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Reviewer: kitkatr Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2010 6:43 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Broken

Wow- Alice! Hard to believe that she would leave Jasper...maybe she loves Bella like a sister?

Reviewer: kitkatr Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2010 6:42 PM Title: Chapter 1

Still in the dark! But loving the story!

Reviewer: kitkatr Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2010 6:40 PM Title: Prologue

Is this Alice? Jasper? Very interesting!

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2010 2:40 PM Title: Chapter 3

I can't wait to see what the family is going to say.  Great job...thanks!!!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2010 1:41 PM Title: Chapter 3

alice and charlie are so cute

Reviewer: HerAmberEyes Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2010 1:51 AM Title: Chapter 2 - Broken

write more please haha

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2010 5:02 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Broken

I am all over the place with this one, but I am going with my first thought and say Alice.  I can't wait to find out!  I am just worried if it is not Alice and it is Jasper how would Alice feel.  Ok, I will stop ranting!  Great job...thanks so much!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2010 4:55 PM Title: Chapter 1

Just more confused.  Now I am wondering...Emmett???

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2010 4:51 PM Title: Prologue

Wow...very interesting.  For some reason, I think it could be Japser or for some reason Alice.  Sorry if I am way off here.  I can't wait to get caught up!  Great job...thanks!!

Reviewer: sweetmel21 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2010 12:34 PM Title: Chapter 1

I'm still not sure who is narrarating.



Author's Response:

Hia sweets,

 

Updating today, hopefully it helps :-) Thanks for taking the time to r & r.

xx

Reviewer: fall up Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2010 1:14 PM Title: Prologue

engaging chapter

narrator guess-emmett



Author's Response:

Uploading chap 3 today - hope it clears it all up. Thanks for taking the time to r & r. Hope u enjoy the rest.

 

xx

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