Date: 02 Aug 2016 2:50 PM Title: Chapter 34
Loved the lemon. I do not blame any of them for not going to Victoria's funeral. But in the end Victoria did try to save Bella by untying her hands, so I guess she had a little good in her. There has not been any mention of them calling and telling Charlie, Jasper, Alice or Tanya about Victoria and James. Wonder what their reaction was.
Date: 01 Aug 2016 5:46 PM Title: Chapter 25
I'm glad we found out that Carlisle's lawyer took care of Edward's divorce and parental rights. I was afraid James had legally screwed Edward without anyone knowing it. Hope Jenks can find out some information on James
Date: 12 Sep 2012 11:05 AM Title: Epilogue
Hi, I really enjoyed this, and was so happy to find it.
I also wanted to share a quotation with you from the late great Frank Zappa:
"The mind is like a Parachute, it only works when it's open".
Many thanks, i'm off to find your other works, now! T
Date: 26 Jun 2012 9:36 AM Title: Chapter 26
Poor Edward, he just doesn't want to think his friend could be the bad guy. He better learn to listen to Bella's intuition, she spotted that evil bastard right off the bat! Glad that Charlie kind of likes Edward, too. That will be a help.
Date: 26 Jun 2012 8:06 AM Title: Chapter 21
Well Edward, what can I say? Bella has a lot of family and friends who care about her. As a result, they keep showing up on your doorstep! I keep forgetting to mention how many tears have been shed in this story. I sure hope there will an equal amount of happy to balance the sad!
Date: 26 Jun 2012 6:23 AM Title: Chapter 16
If Demetri thinks he's going to move on Bella, I think Edward will have some strong objections! The three of them have had a good day together, and now that Alice is here I'm sure Bella feels better. She may as well acknowledge how attracted to Edward she is, too.
Date: 26 Jun 2012 5:25 AM Title: Chapter 13
The more Bella finds out about this family, the more she knows she did the right thing bringing Jackson to meet them. They are all getting to know each other, and as long as Victoria doesn't stick her nose in all should be fine! Even Edward is loosening up a bit.
Date: 26 Jun 2012 4:52 AM Title: Chapter 11
Just had a feeling you would write Edward this way. His reaction to Bella and seeing his son again are all over the place. Carlisle and Esme's home sounds wonderful. I would stay there instead of a hotel if I had a choice. I'm very pleased Bella has stood up for herself and her son. The girl is made of good stuff, her dad would be proud.
Date: 26 Jun 2012 4:35 AM Title: Chapter 10
I'm sure things will turn nasty soon, but wouldn't you know, Edward and Bella take one look at each other and it's magic? Esme is my favorite, followed by Rosalie, then Carlisle and Emmett. Edward is an unknown factor so far. It would be wonderful if everything fell into place, but we know that won't happen, not for a long time anyway!
Date: 26 Jun 2012 3:54 AM Title: Chapter 8
Tanya is a really fierce friend, we should all have one like her! She sure has dug up some interesting stuff on Victoria, I hope someone nails her on it, the lying bitch! Of course, Bella is going to the right thing by her son, I would expect nothing less!
Date: 26 Jun 2012 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 7
Bella and Jack's house sounds just right and the two stores are going gang-busters. Alice and Jasper are finally married, and the only fly in the ointment was Jack's broken arm. All's well, and then the bombshell! Jack's parents may have been found! What does this mean for Bella?????
Date: 26 Jun 2012 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 6
That was a neat chapter, with the book deal and finding out about Jack's musical talent! Life is getting good for Bella and Jack, and then they bump into Renee. What an upsetting encounter that was! Bella sailed through with flying colors as did Jack. Kind of felt sorry for Phil, though.
Date: 26 Jun 2012 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 5
I kind of wondered when Bella began to copy out her nightly stories to Jack, if that couldn't work into something more. I guess I should buy that crystal ball I saw! Now that she's calling him son and he's calling her mommy, it's a natural step to making it official. Helps that Jasper will help her. Bella is surrounded by friends and family who all love and care for her. Lucky girl!
Date: 26 Jun 2012 2:43 AM Title: Chapter 4
I guess every cloud really does have a silver lining. By saving Bella from Jake's assault, she and Leah developed a lot better relationship than what they had. It also confirmed Bella's keeping her heart mostly for Jack and her family.
Date: 26 Jun 2012 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 3
You did a nice job of lining all this out and filling in the growing bond between Bella and Jack. He's doing so well fitting in to his adoptive home. Maybe because he's getting therapy and lots of love, the boy is adjusting real well. It sure was his lucky day when Bella found him!
Date: 26 Jun 2012 2:12 AM Title: Chapter 2
It really is who you know, I guess, but it sure worked out for the best this time! From what Jack can remember, it doesn't sound good, what happened in the park. It looks like his mother dropped him like a hot potatoe to get what the blonde guy had for her. I'm hoping they can't find his family too soon, so Bella can care for him.
Date: 26 Jun 2012 12:54 AM Title: Chapter 1
Quite a shopping trip! Bella sure found more than she was looking for. How can it be that a little boy could just turn up in a dirty alley in downtown Seattle? Boy, you just never know what the hell is going to happen, do you?
Date: 04 Sep 2011 3:24 PM Title: Epilogue
I have ahd this story book marked for a while to sit and read, and this story was very interesting to say the least. I loved it from start to finish. Great story line, and great characters. I love how you took the twilight characters and redid them in a way that was awesome. Keep up the great work. Im really looking forward to reading some of your other works. Im currently reading rabbit heart and its wonderful as well.
Date: 28 May 2011 6:10 PM Title: Epilogue
Absolutely loved this story. Its been in my too read list for a while now and I finally got around to reading it. I found it on a rec site and it had nothing but great reviews for it.
The dynamic of this story was perfect. I loved the plot and how the characters interacted. Also it was fun to see how you incorporated all the characters into the story. I have to admit I'm not a huge Jacob fan so "douche" Jacob didn't bother me. The only way I like Jacob being on the HEA side is if he's gay or an innocent brother-type.
I loved Jack. His personality was perfect. I laughed too many times to count with some of the things he did or said. All around, great story. I'm sad to see it end but I loved the HEA that it ended on.