Date: 09 Feb 2011 4:58 AM Title: Blissfully Unaware
I don't know. I think Tristan is better for Bella. PERIOD
Date: 09 Feb 2011 4:51 AM Title: Losing a Piece of me
Honestly, I am glad about Tristan. She deserves someone to love her. Let them love each other if it is just for a time then let that be. EDWARD IS a mess. I am not sure I want him back.. So there.
Date: 09 Feb 2011 3:20 AM Title: Devastating Adversity
aww :( such a hard situation for everyone to be in... can't wait to see the next one :)
Author's Response:
Teaser:
Bella sprawled out on the damp earth of the forest floor, broken and lifeless.
The unborn child in her womb squirming, desperately fighting to live. Her stomach bulging out at an odd angle as the baby wiggled, until it stopped all together.
Victoria’s gleefully, crazy laughter followed by my murderous roar ringing through the forest as I fell in a heap beside Bella’s cold, inanimate body
Date: 09 Feb 2011 2:41 AM Title: Devastating Adversity
hmmm wonder what tristin is going to do now.
Author's Response:
Teaser:
Bella sprawled out on the damp earth of the forest floor, broken and lifeless.
The unborn child in her womb squirming, desperately fighting to live. Her stomach bulging out at an odd angle as the baby wiggled, until it stopped all together.
Victoria’s gleefully, crazy laughter followed by my murderous roar ringing through the forest as I fell in a heap beside Bella’s cold, inanimate body
Date: 09 Feb 2011 2:19 AM Title: Devastating Adversity
Ok, that was such an immature thing for Edward to do. You'd think after 100 years he would have developed some compassion! I hope Tristian isn't planning on walking away.
Author's Response:
:-)
Teaser:
Bella sprawled out on the damp earth of the forest floor, broken and lifeless.
The unborn child in her womb squirming, desperately fighting to live. Her stomach bulging out at an odd angle as the baby wiggled, until it stopped all together.
Victoria’s gleefully, crazy laughter followed by my murderous roar ringing through the forest as I fell in a heap beside Bella’s cold, inanimate body
Date: 09 Feb 2011 2:13 AM Title: Devastating Adversity
Please keep updating I am sooooooo addicted to this story thanks :)
Author's Response:
Aww- ty, doll.
Teaser:
Bella sprawled out on the damp earth of the forest floor, broken and lifeless.
The unborn child in her womb squirming, desperately fighting to live. Her stomach bulging out at an odd angle as the baby wiggled, until it stopped all together.
Victoria’s gleefully, crazy laughter followed by my murderous roar ringing through the forest as I fell in a heap beside Bella’s cold, inanimate body
Date: 06 Feb 2011 12:43 AM Title: Prologue
PLEASE LET IT BE EDWARDS BABY
Author's Response:
Here's a teaser, doll
“Bella?”
My head whipped around and tears sprung to my eyes, “Tristan?”
Tristan slowly came and sat beside me on the bed. I could tell something was bothering him, the pain lacing his eyes was plain to see. “Are you okay?” I whispered.
“Bella, we need to talk.”
Date: 05 Feb 2011 3:03 PM Title: Leap of faith with a hint of trust.
I am soooo intrigued as to who could be the baby's father!!!
Author's Response:
:-)
Teaser:
“Bella?”
My head whipped around and tears sprung to my eyes, “Tristan?”
Tristan slowly came and sat beside me on the bed. I could tell something was bothering him, the pain lacing his eyes was plain to see. “Are you okay?” I whispered.
“Bella, we need to talk.”
Date: 05 Feb 2011 1:39 PM Title: Leap of faith with a hint of trust.
What an endind place. I am such a Tristian fan, I hope it is his. She was with him for three years, I think she owes him a bit more than is giving. He deserves happiness with her. See how much emotion your chapter evoked!
Author's Response:
And I love you to bits for being a Tristan fan, when I was writing his character, I totes fell in love with him, too.
:-)
Teaser:
“Bella?”
My head whipped around and tears sprung to my eyes, “Tristan?”
Tristan slowly came and sat beside me on the bed. I could tell something was bothering him, the pain lacing his eyes was plain to see. “Are you okay?” I whispered.
“Bella, we need to talk.”
Date: 05 Feb 2011 6:23 AM Title: Leap of faith with a hint of trust.
ruh roh.
Author's Response:
:-)
Teaser:
“Bella?”
My head whipped around and tears sprung to my eyes, “Tristan?”
Tristan slowly came and sat beside me on the bed. I could tell something was bothering him, the pain lacing his eyes was plain to see. “Are you okay?” I whispered.
“Bella, we need to talk.”
Date: 05 Feb 2011 6:20 AM Title: It Just Can't Be!
hmmm breaking bones already? Wow
[Report This]Date: 05 Feb 2011 6:08 AM Title: Leap of faith with a hint of trust.
OMFG... thats a shitty cliffie *grumbles*
LOL, you love to toture us, dont you? *giggles*
I hope the baby is Edwards. I really do.
Author's Response:
If I said that, yes, I do, would u still love me??
:-)
Teaser:
“Bella?”
My head whipped around and tears sprung to my eyes, “Tristan?”
Tristan slowly came and sat beside me on the bed. I could tell something was bothering him, the pain lacing his eyes was plain to see. “Are you okay?” I whispered.
“Bella, we need to talk.”
Date: 05 Feb 2011 5:33 AM Title: Leap of faith with a hint of trust.
gah! So how long before we know who's baby it is?? Can't wait to see more!
Author's Response:
Not long at all, dear. There are only 7 more chaps to go- can't hold out on ya much longer :-P
:-)
Teaser:
“Bella?”
My head whipped around and tears sprung to my eyes, “Tristan?”
Tristan slowly came and sat beside me on the bed. I could tell something was bothering him, the pain lacing his eyes was plain to see. “Are you okay?” I whispered.
“Bella, we need to talk.”
Date: 04 Feb 2011 2:59 AM Title: It Just Can't Be!
I hope it is Edward's. Having Tristan's baby would just complicate things even more. I'm glad he had decided to go back.
Author's Response:
:-)
Teaser:
“Bella?”
My head whipped around and tears sprung to my eyes, “Tristan?”
Tristan slowly came and sat beside me on the bed. I could tell something was bothering him, the pain lacing his eyes was plain to see. “Are you okay?” I whispered.
“Bella, we need to talk.”
Date: 03 Feb 2011 10:13 PM Title: It Just Can't Be!
wow! Can't wait to see the next one!!!
Author's Response:
:-)
Teaser:
“Bella?”
My head whipped around and tears sprung to my eyes, “Tristan?”
Tristan slowly came and sat beside me on the bed. I could tell something was bothering him, the pain lacing his eyes was plain to see. “Are you okay?” I whispered.
“Bella, we need to talk.”
[Report This]Date: 03 Feb 2011 2:45 PM Title: It Just Can't Be!
GAH!!!!!!
OMG, Realy?! Yikes, cliffies are NOT my friend *pouts*
Date: 31 Jan 2011 12:14 AM Title: If you love something, run away, right?
poor b. gotta be confused.
Author's Response:
Here's a teaser for you.
I flew through the window and immediately saw Bella’s broken body sprawled out on the floor in a pool of blood. I dropped to her side and pulled her into my arms, carefully looking her over to see where the blood was coming from. I noticed a small piece of her ribcage sticking grotesquely out of her skin and grimaced at the sight. My poor Bella. I quickly checked for a pulse as I rose from the floor with her in my arms ready to take her back to Carlisle.
Pulse –check.
Breathing –check.
Heart beat – check.
WAIT! What was that?
I stopped short and listened intently to the distinct sounds of a rapidly fluttering heart beat. Was someone else in the house? I quickly scanned the near area for any thoughts. Nothing!
Date: 30 Jan 2011 5:49 PM Title: If you love something, run away, right?
well i hope we know what happend to edward ... cant wait till the next chapter
Author's Response:
Of course. I wouldn't keep that from you :-)
Here's a teaser until then....
I flew through the window and immediately saw Bella’s broken body sprawled out on the floor in a pool of blood. I dropped to her side and pulled her into my arms, carefully looking her over to see where the blood was coming from. I noticed a small piece of her ribcage sticking grotesquely out of her skin and grimaced at the sight. My poor Bella. I quickly checked for a pulse as I rose from the floor with her in my arms ready to take her back to Carlisle.
Pulse –check.
Breathing –check.
Heart beat – check.
WAIT! What was that?
I stopped short and listened intently to the distinct sounds of a rapidly fluttering heart beat. Was someone else in the house? I quickly scanned the near area for any thoughts. Nothing!
[Report This]Date: 30 Jan 2011 7:29 AM Title: If you love something, run away, right?
Um... wow.
that was abrupt and cold...
I really cant wait to see what happens next!
Author's Response:
Teaser:
I flew through the window and immediately saw Bella’s broken body sprawled out on the floor in a pool of blood. I dropped to her side and pulled her into my arms, carefully looking her over to see where the blood was coming from. I noticed a small piece of her ribcage sticking grotesquely out of her skin and grimaced at the sight. My poor Bella. I quickly checked for a pulse as I rose from the floor with her in my arms ready to take her back to Carlisle.
Pulse –check.
Breathing –check.
Heart beat – check.
WAIT! What was that?
I stopped short and listened intently to the distinct sounds of a rapidly fluttering heart beat. Was someone else in the house? I quickly scanned the near area for any thoughts. Nothing!
Date: 28 Jan 2011 4:26 AM Title: Home sweet Home
I was not expecting that! Edward has seemed so reluctant even though he has recovered his past. I wonder how bad Bella will feel in the morning, in more ways than one. If Edward realized she was drunk that makes things worse in my book.
Date: 27 Jan 2011 12:53 AM Title: Home sweet Home
hmm but will she regret it in the am
Author's Response:
Exactley...will she....
Teaser:
As I lay there watching Bella’s sleeping form, a huge rush of regret swept over me.
What had I done? Would she hate me for this in the morning?
It didn’t take a genius to know she had been drinking, which likely altered her state of mind and made her make decisions she would likely not make had she been sober.
Would she regret making love to me in the morning? Do I regret making love to her?
No! No, I didn’t.
Suddenly a crippling pain shot through my head. I gasped for unneeded air and clutched my throbbing skull.
My phone began vibrating in my pocket. I ignored it. I fumbled in a half coherent state to slip out from under Bella without waking her and fell into a heap at her bedside.
Date: 26 Jan 2011 11:50 PM Title: Home sweet Home
wow! I am loving this... I think that maybe I started to read it last year because it seems familar but not sure... Can't wait to see more! :)
Author's Response:
Well, I am hoping it proves to be worth reading this tiime around :-)
Here's a teaser for ya, sweets
As I lay there watching Bella’s sleeping form, a huge rush of regret swept over me.
What had I done? Would she hate me for this in the morning?
It didn’t take a genius to know she had been drinking, which likely altered her state of mind and made her make decisions she would likely not make had she been sober.
Would she regret making love to me in the morning? Do I regret making love to her?
No! No, I didn’t.
Suddenly a crippling pain shot through my head. I gasped for unneeded air and clutched my throbbing skull.
My phone began vibrating in my pocket. I ignored it. I fumbled in a half coherent state to slip out from under Bella without waking her and fell into a heap at her bedside.
[Report This]Date: 26 Jan 2011 9:12 AM Title: Home sweet Home
Oh I didnt guess Eddie boy, cause I thought his eyes were a different color now?
Oh well, I love being surprised! Thanks for htat :)
Now, I DEFINITELY want you to continue from right here
*pictures all the naughty things the duo is about to embark upon.
Yee Haw! lol
Author's Response:
If I haven't said it yet, lemme say it now, I adore the shit out of your reviews, ur too f'ing cute :-)
Teaser:
As I lay there watching Bella’s sleeping form, a huge rush of regret swept over me.
What had I done? Would she hate me for this in the morning?
It didn’t take a genius to know she had been drinking, which likely altered her state of mind and made her make decisions she would likely not make had she been sober.
Would she regret making love to me in the morning? Do I regret making love to her?
No! No, I didn’t.
Suddenly a crippling pain shot through my head. I gasped for unneeded air and clutched my throbbing skull.
My phone began vibrating in my pocket. I ignored it. I fumbled in a half coherent state to slip out from under Bella without waking her and fell into a heap at her bedside.
Date: 26 Jan 2011 4:48 AM Title: Home sweet Home
loved it and yes i guessed it was edward since you said carmel eyes. I believe Tristan had blue eyes? But I don't believe you ever explained why???
Author's Response:
Yeah- apparently, I'm a bit of a jerk, forgive me?
I don't know how I missed explaining that, but the gist of it is, Tristan's blood-line, so to speak. He comes from a very old, the oldest, line of vampire's there are, almost a different breed, if u will. Hence the variation of eye color. Nothing too crazy, I'm afraid.
Teaser to make it up to you?
As I lay there watching Bella’s sleeping form, a huge rush of regret swept over me.
What had I done? Would she hate me for this in the morning?
It didn’t take a genius to know she had been drinking, which likely altered her state of mind and made her make decisions she would likely not make had she been sober.
Would she regret making love to me in the morning? Do I regret making love to her?
No! No, I didn’t.
Suddenly a crippling pain shot through my head. I gasped for unneeded air and clutched my throbbing skull.
My phone began vibrating in my pocket. I ignored it. I fumbled in a half coherent state to slip out from under Bella without waking her and fell into a heap at her bedside.
[Report This]Date: 23 Jan 2011 2:20 AM Title: Mnemonic
Oh god, I love Tristan!
But, I love Edward and Bells! C'mon people, its Ed and Bells!
Tristan will find the love of his life, his soul mate. Bella's souls is already spoken for...
Gosh I cant wait to read more! I love this story!
Author's Response:
Thanks, bb.
Teaser fro you....
“Well, apparently someone missed me,” he whispered huskily into my ear, his cool, sweet breath fanning across my face, causing me to drool. I quickly snapped my mouth shut and pulled him impossibly closer, my one leg hitching around his body. I could feel his rather large, prominent erection pressing against my inner thigh. I wiggled against his leg, trying to cause any amount of friction. I was so turned on and desperate for any amount of release from the pressure building in the pit of my stomach. [KG1]
Date: 22 Jan 2011 10:12 PM Title: Mnemonic
I think going back to charlie is a smart thing for her to do
Author's Response:
Teaser:
“Well, apparently someone missed me,” he whispered huskily into my ear, his cool, sweet breath fanning across my face, causing me to drool. I quickly snapped my mouth shut and pulled him impossibly closer, my one leg hitching around his body. I could feel his rather large, prominent erection pressing against my inner thigh. I wiggled against his leg, trying to cause any amount of friction. I was so turned on and desperate for any amount of release from the pressure building in the pit of my stomach. [KG1]
Date: 21 Jan 2011 12:51 AM Title: Prologue
wow you are so great at this! You have me sitting on the very edge! I love it though and thank you for the speedy update! your the greatest! I hope now they both get their memory back and tristen just bows away. hmm lol
[Report This]Date: 20 Jan 2011 10:51 PM Title: Descending into the Darkness
Ok read the whole thing today and can't agree with Bella's action she is deliberately causing others pain. I know it must of hurt to get her memories back but I would of thought she had gotten a stronger back bone after all she survived.
[Report This]Date: 20 Jan 2011 8:16 PM Title: Descending into the Darkness
Wow....
That was intense, wow. Just, wow...
Amazing!!!! I love how this is goin' down!
I am eager to see what happens next!! :)
Date: 20 Jan 2011 6:03 PM Title: Descending into the Darkness
Wow, you got me glued to my chair since the beginning of this story, please update soon
Date: 20 Jan 2011 4:31 PM Title: Descending into the Darkness
So sad.
Date: 20 Jan 2011 3:50 PM Title: Descending into the Darkness
man poor b. she's gotta be so confused.
Date: 19 Jan 2011 6:09 AM Title: The Cracken
i love it and can't wait to find out what happens to edward!
Author's Response:
Chapter 26 teaser:
I didn’t look either way as I darted out into the busy street. I didn’t flinch as the bright lights came at me. I didn’t feel a thing as I barely acknowledged the screeching tires and twisting metal as an oncoming car smashed into my trembling body and sent me flying, landing with a soft thud on the asphalt. My mind shattered on the verge of giving up all together. Darkness swarmed around me, threatening to overtake me. I welcomed it. I yearned for it. I needed it. I needed to drift away into nothingness and get lost in the wonderment of my own mind. I needed to shut down and never look back. Never again to wonder what if. Never again to have to look into Tristan’s heart wrenching eyes as he watched me in horror as my memories of another man filled my mind. Another man’s touches, another man’s kiss, another man’s love. I wasn’t worthy of him. I deserved to die for the pain I would surely cause him. I wanted to die; life hurt too much.
[Report This]Date: 19 Jan 2011 2:21 AM Title: The Cracken
WTH?!?!?!
*sobs uncontrollably*
Im still pullin for E/B! Im rootin for ya, kids!
Tristan, I will find you someone else there dear. Bella is easy to love, yes, but she belongs to Eddie.
nuff said.
I cant wait to see what happens next!
*hugs self and rocks back and forth to calm down*
Author's Response:
Dude, ur just way too cute. Luv ya!
Chapter 26 teaser:
I didn’t look either way as I darted out into the busy street. I didn’t flinch as the bright lights came at me. I didn’t feel a thing as I barely acknowledged the screeching tires and twisting metal as an oncoming car smashed into my trembling body and sent me flying, landing with a soft thud on the asphalt. My mind shattered on the verge of giving up all together. Darkness swarmed around me, threatening to overtake me. I welcomed it. I yearned for it. I needed it. I needed to drift away into nothingness and get lost in the wonderment of my own mind. I needed to shut down and never look back. Never again to wonder what if. Never again to have to look into Tristan’s heart wrenching eyes as he watched me in horror as my memories of another man filled my mind. Another man’s touches, another man’s kiss, another man’s love. I wasn’t worthy of him. I deserved to die for the pain I would surely cause him. I wanted to die; life hurt too much.
Date: 19 Jan 2011 1:59 AM Title: The Cracken
poor kids. they are both so confused.
Author's Response:
Chapter 26 teaser:
I didn’t look either way as I darted out into the busy street. I didn’t flinch as the bright lights came at me. I didn’t feel a thing as I barely acknowledged the screeching tires and twisting metal as an oncoming car smashed into my trembling body and sent me flying, landing with a soft thud on the asphalt. My mind shattered on the verge of giving up all together. Darkness swarmed around me, threatening to overtake me. I welcomed it. I yearned for it. I needed it. I needed to drift away into nothingness and get lost in the wonderment of my own mind. I needed to shut down and never look back. Never again to wonder what if. Never again to have to look into Tristan’s heart wrenching eyes as he watched me in horror as my memories of another man filled my mind. Another man’s touches, another man’s kiss, another man’s love. I wasn’t worthy of him. I deserved to die for the pain I would surely cause him. I wanted to die; life hurt too much.
[Report This]Date: 17 Jan 2011 3:39 PM Title: You cocky bitch!
Oh, if only Tanya's head accidentally rolled into an open fire...
that would have been perfect :)
Ok, enough of the crazy one, lets get to Eddie and Bells!
*waits with anticipation*
Date: 17 Jan 2011 12:53 AM Title: You cocky bitch!
hmmm edddie needs to put her together so he can rip her apart.
Author's Response:
lmfao- good idea...lol
Here ya go, sweets
“Carlisle, are you okay? You look like you’ve seen a ghost.” I looked up at the man I had always considered my son and wondered what this might mean for him. Wondered if there was any way to save him from what might become of him. I lowered my gaze and tried to pull myself together. I could do this. I would find a way to reverse the side effects, and I would spare Edward any further pain.
“I think I found out what the creature that attacked you was,” I hesitated before continuing, my voice wavering slightly, “and it doesn’t look good, Edward, not good at all.”
[Report This]Date: 14 Jan 2011 9:44 PM Title: Chapter 23
Ahhh! Yay! Go Rose!!
Yes, lets tear Tanya apart... PLEASE! Burn her to ash that can blow away with the wind, if the wind will have her!
*spits on the proverbial ashes*
ugh, now I have to clean the carpet in my office....
looking forward to the next chapter!!! yay!
Author's Response:
Enjoy!
I pulled her up from the floor and almost toppled over as she let loose one quick blow with her foot to my shin. I felt the bones shatter and howled in pain. The red took over then; I sprang forward and up and latched onto her hips with my legs. My hands wound in her tangled hair, and with everything in me, I snapped my wrists and ripped off that pretty fucking head of hers. I collapsed to the ground seconds later and swatted the severed head towards the door. I clutched at my shin as pain seared through it. It was already healing, but I thought the healing may have been hurting more than the shattering did.
Date: 14 Jan 2011 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 23
wonder what the skank is smug about. poor irina
Author's Response:
Enjoy!
I pulled her up from the floor and almost toppled over as she let loose one quick blow with her foot to my shin. I felt the bones shatter and howled in pain. The red took over then; I sprang forward and up and latched onto her hips with my legs. My hands wound in her tangled hair, and with everything in me, I snapped my wrists and ripped off that pretty fucking head of hers. I collapsed to the ground seconds later and swatted the severed head towards the door. I clutched at my shin as pain seared through it. It was already healing, but I thought the healing may have been hurting more than the shattering did.
Date: 14 Jan 2011 5:26 PM Title: Perseaus
wow just throw bella out there with him. id think about the singer thing since they hadnt seen each other in a while
Date: 14 Jan 2011 5:06 PM Title: Chapter 23
Are we going to get to read the destruction of Tanya Denali? Please?
Author's Response:
Lol- Enjoy!
I pulled her up from the floor and almost toppled over as she let loose one quick blow with her foot to my shin. I felt the bones shatter and howled in pain. The red took over then; I sprang forward and up and latched onto her hips with my legs. My hands wound in her tangled hair, and with everything in me, I snapped my wrists and ripped off that pretty fucking head of hers. I collapsed to the ground seconds later and swatted the severed head towards the door. I clutched at my shin as pain seared through it. It was already healing, but I thought the healing may have been hurting more than the shattering did.
Date: 14 Jan 2011 2:29 PM Title: Man of Two Minds
poor tristan. gonna get hurt.
Author's Response:
Teaser to tickle your curiosity:
Tanya grabbed Rosalie by the hair, Rosalie screeched, “You fight like a fucking girl.”
“That’s because I am one, you halfwit.” Tanya was looking mighty proud of herself.
Rosalie let out a thunderous roar, one that contorted her whole demeanor and looked so out of place on her flawless features. Carlisle coughed beside me as if to get my attention. I thought briefly he may intervene but was surprised when I read his thoughts.
Date: 12 Jan 2011 8:27 PM Title: Man of Two Minds
wow I want to know what happened between Edward and Bella, do they not remember each other at all, will she find out after it is too late? hmm so many questions lol
Author's Response:
Teaser to tickle ur curiosity?
Before I could speak, a flash of blond whipped by me, and instantly, Rosalie was on Tanya. She screeched and snarled in an animalistic manner. The look on her face was one I knew I would never in my lifetime be able to erase from my memory. Pure unadulterated hatred and fury. She pounced on Tanya with cat-like grace and started clawing at her face. Irina moved to try and help her sister, but Alice blocked her with nothing but a stern look that said ‘back the fuck off’. Surprisingly, Irina made no attempt to get past her. She ducked her head apologetically and dry sobbed as the horror before her unfolded.
[Report This]Date: 12 Jan 2011 5:15 PM Title: Man of Two Minds
Poor Tristan!!! But, its Bella, she is just that lovable!
Besides, even though they seem 2-faced and conniving, there are two single girly vamps....no, wait.
I would never wish either of those two on anyone.
Tanya and Irina are sick, twisted monsters and they need torn apart and burnt.
We could have a triad!!! Bells, Ed, and Trist....
no, that wont work either.
I want E/B, but Tristan is a good guy!
man, this sucks! lol
Author's Response:
Looks like ur nice and confuzzled...I love it!
Teaser to tickle ur curiosity?
Before I could speak, a flash of blond whipped by me, and instantly, Rosalie was on Tanya. She screeched and snarled in an animalistic manner. The look on her face was one I knew I would never in my lifetime be able to erase from my memory. Pure unadulterated hatred and fury. She pounced on Tanya with cat-like grace and started clawing at her face. Irina moved to try and help her sister, but Alice blocked her with nothing but a stern look that said ‘back the fuck off’. Surprisingly, Irina made no attempt to get past her. She ducked her head apologetically and dry sobbed as the horror before her unfolded.
Date: 12 Jan 2011 4:24 PM Title: Prologue
Poor Tristan. But I still want Edward and Bella back together and Tanya burned!
Author's Response:
Teaser to tickle ur curiosity?
Before I could speak, a flash of blond whipped by me, and instantly, Rosalie was on Tanya. She screeched and snarled in an animalistic manner. The look on her face was one I knew I would never in my lifetime be able to erase from my memory. Pure unadulterated hatred and fury. She pounced on Tanya with cat-like grace and started clawing at her face. Irina moved to try and help her sister, but Alice blocked her with nothing but a stern look that said ‘back the fuck off’. Surprisingly, Irina made no attempt to get past her. She ducked her head apologetically and dry sobbed as the horror before her unfolded.
Date: 12 Jan 2011 4:05 AM Title: Perseaus
I just started reading your story tonight and COULD NOT stop! I kept telling myself...one more chapter, one more chapter and then I would stop for the night but I just couldn't! Now I'm caught up and dying for more!
Author's Response:
I am so glad this story enthralled u so.
I hope the rest is equally all- consuming for you.
Teaser to tickle ur curiosity?
Before I could speak, a flash of blond whipped by me, and instantly, Rosalie was on Tanya. She screeched and snarled in an animalistic manner. The look on her face was one I knew I would never in my lifetime be able to erase from my memory. Pure unadulterated hatred and fury. She pounced on Tanya with cat-like grace and started clawing at her face. Irina moved to try and help her sister, but Alice blocked her with nothing but a stern look that said ‘back the fuck off’. Surprisingly, Irina made no attempt to get past her. She ducked her head apologetically and dry sobbed as the horror before her unfolded.
Date: 11 Jan 2011 3:05 PM Title: Perseaus
Wow, what a powerful chapter. I feel so sorry for Edward. I can't decide who is going have more fury, Tanya or the Cullens. Tristian must be dying inside right now. Please don't leave us hanging for long.
Author's Response:
Since I am so fail at replying to reviews, I give you this.
A bribery of sorts? No!
Just my way of saying thanks for sticking by me.
xx
As I lay there holding the woman of my dreams, watching her tiny chest rise and fall with each precious breath, I fought internally with myself. Keep her for as long as she would want me. Or…leave her now and give her to the man I knew she would want more than anything, if only she could remember him?
This decision ate at me, clawed at my insides like a flesh eating disease. It burned, it ached, it was raw and unfair and for the first time in my very long life, I contemplated a way to end the pain. I had never before in my existence been so torn. I truly was, at this very moment, a man of two minds.
Date: 11 Jan 2011 2:34 PM Title: Perseaus
I hope they tear that sleezy Tanya apart.
She kept all of this from them. I hope things work out in the end. I'm curious to what will happen with Tristan.
Author's Response:
Since I have been so fail at replying to reviews- here is a teaser form the next chap...a form of bribery? I think not...just me giving back a lil and saying thanks.
xx
As I lay there holding the woman of my dreams, watching her tiny chest rise and fall with each precious breath, I fought internally with myself. Keep her for as long as she would want me. Or…leave her now and give her to the man I knew she would want more than anything, if only she could remember him?
This decision ate at me, clawed at my insides like a flesh eating disease. It burned, it ached, it was raw and unfair and for the first time in my very long life, I contemplated a way to end the pain. I had never before in my existence been so torn. I truly was, at this very moment, a man of two minds.
[Report This]Date: 11 Jan 2011 3:12 AM Title: Perseaus
He has the AUDACITY to ask what she is to him, even after all those images?!
Doucheward has entered the building ladies and gentleman.
I cant wait to see what happens next! What can I say? Im hooked :) lol
Author's Response: Since I have been so fail at replying to reviews- here is a teaser form the next chap...a form of bribery? I think not...just me giving back a lil and saying thanks. xx As I lay there holding the woman of my dreams, watching her tiny chest rise and fall with each precious breath, I fought internally with myself. Keep her for as long as she would want me. Or…leave her now and give her to the man I knew she would want more than anything, if only she could remember him? This decision ate at me, clawed at my insides like a flesh eating disease. It burned, it ached, it was raw and unfair and for the first time in my very long life, I contemplated a way to end the pain. I had never before in my existence been so torn. I truly was, at this very moment, a man of two minds.
[Report This]Date: 11 Jan 2011 3:03 AM Title: Blissfully Unaware
Yay!!!!!!!
So, is this story have a HEA with E/B at the end? I really hope so!
Yeah, Tristan is nice and all, but I want E and B to get back together, and then for her to kick his ass to the four corners of the earth!
lol
Author's Response:
I make no promises. I'm not known for being the flowers and rainbow type.....but I can say the ending will freak u the hell out.
Did that help? Prolly not, eh. Ummm... my bad?
Date: 11 Jan 2011 2:47 AM Title: Blissfully Unaware
woo hoo. Although tanya needs her head ripped off for lying to him all this time.
Author's Response:
Since I have been so fail at replying to reviews- here is a teaser form the next chap...a form of bribery? I think not...just me giving back a lil and saying thanks.
xx
As I lay there holding the woman of my dreams, watching her tiny chest rise and fall with each precious breath, I fought internally with myself. Keep her for as long as she would want me. Or…leave her now and give her to the man I knew she would want more than anything, if only she could remember him?
This decision ate at me, clawed at my insides like a flesh eating disease. It burned, it ached, it was raw and unfair and for the first time in my very long life, I contemplated a way to end the pain. I had never before in my existence been so torn. I truly was, at this very moment, a man of two minds.
Date: 05 Jan 2011 6:14 AM Title: Chapter 19
yeah i really love that song too. Tanya is in for it when Eddie remembers and the Cullens get ahold of her.
[Report This]Date: 04 Jan 2011 5:48 PM Title: Chapter 19
Oh.
Shite.
Now what?!
Date: 03 Jan 2011 8:56 PM Title: Losing a Piece of me
Aww great chapter update please lol
[Report This]Date: 02 Jan 2011 12:11 PM Title: Losing a Piece of me
Awwww, Ed is coming BACK?!
Well shite, that sets a load of shit bricks in the road, eh?
I hope he gets his ass kicked for what he did. I hope he is gay.
If he is with another woman, I will write my self into the story and light his pyre myself -_-
Date: 02 Jan 2011 12:50 AM Title: Losing a Piece of me
Wow...I was wondering why they didn't look for Edward right away. It's crazy that they didn't believe her...especially with Alice not having visions. So are the Denali's keeping it from Edward and the Cullens? Or maybe they think it's best that he not remember?
Anyway...Tristan...not sure how I feel about that, but I guess she would have to move on at some point if she thought that he was dead.
Can't wait for more!
Date: 31 Dec 2010 8:29 PM Title: Losing a Piece of me
Please keep updating thanks :)
Date: 31 Dec 2010 7:32 PM Title: Losing a Piece of me
ugh.....dunno what to say. but she doesnt know he's alive so i guess moving on is to be expected.
Date: 24 Dec 2010 7:43 AM Title: Chapter 17
nah knew eddie wasnt meant to come back just yet.
Date: 13 Dec 2010 6:04 AM Title: New Year, new beginnings, new discoveries.
Amazing how they were contected in that moment in time when he was attacked. Now they have to find him and bring him back?
Author's Response:
Dude, I am so happy you caught on to that. You'd be surprised how many missed that, and the amount of ppl who are asking me what happened to him, now... kuddos...I think I might love you :-P
Merry Christmas.
xx
Date: 10 Dec 2010 4:53 AM Title: New Year, new beginnings, new discoveries.
poor confused girl.
Date: 21 Nov 2010 1:22 AM Title: Goodbye
Holy crow! He's lost his memory? Vampires can't do that right...so is he something else now? Is he gonna fall for Tanya? Can't wait for more!
Author's Response:
I'm late replying to this. I'm so sorry. Really, I am.
No, I would suppose vamps can't lose their memory, they are like a walking Wikipedia, but, yes, there is extenuating circumstances here, that will be explained later on, promise.
And Tanya....yeah...u'll see, but - she makes my skin crawl- hint hint...shhhh...Merry Christmas, m'dear.
xx
[Report This]Date: 19 Nov 2010 11:58 PM Title: Goodbye
crap thanks good two chapters
[Report This]Date: 19 Nov 2010 10:58 PM Title: Goodbye
WHAT!? EDWARD HAS AMNESIA!!!!!!!!!!!! OMG... UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 19 Nov 2010 8:59 PM Title: Goodbye
hmmm brain damaged eddie. That cant be good
Date: 19 Nov 2010 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 16
Yea I like those songs. Haunted (Kelly Clarkson) is another good one.
Date: 15 Nov 2010 5:59 AM Title: Family that will always be there
Like I said SCREW EDWARD.
Date: 15 Nov 2010 5:49 AM Title: Chapter 14
Well Bella has now another love. HMM.. Screw EDWARD.
Date: 15 Nov 2010 5:28 AM Title: Chapter 9
Thank you sweety for Tristan. Screw Edward. New man for Bella.. even if he is a vamp.
Author's Response:
Bah ha ha - have u always been an Edward hater? Or do I just bring out the snarky, Edward rae in ya?
Date: 15 Nov 2010 5:08 AM Title: Chapter 6
Oh screw Edward. Shitward.
Date: 13 Nov 2010 10:57 PM Title: Family that will always be there
Awe, poor Esme! I'm so glad that Alice and Bella realized it was a mistake. It was pretty obvious that she was replacing Alice with Edward because they were "similar." Not sure about Tristan yet though!
Date: 13 Nov 2010 10:30 PM Title: Chapter 14
Holy crow...so didn't see that coming! :)
Date: 12 Nov 2010 6:49 PM Title: Family that will always be there
poor girls. How'd grandpa like his stuff
Author's Response:
Lmfao- don't laugh- but I stared at this for like ever trying to figure out what u meant- must be a slow morning :-S
xx
Date: 12 Nov 2010 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 14
Wow they're related. Kewl
Date: 12 Nov 2010 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 13
Woo Hoo Great job
Date: 12 Nov 2010 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 12
Love evanessance.
Date: 12 Nov 2010 6:29 PM Title: Chapter 11
Bella is one confused girl
Date: 12 Nov 2010 6:25 PM Title: Chapter 10
hmmm really nice present picking
kissy kissy
Date: 12 Nov 2010 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 9
Woo Hoo for guitar. And I love that song
Date: 12 Nov 2010 6:18 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Is there life after true love?
lol Uh Oh hmm Do Alice and Tristan know each other.
Date: 11 Nov 2010 5:37 PM Title: Family that will always be there
great chapter
[Report This]Date: 12 Oct 2010 12:24 AM Title: Chapter 7
thanks good chapter
Date: 11 Oct 2010 6:56 PM Title: Chapter 7
you are keeping us waiting !! But for now i'm trying to figure out where you are going with your story, but can't.
Date: 11 Oct 2010 5:14 PM Title: Chapter 7
broke my wrist about a year ago. Still stiff and achy at times.
Date: 01 Oct 2010 12:32 AM Title: Chapter 6
I like the note Edward left. I am sure that was hard for Bella to read. I wonder where he is. Where are the rest of the Cullens? Do they still talk to them? I can't wait to find out. Great job...thanks!
Date: 30 Sep 2010 11:41 PM Title: Chapter 6
I like this story alot! I originally thought Jasper came to tell her he had feelings for her but two years is a long time to stay with Alice and not say anything if that is the case...so I 'll just have to wait and see.
[Report This]Date: 30 Sep 2010 6:31 PM Title: Chapter 6
thaanks short but good chapter
Date: 30 Sep 2010 6:07 PM Title: Chapter 6
glad she found her stuff.
Date: 25 Sep 2010 4:50 PM Title: Chapter 5
Wow...does Japser have feelings for Bella? Why else would he be tring to keep it from Alice and show up without knowing Alice was there. Just a feeling I have...I could be totally off though. I can't wait to find out. Great job...thanks so much!!!
Author's Response:
Dun dun dun- I know...I am such an f'ing tease, eh~~~
Promise- this will all come to light soon enough :-P
Glad you enjoying it, though.
xx
Date: 23 Sep 2010 3:21 PM Title: Chapter 5
hmmm wonder why Jazz was blocked from her mostly
Author's Response:
Promise, that will be revealed later on- well, what he was hiding. But, honestly, most of it was that Alice was so preoccupied she was missing pertinent shit.
[Report This]Date: 23 Sep 2010 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 5
thanks good chapter
[Report This]Date: 12 Sep 2010 9:29 AM Title: Chapter 4
thanks good chpater
[Report This]Date: 01 Sep 2010 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 3
i loved it i wonder where edward is and what the rest of the cullens will do knowing alice went to see bella
[Report This]Date: 01 Sep 2010 8:32 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Broken
i feel so bad for her iam glad alice is there for her
[Report This]Date: 01 Sep 2010 8:32 PM Title: Chapter 3
thanks good chapter
[Report This]Date: 01 Sep 2010 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 1
hmm alice loves bella hmm sounds good
[Report This]Date: 01 Sep 2010 8:29 PM Title: Prologue
This looks good can't wait to read more and it's alice i think
Date: 01 Sep 2010 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 3
Looking forward to more!