Date: 01 Jun 2015 10:30 PM Title: Chapter 3
I had an awful feeling they got there just in time to see him before he died. That dream is pretty prophetic, I guess. The part about a wolf wanting to get to the beautiful Swan makes me think Jacob Black is mixed up in this somehow!
Date: 31 Mar 2011 10:19 AM Title: Chapter 49
oh i cried like a baby so many times during this one too! Finally they get to be happy, and not be scared. It was amazing that they pulled through! Bella carrying the babies for Rosalie and Emmett, I swear that touched my heart so much. Alice and Jas having a baby and naming him Ben made me cry too, and little Angie!
Date: 18 Aug 2010 12:27 PM Title: Chapter 47
That was a huge step. Bravo. I think it is so funny that Jacob is gay in this story. I laugh every time I think about it. I would love it to be that way in the real story. I can't stand the cockiness of Jacob and Taylor Lautner.
Thank you:) I am not a big Jacob fan, either. I thought he was a cocky ass in the books and I don't usually write him as a major character, except for as a bad guy.
Date: 17 Aug 2010 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 46
How awesome!! =D So glad they're getting married again, thank you, thank you very much ;) LOL!!
Wait...that wasn't THE END yet, right??
Thanks! And no, there are two more chapters and an epi ;)
Date: 16 Aug 2010 12:14 AM Title: Chapter 45
well ive never cried so much as i have reading this but this is completly amazing. your writing is beautiful and awesome! Characters are kickass and i feel for them im there with them in it its crazy emotional lol. i love this story!
Date: 15 Aug 2010 11:01 PM Title: Chapter 45
timidvampire was right!! The journal was great! Sounds like the trip was way too short, though.
I really love this story and no matter how it ends, I'm just thankful to have read it and share my feelings about it. I know it has been hard to write at times, but from the bottom of my heart, butterflybetty, THANK YOU.
(That being said, I'd love for E&B to buy that vineyard in Italy if they don't end up forming their own record label, RevCheney Records, lol! Italy is their place of zen, so they def need to move there. ;) Just my 2 cents. ;) ) LOL!
Thank you:) I sat here for nearly a week just trying to figure out what I wanted this chapter to go...
Date: 13 Aug 2010 12:51 AM Title: Chapter 42
ok i get what she has been through ..but why is it no one is forcing her to see a therapist? She cant be that uninteligent to know that she is not dealing with this ... and I am sure she doesnt want to feel this way. sorry but she is beginning to get on my nerves she needs to go seek help weather she likes it or not. it's like she is torn up inside and she is trying to tear everyone else up along with her. I say get her some help and quickly this wounded animal act of hers is getting tirsome
Thank you. Here's the thing. It's not easy to trust yourself when you've been through something like this. If Bella isn't willing to seek help, then forcing her into it is only going to make things worse. I promise that things are going to start getting better for her. Just trust me a little:)
Date: 12 Aug 2010 11:28 PM Title: Chapter 42
I think Bella needs professional help & needs it fast. I know everyone wanted to give her time & she thinks she can handle it, but she can't.
The longer she waits, the harder it will be.
Author's Response: Thank you:)
Date: 11 Aug 2010 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 40
Awww, what a nice surprise!!
I hope she talks to them. :)
Good thing that's all Edward got out of that, LOL! She might be dainty, but she's got spunk! Glad it wasn't broken :)
I think the trip to Italy and Scotland would do them a world of good!! :D
Date: 11 Aug 2010 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 40
This was really good. You really conveyedbthe deep, agonizing hurt and guilt Bella feels. She truly believes she has the weight of the world on her shoulders. Just glad Edward and the others are there to help lighten the load when she's ready.
Thank you:) In my opinion, it's important not to sugar coat what she is feeling like a lot of writers do.
Date: 10 Aug 2010 5:05 PM Title: Chapter 39
Bella needs some serious therapy. She can't be in control of this decision. Carlisle needs to find some one for her.
Thank you:) but you can't force someone to seek help if they don't want it or aren't ready for it.
Date: 10 Aug 2010 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 39
I know it's not what she wants to hear but Bella needs some professional help. After everything she's been through...Charlie, Angela, Ben being murdered, stalked by Phil & Sam and now the press....as well as the other crap....it's going to take time and I hope she does get the help.
Aro should fire Alec, they need to find a new agent & get out of their tour contract and then go away to recoup & heal.
Thank you:) It's slow process for our Bella.
Date: 09 Aug 2010 6:51 PM Title: Chapter 38
I can't imagine having to write this, but reading it is not easy either. I've never been abducted or tortured like Bella was...
So I understand the struggle, I don't want to reveal anything personally, but I get it. I get the dark side. Been there. And I got through it with help and love.
To this day, I visit that dark place in my mind from time to time. It has been fifteen years since it happened to me. I don't think it will ever completely go away.
It's been twenty-two years for me andI still think about it nearly everyday. It does't get easier at all.
Date: 08 Aug 2010 8:12 AM Title: Chapter 37
Yeah, I figured Bella would try to take the blame for Sam's death if needed to protect Gar and his team. She doesn't want to let them down again.
So glad the girls are recovering together. They're strong together.
Date: 07 Aug 2010 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 36
I really really hope Sam is dead. Prison would be too good for him & Bella would never be able to heal knowing he was still alive.
Difficult chapter....to read & write.
Thank you for writing it the way you did. Everyone asked about Bella yet you were able to convey the question & answer without going into literal detail.
I hope they all make it. It's going to be rough. Good luck.
Date: 07 Aug 2010 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 36
Ugh!!! The video recorder!!!! Hellooooooooo!!!
Geez, I hope somebody picked it up or something...
I hope nothing else was left behind and that Sam truly is dead. I hope they don't get into trouble for not waiting for the cops, cuz they did go in like vigilantes, lol!
Date: 06 Aug 2010 4:39 PM Title: Chapter 35
Poor Bella!!! I was so hoping they would get to her in time!
So awful...I hope he didn't tear her too bad...
and at least Sam was stupid enough to record it, priceless evidence right there
Date: 05 Aug 2010 11:53 PM Title: Chapter 35
I know what you wrote was more realistic but I was so hoping they would have gotten there in time before Bella was tortured, beaten & raped.
So at least they got there and hope Bella pulls through. It seems that the end is near??
Graphic & hard to read but well done.
You know when I wrote this, I went back and forth on whether or not I should have him rape her or not and I really felt this was the direction the story was supposed to take. It was incredibly hard to write. We have about fourteen more chapters or so I think.
Date: 04 Aug 2010 6:14 PM Title: Chapter 33
Poor Rosie and Emmett!! I wonder if she knew she was pregnant and just hadn't found the time to tell Em? If they did a full hysterectomy, then she def can't have kids in the future?? :'(
Kudos to E (& Gar) for beating the shit out of Alec!
Makes me wonder if Alec was somehow involved tho since he was a big enough of a distraction that a whole security team & a protective family dropped their guard long enough for Rose and Alice to get hurt and Bella abducted! I mean, they weren't that far away from the scuffle! WTF??
Hope this doesn't get darker...
Date: 04 Aug 2010 10:31 AM Title: Chapter 33
I am so glad that Garrett put GPS on Bella. Some one has to look out for her since she won't look out for herself. I hope she isn't playing the martyr. She needs to be smart so she will live for Edward.
Date: 04 Aug 2010 5:05 AM Title: Chapter 33
Thank goodness Garrett had the foresight to plant a gps in Bella's shoe. Let's hope she keeps them on!
Poor Rose re her loss of her baby & a hysterectomy. That's going to be hard to recover from both physically & emotionally.
Hard chapter for all. Great job in your handling of it.
Date: 03 Aug 2010 2:07 AM Title: Chapter 32
Seriously!?!? After all the precautions Garrett & company took, Sam & Phil were able to gut Alice & Rose that easily? I hope to high heavens that someone was watching the girls and saw what happened! Would find it had to believe nine of the boys, girls, Carlisle or Esme wouldn't have seen what was going on...even the papa would be following the girls.
Exciting chapter...can't wait!
Date: 30 Jul 2010 10:41 AM Title: Chapter 28
Bella is being stupid. She did not kill them. The crazy person killed them. She needs to face reality and maybe get a federal help. She does not know all. She is not in charge of the actions of others.
Date: 30 Jul 2010 2:15 AM Title: Chapter 28
Too scary.....I know that's what makes the story and what keeps it going but Ben & Angela's horrific & tortuous murder was creepy.
I feel so bad for Bella and the rest. Really hope Sam & Phil get caught before the reach Bella. Something is not right with Sam....
Date: 29 Jul 2010 12:11 AM Title: Chapter 27
Extremely creepy. Phil is delusional & "sees dead people", Sam is encouraging the psychosis because he's in love with Phil or is pure evil and used him to blackmail Charlie.
Who were the couple he tortured? I hope the good cops find them....don't know who to trust!
Exactly!!! Thank you:)
Date: 28 Jul 2010 3:10 AM Title: Chapter 26
Awwww, that was so touching. They love each other so much.
Bella needs to give Garrett and his team some kudos. So what if Phil is Special Forces? He's also psycho!! Doesn't mix well, and he'll slip up and they'll get him and Sam!
Date: 27 Jul 2010 3:54 AM Title: Chapter 25
Okay...that came out of left field. Who the heck is Uncle Phil? Related to Charlie or Renee?? Why can't anyone stop him? Said it before; thank goodness you update quickly and we aren't left hanging for too long!
Date: 26 Jul 2010 3:48 PM Title: Chapter 24
ut oh.... get the scooby snacks for larent he has cracked the code...... and they would of got away with it oo if it wasnt for those pesky kids..lol
sorry had to get that out of my system........good chapter.
Thank you:) I was chuckling at the scooby doo reference:)
Date: 24 Jul 2010 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 22
For being the youngest, Bella seems to be the bossest. She seems to run the show. If this is the case, she is to blame for them not having security. I also can't believe she is not responsible enough to keep a cell phone charged. 12 year olds are that responsible.
As leader of the band, she feels responsible for everyone. Typical Bella. She is to blame for not having secruity but at the same time, if you don't trust the people who are supposed to be keeping you safe then how can keep them around. As for the cell phone, my twelve year old doesn't keep his charged and neither does my hubby.
Date: 23 Jul 2010 6:54 PM Title: Chapter 20
Poor Jacob. Something's still up with Billy though. I mean, he was awful quick to turn his suspicions in to Bella. ???
Love how Garrett decided to go ahead and help! And bringing in his team to help? Sounds hott! ;)