Date: 15 Feb 2016 6:58 AM Title: The Birth
So cute! Love it. :)
Date: 08 May 2014 4:57 AM Title: Aftermath
I hope jacob happy with himself. He lost friends,pack,himself. I don't think jacob has a brain at all I mean where did it go? Charlie final take bella side.
Date: 08 May 2014 4:50 AM Title: True Colors
So I guess the wolves lost some of there pack.
Date: 08 May 2014 4:48 AM Title: Confrontation
About time bella tell jacob off.
Date: 08 May 2014 4:44 AM Title: Doubts
Jacob should learn to shut up.
Date: 15 Feb 2014 8:51 PM Title: Aftermath
Love it ,please finish story.
Date: 15 Feb 2014 8:36 AM Title: Meeting Renesmee
Love story,i think wolf all jerk but seth !
Date: 31 Jan 2014 6:16 PM Title: The Untold Story of Edward Cullen
I really loved this chapter it was sad but sweet and i love the middle name
Date: 30 Jan 2014 5:49 AM Title: Aftermath
This is awesome!
Date: 30 Jan 2014 1:22 AM Title: Aftermath
Oh jake and leah would be perfect for each other....jackasses,, both. Go Charlie!!! Hmm wonder if Tanya is going to behave
Date: 29 Jan 2014 3:55 PM Title: Aftermath
I mainly read this on FFn. When're you gonna update it over there. The no. of people abandoning the fandom and/or their fics on this place has sorta turned me off it. I really only read it now when I want the uncensored versions of work already on FFn.
Date: 29 Jan 2014 10:32 AM Title: Aftermath
I'm curious too, as to the compromise that Carlisle worked out with the wolves. The great things is having her parents privy to the secret means Bella gets to keep them in her life. What could be better?
Date: 29 Jan 2014 10:21 AM Title: Chapter 18 - Family Ties
That all went wonderfully well, and I'm almost as glad as Bella to have her parents aware of all the facts of her new existence, inckuding their grandaughter! Now unless Jake goes on a rampage, life should be much happier for all concerned! Hope you finish this someday, or maybe I can find more on fan fic.com.
Date: 29 Jan 2014 9:53 AM Title: Chapter 17 Fact and Fiction
Good thing Bella remembered about Kaure and the internet sites, that got the ball rolling. Now it looks like Alice and Jasper will take a trip to Rio. It sure would help to have more information on creatures like Ren. I look forward to the talk between Bella and Charlie.
Date: 29 Jan 2014 9:29 AM Title: Chapter 16
Hard to say what Charlie has been told about Bella, by the Quileutes, so I don't blame her for wanting to tell her side of it! Hope Billy is going to be okay, too.
Date: 29 Jan 2014 9:15 AM Title: Tattle Tale
What a relief to find out it was just a cold! Sure scared everybody! It must have been a shock for Charlie to see his daughter looking different! Wonder if he will be out to the house for explanations?
Date: 29 Jan 2014 9:02 AM Title: Author's Note
Sounds like you had a tough summer that year!
Date: 29 Jan 2014 9:00 AM Title: Motherhood
There is no more helpless feeling than having a sick baby! They can't tell you what's wrong and where it hurts! I'm glad Carlisle dressed down the snarky nurse, by the way. Edward is going to freak and who is it who just reconized Bella?
Date: 29 Jan 2014 8:46 AM Title: Not a moment of peace
Sounds like they found the perfect nursery for Ren! I have to agree with sentiment, can't they ever just have peace and quiet?
Date: 29 Jan 2014 8:19 AM Title: A Change of Heart
That was fluffy, but I really liked it, especially the flashback!
Date: 29 Jan 2014 7:57 AM Title: Desicions Desicions
Is it just Sam and Emily that will have to leave, or is it the other four as well? I wouldn't think Sue would let Seth go! This is pretty sad for Sam, and I don't think Billy is veryhappy about it or with his son!
Date: 29 Jan 2014 7:27 AM Title: Party
Wonder what embarassing thing Emmett came up with for Bella's birthday? If she thinks a car is extravagant, wait until she sees the cottage! This was a nice interlude before you plunge them into danger once again, no doubt! Jake won't hesitate to make a damn fool of himself, I'll bet!
Date: 29 Jan 2014 7:01 AM Title: True Colors
Trust Jacob to be everything Bella accused him of, and more! The self-centered little punk can't see beyond what he wants and believes, the truth not withstanding! Kind of feel bad for Sam, Seth, Paul, Quil and Jared. Where are they supposed to go now that Jake has banished them, what about their imprints?
Date: 29 Jan 2014 6:36 AM Title: The Untold Story of Edward Cullen
A one-shot of Edward's little sister would be both sweet and heart-breaking. Losing a child like that would be soul-crushing for anyone. Glad to hear Edward confess his fears to his wife, as she said, sharing their feelings and problems is always the way to avoid misunderstanding.
Date: 29 Jan 2014 5:46 AM Title: First Hunt
Bella's first kill a mountain lion is perfect! A picnic in the meadow is even better, and the description of Ren's outfit was just darling!
Date: 29 Jan 2014 5:06 AM Title: Meeting Renesmee
I was fine with the story in BD, but your idea for the growth rate and intelligence of their child is just right! They will have more time with her and she can be more normal!
Date: 29 Jan 2014 4:47 AM Title: Confrontation
Bravo Bella! She did a fabulous job of putting Jacob in his place and pointing out what he really had done in their relationship! She came through this change in wonderful shape! That's standard operating procedure for Bella Swan Cullen, I guess!
Date: 29 Jan 2014 4:29 AM Title: Conflict
The whole pack just shows up and Jake thinks he can somehow have anything to say about Bella? Looks like she will have the final word! Hope it saves a fight!
Date: 29 Jan 2014 4:09 AM Title: Doubts
Poor Charlie, thinking Bella may be dying! Sure set Jacob's tail on fire and got him over to the Cullen house in a big hurry! There he thoroughly pissed off the new daddy, made a rude fool of himself and got tossed out! This amazing child is affecting everyone involved, in a mostly positive way.
Date: 29 Jan 2014 3:26 AM Title: The Birth
Really good rendition of the birth of Renessmee! You have Edward a bit more of a basket case than in the original story.
Date: 25 Nov 2012 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 18 - Family Ties
love this so far! cant wait to read more
Date: 15 Sep 2012 7:01 AM Title: Chapter 18 - Family Ties
I LOVE THE OUT COME OF THERE MEETING I'M NOT SO SURE THE WOLFPACK WILL BE SO HAPPY THAT CHARLIE AND RENEE ARE SO EXCEPTING OF BELLA AND THE CULLEN FAMILY I MEAN AFTER ALL DIDN'T JAKE TELL THEM ABOUT BELLA AND THE CULLEN'S TO MAKE TROUBLE FOR THEM? WELL IT DIDN'T WORK SO NOW ARE THE PACK GOING TO BE PISSED AT CHARLIE NOW AS WELL? I HATE THAT IT SOUNDS LIKE THE STORY IS ALMOST OVER BECAUSE I REALLY DI LOVE IT EVEN THOUGH I HAVEN'T REVIEWED MUCH IT'S A GREAT STORY SO HERE'S A QUESTION IS THERE A SQUEAL COMING?
Date: 15 Sep 2012 4:35 AM Title: Chapter 18 - Family Ties
That was amazing
Date: 15 Sep 2012 3:40 AM Title: Tattle Tale
CHARLIE SHOULDN'T HAVE TREATED BELLA LIKE THAT. SHE'S HIS DAUGHTER AFTER ALL.
Date: 13 Sep 2012 6:07 PM Title: Not a moment of peace
SO SAM AND THE OTHERS THAT ARE STILL IN HIS PACK ARE STICKING AROUND TO MAKE SURE THE OTHER PACK DOESN'T COME AFTER THE CULLEN'S? AM I RIGHT?
Date: 13 Sep 2012 9:14 AM Title: Desicions Desicions
WHAT ARE THEY NUTS SAM LEAVE IS IT A TRAP ON THE CULLEN'S? SAM LEAVES AND THEN THE WOLF PACK GOES AFTER THE CULLEN'S HOW IS SAM LEAVING GOING TO HELP ANYONE AND SAM ISN'T THE ONLY ONE TAKING THE CULLEN'S SIDE IN THIS SO DO THEY HAVE TO LEAVE AS WELL?
Date: 13 Sep 2012 7:47 AM Title: True Colors
I LIKE THE WAY YOU CHANGED SAM AND JACOB ROLLS IT A GREAT NEW TWISTI FOE ONE AM EXCITED TO SEE HOW YOU DO THIS NEW IDEA OF YOURS. OH AND SAM I A VERY SMART MAN HE REALLY LESSED TO WHAT BELLA HAD TO SAY AND THATS A VERY GOOD THING FOR A LEADER TO DO.
Date: 13 Sep 2012 2:57 AM Title: The Untold Story of Edward Cullen
I LOVE THE WAY EDWARD TOOK THEM WITH BABY TO THE MEDOW AND HOW HE OPENED UP TO BELLA AND TOLD HER ALL TO CLEAR THE AIR BETWEEN THEM AND HOW ALICE CAOM TO TAKE THE BABY SO SHE WOULDN'T HERE WHAT EDWARD THOUGHT OF HER BEFORE HE KNEW SHE WAS GOOD. ALL IN ALL THE CHAPTER WAS ONLY VERY PERFECT FOR ME. AS FOR A ONE SHOT OF EDWARDS SISTER SHE WAS ONLYTWO I DON'T THINK I WOULD READ IT BUT IF YOU HAVE IT IN YOUR HEART TO DO SO BY ALL MEANS DO IT FOR YOUR SELF AND THE REST OF US WILL FELLOW AND READ IT ANYWAYS JUST BECAUSE WE ARE YOUR FANS AND HOW KNOWS WE JUST MAY LOVE IT.
Date: 12 Sep 2012 6:13 AM Title: Meeting Renesmee
SO RENESMEE HASN'T TOUCHED BELLA CHEEK YET TO SHOW HER WHAT SHE CAN DO WHY NOT
Date: 12 Sep 2012 5:25 AM Title: Confrontation
WOW THAT COULD HAVE BEEN ONE HELL OF A FIGHT, I'M GLAD IT WASN'T. AND GOOD FOR BELLA TELLING JAKE OFF LIKE THAT WAS GREAT.
Date: 12 Sep 2012 3:48 AM Title: Conflict
PERFECT TIMING BELLA. GOTA LOVE THAT ALICE. SO NOW THEY ARE GOING TO WANT TO GO AFTER THE BABY RIGHT?
Date: 12 Sep 2012 2:50 AM Title: Doubts
SHIT I THOUGHT JAKE WAS GOING TO START A FIGHT OR SHIFT INTO A WOLF.
Date: 12 Sep 2012 1:15 AM Title: The Birth
WELL I JUST FINISHED THE FIRST CHAPTER AND LIKE IT VERY MUCH SO I'M OFF TO READ CHAPTER 2.
Date: 11 Sep 2012 8:42 PM Title: Chapter 18 - Family Ties
Didn't go the way the wolves hoped I bet. Hee hee
Date: 11 Sep 2012 3:44 PM Title: Chapter 17 Fact and Fiction
great chapter!
Date: 07 May 2012 9:19 PM Title: Chapter 17 Fact and Fiction
Funny chapter. Lol for him calling her a nympho. Glad ren is feeling better. Hmmm. Now who was Charlie talking too
Date: 26 Apr 2012 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 16
poor confused B. I agree. Lord knows what the wolves have been telling charlie.
Date: 22 Apr 2012 9:54 PM Title: Tattle Tale
Can't wait for more!
Date: 22 Apr 2012 7:02 PM Title: Tattle Tale
wow they've sure turned charlie against her huh?
Date: 06 Aug 2011 2:20 AM Title: Author's Note
THanks for letting us know about the delay. You take care of yourself; the story can wait until you're ready to continue it.
Date: 06 Aug 2011 1:48 AM Title: The Birth
RL creeps in on all of us hun. Work comes first for me too.
Date: 07 Jul 2011 7:18 PM Title: Motherhood
OH-OH?! Is it Renee?! A Quileute? Angela?!
Date: 07 Jul 2011 2:31 AM Title: Motherhood
I loved the little drama but fluff at the same time!!! Can't wait for more!!!
Date: 06 Jul 2011 7:34 PM Title: Motherhood
I THINK ITS LAUREN OR JESSICA??? I LOVE THIS STORY, I HAD TO REVIEW A COUPLE OF CHAPTERS TO CATCH MYSELF UP BUT ITS VERY GOOD!!! I CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE, ONE QUESTION AND MAYBE I MISSED IT BUT WHEN DID EDWARD AND BELLA HAVE SEX THE FIRST TIME AFTER THE CHANGE, WHEN HE SHOWED HER THE COTTAGE???
Author's Response:
one of your guesses is correct, although I won't tell you which one. Sorry, gotta keep stuff interesting.
Yes, Bella and Edward did have sex the night he showed her the cottage but it was left out of the story because many people begged me not to change the rating of the story. As soon as I feel a bit more confident that I won't screw up -no pun intended - Bella and Edward's first time as equals (meaning as soon as I've written a couple of more lemons) I'd write it down and post it as an outtake. :)
Thanks for reviewing. It means a lot.
Date: 06 Jul 2011 5:23 PM Title: Motherhood
Hmmm now who snuck in behind. thinking Jessica maybe or Emily?
Date: 20 May 2011 8:20 PM Title: Not a moment of peace
i love this story but is Jacob still going to imprint on Nessie? i didn't really like the whole imprint thing in Breaking Dawn really it was kind of creepy to me but whatever. I hope you update soon. Cant wait for some more Ness/Edward moments they are so cute!
Date: 15 May 2011 10:39 PM Title: Not a moment of peace
I loved the nursery bit!!! Can't wait for more!
Date: 15 May 2011 9:20 PM Title: Not a moment of peace
I thought it was cute when they were trying to pick out nursery's and then argue when they cute agree on one. Edward is such a great father wanting the best for his daugher. I thought it was cute when he wanted to go and check on a sleeping Renesemee. I'm glad that they were able to find a nursery that they were able to agree on. I think it's good that Sam came over and told them about whats going on. I think Jacob should be dealt with by the elders because I know he's going to try something. I just hope that he never succeeds. Bella and Edward deserve to be happy without him interferring. I know it's mean but he should just die. I would like to see it get steamier. I can't wait to read whats going to happen next. Please update soon.
Date: 15 May 2011 8:17 PM Title: Meeting Renesmee
great story !!!!
Date: 15 May 2011 5:14 PM Title: Not a moment of peace
Jacob needs to just grow up already.
Author's Response:
That he does and he will eventually. At some point loife forces everyone to grow up for some it happens later than for others...
Thanks for reviewing.
Mimozka
Date: 27 Mar 2011 4:12 PM Title: A Change of Heart
That was so sweet.
Author's Response:
thank you Irish_charm!
Date: 19 Mar 2011 5:32 PM Title: The Untold Story of Edward Cullen
Spur-schmur!! It was cute - but sad!! :-(
Date: 19 Mar 2011 5:10 PM Title: The Birth
Aw - TOO damn cute!! :-P More please?!
Date: 16 Mar 2011 9:39 PM Title: A Change of Heart
aww the flashback was so sweet i felt like crying! i loved it! glad you had an insparation attack. :) more soon?
Date: 14 Mar 2011 7:39 AM Title: Meeting Renesmee
Look at you, not sure where to take this story from here and there are 6 more chapters. Way to go!
This was a great chapter! Dadward is absolutely adoreable. You're doing a great job!
I also agree with the whole "growth spurt" thing w/Renesmee. Good call. It's not fair that after all B/E went through to get her here that they get cheated out of her childhood. Like you said, that goes for Ren, too.
Author's Response:
hey mldewolf,
I'm so happy you like where this is going so far... Yeah there are six more chapters but the story is starting to drag and that's due to my not being sure where I want to go with this story. I have most of it figured out but there's this missing moment... anyway, I'm glad you agree with my opinion on Renesmee.
Thanks for reviewing, it means a lot.
till next time,
Mimozka
Date: 14 Mar 2011 1:42 AM Title: A Change of Heart
The flashback was my favorite part I loved how the baby already loved them!
Date: 13 Mar 2011 11:56 PM Title: Confrontation
Man, you are saying everything I wanted said in the books. Thank you!! Excellent!!
Author's Response:
I'm glad you're satisfied with it and to be honest when it comes to the Bella PoV I was stating my own opinion on Jacob rather than hers really... But it worked out in the end...
Date: 13 Mar 2011 9:59 PM Title: Conflict
Don't hate you! Great chapter and a perfect cliffie! Atleast I don't have to wait for the next chapter. I can just jump to it (smirk).
Date: 13 Mar 2011 9:25 PM Title: The Birth
WOW!! This is great! Can't wait to keep reading. Gotta go......
Author's Response:
Glad you like it! :)
Date: 13 Mar 2011 7:13 PM Title: A Change of Heart
I thought the flashback was really cute. I loved when the baby said 'love you daddy' and when Edward told her he loved her too. I'm hoping that Jake won't be causing too much problems in any of the upcoming chapters. I can't want to read what's going to happen next. Please update soon.
Date: 13 Mar 2011 4:40 PM Title: A Change of Heart
flashback was cute.
Date: 22 Feb 2011 10:22 PM Title: Desicions Desicions
I'm now done reading and waiting for the next chapter, I love your story!
Date: 22 Feb 2011 5:28 AM Title: The Birth
I liked your birth scene. Sure I was a little surprised that Edward left her, but I'm so glad he spent the time with the baby.
Date: 21 Feb 2011 8:10 AM Title: Desicions Desicions
well that was a pussy move of them.
Date: 21 Feb 2011 8:06 AM Title: Party
hope seth comes to warn them
Date: 21 Feb 2011 8:01 AM Title: True Colors
oh jake you are a moron who is going to get people hurt.
Date: 21 Feb 2011 7:55 AM Title: The Untold Story of Edward Cullen
interesting backstory
Date: 21 Feb 2011 7:45 AM Title: First Hunt
lol spider monkey
Date: 21 Feb 2011 7:41 AM Title: Meeting Renesmee
glad they got to meet.
Date: 21 Feb 2011 7:37 AM Title: Confrontation
ahhh so I guess jake didnt "see" reneeseme then. Cool. Never did like that he imprinted on her.
Go bella. Put the boy in his place.
Date: 21 Feb 2011 4:31 AM Title: Desicions Desicions
I love Edward, Bella and Ren as a little family I can't wait to see the cottage and their life! Can't wait for more!
Date: 21 Feb 2011 2:19 AM Title: Meeting Renesmee
I love their little family!
Date: 20 Feb 2011 11:27 PM Title: Desicions Desicions
I don't think Jake should be a leader, he's not mature enough. He's acting like a kid. I think most of the people who live on the Reservation are the monsters. I can't believe they are making Sam leave La Push. I feel so bad for him. How can Billy make the promise about the pack not attacking the Cullens. You know that's exactly what Jake's going to want to do if he becomes leader, which I sincerely hope he doesn't. Hopefully the council will see That Jake isn't mature enough to handle it and give the position to someone else more worthy of it or decide to keep Sam.
Date: 20 Feb 2011 11:02 PM Title: Party
Like Bella I laughed a little at Edward's reaction to her wanting to carry him on her back like he used to carry her. Alice really annoys me sometimes, I don't like that everyone always let her get her way. But I'm glad that bella had a great birthday.
Date: 20 Feb 2011 10:37 PM Title: True Colors
I think Sam is being a great leader, and I hope the council can see that and not let Jake become the leader. Billy knows how obessed his son is with Bella and he should know that Jake only wants to be a leader because he wasn't happy with Sam's decissions.
Author's Response:
uh-oh. While you're right about Billy, you won't be very happy with what happens later on... just please remember that all will work out in the end!
Date: 20 Feb 2011 10:33 PM Title: The Untold Story of Edward Cullen
My heart just broke for Edward when he told his story about his little sister Evelyn. I admitt I had tears in my eyes. I think it's sweet that Bella wants to honor Evelyn, and name Renesmee after her and Edward's mother.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you liked that little twist in Edward's backstory. I admit this chapter was very exhausting to write, but it was worth it.
To be honest with you, I was very close to throwing cannon out the window and naming their daughter Elizabeth instead of Renesmee... lol I like Elizabeth Cullen better. :) Oh well, I can always do that in other stories...
Sorry for the rambling...
Thanks for reviewing!
Mimozka
Date: 20 Feb 2011 10:27 PM Title: First Hunt
Aww Edward is such a good dad, I can't believe he ever doubted his abilities about being a good parent. Edward, Bella, and Renesmee are such a cute family. I found it pretty funny when Edward ended up falling in the river because Bella never jumped.
Date: 20 Feb 2011 7:32 PM Title: Desicions Desicions
Oh-oh.... :-(
Author's Response:
don't worry it'll be alright eventually. :)
Date: 20 Feb 2011 7:23 PM Title: Meeting Renesmee
I just read all five chapters and I think you are doing an amazing job. I'm hoping that Jake is not going to ever imprint on Renesmee. I'm also hoping that Jake isn't going to be a problem.
Author's Response:
Oh My God! Thank you for reviewing and not giving up on the story! Thank you!
Worry not, Hell will freeze over before Jacob imprints on Renesmee! ;-) As to Jake being a problem... I don't know, I'm basically making the story up as I go, lol.
Thank you from the bottom of my heart for the review!
till next time,
Mimozka
Date: 08 Aug 2010 10:54 PM Title: Conflict
ooh she;s awake!
Date: 08 Aug 2010 10:41 PM Title: The Birth
i loved it and i felt the fatherly love so much, he is so adorbale with her!
Author's Response:
He really is adorable... Too bad we didn't get to see that in BD, eh? Oh well, that's part of the reason we're going to have plenty of Dadward in this story ;) the other part is because I can't help myself!
Date: 08 Aug 2010 11:40 AM Title: Conflict
i love it and i hope u continue its definetly going on my favorites and im waiting in suspense to see what happens :)
Author's Response:
Thank you Darling! Of course I'm continuing this!
Date: 07 Aug 2010 7:05 PM Title: Conflict
Frankly, the cliffy in this Ch. is only your second crime... I'm sorry, but your editing was TRULY awful!! :-( This like several big paragraphs rolled into one and TBH I had a hard time reading it - the Ch. itself was good but having to read badly-edited text(VERY long paragraphs, no proper spacing) is a real drag....!
Author's Response:
I get it! Perhaps it has something to do with me not using default size and font when typing in Word... Anyway, thank you for telling me that! I'll take a look at it and fix it!
Date: 07 Aug 2010 3:28 PM Title: Conflict
UGH!!!! Your REALLY killing me here!!! Update like soon PLEASE!!!
Date: 08 Jul 2010 3:18 PM Title: The Birth
awww, looking good so far!
~Tiffany
Date: 02 Jul 2010 8:10 PM Title: The Birth
Omg i freakin loved it!!!
Date: 02 Jul 2010 5:39 PM Title: The Birth
amazing chapter amazing