Date: 01 Jun 2015 11:52 PM Title: Chapter 4
So as soon as the girls bury their beloved father, looks like they are going into detective mode!
Date: 01 Jun 2015 10:30 PM Title: Chapter 3
I had an awful feeling they got there just in time to see him before he died. That dream is pretty prophetic, I guess. The part about a wolf wanting to get to the beautiful Swan makes me think Jacob Black is mixed up in this somehow!
Date: 01 Jun 2015 10:13 PM Title: Chapter 2
How awful to think that someone they probably know tried to kill Charlie, for what reason no one can figure! They may never know, if he doesn't wake up and tell who shot him.
Date: 01 Jun 2015 10:00 PM Title: Chapter 1
Don't blame the girls for disliking James, he didn't need to be such a hardass about giving the girls time off to be with their dad! What's more important, work or the only family they have?
[Report This]Date: 19 Jan 2015 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 49
what a roller coaster of a story!!! thanks for sharing it on here with us ;D
Date: 31 Mar 2011 10:19 AM Title: Chapter 49
oh i cried like a baby so many times during this one too! Finally they get to be happy, and not be scared. It was amazing that they pulled through! Bella carrying the babies for Rosalie and Emmett, I swear that touched my heart so much. Alice and Jas having a baby and naming him Ben made me cry too, and little Angie!
Date: 06 Sep 2010 1:27 AM Title: Chapter 49
that was good i liked how it ended and how you got rosie t have kids also that was real sweet of bella to do that
Author's Response:
Thank you so much:)I appreciate you taking the time to read this:)
[Report This]Date: 21 Aug 2010 3:07 AM Title: Chapter 49
*Standing up, clapping*
Bravo! Bravo!
What a beautiful ending!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for all the reviews!! You have no idea how much I appreciate them.
[Report This]Date: 21 Aug 2010 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 48
*Happy tears*
So beautiful!! I'm at a loss for words. Truly.
[Report This]Date: 21 Aug 2010 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 47
Wow, just amazing!!
Congratulations to Seth and Jacob! Woot Woot!!
And HUGE CONGRATS to B & E, ;)
Date: 20 Aug 2010 3:29 PM Title: Chapter 49
This was a great chapter. Everyone is happy again.
[Report This]Date: 19 Aug 2010 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 49
Great ending to a difficult story!!! So glad they got their HEA!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for sticking with me until the end:)
[Report This]Date: 19 Aug 2010 8:18 PM Title: Chapter 49
OMG. That was the best. It totally made me cry. Perfect ending. Thank you!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 19 Aug 2010 5:56 PM Title: Chapter 48
What a beautiful chapter. I loved it.
Author's Response: Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 18 Aug 2010 11:22 PM Title: Chapter 48
That was wonderful. I think the vows renewal was just what was needed. It was like a full circle completed in order to move forward!
Great job. I thoroughly enjoyed it!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 18 Aug 2010 12:27 PM Title: Chapter 47
That was a huge step. Bravo. I think it is so funny that Jacob is gay in this story. I laugh every time I think about it. I would love it to be that way in the real story. I can't stand the cockiness of Jacob and Taylor Lautner.
Author's Response:
Thank you:) I am not a big Jacob fan, either. I thought he was a cocky ass in the books and I don't usually write him as a major character, except for as a bad guy.
[Report This]Date: 18 Aug 2010 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 47
Big steps but necessary! I see a glimmer of light....
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Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 17 Aug 2010 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 46
YAY!!! *clapping*
How awesome!! =D So glad they're getting married again, thank you, thank you very much ;) LOL!!
Wait...that wasn't THE END yet, right??
Author's Response:
Thanks! And no, there are two more chapters and an epi ;)
[Report This]Date: 17 Aug 2010 1:27 AM Title: Chapter 46
*sigh* i would marry Edward
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 17 Aug 2010 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 46
I think that will be a nice new beginning. Bella seems a little better. She is not so jumpy.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 16 Aug 2010 10:47 PM Title: Chapter 46
Yes!! Great chapter!
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Thank you:)
Date: 16 Aug 2010 10:38 PM Title: Chapter 45
Journaling was definitely the right way to go!
Date: 16 Aug 2010 1:03 PM Title: Chapter 45
Bella seems a little better. She needs to talk to everyone about her ideas about the new label.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 16 Aug 2010 12:14 AM Title: Chapter 45
well ive never cried so much as i have reading this but this is completly amazing. your writing is beautiful and awesome! Characters are kickass and i feel for them im there with them in it its crazy emotional lol. i love this story!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 15 Aug 2010 11:01 PM Title: Chapter 45
timidvampire was right!! The journal was great! Sounds like the trip was way too short, though.
I really love this story and no matter how it ends, I'm just thankful to have read it and share my feelings about it. I know it has been hard to write at times, but from the bottom of my heart, butterflybetty, THANK YOU.
(That being said, I'd love for E&B to buy that vineyard in Italy if they don't end up forming their own record label, RevCheney Records, lol! Italy is their place of zen, so they def need to move there. ;) Just my 2 cents. ;) ) LOL!
hee hee
Author's Response:
Thank you:) I sat here for nearly a week just trying to figure out what I wanted this chapter to go...
[Report This]Date: 15 Aug 2010 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 44
*deep breath, sigh*
They did it!! They're actually on their way to Italy!!
I'm so happy for the girls, it was indeed a huge step for them as well.
[Report This]Date: 15 Aug 2010 7:34 PM Title: Chapter 43
That was so goood...About time Kate released some words of wisdom, lol.
The last sentence says it all...
[Report This]Date: 15 Aug 2010 7:24 PM Title: Chapter 42
Whew, what a whirlwind this chapter was! But so full of hope and coping at the end.
[Report This]Date: 15 Aug 2010 7:13 PM Title: Chapter 41
I'm so glad she got to talk to them a little while before all those tears, but it had to be of some comfort to know that they do not blame her. No one should.
That was a nice touch at the end, with Jacob.
Date: 15 Aug 2010 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 44
Baby steps for all but baby steps nonetheless. Glad to see all of them trying to get their lives back.
Jacon
B & Seth, huh?? I like!
[Report This]Date: 14 Aug 2010 2:01 AM Title: Chapter 43
The healing begins...slowly but there's hope!
Author's Response:
Thank you:) Small steps but steps nonetheless.
Date: 13 Aug 2010 10:25 AM Title: Chapter 42
Bella has loss all sense of reality. She is not living in the real world. She is living in her own bubble. She needs to let the people who love her in.
Author's Response:
Thanksl ;)
Date: 13 Aug 2010 12:51 AM Title: Chapter 42
ok i get what she has been through ..but why is it no one is forcing her to see a therapist? She cant be that uninteligent to know that she is not dealing with this ... and I am sure she doesnt want to feel this way. sorry but she is beginning to get on my nerves she needs to go seek help weather she likes it or not. it's like she is torn up inside and she is trying to tear everyone else up along with her. I say get her some help and quickly this wounded animal act of hers is getting tirsome
Author's Response:
Thank you. Here's the thing. It's not easy to trust yourself when you've been through something like this. If Bella isn't willing to seek help, then forcing her into it is only going to make things worse. I promise that things are going to start getting better for her. Just trust me a little:)
[Report This]Date: 12 Aug 2010 11:28 PM Title: Chapter 42
I think Bella needs professional help & needs it fast. I know everyone wanted to give her time & she thinks she can handle it, but she can't.
The longer she waits, the harder it will be.
Author's Response: Thank you:)
Date: 12 Aug 2010 11:58 AM Title: Chapter 41
I hope the Webers and the Cheneys brought Bella some peace.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 12 Aug 2010 3:19 AM Title: Chapter 41
I think you did well. No sugar coating, just tell it like it is.
Author's Response: Thank you:)
Date: 11 Aug 2010 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 41
this was a good chapter but i so want her and edard to be closer
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 11 Aug 2010 1:27 PM Title: Chapter 40
I hope Bella is ready to speak to them.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 11 Aug 2010 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 40
Awww, what a nice surprise!!
I hope she talks to them. :)
Good thing that's all Edward got out of that, LOL! She might be dainty, but she's got spunk! Glad it wasn't broken :)
I think the trip to Italy and Scotland would do them a world of good!! :D
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 11 Aug 2010 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 40
This was really good. You really conveyedbthe deep, agonizing hurt and guilt Bella feels. She truly believes she has the weight of the world on her shoulders. Just glad Edward and the others are there to help lighten the load when she's ready.
Author's Response:
Thank you:) In my opinion, it's important not to sugar coat what she is feeling like a lot of writers do.
[Report This]Date: 10 Aug 2010 9:05 PM Title: Chapter 39
*deep breath*
Well, negotiations were short. ;)
Go Bella! LOL!
I hope Carlisle has a lawyer ready for them. I have a feeling they're not done fighting for some time off yet.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 10 Aug 2010 5:05 PM Title: Chapter 39
Bella needs some serious therapy. She can't be in control of this decision. Carlisle needs to find some one for her.
Author's Response:
Thank you:) but you can't force someone to seek help if they don't want it or aren't ready for it.
[Report This]Date: 10 Aug 2010 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 39
I know it's not what she wants to hear but Bella needs some professional help. After everything she's been through...Charlie, Angela, Ben being murdered, stalked by Phil & Sam and now the press....as well as the other crap....it's going to take time and I hope she does get the help.
Aro should fire Alec, they need to find a new agent & get out of their tour contract and then go away to recoup & heal.
Author's Response:
Thank you:) It's slow process for our Bella.
[Report This]Date: 09 Aug 2010 6:51 PM Title: Chapter 38
I can't imagine having to write this, but reading it is not easy either. I've never been abducted or tortured like Bella was...
So I understand the struggle, I don't want to reveal anything personally, but I get it. I get the dark side. Been there. And I got through it with help and love.
To this day, I visit that dark place in my mind from time to time. It has been fifteen years since it happened to me. I don't think it will ever completely go away.
Author's Response:
It's been twenty-two years for me andI still think about it nearly everyday. It does't get easier at all.
Date: 09 Aug 2010 10:31 AM Title: Chapter 38
Bella has a lot of anger. Rose seems to handling her anger better. Edward is right Bella needs help. She can't hold it in or it will destoy her.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 09 Aug 2010 10:03 AM Title: Chapter 36
I am so glad that he is dead. Bella won't have to testify against him.
[Report This]Date: 09 Aug 2010 5:48 AM Title: Chapter 38
You're doing a great job...it's difficult to convey the thoughts & feelings that Bella is going through but your words are doing it justice.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 08 Aug 2010 8:12 AM Title: Chapter 37
Yeah, I figured Bella would try to take the blame for Sam's death if needed to protect Gar and his team. She doesn't want to let them down again.
So glad the girls are recovering together. They're strong together.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 08 Aug 2010 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 37
Bella took the blame for killing Sam so that Garrett wouldn't be criminally charged. Makes sense as Bella is protective of those she loves.
Great chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 07 Aug 2010 5:16 AM Title: Chapter 36
shit thats violent
Author's Response:
I know, thanks:)
[Report This]Date: 07 Aug 2010 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 36
I really really hope Sam is dead. Prison would be too good for him & Bella would never be able to heal knowing he was still alive.
Difficult chapter....to read & write.
Thank you for writing it the way you did. Everyone asked about Bella yet you were able to convey the question & answer without going into literal detail.
I hope they all make it. It's going to be rough. Good luck.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 07 Aug 2010 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 36
Ugh!!! The video recorder!!!! Hellooooooooo!!!
Geez, I hope somebody picked it up or something...
I hope nothing else was left behind and that Sam truly is dead. I hope they don't get into trouble for not waiting for the cops, cuz they did go in like vigilantes, lol!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 06 Aug 2010 4:39 PM Title: Chapter 35
*tears*
Poor Bella!!! I was so hoping they would get to her in time!
*uncontrollable sobbing*
So awful...I hope he didn't tear her too bad...
and at least Sam was stupid enough to record it, priceless evidence right there
*sniff*
Date: 05 Aug 2010 11:53 PM Title: Chapter 35
I know what you wrote was more realistic but I was so hoping they would have gotten there in time before Bella was tortured, beaten & raped.
So at least they got there and hope Bella pulls through. It seems that the end is near??
Graphic & hard to read but well done.
Author's Response:
You know when I wrote this, I went back and forth on whether or not I should have him rape her or not and I really felt this was the direction the story was supposed to take. It was incredibly hard to write. We have about fourteen more chapters or so I think.
Date: 05 Aug 2010 10:31 AM Title: Chapter 34
Ok, Sam is the one who needs to be in the mental hospital.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 05 Aug 2010 5:10 AM Title: Chapter 34
omg ... *picks self up off the floor* you have to let the boys get to her in time.
Author's Response:
Thanks:)
[Report This]Date: 05 Aug 2010 12:24 AM Title: Chapter 34
oh snap!!!!!
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[Report This]Date: 05 Aug 2010 12:09 AM Title: Chapter 34
Using Sam as the sicko psycho is unique. I can see him snapping Phils neck. Sam is psycho too.
Hope help will be there soon...do not want Bella to be raped!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 04 Aug 2010 11:37 PM Title: Chapter 34
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
SHHHHHIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIITTTTT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 04 Aug 2010 6:14 PM Title: Chapter 33
Poor Rosie and Emmett!! I wonder if she knew she was pregnant and just hadn't found the time to tell Em? If they did a full hysterectomy, then she def can't have kids in the future?? :'(
Kudos to E (& Gar) for beating the shit out of Alec!
Makes me wonder if Alec was somehow involved tho since he was a big enough of a distraction that a whole security team & a protective family dropped their guard long enough for Rose and Alice to get hurt and Bella abducted! I mean, they weren't that far away from the scuffle! WTF??
Hope this doesn't get darker...
Date: 04 Aug 2010 10:31 AM Title: Chapter 33
I am so glad that Garrett put GPS on Bella. Some one has to look out for her since she won't look out for herself. I hope she isn't playing the martyr. She needs to be smart so she will live for Edward.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 04 Aug 2010 5:05 AM Title: Chapter 33
Thank goodness Garrett had the foresight to plant a gps in Bella's shoe. Let's hope she keeps them on!
Poor Rose re her loss of her baby & a hysterectomy. That's going to be hard to recover from both physically & emotionally.
Hard chapter for all. Great job in your handling of it.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 03 Aug 2010 6:58 PM Title: Chapter 32
HOLY SH*T!!!!!!!!! Damn, what a cliffie!!
Author's Response: Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 03 Aug 2010 6:48 PM Title: Chapter 31
Okay, this could be a good thing...right? (them going to the funeral)
[Report This]Date: 03 Aug 2010 6:35 PM Title: Chapter 30
Whew!
But I think I would have called Gar and high-tailed it out of there!
[Report This]Date: 03 Aug 2010 6:26 PM Title: Chapter 29
Oh no, she's going after them on her own!!! NOOOOOOOO!!
Date: 03 Aug 2010 2:24 PM Title: Chapter 32
Why are the girls so stupid to leave the protection of the guys? They cause their own problems by being stupid.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 03 Aug 2010 2:39 AM Title: Chapter 32
omg ... plz plz let the boys find her and kill those freaks that did this... i will be on the edge of my chair until i get another chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 03 Aug 2010 2:07 AM Title: Chapter 32
Seriously!?!? After all the precautions Garrett & company took, Sam & Phil were able to gut Alice & Rose that easily? I hope to high heavens that someone was watching the girls and saw what happened! Would find it had to believe nine of the boys, girls, Carlisle or Esme wouldn't have seen what was going on...even the papa would be following the girls.
Exciting chapter...can't wait!
Author's Response:
THank you:)
[Report This]Date: 02 Aug 2010 5:54 AM Title: Chapter 31
Glad she's not going to hide. They do need to flush Phil and Sam out.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 01 Aug 2010 4:52 PM Title: Chapter 30
Thank goodness they got to Bella before it was too late. Hope Garrett & team get there soon as well.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 01 Aug 2010 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 30
whewww glad they caught up to her ... ok now lets catch these suckers and have it done with
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 31 Jul 2010 5:48 AM Title: Chapter 29
Just wanna wring her damn neck!! Very frustrating!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 31 Jul 2010 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 29
uggggggggggggggggggg....there she goes running off again
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 31 Jul 2010 2:07 AM Title: Chapter 29
I know Bella means well and think she's doing the right thing but I don't know....coukdbe a huge mistake!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 30 Jul 2010 10:41 AM Title: Chapter 28
Bella is being stupid. She did not kill them. The crazy person killed them. She needs to face reality and maybe get a federal help. She does not know all. She is not in charge of the actions of others.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 30 Jul 2010 2:15 AM Title: Chapter 28
Too scary.....I know that's what makes the story and what keeps it going but Ben & Angela's horrific & tortuous murder was creepy.
I feel so bad for Bella and the rest. Really hope Sam & Phil get caught before the reach Bella. Something is not right with Sam....
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 29 Jul 2010 6:51 PM Title: Chapter 27
Well that was creepy as hell!!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 29 Jul 2010 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 27
very creeped out and the hair on my arms is standing on end.. update soon this crazy sucker needs found.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 29 Jul 2010 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 27
:O
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Ohhhhh myyyyyy gaaaaaaaawd!!!!
Author's Response:
lol, thanks:)
[Report This]Date: 29 Jul 2010 12:24 AM Title: Chapter 27
ummm.... that wasnt creepy at all....... what the hell, yes it was but it was really good. good job!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 29 Jul 2010 12:11 AM Title: Chapter 27
Extremely creepy. Phil is delusional & "sees dead people", Sam is encouraging the psychosis because he's in love with Phil or is pure evil and used him to blackmail Charlie.
Who were the couple he tortured? I hope the good cops find them....don't know who to trust!
Author's Response:
Exactly!!! Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 28 Jul 2010 3:10 AM Title: Chapter 26
Awwww, that was so touching. They love each other so much.
Bella needs to give Garrett and his team some kudos. So what if Phil is Special Forces? He's also psycho!! Doesn't mix well, and he'll slip up and they'll get him and Sam!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 28 Jul 2010 12:25 AM Title: Chapter 26
Good one. Think Jacob may be on to something.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 27 Jul 2010 9:00 PM Title: Chapter 25
WHOA!!!!!!!!
Hello!!!! Baddie Uncle Phil, huh? What was so important about the date tho?
I loved her dream with her mom! :)
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 27 Jul 2010 3:54 AM Title: Chapter 25
Okay...that came out of left field. Who the heck is Uncle Phil? Related to Charlie or Renee?? Why can't anyone stop him? Said it before; thank goodness you update quickly and we aren't left hanging for too long!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 27 Jul 2010 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 25
yikes.......*ties the rope around my waist and anchors it to the rock and hopes for a rescue soon*
Author's Response:
Thank you:) I promise not to keep you dangling too long :)
Date: 26 Jul 2010 3:48 PM Title: Chapter 24
ut oh.... get the scooby snacks for larent he has cracked the code...... and they would of got away with it oo if it wasnt for those pesky kids..lol
sorry had to get that out of my system........good chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you:) I was chuckling at the scooby doo reference:)
Date: 26 Jul 2010 10:45 AM Title: Chapter 24
It looks like progess has been made.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 26 Jul 2010 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 24
Thank goodness for your frequent updates. Cannot wait to see what Laurent has discovered!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 25 Jul 2010 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 23
hummm... ya think it sunk in?
good story ..ty
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 25 Jul 2010 12:01 AM Title: Chapter 23
Good job!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 24 Jul 2010 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 22
the plot thickens
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 24 Jul 2010 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 22
The plot thickens!!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 24 Jul 2010 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 22
For being the youngest, Bella seems to be the bossest. She seems to run the show. If this is the case, she is to blame for them not having security. I also can't believe she is not responsible enough to keep a cell phone charged. 12 year olds are that responsible.
Author's Response:
As leader of the band, she feels responsible for everyone. Typical Bella. She is to blame for not having secruity but at the same time, if you don't trust the people who are supposed to be keeping you safe then how can keep them around. As for the cell phone, my twelve year old doesn't keep his charged and neither does my hubby.
[Report This]Date: 23 Jul 2010 7:08 PM Title: Chapter 21
So maybe it's someone at the record company, I'll even suggest James as a suspect! LOL!
Love the chat Garrett and Bella had, she needed that. Sounds like she's burned out? I'd be sick of not seeing my man, too!
[Report This]Date: 23 Jul 2010 6:54 PM Title: Chapter 20
Alright!!! Awesome!!
Poor Jacob. Something's still up with Billy though. I mean, he was awful quick to turn his suspicions in to Bella. ???
Love how Garrett decided to go ahead and help! And bringing in his team to help? Sounds hott! ;)
[Report This]Date: 23 Jul 2010 7:53 AM Title: Chapter 14
These past two chapters were difficult to read, I couldn't control my crying. The beginning of this chapter was heart breaking. I love this story so much, It's the best I've ever read.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 23 Jul 2010 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 21
Uh oh....thank goodness they arent alone!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 22 Jul 2010 6:02 AM Title: Chapter 20
I did enjoy this chapter. It moved the story forward and we are getting to know a bit more about Jacob. Good job.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)