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Reviewer: cedward2417 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2011 3:10 AM Title: Complications

Well, how am I suppose to gripe to you when you've been pregnant and so sick...jeez ;).  Nice cliffy...two things hanging over us...Edward's condition and what the hell is happening in the hotel room?  Really hope you and your family are feeling better and all stay well...so we get the next chapter quick.  Ya, I am heartless



Author's Response:

haha!!  my family and i are all feeling much better.  thank you. :)  and all will be answered in the next couple chapters.  thanks so much for reading and reviewing!! ;)

Reviewer: Library Lolita Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2011 11:47 PM Title: Complications

Trusting you right now with the HEA...



Author's Response:

your trust is safe with me ::wink::  thanks for reading and reviewing!! ;)

Reviewer: rkelekoma Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2011 2:27 AM Title: Complications

bad author, bad! no cliffies.

Good story cant wait for next chapter.  Thanks.



Author's Response:

LOL!  i have a thing for cliffies.  it's an addiction, really.  glad you like the story, though.  thanks so much for reading and reviewing!! ;)

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2011 10:12 PM Title: Complications

Oh no....I hope Edward is okay and that the seizure hasn't impaired his memory, etc. in anyway.

Remind me again, who is Riley and what is his significance?  If it's too much, just tell me the chapter and I'll reread.

Good one.  Hope you feel better.  Looking forward to the next update.



Author's Response:

more on edward in the next couple of chapters.  riley posed as a high school student, tried unsuccessfully to kidnap bella at homecoming, and just happens to be james' son.  hope that helps!  and yes, i am feeling much better.  :)  thanks for reading and reviewing!! ;)

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jan 2011 2:48 AM Title: Broken

Great one! I'm hoping Edward comes through...he has to!
As for mystery POV? Either James or one of his cohorts....grrrrrrr!

Author's Response:

you're on the right track on both counts.  edward will make it through and the ?POV will be revealed soon.  thanks so much for reading and reviewing!! ;)

Reviewer: cedward2417 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2011 7:39 PM Title: Broken

I assume the ?POV is someone working with James, cuz he/she kept syaing "he" and I think the "he" is James.  I think he was looking for information on where to find Bella and Em.  I assume they are going to try and get to them in the hospital somehow.  Scary stuff happening...looking forward to an update.



Author's Response:

you would assume correctly.  and yes, some scary stuff is about to happen.  thanks so much for reading and reviewing!! ;)

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jan 2011 9:28 AM Title: Broken

I am going to guess it is one of James's merry fucked up men!!!

Cant wait for the next update.

Fiorella



Author's Response:

your guess would be right on track!  next update should be within the next couple of weeks.  thanks so much for reading and reviewing!! ;)

Reviewer: pennycocktail Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jan 2011 5:14 AM Title: Broken

Great cliffie... and sure hope E comes thru the surgery ok.

Thanks for writing



Author's Response:

glad you liked the chapter!  and edward will make it.  i just can't kill him off.  and thank YOU for reading and reviewing!! ;)

Reviewer: Rayday Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jan 2011 4:33 AM Title: Broken

Who is in the house? Are there really car lights coming towards the house? If so who could it be? Are they in danger? Is James going to make a move while they are out of town for Edward's surgery?

 



Author's Response:

the mystery house guest will be revealed soon.  yes, there really were car lights coming toward the house, but no i won't say who they belonged to.  and as for your last question... that's a very good thought.  :)  sorry i couldn't be more direct. plot twists, you know.  thanks so much for reading and reviewing!! ;)

Reviewer: ldyidori Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jan 2011 6:18 PM Title: Broken

hmmm can't be james since he refered to another so i am going to guess laurant 

awesome chappy



Author's Response:

you're on the right track with it being someone connected to james, but i won't say who just yet.  gald you liked the chapter.  thanks so much for reading and reviewing!! ;)

Reviewer: kfatwood Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jan 2011 6:30 AM Title: Broken

Well first off, great chapter. Secondly, I hope the kiddies are feeling better, the flu is nasty stuff and I've been dealing with it here with my kids, so I definitely feel you.  Third, AAAAAHHHHHHH, what the hell was that cliffy for? Do we not have enough stress dealing with Edward's illness and surgery and James lurking out there someplace? Oh wait, was that James in the house? Marcus, the dirty cop, Felix, the SOB's son? Come on you gotta give me something here.

Can't wait for the next update (any idea when that might be?)



Author's Response:

glad you liked the chapter.  the kids are better, however, i am not (more on that in my A/N next chapter).  and the cliffie was merely meant to remind you that james is still out there.  the ?POV will be revealed soon.  and i wish i could give you a definite on the chapter update, but i've spent some time in the hospital recently and i haven't had time to write.  hopefully in the next 10 days or so.  thanks for staying with me and being patient with me.  i truly appreciate it!  and as always, thanks for the review!!! ;)

Reviewer: TopazRuby Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: 15 Jan 2011 6:21 AM Title: Traitor

Overreaction much? 



Author's Response:

yes, she did overreact, but it was b/c she has so much stress right now.  she's not thinking clearly, plus she's a teenage girl and her hormones make her super moody.  she's also super overwhelmed and is not sure how to act.  hope you stay with the story.  bella makes major progress and grows throughout.  thanks for the review!  ;)

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Dec 2010 10:08 PM Title: Emotions

Well I think you have asked all the questions I would like answered - like right now :)

Yep another chapter would be great for NY's day!!!!! haha

Thanks for the update - Edward will survive - he has too... really he does!

Bella & Emmett will cope with all that's happening & get through the pain - they have too....

The Doc's back in their lives - this is a good thing!

James - well... he's lurking in the shadows - that's for sure!!!

Just don't know when he'll pop out & scare us...

Great chapter by the way.

Sorry to hear about a family death & your headaches...  as like Bella & Emmett.... take your time to get through & process everything!

Happy New Year to you as well... hope you have had a great Christmas too.

T2M x



Author's Response:

lol!  i wish i could answer all those questions for you right now, but that would ruin all the suspense.  i know you understand though.  just food for thought at the moment.  and i wish i could update once or twice a week, but my life just doesn't allow that.  damn RL.  always getting in the way.  in regards to your other comments... edward will survive, bella and emmett have made amazing progress and have learned some much needed coping mechanisms along the way, and james... let's just say we'll get some info on him next chapter.  thanks for the the regrets.  the headaches come and go and the family member will be missed, but is in a better place now.  happy new year to you, too and i'm still recovering from the haul the kids got at christmas.  i see some ma-hoo-sive donations to the local crisis nursery in my future.  thanks so much for the awesome review!!!  ;)

Reviewer: pennycocktail Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Dec 2010 8:43 PM Title: Emotions

Looking forward to James arriving back on the scene.  Is anything going to happen with B and Jacob?  Although I would never want those two to hook up, I wondered if Jacob would become interested in B.

Thanks for writing



Author's Response:

james will be back soon.  and nothing will happend with bella and jake. fbi agents will never step out of line unless they want their balls ripped off, so he'll never go for bella.  he's purely there as a protector... and eye candy for the girls.  thanks so much for the review!! ;)

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2010 11:48 AM Title: Emotions

As always more questions not enough answers.  

It would be nice to see James behind bars before Edward goes though surgery, the Cullens have enough on their plate with Edwards tumour returning.

I seriously have had enough of James, I would like to see someone chainsaw him and leave little bits and pieces of him around Seattle.  Then that would be the end of him.  As for his partners, strung up by the balls and left never to produce again.

That is what I would like to see in the next chapter.



Author's Response:

yeah, i seem to be good about leaving you hanging with more questions than answers.  i completely agree with you about james.  he deserves the absolute worst.  not sure if we'll see an end to james any time soon, but more on him next chapter.  thank you so much for reading and reviewing!!  ;)

Reviewer: bb120 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Dec 2010 2:36 PM Title: Emotions

i hope that he doesn't have another seizure! ... i imagine them saying i love you right before he enters surgery!! ohhh... jamees! i almost forgot about hiim! :o .. what the hell he is up to?



Author's Response:

seizures are a possibility as long as the tumor remains intact.  and the ILYs are coming soon.  james is out there.  more on him next chapter.  thanks for the review!! ;)

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Dec 2010 5:41 AM Title: Emotions

Yep, all those questions & more!! However, trust you to answer them in your own time. Only thing.... don't let Edward die. Let them say the ILY's, successful surgery & catch James!
Great job!

Author's Response:

thanks for trusting, and yes, they will be answered.  edward won't be dying... it's hard enough to write that he's sick.  i'd never be able to kill him off.  thanks for the review!! ;)

Reviewer: grilzhea Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Dec 2010 2:01 AM Title: Emotions

I'm so glad that they are together again...I hope Edward is going to be ok

Author's Response:

lots in store for this crew!  thanks for the review!! ;)

Reviewer: Library Lolita Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Dec 2010 1:10 AM Title: Emotions

I love this story. I hope RL continues to improve and it's great to see you back!!

Author's Response:

i'm so glad you're enjoying it!!  RL is slowly returning to a normal hectic pace, but i will survive!!  lol!  anyway, thanks for the review!!  ;)

Reviewer: twiheart Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Dec 2010 8:27 AM Title: Agent J

shoot,  I was wrong....duh,  what was  thinking,  of course it was Jake,   Of course Edward needs some competition.  Silly me!

Robin



Author's Response:

most of the readers thought it would be jasper, too.  but i had to make jake a protector, like he is in the book.  and there's nothing like a little eye candy for the girls.  thanks again for reading and reviewing!! ;)

Reviewer: twiheart Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Dec 2010 8:15 AM Title: Victims

i know the story is finished and all so you arr probably not looking at reviews anymore, but I just started it today and I love itl  I am thinking this "bodygaurd" will be the one and only Jasper that Alice has been so patiently waiting for....hmmm, can't wait to keep reading:)

Thanks

Robin



Author's Response:

oh, i'm definitely not finished with this story, and i will always respond to reviews, even when i am finished.  i'm really glad you're enjoying it and i hope you continue with me on this crazy ride.  i haven't been able to update b/c of RL lately, but my next chapter should be up this week.  so you have time to catch up before i post again!  thanks so much for reading and reviewing!  i always apprepreciate your thoughts!!  ;)

Reviewer: Rayday Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2010 8:41 PM Title: Regret

So absolutely cool!!! Well, in regards to who his doctors are, not the tumor. Definitely not the tumor. I can't wait to find out what happens next.

Author's Response:

lol!  love the rambling!  yes, it is cool that the doctors are connected to everyone.  thanks so much for reading and reviewing!! ;)

Reviewer: pennycocktail Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2010 3:31 AM Title: Regret

I love this fic, really love your version of Edward.  Great story, love all the sh*t with James... am looking forward to the HEA.

Thanks for writing.



Author's Response:

wow!!!  yay!  i'm so glad you're enjoying my story.  and thank you for reading and reviewing!!!  ;)

Reviewer: sarahlynn81 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2010 12:11 AM Title: Regret

OMG I love this story!!! I just found it yesterday and I have not been able to stop reading it!! Can't wait for more!!!! :)



Author's Response:

wow!!  i'm so glad you're enjoying it so much!  that makes me very happy.  i hope to update soon.  thanks so much for reading and reviewing!! ;)

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Dec 2010 3:00 AM Title: Regret

Actually with the A/N, I really could care less if James never made an appearance again, heheh.

I am glad that you finished this chapter off, I actully like how you flipped it and gave ua Edwards POV.

Author's Response:

i think some readers are thinking he's lurking somewhere... but he'll get what he deserves, don't worry.  i'm glad you liked the EPOV.  i think it brings some of his feelings and emotions to the forefront about all of this craziness.  thanks for the review, sweets!! ;)

Reviewer: cedward2417 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Dec 2010 12:42 AM Title: Regret

I am soooo loving this story!!! I couldn't wait to get through all the chapters and caught up.  Now I'm sad cause I have to wait for updates. 



Author's Response:

i'm so glad you're enjoying it and can't wait for more!!  that's a huge compliment!  thank you so much for reading and reviewing!!  i hope to update soon!  ;)

Reviewer: Sunshine Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2010 11:36 PM Title: Regret

Didn't see them coming.  I'm so glad he is now finally opening up to her. 



Author's Response:

it seems like everything's pretty much out in the open now, at least between bella and edward.  and there will be some drama up next chapter with the return of the surgeons!!  thanks so much for reading and reviewing!! ;)

Reviewer: bb120 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2010 11:02 PM Title: Regret

they're irina and tanya?!!! :o

never thought that they would be neurosurgeons!

 

GOD! what will happen next! CAN'T WAIT!!!



Author's Response:

yes!!!  we'll find out more drama and info next chapter!!  thanks for reading and reviewing!  ;)

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2010 5:17 PM Title: Regret

Wow!!  Yes, I know who the docs are....just can't wait to see how they are all connected!  Different sides of the country, Edward's Ped. Neuro's, Bella and Emmett's saviors....how did it happen?

Great story...it's gotta be a tough road so I'll make sure I've got my safety harness on!

Great job on the explanations...looking forward to the next update!!



Author's Response:

next chapter will delve into how everyone is connected.  and i love the idea of a safety harness!!  i should recommend that next chapter!  glad you're enjoying the story.  thanks so much for reading and reviewing!! ;)

Reviewer: grilzhea Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2010 12:51 PM Title: Regret

Wow, he really has had a hard time...I'm glad your not going to bee killing him off

Author's Response:

nope, no killing of edward in this story, but he definitely has had a hard time.  he's not in for the best ride, either, but hang in there.  thanks so much for reading and reviewing!!  ;)

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2010 12:33 PM Title: Regret

Awesome chapter - now we know what we are dealing with... brilliant :(

The Doc's are back... surely they remember them?

Can't wait for more... thanks for the update!

T2M x



Author's Response:

we do know what's going on.  next chapter will go over more of the details of what's to be expected... and lots of drama!  thanks for reading and reviewing!! ;)

Reviewer: kfatwood Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2010 7:34 AM Title: Regret

great chapter. cant wait for more.



Author's Response:

thanks, sweets!  glad you liked it!  thanks for reading and reviewing!! ;)

Reviewer: EvernightressIris Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2010 4:14 AM Title: Confession

wow... poor edward! he'll live rightttttttttttttt???????????????????????? please hope he'll live



Author's Response:

i will let you know that i'm all about the HEA, but there will be some rough times ahead.  don't worry too much.  i hope you can stay with me.  and thank you so much for reading and reviewing!! ;)

Reviewer: LizE7 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Nov 2010 11:40 PM Title: Confession

I just started reading your story, it's great. :)

Looking forward to more.



Author's Response:

i'm so glad you're enjoying it!!  thank you for taking a chance on my fic!!  and thank you so much for reading and reviewing!! ;)

Reviewer: grilzhea Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Nov 2010 6:32 PM Title: Confession

I didn't guess the brain tumor, but I figured out the epilepsy. My mother in law had it. She actually went into status epileticus. It actually took a week of her being sedated for her to stop. Very scary stuff.

Author's Response:

seizures are very scary.  i agree.  even in a controlled situation like a hospital they can be frightening.  i hope your mother is doing well.  thanks so much for reading and reviewing!! ;)

Reviewer: clanmoran Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Nov 2010 12:34 AM Title: Confession

Meghan---you are doing an EXCELLENT job on this story.  I was once (LONG AGO, in a far away land, i.e. before kids--who are now in thier mid twenties) a nurse at Children's Memorial Hosp in Chicago.  You are doing a great job explain and portraying Edward's problem so well!!!

Bella & Emmett's earlier life was making me actually feel like I was there---so great job discribing that also!!  I have read all the chapters up to now in the last 24 hrs, so I waited to review, but again I think you are doing a GREAT job, this is the type of stories I enjoy, a little bit of fluff and some plot too (especially mystery and suspense).  You have brought out and made us actually FEEL what everyone is going through--thanks for doing a great job!!!



Author's Response:

holy crow!!  i love your review!!  i'm so glad you're enjoying my story, and i'm thrilled to know that the characters are being portrayed well.  it's even better that another medical professional thinks so highly of my descriptions.  thank you so very much for reading and reviewing!!  ;)

Reviewer: ldyidori Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2010 3:05 PM Title: Confession

Ahhhh ok yeah fortunately my dad never had seizures but his csncer started elsewhere before moving to his brain.  I hope Bella takes it better and can be there for him. the chappy was good can't wait to see what happens with bella and edward.



Author's Response:

edward's tumor is a recurrence, not a metastisis from another site, and we'll find out more about that in the next chapter.  thanks so much for reading and reviewing!! ;)

Reviewer: ecsc Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2010 2:44 PM Title: Confession

Oh no!!! Those are sometimes inoperable and judging by the time that had pass without them removing it, it doesn't look good. I really hope this is not the case and they were waiting for a certain age or somethng. I'm really intrigued with what the Drs' who found Emmett and Bella role is with Edward story.



Author's Response:

you are correct.  we will find out more about his diagnosis and prognosis next chapter.  thanks for reading and reviewing!! ;)

Reviewer: exploringplanetearth Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2010 6:43 AM Title: Confession

Great chapter.  You did an awesome job.  Seizers are scary to witness.  Before my sister has a seizer she says she can smell bananas.  Like you said, it differnt for differant people.



Author's Response:

seizures are scary to witness, i agree.  and yes, everyone is different.  thanks so much for the review!!  more on edward next chapter.  ;)

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2010 5:22 AM Title: Confession

I like how you started telling us what was the problem with Edward, but what I dont like is how you cut the story off.  I would have prefered to hear it all at once.

Ohh well.

Thank you for a wonderful chapter apart from that.

Fiorella



Author's Response:

i would have liked to write it all, too, but it would have taken twice as long to update and i'm not sure bella would have been able to handle it all at once.  thanks for reading and reviewing, and for being honest!!  ;)

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2010 4:26 AM Title: Confession

Wow....I thought it was epileptic seizure but it's a brain tumor? I'm guessing it's non operable or they'd have done something during the past 8 years. Is it shrinking?
Hey...they're in Seattle....call Seattle Grace & get Dr. McDreamy to operate! ;)
Thanks & looking forward to the next update.
Fingers crossed for Edward!

Author's Response:

yeah, brain tumor, but we'll find out why it's back soon.  and LOL about dr. mcdreamy!  thanks so much for reading and reviewing!!  ;)

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2010 4:04 AM Title: Confession

Oh poor Edward - now he's told Bella... I'm assuming they'll all feel better in a sense of the word about knowing what's wrong!

I just hope he can get better sooner rather than later (operation then recovery.... really quickly) so they can get back to "normal" 

Well, here's hoping anyway :)

Thanks for the quick update too...

T2M x



Author's Response:

well, everything is out in the open now, so hopefully some more healing can begin.  more on his prognosis soon.  thanks so much for reading and reviewing!!  ;)

Reviewer: hitc4manynewmoons Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2010 2:43 AM Title: Confession

OK I love your story but if Edward dies Im gonna be ticked off! HAHA! No seriously... dont kill him off.



Author's Response:

lol... i've been getting a lot of that.  i think i'm gonna have to do some damage control with the next chapter.  i will tell you that i'm all for the HEA, so don't get too worried.  we will have more on edward very soon.  thanks so much for reading and reviewing!! ;)

Reviewer: kfatwood Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2010 2:15 AM Title: Confession

So Edward has a brain tumor? Is this your idea of a HEA? I'm sitting at my computer in tears right now.  What are they gonna do for him? Is it treatable? How long is he gonna be in the hospital? How is Bella gonna take this? So many questions so few answers.  Oh well, till next time.



Author's Response:

unfortunately, he does have a brain tumor, but more on the prognosis soon.  as always, HEA is in the cards, just some rough times ahead.  i hope to update soon, and i hope you can stick with me.  just keep thinking "HEA, HEA, HEA."  thanks for reading and reviewing!  i love all of your support!!  ;)

Reviewer: lambykins Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2010 12:53 AM Title: Confession

ugh I kinda figured it was a brain tumor with the headaches and fainting. cant wait for the next chap



Author's Response:

yep, unfortunately it came back.  more on that next chapter.  thanks for reading and reviewing!! ;)

Reviewer: Thaigher Lillie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2010 12:45 AM Title: Confession

isn't that about a bitch. *head desk* i was close. so i'm proud lmao. i loved this chapter. i can't possibly wait for more. How are you and the nugget doing? can't wait for the next update. I hope it's soo i love this story! by the way i got a new story up check it out if you have time. It's another dakward. *rollseyes* can't get enough of him lmao



Author's Response:

you were very close!  good guesses on your part, and i'm glad you liked it.  me and the nugget are doing well, just tired.  good luck with your new story!  next update i hope to have up in the next 1-2 weeks.  thanks for the review!! ;)

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2010 3:14 AM Title: Incidents

What's wrong with Edward? Is he epileptic? How does he know Tanya & Irina?
Great story!! Lots of questions so anything you want to share would be great!

Author's Response:

we will find out more about edward next chapter.  i'm so glad you're enjoying my story, but i can't give away to many answers or it will spoil it for you!  thanks so much for reading and reviewing!!  ;)

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2010 2:20 AM Title: Escaped

I knew Aro stunk! Now to just figure how much! Why does James want to kill Bella & Emmett? We know Charlie had something on James that's why James murdered him & Renee. The plot sure is thickening....

Author's Response:

the plot is totally thickening!  aro's nastiness goes way deep.  and james is still after bella and emmett b/c he doesn't want to be charged for all the killings, and he knows they could pick him out of a line up and he'd go down.  thanks for the review!! ;)

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2010 1:15 AM Title: Help

Just wanted to drop in & let you know I'm enjoying this. I'm almost afraid to know what happened to Bella. I witness your parents sawed in half & then forced to move their pieces is horrific as it is. To contemplate James molesting ans/or raping a 12 year old is incomprehensible.

Author's Response:

i'm so glad you're liking the story!!  bella and emmett have definitely been through so much, but james never raped bella... you will find out more in the coming chapters.  thank you so much for reading and reviewing!! ;)

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2010 8:26 PM Title: Victims

Got this rec by Peoplelikeus & it's wonderful! I think Aro is in cahoots with James in some way & the FBI bodyguard is Jasper.
Off to read the next chapter & see if I'm right or way off base!

Author's Response:

aww, thank you for taking a chance on my story!  you have some good theories about my fic.  i'm glad you're enjoying it, and thank you so much for reading and reviewing!! ;)

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2010 2:14 AM Title: Incidents

Go Edward & Bella - get hot & steamy almost every night.... what a wonderful dream for me!!!! haha :)

Edward - blacking out?? NOOOO!!!! Can't lose Edward - can't they take a break from all these dramas yet?? 

Nice citrusy lemons are required for these two! I'm assuming they haven't "done it" yet? Only mucked around as such?

 

Sure hope our darling Eddie is ok??

Now I'm up to date - bugger... now more to read :(

Can't wait for more....

T2M x

 



Author's Response:

lol!  no sexy times for these two just yet.  they're taking it a little slow, but i think it's better that way.  and edward has some 'splaining to do!!  we'll get to that next chapter.  thanks so much for reading and reviewing!!  your teaser is in the mail!  ;)

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2010 2:11 AM Title: Information

WOW - Aro was connected to JAmes all along!! 

DIdn't see that one coming - thought he might have something to do with him but not that deep in!!!

So happy Bella finally opened up to Edward - now they can move forward... well, once Edward tells "us" what's wrong with him too :)

Just hope it's not too bad!

Carlisle & Esme are pretty special people to take on Bella & Emmett - that's for sure!

T2M x



Author's Response:

yep, aro is a dirty, dirty cop.  bella opening up to edward is a huge step in her recovery.  and we'll find out more about edward soon.  thanks so much for the review!! ;)

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2010 2:07 AM Title: Waiting

Poor Rose... hope she is ok!?!

Glad Emmett was there to help her - does trouble always follow these two?

Seems like it!

Poor darlings - will they survive all these dramas & get out at the other end ok!?!

I sure hope so... 

 

What's going on with Creepy Freaky Aro? Something strange there.....

T2M x



Author's Response:

yep, emmett to save the day.  i always wished he had the chance to avenge rose in the actual books, so i did it here.  and yes... trouble does always follow these two.  you are right to think aro is creepy.  thanks for reading and reviewing!! ;)

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2010 2:05 AM Title: Shocked

Geez can't review!!!!

Have to keep on reading....

Sorry :(

T2M x



Author's Response:

hahaha!!  that's okay.  glad you're enjoying it!!  thanks for the review!! ;)

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Nov 2010 11:30 AM Title: Unbelievable

Ok - what's wrong with Edward? I'm worried now...

Bella moving on well with therpy... great!

Edward & Bella - glad they finally did something together - WOW!!!!

T2M x



Author's Response:

we'll find out about edward soon... and she is moving on very nicely with her therapy.  thanks for the review!! ;)

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Nov 2010 11:28 AM Title: Escaped

Never trusted Aro - was really suss about him in the beginning....

Is he in on this as well?

Riley.... never trusted him either!!

Soe really fishy characters coming through now...

T2M x



Author's Response:

aro is shady.  you'll find out just how shady in future chapters.  riley's sneaky, too.  lots of new info being discovered.  thanks again for reading and reviewing!! ;)

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Nov 2010 11:27 AM Title: Unexpected

Aww their getting closer - AWESOME!!!

T2M x



Author's Response:

yeah, it took them awhile, but i think they're getting it! thanks for reading and reviewing!!  ;)

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Nov 2010 6:06 AM Title: Hiding

This is getting SOOO good :)

Have to get onto the next chapter now!!

T2M x



Author's Response:

aww, thank you so much!!  i'm glad you're enjoying it!!  ;)

Reviewer: Thaigher Lillie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2010 12:52 PM Title: Incidents

Ha! case study...

severe headaches, sensitivity to light, sporatic movement... i'm leaning towards.....epilepsy. buttttttt, I know you won't make it that easy.

so.......

Obviously this is neurological so what the fuck is it? lmao.

basilar artery migraine? but then that throws out the foaming at the mouth.

and the fact edward doesn't want anyone to know, or worry about him. So hm... I'll keep guessing to keep you laughing lol is it viral? fuck you aren't going to tell me lmao.

encephalitis ? severe headaches, neck stiffness, sensitivity to light, loss of conciousness. seizures? but no foaming at the mouth.... wrong. I feel like i'm going to fail med-school lmao!!! i have beaucoup guesses. lmao but i know all those sons of bitches are wrong lmao.  plus i have classes within the hour so i'm  just gonna say fuck it lmao!!!!!!!!!!!! gtg

 

 

 

 



Author's Response:

nope, not that easy.  but good guess.  we'll find out more next chapter.  thanks so much for reading and reviewing!! ;)

Reviewer: grilzhea Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2010 10:57 AM Title: Incidents

Wow I just started reading this from the "People Like Us" rec, and couldn't stop reading...great story...I guess Edward has to tell her what's wrong now.....please update soon

Author's Response:

thank you for taking a chance with my story.  i'm glad you're enjoying it!  more on edward next chapter.  thanks so much for reading and reviewing!!  ;)

Reviewer: ldyidori Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2010 8:42 AM Title: Incidents

awesome chappy could our dear Edward have epilepsy?



Author's Response:

you're theory is on the right track.  thanks so much for reading and reviewing!! ;)

Reviewer: chmcolli Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2010 4:48 AM Title: Incidents

He's epileptic?



Author's Response:

you're on the right track, but we'll find out more next chapter.  thanks so much for reading and reviewing!!  ;)

Reviewer: ecsc Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2010 3:50 AM Title: Incidents

Oh I suspected epilepsy since he had his talk wth Carlisle after his fainting episode. I could be wrong though. But one thing I do know is that witnessing a love one having a siesure is an experience I would be more than happy never to have to endure. It´s scarry and you feel impotent and insignificant not being able to do anything to help.



Author's Response:

you're on the right track, but we'll find out more next chapter.  and i agree, seizures are very scary to witness.  it's something you will never forget and never want to live through again.  thanks so much for the review!!  ;)

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2010 3:32 AM Title: Incidents

The only thing I am concerned about is if Edward is going to die??????

I think that would actually be cruel to Bella if he did.  She just found him and now he will leave her.  It is kind of sad.

I have a feeling he has either a tumor, something along those lines, the only other thing I can think of is that when he was younger something happened to him and his brain does not function proplerly anymore.

Please have him tell Bella his story soon, the suspence is killing me, he should have done it by now, otherwise he will lose her trust, and you know they have been though enough crap already.

Thanks for the wonderful update.
Fiorella



Author's Response:

i will tell you i'm all for the HEA, so take that as you will.  and we will find out more about edward next chapter. thanks so much for the review, babe!!  ;)

Reviewer: kfatwood Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Nov 2010 9:41 PM Title: Incidents

Please don't kill Edward! Please don't kill Edward! Please don't kill Edward!

My heart cannot take this much longer.  Can't wait for the next installment.



Author's Response:

well, i'll just say that i'm all for the HEA, so hopefully that will keep you sane until next chapter, which should be up by next week, if not sooner.  thanks for the review!! ;)

Reviewer: xlavendermoonx Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Nov 2010 8:41 PM Title: Incidents

I decided to leave you some love over here, hun.

Yikes, what a cliffie! And, omg, I floved the beginning. Edward was hot, but sweet. Great chapter! -Susie



Author's Response:

thanks for the love over here!  glad you liked the citrus, and the cliffie will be better explained next chapter!  thanks again, babe!!  ;)

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Nov 2010 1:52 PM Title: Help

Ok - my guess is Jasper is the shrink?!?! 

Well I'm hoping it to be :)

Or is Jasper their age - as in Alice, Edward, Emmett & Bella?

Getting to the horrible part of the nightmares - that's for sure!

T2M x



Author's Response:

you shall see!!  the nightmares are horrible, i agree.  it's rather difficult to right those parts.  thanks so much for the review!! ;)

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Nov 2010 12:34 AM Title: Triggers

1/ Loved how Edward has that effect on Bella - slicing her hand... way to go Bella!

2/ Carlisle's story - brilliant... very funny!

3/ The kiss - WTF is going on there - why did Bella run like that?

 

Don't worry Edward I'm just as confused....

T2M x



Author's Response:

bella got a little clumsy when edward brushed up against her, but i think i would, too.  carlisle's story was something i actually witnessed.  fun, let me tell ya.  and next chapter explains bella's hasty escape.  thanks again for all your awesome reviews, sweets!! ;)

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Nov 2010 12:32 AM Title: Agent J

HEHEHE - Fucking Mutt.... love it!!!

Jealous already.... what a classic :)

So I was correct with Jacob... now when does Jasper shows his gorgeous head in this story then? Can't wait for that meeting!!!!

 

This is going to be interesting - Jake & Edward....

T2M x



Author's Response:

edward and jake actually won't have much of a rivalry.  jake is too old for bella in this fic, and fbi agents don't step out of line unless they want their testicles ripped off.  anyway,  glad you're enjoying!!  thanks for the review!! ;)

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Nov 2010 12:30 AM Title: Victims

I really don't like this Aro character - he's seems a bit fishy to me!

I put a bet on that the bodyguard is Jacob.... he's the bigger one of the two!

If it's Jasper - he'll be too much into Alice to watch over Bella..... 

That's my thinking anyway :)

T2M x



Author's Response:

aro is fishy.  and good guess about the bodyguard.  most of the other readers thought it would be jasper.  good job!  thanks again for the review!! ;)

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2010 11:57 PM Title: Intruder

OMG - ok so who is this guy then....

Sorry got to get to the next chapter & fast....

T2M x



Author's Response:

ah, yes.  THAT guy.  you shall find out.  enjoy!  thanks for the review!! ;)

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2010 2:30 PM Title: Protector

Can't review - have to get to the next chapter...

Hot stuff by the way - can't wait for citrusy lemons from Bella & Edward :)

T2M x



Author's Response:

well, thanks for stopping to say hi!  lemony goodness is waiting for you!  read on, my dear.  thank you so, so much for all of your reviews!!  i loved them all!!  have fun reading!!  ;)

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2010 1:57 PM Title: Premonitions

Who is watching them & Alice losing her room key - that can't be good .... can it?!?!

Edward seeing Bella's "boobies" - what a crack up!!!!!

T2M x



Author's Response:

someone is watching, yes, but we won't find out for a while.  i just had to make edward say that!  it seemed so appropriate for a teenage boy.  thanks so much for the review!! ;)

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2010 1:27 PM Title: Unstable

I'm so glad Edward is coming to her rescue!!!

She is in need of rescue so badly.... oh & how yummy does this Edward sound!!!!

Flaming HOT!!!

T2M x



Author's Response:

edward is such a great character to right.  he is very yummy, too!  agreed!!!  i just want him to cook for me... mmm, cinnamon rolls.  thanks for the review!! ;)

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2010 12:00 PM Title: Misunderstanding

WOW - how much can she let go in one ranting? I'm glad she feels this way towards Edward... but how will Emmett handle this?

T2M x



Author's Response:

she did really let go, didn't she?  emmett's slightly less emotional than bella, so he handles things better.  thanks again for the review!! ;)

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2010 8:10 AM Title: Traitor

Geez, I'm already crying at her truthful outburst - I only hope Edward can get through to Bella & soon!

T2M x



Author's Response:

bella's outburst was fueled by hormones and by her feeling overwhelmed.  she'll calm down eventually.  thanks so much for the review!! ;)

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2010 7:41 AM Title: Home

What a fantastic chapter! I want to live in this family too - especially with a "brother" like Edward :)

As they say - Never bet against Alice!!!!!

LOL

T2M x



Author's Response:

lol!  that's right.  no betting against alice.  and i'd love to have a family like the cullens, too.  they're awesome!  thanks for the review!! ;)

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2010 6:03 AM Title: Darkness

Great start to this story - little bit of background .... then onto more yummier things!!!

Can't wait to read more....

T2M x



Author's Response:

thank you so much!  sorry i didn't write you back sooner... can't respond while i'm at work.  but thank you so much for reading and reviewing!! ;)

Reviewer: lmb Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2010 2:27 AM Title: Information

I am so glad that Bella is trusting Edward...sigh, now he just has to do the same. 



Author's Response:

yep, bella trusting edward is a huge step in her recovery.  and edward will tell bella his story very soon.  thanks for reading and reviewing!!  ;)

Reviewer: 3kdz4me Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2010 6:51 PM Title: Home

Really like it so far!



Author's Response:

great!  i'm glad you're enjoying it!!  thanks so much for reading and reviewing!!  ;)

Reviewer: ldyidori Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2010 11:06 PM Title: Information

awesome chappy and yeah the cullens rock...and well Aro he would not be himself if he wasn't being a bastard hidden under a polite exterior.



Author's Response:

yes, the cullens do rock!!  and aro will always be a dirty, dirty man in my mind.  thanks so much for reading and reviewing!! ;)

Reviewer: Rayday Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2010 5:18 PM Title: Information

I'm anxious to find out Edward's past so that all these questions about him that have been coming up in your story can be answered. I'm glad that Bella was finally able to tell somebody about everything that happened to her and Emmett. I hope this helps her heal.



Author's Response:

we will find out very shortly all about edward.  bella telling edward her past is huge for her recovery.  it definitely helps her healing process.  thanks so much for reading and reviewing!! ;)

Reviewer: Nara13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2010 3:04 PM Title: Information

The rec in People Like Us is what brought me here and I'm so glad. This is a great story and I eagerly await the next chapter.



Author's Response:

i'm so excited abou the PLU rec!  that was just amazing!  i'm glad you took a chance on my story, and i'm even happier that you're enjoying it!!  thanks so much for reading and reviewing!!  ;)

Reviewer: princessflo Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2010 2:25 PM Title: Information

Awesome chapter!  Can't wait for the next one!



Author's Response:

thank you so much!!  i'm glad you liked it.  and thanks for the review!! ;)

Reviewer: Thaigher Lillie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2010 10:49 AM Title: Information

OH MY  I ABSOLUTELY LOVED THIS CHAPTER I CAN'T WAIT UNTIL YOU UPDATE AGAIN!!



Author's Response:

thank you so much, sweets!!  i'm glad you liked it.  more to come soon.  thanks for the review!! ;)

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2010 10:38 AM Title: Information

OMG I am dying to know what Edward's story is... when will we find out... I cant wait to know... I will be sitting on the edge of my seat till then. 

Loved the chapter, soooooo good and very informative, I really hope that Aro and James goes down in a big way.  You deserved the rec, this story rocks and I am glad I started reading it.

Loved it.

Thank you

Fiorella



Author's Response:

we will find out very, very soon all about our dear edward.  believe me... aro and james deserve to die long, torturing, fiery deaths.  thanks again for the rec, and also for the review!!!  ;)

Reviewer: kfatwood Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2010 1:57 AM Title: Information

I knew it! That bastard. Why has the FBI or someone already gotten Aro and James then. It seems they have more than enough evidence to nail the bastards to the wall.  Have I mentioned lately that I absolutely love this story? And that you're an amazing writer? No, well now you know.  Love it love it LOVE IT. Can't wait for more.



Author's Response:

ah yes.  i knew that question would come up.  they're not going straight for the jugular on aro b/c they want to get info out of him about james's whereabouts.  they're being slow and sneaky.  and thank you so much for loving my story!  it means a lot to me that readers enjoy it.  thanks so much for the review!! ;)

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2010 1:49 PM Title: Waiting

I started reading your story on Sunday night and usually it does not take me long but because I have done some damage to my back I am been sleeping more than normal.

I have to say this is up there with some of the best stories I have ever read.  I just hope that James, Riley and Felix meet the same fate as Royce.  I would really love to see Emmett beat the crap out of him in a major way, to the point where they need dentals to identify him or them all.  I think the only thing that could better this is they all get caught and they get sent to jail and become bitches to a guy named bubba, but the icing on the cake is that he does not use his appendage to do the damage but the rough end of a pineapple.  That I would love to see.

I am also going to tell you that I am pimping out your story this week on People Like Us, I beta for Michele and I am able to put my rec's for the week on their.  Your story is going on their this week with BIG CAPITAL LETTERS, your writing is phenomenal and the story is original and I love it and you deserve more readers.

Please let me know if you are not happy with this, Michele post on friday night South African time. 

Love it.

Fiorella



Author's Response:

aww, well thank you so much for taking the time to read my story!  i hope that your back is feeling better soon.  i am extremely humbled that you like my story so much!  thank you for your kind words.  i would LOVE to be rec'd on PLU!  that is a huge honor!  that has just absolutely made my day!  i'm smiling so big right now.  thank you so much for giving this story a chance and for the major pimpage!!  ;)

Reviewer: kfatwood Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2010 12:09 AM Title: Waiting

Ok! Awesome chapter.  Altho u still didn't tell us what was up with Aro!  Rose has been in the hospital for weeks now and I'm sure Carlise has been home since then for the conversation.  PLEASE DON"T KEEP US IN SUSPENSE FOR LONG!  Im dying here.



Author's Response:

i'm thinking next chapter will do a little back tracking and tell us what's really going on with aro.  i'll try my best to update soon!!  thanks so much for reading and reviewing!!! ;)

Reviewer: Thaigher Lillie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2010 7:06 PM Title: Shocked

YIKES!!!! CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE!



Author's Response:

the next chapter is in the works.  i hope to have it up this weekend ::crosses fingers::  thanks for the review, babe!! ;)

Reviewer: bellskindagirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2010 4:14 AM Title: Shocked

you can't leave me here omgosh rose? plz she has to be all right.



Author's Response:

next chapter is in the works.  hang in there.  next chapter will let us know what happened to rose and if she'll pull through.  thanks for the review!! ;)

Reviewer: kfatwood Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2010 6:11 PM Title: Shocked

AAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHH (screaming in frustration) Thank you for the update...can't wait for more...keep up the good work.



Author's Response:

i know how you feel. nothing ever seems to go smoothly for these kids.  thanks so much for hanging in there, and thanks for the review!!!!  ;)

Reviewer: bellskindagirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2010 12:23 PM Title: Unbelievable

hey i really am liking this one it's great can't wait to meet rose! i was just wondering seince i'm new to your story how often do u update i ask cuz ill check a week from now and they'll be like four new chapters and me having no clue that the authers updated so if i have a tentitaive schdule it would be cool if you don't have one thats cool too I;ll just keep checking!!!!!



Author's Response:

i can't wait to meet rose either!!!  i think she gets a bad rep in most stories, but i plan to make her likeable.  my RL is pretty hectic right now, but i try to update every 1 to 2 weeks, give or take a few days.  but you can get an email sent to you immediately when i update by putting my story or me in your favorite list.  at the end of any of the chapters there is a drop down box that allows you to click and add me to your favorite's list.  this automatically puts you in the server and will send you an email alert whenever i post.  that way you don't have to keep checking the site constantly.  you can do that with any stories you read.  hope this helps!!  thanks so much for all the reviews!!!  ;)

Reviewer: bellskindagirl Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2010 4:28 AM Title: Escaped

oh no jake? are you ok.



Author's Response:

jake's a strong guy... i'm sure he'll pull through.  thanks for the review!!! ;)

Reviewer: bellskindagirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2010 4:10 AM Title: Unexpected

i Knew that riley kid was a creeper. i wonder if he's working with james? btw this i GOOD!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

riley is definitely a creep.  i'm so glad you like my story.  i never get tired of hearing that!  thanks for reading and reviewing!! ;)

Reviewer: bellskindagirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Sep 2010 4:58 AM Title: Triggers

yeay Jazz is comin



Author's Response:

yep, alice will finally get her man!  thanks for all the reviews!!!  ;)

Reviewer: bellskindagirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Sep 2010 3:12 AM Title: Agent J

awww jake i was expecting Jasper darn!



Author's Response:

most of the readers thought the same thing.  but i won't leave alice hanging!!!  thanks for reading and reviewing!!! ;)

Reviewer: bellskindagirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Sep 2010 12:22 AM Title: Premonitions

so mature!



Author's Response:

edward's a teenage boy... i had to make him think about boobies.  thanks for the review!! ;)

Reviewer: TwiAggie94 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Sep 2010 2:48 AM Title: Home

I'm loving your story. Reading on the phone so reviews will be every few chapters and not too long.

Really like the inner monolog for both e&b. Alice is a trip. I guess you have kept her abilities from the book. I just want to give these two a hug. Off to read more. Thansk formsharing the story. Meg

Author's Response:

wow!  thanks so much.  i'm glad you're enjoying it!  have fun reading and review when you're able!!  thanks!! ;)

Reviewer: team rob Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Sep 2010 12:53 AM Title: Escaped

aro is somehow involved



Author's Response:

i believe you are on the right track.  thanks so much for reading and reviewing!! ;)

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