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Reviewer: catebloodred Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2016 6:58 AM Title: The Birth

So cute! Love it. :)

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 May 2014 4:57 AM Title: Aftermath

I hope jacob happy with himself. He lost friends,pack,himself. I don't think jacob has a brain at all I mean where did it go? Charlie final take bella side.

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 May 2014 4:50 AM Title: True Colors

So I guess the wolves lost some of there pack.

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 May 2014 4:48 AM Title: Confrontation

About time bella tell jacob off.

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 May 2014 4:44 AM Title: Doubts

Jacob should learn to shut up.

Reviewer: crystal misty Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2014 8:51 PM Title: Aftermath

Love it ,please finish story.

 

Reviewer: crystal misty Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2014 8:36 AM Title: Meeting Renesmee

Love story,i think wolf all jerk but seth !

Reviewer: Terass Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Jan 2014 6:16 PM Title: The Untold Story of Edward Cullen

I really loved this chapter it was sad but sweet and i love the middle name

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2014 5:49 AM Title: Aftermath

This is awesome! 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2014 1:22 AM Title: Aftermath

Oh jake and leah would be perfect for each other....jackasses,, both.  Go Charlie!!!   Hmm wonder if Tanya is going to behave

Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2014 3:55 PM Title: Aftermath

I mainly read this on FFn. When're you gonna update it over there. The no. of people abandoning the fandom and/or their fics on this place has sorta turned me off it. I really only read it now when I want the uncensored versions of work already on FFn.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2014 10:32 AM Title: Aftermath

I'm curious too, as to the compromise that Carlisle worked out with the wolves. The great things is having her parents privy to the secret means Bella gets to keep them in her life. What could be better?

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2014 10:21 AM Title: Chapter 18 - Family Ties

That all went wonderfully well, and I'm almost as glad as Bella to have her parents aware of all the facts of her new existence, inckuding their grandaughter! Now unless Jake goes on a rampage, life should be much happier for all concerned! Hope you finish this someday, or maybe I can find more on fan fic.com.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2014 9:53 AM Title: Chapter 17 Fact and Fiction

Good thing Bella remembered about Kaure and the internet sites, that got the ball rolling. Now it looks like Alice and Jasper will take a trip to Rio. It sure would help to have more information on creatures like Ren. I look forward to the talk between Bella and Charlie.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2014 9:29 AM Title: Chapter 16

Hard to say what Charlie has been told about Bella, by the Quileutes, so I don't blame her for wanting to tell her side of it! Hope Billy is going to be okay, too.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2014 9:15 AM Title: Tattle Tale

What a relief to find out it was just a cold! Sure scared everybody! It must have been a shock for Charlie to see his daughter looking different! Wonder if he will be out to the house for explanations?

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2014 9:02 AM Title: Author's Note

Sounds like you had a tough summer that year!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2014 9:00 AM Title: Motherhood

There is no more helpless feeling than having a sick baby! They can't tell you what's wrong and where it hurts! I'm glad Carlisle dressed down the snarky nurse, by the way. Edward is going to freak and who is it who just reconized Bella?

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2014 8:46 AM Title: Not a moment of peace

Sounds like they found the perfect nursery for Ren! I have to agree with sentiment, can't they ever just have peace and quiet?

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2014 8:19 AM Title: A Change of Heart

That was fluffy, but I really liked it, especially the flashback!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2014 7:57 AM Title: Desicions Desicions

Is it just Sam and Emily that will have to leave, or is it the other four as well? I wouldn't think Sue would let Seth go! This is pretty sad for Sam, and I don't think Billy is veryhappy about it or with his son!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2014 7:27 AM Title: Party

Wonder what embarassing thing Emmett came up with for Bella's birthday? If she thinks a car is extravagant, wait until she sees the cottage! This was a nice interlude before you plunge them into danger once again, no doubt! Jake won't hesitate to make a damn fool of himself, I'll bet!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2014 7:01 AM Title: True Colors

Trust Jacob to be everything Bella accused him of, and more! The self-centered little punk can't see beyond what he wants and believes, the truth not withstanding! Kind of feel bad for Sam, Seth, Paul, Quil and Jared. Where are they supposed to go now that Jake has banished them, what about their imprints?

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2014 6:36 AM Title: The Untold Story of Edward Cullen

A one-shot of Edward's little sister would be both sweet and heart-breaking. Losing a child like that would be soul-crushing for anyone. Glad to hear Edward confess his fears to his wife, as she said, sharing their feelings and problems is always  the way to avoid misunderstanding.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2014 5:46 AM Title: First Hunt

Bella's first kill a mountain lion is perfect! A picnic in the meadow is even better, and the description of Ren's outfit was just darling!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2014 5:06 AM Title: Meeting Renesmee

I was fine with the story in BD, but your idea for the growth rate and intelligence of their child is just right! They will have more time with her and she can be more normal!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2014 4:47 AM Title: Confrontation

Bravo Bella! She did a fabulous job of putting Jacob in his place and pointing out what he really had done in their relationship! She came through this change in wonderful shape! That's standard operating procedure for Bella Swan Cullen, I guess!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2014 4:29 AM Title: Conflict

The whole pack just shows up and Jake thinks he can somehow have anything to say about Bella? Looks like she will have the final word! Hope it saves a fight!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2014 4:09 AM Title: Doubts

Poor Charlie, thinking Bella may be dying! Sure set Jacob's tail on fire and got him over to the Cullen house in a big hurry! There he thoroughly pissed off the new daddy, made a rude fool of himself and got tossed out! This amazing child is affecting everyone involved, in a mostly positive way.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2014 3:26 AM Title: The Birth

Really good rendition of the birth of Renessmee! You have Edward a bit more of a basket case than in the original story.

Reviewer: ChristineDaee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Nov 2012 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 18 - Family Ties

love this so far! cant wait to read more

Reviewer: PattinsonsDiscoStickIsMine Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Sep 2012 7:01 AM Title: Chapter 18 - Family Ties

I LOVE THE OUT COME OF THERE MEETING I'M NOT SO SURE THE WOLFPACK WILL BE SO HAPPY THAT CHARLIE AND RENEE ARE SO EXCEPTING OF BELLA AND THE CULLEN FAMILY I MEAN AFTER ALL DIDN'T JAKE TELL THEM ABOUT BELLA AND THE CULLEN'S TO MAKE TROUBLE FOR THEM? WELL IT DIDN'T WORK SO NOW ARE THE PACK GOING TO BE PISSED AT CHARLIE NOW AS WELL? I HATE THAT IT SOUNDS LIKE THE STORY IS ALMOST OVER BECAUSE I REALLY DI LOVE IT EVEN THOUGH I HAVEN'T REVIEWED MUCH IT'S A GREAT STORY SO HERE'S A QUESTION IS THERE A SQUEAL COMING?

Reviewer: edwards_girl_4_ever2 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Sep 2012 4:35 AM Title: Chapter 18 - Family Ties

That was amazing

Reviewer: PattinsonsDiscoStickIsMine Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Sep 2012 3:40 AM Title: Tattle Tale

CHARLIE SHOULDN'T HAVE TREATED BELLA LIKE THAT. SHE'S HIS DAUGHTER AFTER ALL.

Reviewer: PattinsonsDiscoStickIsMine Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Sep 2012 6:07 PM Title: Not a moment of peace

SO SAM AND THE OTHERS THAT ARE STILL IN HIS PACK ARE STICKING AROUND TO MAKE SURE THE OTHER PACK DOESN'T COME AFTER THE CULLEN'S? AM I RIGHT?

Reviewer: PattinsonsDiscoStickIsMine Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Sep 2012 9:14 AM Title: Desicions Desicions

WHAT ARE THEY NUTS SAM LEAVE IS IT A TRAP ON THE CULLEN'S? SAM LEAVES AND THEN THE WOLF PACK GOES AFTER THE CULLEN'S HOW IS SAM LEAVING GOING TO HELP ANYONE AND SAM ISN'T THE ONLY ONE TAKING THE CULLEN'S SIDE IN THIS SO DO THEY HAVE TO LEAVE AS WELL?

Reviewer: PattinsonsDiscoStickIsMine Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Sep 2012 7:47 AM Title: True Colors

I LIKE THE WAY YOU CHANGED SAM AND JACOB ROLLS IT A GREAT NEW TWISTI FOE ONE AM EXCITED TO SEE HOW YOU DO THIS NEW IDEA OF YOURS. OH AND SAM I A VERY SMART MAN HE REALLY LESSED TO WHAT BELLA HAD TO SAY AND THATS A VERY GOOD THING FOR A LEADER TO DO.

Reviewer: PattinsonsDiscoStickIsMine Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Sep 2012 2:57 AM Title: The Untold Story of Edward Cullen

I LOVE THE WAY EDWARD TOOK THEM WITH BABY TO THE MEDOW AND HOW HE OPENED UP TO BELLA AND TOLD HER ALL TO CLEAR THE AIR BETWEEN THEM AND HOW ALICE CAOM TO TAKE THE BABY SO SHE WOULDN'T HERE WHAT EDWARD THOUGHT OF HER BEFORE HE KNEW SHE WAS GOOD. ALL IN ALL THE CHAPTER WAS ONLY VERY PERFECT FOR ME. AS FOR A ONE SHOT OF EDWARDS SISTER SHE WAS ONLYTWO I DON'T THINK I WOULD READ IT BUT IF YOU HAVE IT IN YOUR HEART TO DO SO BY ALL MEANS DO IT FOR YOUR SELF AND THE REST OF US WILL FELLOW AND READ IT ANYWAYS JUST BECAUSE WE ARE YOUR FANS AND HOW KNOWS WE JUST MAY LOVE IT.

Reviewer: PattinsonsDiscoStickIsMine Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Sep 2012 6:13 AM Title: Meeting Renesmee

SO RENESMEE HASN'T TOUCHED BELLA CHEEK YET TO SHOW HER WHAT SHE CAN DO WHY NOT

Reviewer: PattinsonsDiscoStickIsMine Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Sep 2012 5:25 AM Title: Confrontation

WOW THAT COULD HAVE BEEN ONE HELL OF A FIGHT, I'M GLAD IT WASN'T. AND GOOD FOR BELLA TELLING JAKE OFF LIKE THAT WAS GREAT.

Reviewer: PattinsonsDiscoStickIsMine Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Sep 2012 3:48 AM Title: Conflict

PERFECT TIMING BELLA. GOTA LOVE THAT ALICE. SO NOW THEY ARE GOING TO WANT TO GO AFTER THE BABY RIGHT?

Reviewer: PattinsonsDiscoStickIsMine Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Sep 2012 2:50 AM Title: Doubts

SHIT I THOUGHT JAKE WAS GOING TO START A FIGHT OR SHIFT INTO A WOLF.

Reviewer: PattinsonsDiscoStickIsMine Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Sep 2012 1:15 AM Title: The Birth

WELL I JUST FINISHED THE FIRST CHAPTER AND LIKE IT VERY MUCH SO I'M OFF TO READ CHAPTER 2.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2012 8:42 PM Title: Chapter 18 - Family Ties

Didn't go the way the wolves hoped I bet. Hee hee

Reviewer: ChristineDaee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2012 3:44 PM Title: Chapter 17 Fact and Fiction

great chapter!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 May 2012 9:19 PM Title: Chapter 17 Fact and Fiction

Funny chapter. Lol for him calling her a nympho. Glad ren is feeling better. Hmmm. Now who was Charlie talking too

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Apr 2012 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 16

poor confused B.   I agree.  Lord knows what the wolves have been telling charlie.

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2012 9:54 PM Title: Tattle Tale

Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2012 7:02 PM Title: Tattle Tale

wow  they've sure turned charlie against her huh?

Reviewer: Coleen561 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Aug 2011 2:20 AM Title: Author's Note

THanks for letting us know about the delay.  You take care of yourself; the story can wait until you're ready to continue it.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Aug 2011 1:48 AM Title: The Birth

RL creeps in on all of us hun.  Work comes first for me too.

Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2011 7:18 PM Title: Motherhood

OH-OH?! Is it Renee?! A Quileute? Angela?!

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2011 2:31 AM Title: Motherhood

I loved the little drama but fluff at the same time!!! Can't wait for more!!!

Reviewer: nancy123k Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2011 7:34 PM Title: Motherhood

I THINK ITS LAUREN OR JESSICA??? I LOVE THIS STORY, I HAD TO REVIEW A COUPLE OF CHAPTERS TO CATCH MYSELF UP BUT ITS VERY GOOD!!! I CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE, ONE QUESTION AND MAYBE I MISSED IT BUT WHEN DID EDWARD AND BELLA HAVE SEX THE FIRST TIME AFTER THE CHANGE, WHEN HE SHOWED HER THE COTTAGE???



Author's Response:

one of your guesses is correct, although I won't tell you which one. Sorry, gotta keep stuff interesting.

Yes, Bella and Edward did have sex the night he showed her the cottage but it was left out of the story because many people begged me not to change the rating of the story. As soon as I feel a bit more confident that I won't screw up -no pun intended - Bella and Edward's first time as equals (meaning as soon as I've written a couple of more lemons) I'd write it down and post it as an outtake. :) 

 

Thanks for reviewing. It means a lot.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2011 5:23 PM Title: Motherhood

Hmmm now who snuck in behind.   thinking Jessica maybe or Emily?

Reviewer: the writer biter Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 May 2011 8:20 PM Title: Not a moment of peace

i love this story but is Jacob still going to imprint on Nessie? i didn't really like the whole imprint thing in Breaking Dawn really it was kind of creepy to me but whatever. I hope you update soon. Cant wait for some more Ness/Edward moments they are so cute!

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 May 2011 10:39 PM Title: Not a moment of peace

I loved the nursery bit!!! Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: Leibeezer Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 May 2011 9:20 PM Title: Not a moment of peace

I thought it was cute when they were trying to pick out nursery's and then argue when they cute agree on one.  Edward is such a great father wanting the best for his daugher.  I thought it was cute when he wanted to go and check on a sleeping Renesemee.  I'm glad that they were able to find a nursery that they were able to agree on.  I think it's good that Sam came over and told them about whats going on.  I think Jacob should be dealt with by the elders because I know he's going to try something.  I just hope that he never succeeds.  Bella and Edward deserve to be happy without him interferring.  I know it's mean but he should just die.  I would like to see it get steamier.  I can't wait to read whats going to happen next.  Please update soon.

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 May 2011 8:17 PM Title: Meeting Renesmee

great story !!!!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 May 2011 5:14 PM Title: Not a moment of peace

Jacob needs to just grow up already.



Author's Response:

That he does and he will eventually. At some point loife forces everyone to grow up for some it happens later than for others...

Thanks for reviewing.

Mimozka

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2011 4:12 PM Title: A Change of Heart

That was so sweet.



Author's Response:

thank you Irish_charm!

Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2011 5:32 PM Title: The Untold Story of Edward Cullen

Spur-schmur!! It was cute - but sad!! :-(

Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2011 5:10 PM Title: The Birth

Aw - TOO damn cute!! :-P More please?!

Reviewer: the writer biter Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2011 9:39 PM Title: A Change of Heart

aww the flashback was so sweet i felt like crying! i loved it! glad you had an insparation attack. :) more soon?

Reviewer: mldewolf Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Mar 2011 7:39 AM Title: Meeting Renesmee

Look at you, not sure where to take this story from here and there are 6 more chapters.  Way to go!

This was a great chapter!  Dadward is absolutely adoreable.  You're doing a great job!

I also agree with the whole "growth spurt" thing w/Renesmee.  Good call.  It's not fair that after all B/E went through to get her here that they get cheated out of her childhood.  Like you said, that goes for Ren, too.



Author's Response:

hey mldewolf,

I'm so happy you like where this is going so far... Yeah there are six more chapters but the story is starting to drag and that's due to my not being sure where I want to go with this story. I have most of it figured out but there's this missing moment... anyway, I'm glad you agree with my opinion on Renesmee.

Thanks for reviewing, it means a lot.

 

till next time,

 

Mimozka

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Mar 2011 1:42 AM Title: A Change of Heart

The flashback was my favorite part I loved how the baby already loved them!

Reviewer: mldewolf Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Mar 2011 11:56 PM Title: Confrontation

Man, you are saying everything I wanted said in the books.  Thank you!!  Excellent!!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you're satisfied with it and to be honest when it comes to the Bella PoV I was stating my own opinion on Jacob rather than hers really... But it worked out in the end...

Reviewer: mldewolf Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Mar 2011 9:59 PM Title: Conflict

Don't hate you!  Great chapter and a perfect cliffie!  Atleast I don't have to wait for the next chapter.  I can just jump to it (smirk).

Reviewer: mldewolf Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Mar 2011 9:43 PM Title: Doubts

Again, WOW!!

Reviewer: mldewolf Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Mar 2011 9:25 PM Title: The Birth

WOW!!  This is great!  Can't wait to keep reading.  Gotta go......



Author's Response:

Glad you like it! :)

Reviewer: Leibeezer Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Mar 2011 7:13 PM Title: A Change of Heart

I thought the flashback was really cute.  I loved when the baby said 'love you daddy' and when Edward told her he loved her too.  I'm hoping that Jake won't be causing too much problems in any of the upcoming chapters.  I can't want to read what's going to happen next.  Please update soon.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Mar 2011 4:40 PM Title: A Change of Heart

flashback was cute.

Reviewer: Catemom Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Feb 2011 10:22 PM Title: Desicions Desicions

I'm now done reading and waiting for the next chapter, I love your story!

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Feb 2011 5:28 AM Title: The Birth

I liked your birth scene. Sure I was a little surprised that Edward left her, but I'm so glad he spent the time with the baby.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2011 8:10 AM Title: Desicions Desicions

well that was a pussy move of them.

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Date: 21 Feb 2011 8:06 AM Title: Party

hope seth comes to warn them

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2011 8:01 AM Title: True Colors

oh jake you are a moron who is going to get people hurt.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2011 7:55 AM Title: The Untold Story of Edward Cullen

interesting backstory

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2011 7:45 AM Title: First Hunt

lol spider monkey

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Date: 21 Feb 2011 7:41 AM Title: Meeting Renesmee

glad they got to meet.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2011 7:37 AM Title: Confrontation

ahhh so I guess jake didnt "see" reneeseme then.   Cool.  Never did like that he imprinted on her.

Go bella.  Put the boy in his place.

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2011 4:31 AM Title: Desicions Desicions

I love Edward, Bella and Ren as a little family I can't wait to see the cottage and their life! Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2011 2:19 AM Title: Meeting Renesmee

I love their little family!

Reviewer: Leibeezer Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Feb 2011 11:27 PM Title: Desicions Desicions

I don't think Jake should be a leader, he's not mature enough.  He's acting like a kid.  I think most of the people who live on the Reservation are the monsters.  I can't believe they are making Sam leave La Push.  I feel so bad for him.  How can Billy make the promise about the pack not attacking the Cullens.  You know that's exactly what  Jake's going to want to do if he becomes leader, which I sincerely hope he doesn't.  Hopefully the council will see That Jake isn't mature enough to handle it and give the position to someone else more worthy of it or decide to keep Sam.

Reviewer: Leibeezer Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Feb 2011 11:02 PM Title: Party

Like Bella I laughed a little at Edward's reaction to her wanting to carry him on her back like he used to carry her.  Alice really annoys me sometimes, I don't like that everyone always let her get her way.  But I'm glad that bella had a great birthday.

Reviewer: Leibeezer Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Feb 2011 10:37 PM Title: True Colors

I think Sam is being a great leader, and I hope the council can see that and not let Jake become the leader.  Billy knows how obessed his son is with Bella and he should know that Jake only wants to be a leader because he wasn't happy with Sam's decissions. 



Author's Response:

uh-oh. While you're right about Billy, you won't be very happy with what happens later on... just please remember that all will work out in the end!

Reviewer: Leibeezer Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Feb 2011 10:33 PM Title: The Untold Story of Edward Cullen

My heart just broke for Edward when he told his story about his little sister Evelyn.  I admitt I had tears in my eyes.  I think it's sweet that Bella wants to honor Evelyn, and name Renesmee after her and Edward's mother. 



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked that little twist in Edward's backstory. I admit this chapter was very exhausting to write, but it was worth it.

To be honest with you, I was very close to throwing cannon out the window and naming their daughter Elizabeth instead of Renesmee... lol I like Elizabeth Cullen better. :) Oh well, I can always do that in other stories...

 

Sorry for the rambling...

Thanks for reviewing!

 

Mimozka

Reviewer: Leibeezer Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Feb 2011 10:27 PM Title: First Hunt

Aww Edward is such a good dad, I can't believe he ever doubted his abilities about being a good parent.  Edward, Bella, and Renesmee are such a cute family.  I found it pretty funny when Edward ended up falling in the river because Bella never jumped. 

Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Feb 2011 7:32 PM Title: Desicions Desicions

Oh-oh.... :-(



Author's Response:

don't worry it'll be alright eventually. :)

Reviewer: Leibeezer Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Feb 2011 7:23 PM Title: Meeting Renesmee

I just read all five chapters and I think you are doing an amazing job.  I'm hoping that Jake is not going to ever imprint on Renesmee.  I'm also hoping that Jake isn't going to be a problem.



Author's Response:

Oh My God! Thank you for reviewing and not giving up on the story! Thank you!

Worry not, Hell will freeze over before Jacob imprints on Renesmee! ;-) As to Jake being a problem... I don't know, I'm basically making the story up as I go, lol.

 

Thank you from the bottom of my heart for the review!

 

till next time,

 

Mimozka

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2010 10:54 PM Title: Conflict

ooh she;s awake!

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Date: 08 Aug 2010 10:41 PM Title: The Birth

i loved it and i felt the fatherly love so much, he is so adorbale with her!



Author's Response:

He really is adorable... Too bad we didn't get to see that in BD, eh? Oh well, that's part of the reason we're going to have plenty of Dadward in this story ;) the other part is because I can't help myself!

Reviewer: MACMONKEY Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2010 11:40 AM Title: Conflict

i love it and i hope u continue its definetly going on my favorites and im waiting in suspense to see what happens :)



Author's Response:

Thank you Darling! Of course I'm continuing this!

Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2010 7:05 PM Title: Conflict

Frankly, the cliffy in this Ch. is only your second crime... I'm sorry, but your editing was TRULY awful!! :-( This like several big paragraphs rolled into one and TBH I had a hard time reading it - the Ch. itself was good but having to read badly-edited text(VERY long paragraphs, no proper spacing) is a real drag....!



Author's Response:

I get it! Perhaps it has something to do with me not using default size and font when typing in Word... Anyway, thank you for telling me that! I'll take a look at it and fix it!

Reviewer: Missie33 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2010 3:28 PM Title: Conflict

UGH!!!! Your REALLY killing me here!!! Update like soon PLEASE!!!

Reviewer: patch138 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2010 3:18 PM Title: The Birth

awww, looking good so far!

 

~Tiffany

Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2010 4:34 AM Title: Doubts

I love it.

Reviewer: Missie33 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2010 8:10 PM Title: The Birth

Omg i freakin loved it!!!

Reviewer: Flynnstones Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2010 5:50 PM Title: Doubts

aww poor jacob

Reviewer: Flynnstones Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2010 5:39 PM Title: The Birth

amazing chapter amazing

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