis impatiente de lire merci
no i havent abandoned the story i just haven't had time to type up and post the next chapter sorry! but i will try soon my schedule has just been all over the place thank you for the review
- love sinister!
Date: 05 May 2013 5:43 AM Title: A Beginning
I am truely loving reading this very captivating & intriging story. This story truely is beautifully well written & am always imaptiently waitng for the next update. I definatly give this story a 9 star rating!!
This story is not showing up under most recent any longer!! It showing u haven't updated since Dec 12th which I know is untrue because u were only at ch 44 not 45!! Many people who are reading this story is not going to realize it has be updated or new chapters have been posted since then PLEASE FIX U PROBALLY HAVE CHANGE DATE 4 IT SHOW UP UNDER MOST RECENT BUT PLEASSSSSSSSSE FIX THIS AWSOME STORY!!! I had to do a search for this story to even check if it had been updated. Thanks 4 all ur hard work!! This is truely an such an amzingly well written story than so many people don't even realize it has been update & will believe it hasn't be updated since then ssssooooooooooooooo please fix!!!
hey thanks for the review and i am not sure on how to change it back to most recent... if you know how i would love to change it thank you again love sinister!
Date: 01 Dec 2012 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 17
WTF she is not suppost to be that weak little girl she was trained to kick ass not be a little bitch. She should wait till he takes his pants down and shove a corkscrew up his ass and turn his prostate into overies.
lmfao yeah i know right, but hey she will get him
Date: 12 Jun 2012 5:09 AM Title: reversed
This has definitely had its cringe worthy moments but ala in all it has been really good. It read quickly and time progressed quickly as well. Looking forward to the newest interaction between the NEW Bella and Edward when he finds out that she now has all of her children back and intends to kill him.
Date: 13 Jan 2011 5:14 PM Title: preface
like the kids and y he doesnt like them .....?
well he loves his kids he just hates that some of them has inherited bella's sympathy. he hates when they feel guilty for something because to him it's all a sign of weakness. and as u saw in chapter 6 he hates weakness.
Date: 12 Jan 2011 2:03 PM Title: Chapter 13
Could ugive a break down ofwho edward dislikes or ikes and y because as ive read ive tryed 2 do it myself but keep getting lost
sure i just need to know what it is ur asking. like about his kids or other people bella knows
Date: 11 Jan 2011 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 13
why does Edward have to be so sadistic if he rally loves her why can't he show it she can't love him with the the things he's done.
because if out of the blue he changes into a sweet loving husband and they live happily ever after whats the point in that. everybody rights stuff like that. my story will be something you wont expect especially the ending you will probably be pissed but i live for that lol
thnx for the review
Date: 11 Jan 2011 2:32 PM Title: Chapter 13
All her kids are cute. I thought he wouldn't want her anymore if she couldn't have kids. That seems to be all he wants from her. So he still wants her even without anymore kids or is he gonna get someone else who can have children while still trying to hold on to Bella?
Date: 11 Jan 2011 7:45 AM Title: another path
I so sad about Charlie - at least he saw Bella again and some of his grand children.
What happened to James?
Emmett learing at his neice - not nice. I am not supprised Alice was caught - she didn't believe Bella.
Thank you for the story and the update on all the kids.
Date: 10 Jan 2011 1:22 AM Title: Chapter 11
Damn she has madd kids but they are all beautiful. I want to see them all together again now that they are older. It seems like most of them look like her. Hey what happened to Jasper's son that she had? Was Joseph the one that belonged to Jasper?
yes it was.
thnx for the review
Date: 01 Jan 2011 9:20 PM Title: leaving hatred
Oh my, well your story is sure something. I am actually not sure whethe I should say I love it, but it has something captivating. But what I love about your story is the relationship between Bella and her children. Although I find it a bit irritiating of her amount of children. Anyway, I think my favorite if Anabella and Alana, because they stay loyal to their mother and still love her. And the scene of Alana meeting her grandfather was really sad. It was a bit short, but nonethless sad because she has finally someone in her life besides her siblings.
I would love if Bella would be finally be able to meet her beloved children, actually this is the only reason I keep reading it. I am rooting for their reunion. She sure deserved it. So please, update in soon time,
PS: Anabella is really beautiful
Date: 29 Dec 2010 5:54 PM Title: leaving hatred
this is quite a story a bad Edward a fighting Bella I am hoping that in your next chapter you would have enpowered Bella more by letting her learn self defense and how to protect herself and her children man her kid is bad and thats the one edwrd does not like ? does he take more to the ones that resemble kids him thats sick , kids can't help who they look like are we going to have a chance to see all the times Edward gets Bella pregnant when she is away from him?
yes you will. it will be in the out takes because there is alot of stuff i took out because if i would have kept going with all that stuff we wouldn't even be on bella being out of the house yet.
thnx for the review!
Date: 14 Dec 2010 1:03 PM Title: abandon and sacrifice
can you please show some kindness of Edward, it really breaks my heart that he keeps on beating bella. are you sadist or something? lol.. please for goodness sake and besides Christmas is fast approaching and maybe for the love of God.. thanks anyways