[Report This]Date: 31 Dec 2014 11:41 PM Title: Ten Years Later
I couldn't stop crying reading this. A beautiful, bitterswet tale.
Date: 25 Dec 2012 10:58 AM Title: Lemon Meringue Pie
I love domward in the bedroom,so was bella a prostitutie or just chris "raped" her? i dont call it consensual cuz she was a kidnapped child so even if she wanted it, thats only stockholme syndrom
Date: 24 Dec 2012 10:05 PM Title: Angela
He kidnapped her at 11 and raped her
[Report This]Date: 30 Jul 2011 6:58 PM Title: Reunited
Awwwwwhhhhh!! Loved it! Loved it! Loved it!!! I am so happy they found her and I loved the irony of Rose and Emmett finding her! I hope they can find a way to be safe because I just love Bella and Edward and this new little one! I don't care if it's a boy or a girl, I just hope the baby is healty because the stuff Chris gave her makes my blood boil. I would like to take him out myself! There is a special place in hell for people who drug a pregnant woman!! Oh sorry, I'm done and i'm happy she is safe for now!
[Report This]Date: 30 Jul 2011 5:53 AM Title: Captured
Oh, ok here is a review for you, please, please help Bella, I can't stand that she is going through this! And poor Edward must be dying right now not knowing where she is and not being able to keep her and the baby safe life he promised he would! Oh I hope Edward can find her soon, I am so scared for her, please shorten her torture!
[Report This]Date: 30 Jul 2011 5:39 AM Title: Surprise, Surprise
Oh wow, this is so intense, I love it, I hope Bella will be ok and I hope that Edward can take the pleasure of killing Chris. I don't wish death on anyone but that man, he just needs to go. I can't wait to get on to the next chapter. Thanks for sharing this with us, it's a really interesting story.
[Report This]Date: 30 Jul 2011 4:33 AM Title: Don't Ever Leave Me
OH, I really hope he doesn't get killed. I hope someone takes Chris out because after all the stuff Bella has gone through in her life, she needs some fairy tale time with Edward!
[Report This]Date: 30 Jul 2011 3:58 AM Title: The Boogeyman's Coming
This is such a wonderful story! I know I have only read a few chapters but what can I say, I'm a sucker for Bella and Edward!
Date: 18 Apr 2011 3:09 AM Title: Ten Years Later
thanks for the story really enjoyed! :)
Date: 18 Apr 2011 3:01 AM Title: Letting Go
okay what a roller coaster!!
Date: 18 Apr 2011 2:58 AM Title: Beauty In The Breakdown
poor rose!! how sad!
Date: 18 Apr 2011 2:55 AM Title: Inducing Pain
oaky that was something!!
Date: 18 Apr 2011 2:49 AM Title: Sullen Solace
darn you killed em!! go rose!!
Date: 18 Apr 2011 2:46 AM Title: Bittersweet
damn don't tell me you killed rose and em!! no please not them... oh ed watch out!!
Date: 18 Apr 2011 2:35 AM Title: It's a Beautiful Baby
okay stop lulling us something bad is going to happy!!
Date: 18 Apr 2011 2:27 AM Title: Broken Togetherness
oh ed get over yourself!!!
Date: 18 Apr 2011 1:04 AM Title: Stranger to the Rescue
wow rose and em found her.. okay in the the real world that shot of drugs most likely would have done something to the baby... how are they going to keep her safe?
Date: 18 Apr 2011 12:55 AM Title: The Great Escape
sicko sicko poor poor bella she had been through so much crap!! wow i am surprised how strong she is
Date: 18 Apr 2011 12:47 AM Title: Captured
damn this is really f-ed up!!!
Date: 18 Apr 2011 12:42 AM Title: Surprise, Surprise
damn this is bad very very bad.. at least ed knows the truth that she didn't just leave and she knows the truth he really loves her!
Date: 18 Apr 2011 12:33 AM Title: Imperfect Ending
bella you know that isn't true.. come on don't do anything stupid!!
Date: 18 Apr 2011 12:20 AM Title: Lemon Meringue Pie
oh bella what are you going to do? i don't trust you not to hurt ed!
Date: 18 Apr 2011 12:02 AM Title: An Unexpected Invitation
she is going to take off? not good bells
Date: 17 Apr 2011 11:51 PM Title: Don't Ever Leave Me
oh bella trust ed come on you can do it!!
Date: 17 Apr 2011 11:41 PM Title: Angela
poor bella... ed i love you!!
Date: 17 Apr 2011 10:38 PM Title: The Boogeyman's Coming
how did he get in? who is it?! wowo scary
Date: 17 Apr 2011 10:29 PM Title: Babies and Nightmares
ed you are the man as always... poor bella
Date: 17 Apr 2011 10:19 PM Title: Prologue
oh bella you sure stepped in it good!!
Date: 29 Aug 2010 11:30 PM Title: Ten Years Later
well they all found their hea. i am still kinda mad about killing off big emmy but life goes on.
thank you for sharing your story with me. :)
Date: 29 Aug 2010 11:23 PM Title: Awakening
yay rose found her peace, the new baby is born, eddie and bella are married and living their hea with baby em. life is good.
Date: 29 Aug 2010 11:12 PM Title: Letting Go
yay i was right and you did make rose pregers! once she can calm down a little with her loss of em this will be the perfect thing to help her move forward. she has to be strong for the baby.
Date: 29 Aug 2010 11:03 PM Title: Beauty In The Breakdown
rose is going through some major shit right now but the baby should help. she can be the momma baby em needs while they wait for bella to wake up and recover.
Date: 29 Aug 2010 10:53 PM Title: Inducing Pain
i know you're already complete on this one but it would be awesome if rose found out she was pregnant, like a last gift from em. i know fluffy angst, heehee.
Date: 29 Aug 2010 10:41 PM Title: Sullen Solace
well my vote doesn't count since the story is posted as complete, but i would have said to write it as the voices in your head tell you to. i mean it is your story we are all just along for the ride. and what a ride this one has been!
i can not even believe that you killed off emmy! that is so unfair and i am mad at you right now, but i'll get over it. i guess....
Date: 29 Aug 2010 10:32 PM Title: Bittersweet
well shit that was not nice at all! you left us hangin on so many things! how's em? how's rose? are they alive? hanging on by a thread? how's bella? the baby? what will chris do to eddie? will anyone else come home? fuck i'm off to find out!
Date: 29 Aug 2010 10:11 PM Title: It's a Beautiful Baby
glad to see rose, alice and daddy c all gave eddie a hard time about being a dickhead.
Date: 29 Aug 2010 10:02 PM Title: Broken Togetherness
eddie still needs a good smack upside his head! bad stuff happened being an asshole to the victim will not make that go away ! dumb ass!
Date: 29 Aug 2010 9:39 PM Title: Reunited
well bella and the baby and the rest of the tribe are safe ... for now. i wonder where they are all heading to? and i get eddie taking off with bella but everyone else? wow tham are some understanding bosses! but hey it's ff, right. lol
Date: 29 Aug 2010 6:01 PM Title: Stranger to the Rescue
yay she called eddie! and seriously how could alice be so stupid as to forget where she is?!?! it is a wonder that eddie didn't smack her or toss her out a window. but all's well for now and bella and eddie are speeding towards eachother.
Date: 29 Aug 2010 5:41 PM Title: The Great Escape
ok you're right that baby thing is just ....odd. but if there are any baby spankers or diaper wearers out there no hate here we all have our thing and as long as it is consentual it is all good.
who did she call? eddie? alice? someone else?
Date: 29 Aug 2010 5:15 PM Title: Waiting
well it's great that the cullen tribe showed up to help but why weren't they all there from the start? ok let's go find bella and the baby!
Date: 29 Aug 2010 5:04 PM Title: Captured
i hope that bella gets found brfore too long so they can start her detox and hopefully the baby will not have lasting side effects from the drugs. and i hope the baby is not born addicted, that shit is so fucked up and sad.
Date: 29 Aug 2010 4:46 PM Title: Surprise, Surprise
well at least she got the message to eddie about chris. so he knows she is not going of her own free will, and he can try to look for her.
poor bella right back into the nightmare.
Date: 29 Aug 2010 4:23 PM Title: Imperfect Ending
oh shit she thinks eddie is working for chris?!?!? see this is why communication is so important.
Date: 29 Aug 2010 4:04 PM Title: Lemon Meringue Pie
i really hope that this was not bellas goodbye. it is so sweet that bella thought of giving the baby to rose, never gonna happen but still a very touching thought.
Date: 29 Aug 2010 3:42 PM Title: An Unexpected Invitation
well it is time to meet the cullens...
Date: 29 Aug 2010 3:24 PM Title: Don't Ever Leave Me
well we now know the family members from eddie's side. alice is her usual self, nuff said ther i wonder when we will meet the rest of the cullens?
Date: 29 Aug 2010 3:06 PM Title: Angela
he killed her family framed her mom and then stole bella when she was 11! holy fuck! how long was bella with him before she got away?
what is eddie gonna do to keep her safe?
Date: 29 Aug 2010 12:12 PM Title: The Boogeyman's Coming
wow that is some scary shit poor bella
Date: 29 Aug 2010 5:50 AM Title: Babies and Nightmares
poor bella! how far along was she? was that when she ended it with chris or did she stay longer after she lost the baby?
Date: 29 Aug 2010 2:52 AM Title: Prologue
well i wonder if she is gonna go looking for eddie? or will they just happen to bump into eachother?
Date: 25 Jul 2010 8:31 PM Title: Ten Years Later
that wasa good storya nd i liked it
[Report This]Date: 10 Jun 2010 6:18 AM Title: Ten Years Later
This was extreemly deep and sad, but such a well written story. Thank you for sharing!
Date: 04 Jun 2010 10:56 PM Title: Ten Years Later
It was good up until the part where Emmett died, then I got a little disapointed.
[Report This]Date: 24 May 2010 6:58 AM Title: Ten Years Later
Sorry but finally reviewing since I can't on my iphone for some reason on this site. It was a whirlwind story when going all the way through, but having it drawn out probably added to the angst. I cried a ton over Emmett, I have generally stopped reading stories where an original Cullen dies bc it just brings up too many bad memories. However, yes the HEA was there in a tragic way, but I have no balls to write and may never, so kudos to you dear! I'm excited to see what other things you have written since this story.
Annie
Date: 03 Apr 2010 8:41 PM Title: Ten Years Later
A very poignant story but at least there is some semblance of a happy ending. I read the story straight through and enjoyed it.
Date: 03 Apr 2010 4:46 AM Title: Don't Ever Leave Me
fuck i'm crying lol poor bella i just want to hug her.
I love how u write :)
Date: 03 Apr 2010 3:57 AM Title: Prologue
I really enjoyed this 1st chapter!
Date: 01 Apr 2010 1:38 PM Title: Ten Years Later
Thank you for the story. It was very good. I will look for more of your writing.
Date: 14 Mar 2010 3:50 AM Title: Sullen Solace
Omg. I can't believe you killed Em!
Date: 14 Mar 2010 3:44 AM Title: Bittersweet
Ok R and Em have to be ok. And E and B need to seriously kill Chris once and for all.
Date: 13 Mar 2010 10:38 PM Title: The Great Escape
I'm so proud of her.
Date: 13 Mar 2010 10:18 PM Title: Captured
Mother fucker! I want to kill them both w my bare hands!
Date: 13 Mar 2010 10:07 PM Title: Surprise, Surprise
I'm just so glad he asked her those questions and that she could answer him. He should have gone w her regardless.
Date: 13 Mar 2010 9:32 PM Title: Lemon Meringue Pie
I'm always a fan. And a preggo B means she puts out- lol.
Date: 13 Mar 2010 8:53 PM Title: An Unexpected Invitation
Don't mind the fluff between B and E. She's got enough angst in her life.
Date: 13 Mar 2010 8:32 PM Title: Don't Ever Leave Me
Being w someone so damaged is so hard. Its stressful and exhausting and very painful for both sometimes but its not impossible.
Date: 13 Mar 2010 8:14 PM Title: Angela
Fuck! And here I just thought Chris was some crazy ex!
And as far as E goes, there really are some great men out there who would do just as he is. They are not all jerks or scared.
[Report This]Date: 16 Feb 2010 1:18 AM Title: Angela
Lovin this story so far, was late last nite when i started to read it, will read the rest 2morrow, :)
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading, I hope you enjoy it!
[Report This]Date: 15 Feb 2010 11:09 PM Title: Ten Years Later
That story was...wow, there just aren't enough words. I was so shocked by Emmett's death and thrilled that Rose would have a reason to go on. I think you tied it all up in a great way too. Thanks so much for sharing your talent with us!
Author's Response:
Yes it was really hard to write, I actually debated with someone about Emmett, and they told me to stick to the story, and unfortunately that's just how it had to be told.
Thanks so much for reading!
[Report This]Date: 12 Feb 2010 9:19 PM Title: Prologue
Thanks so much for writing this. It was superb!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading! and I'm so glad that you liked it! :)
[Report This]Date: 11 Feb 2010 10:48 AM Title: Prologue
i love story with Bella pregant. call me crazy, but i just do. thank you for writing.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading! I like stories with a pregnant Bella too...well you know as long as it fits with the story :)
Date: 11 Feb 2010 6:23 AM Title: Angela
OH! Edward is wonderful!!
Date: 11 Feb 2010 6:15 AM Title: The Boogeyman's Coming
Great chapter! Poor little thing. So she obviously ran from the ex. No help from the authorities??
Date: 11 Feb 2010 6:10 AM Title: Babies and Nightmares
Aww poor Bella. Shes a mess!
Date: 11 Feb 2010 6:02 AM Title: Prologue
OH NO!!! Sumtimes the positive is bad. Great chapter!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading bb! :) Hope you like the rest of the story. <3