[Report This]Date: 21 Feb 2017 4:07 PM Title: Chapter 1
Sweet mother of unholy mercies! The delicious things this one-shot fic did to me...wow.
*tucks into 'unf me' file*
Date: 22 Mar 2011 1:46 PM Title: Chapter 1
No, i think the pool is out of the game for now.
sheesh, talk about free love.
this was a good one shot ;D
Date: 28 Jun 2010 1:25 AM Title: Chapter 1
ok so i dont really review stories very much becasue i havent found very many i really like but i loved this one. i really hope that you write more for it, that would be like the best thing ever. well thank you for this wonderful piece.
[Report This]Date: 25 Jun 2010 12:30 PM Title: Chapter 1
What a hot little number LOL.
Date: 25 Jun 2010 2:31 AM Title: Chapter 1
I totally think you should continue it! I agree! Peek in at Peter and Bella!
Date: 24 Jun 2010 5:01 AM Title: Chapter 1
That was hot!! I would love to peek in Bella and Peter!
Date: 24 Jun 2010 3:40 AM Title: Chapter 1
Luscious! Jazz and Charlotte together while Bella and Peter are enjoying the same. If you do add another chapter, Bella and Peter should SO be it...with a little more Bella and Charlotte thrown in. Perhaps even Jazz and Peter! But this chapter...damn I enjoyed this!
[Report This]Date: 24 Jun 2010 2:39 AM Title: Chapter 1
Excellent! Who knew that bikini shopping could be so fun? :)
Date: 24 Jun 2010 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 1
Very hot. I just pretended I was in the changing room with Jasper!
Date: 23 Jun 2010 11:08 PM Title: Chapter 1
That was incredible
Date: 23 Jun 2010 11:00 PM Title: Chapter 1
Well now. That is something totally different that I want more of!