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Reviewer: jnc420 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2010 11:13 PM Title: Chapter 5

LOVE LOVE LOVE great job!!!!

Reviewer: keola Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2010 10:41 PM Title: Chapter 5

i'm really enjoying this story

Reviewer: chmcolli Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2010 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 5

I wish I had some huge critique to give you, but all I can say is that I like your story a lot, and I am looking forward to the next chapter.

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2010 9:11 PM Title: Chapter 5

That was really good you killed me with the mbskd for jasper that was so funny . and talk about hot wall action loved it can't wait till the next update

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2010 8:29 PM Title: Chapter 5

Awesome!!!!  Loved the family interaction.  Surprised Bella did the deed as she seemed a little up tight at the beginning, but then again he did just resort her to a pile of goo so who in their right mind would or could say no to that hotness! 

Reviewer: childrenwith4legs Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2010 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 4

I have to tell you, I am really enjoying your story.  I found it a couple of days ago and I apologize for not reviewing now, I just wanted to read more.  I will try to do better in the future.

Anyway.... thanks for a great story so far and I'm looking forward to future chapters!  Thanks!

Reviewer: Sherry80 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2010 4:53 AM Title: Chapter 4

so good great chapter

Reviewer: hcullen74 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2010 6:45 AM Title: Chapter 4

loved it cant wait till the next one

Reviewer: tameas Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2010 8:15 PM Title: Chapter 4

I LOVE this story!!! Seth is super cute, Collin is adorable, and I like the way that the Cullens interact with each other!

I want to know who is following Bella, and why her boss is being so nice all of  a sudden.  I hope that you update soon!

Reviewer: twilightmom96 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2010 5:17 AM Title: Chapter 4

loved it :) I really like this Edward! Loved the My woman stuff

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2010 4:32 AM Title: Chapter 4

love it

Reviewer: kristaldunn Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2010 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 4

Great Story.....

Reviewer: gabys Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2010 1:15 AM Title: Chapter 4

Loved the chapter.

Reviewer: jnc420 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2010 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 4

Love this story so much!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2010 6:42 PM Title: Chapter 4

I am so happy you are updating this story.  So does Edward have a child in Arizona named Faith????  I love that he is trying to take care of Bella even form another state he is hooked

Reviewer: viking Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2010 5:46 PM Title: Chapter 4

Can't wait for dinner at the compound! Thanks for the chapter!

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2010 5:11 PM Title: Chapter 4

i loved it

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2010 5:03 PM Title: Chapter 4

Awesome, thanks for the update. I really miss your stories and hope you get your writing mojo back soon. I am patiently waiting for any update you want to throw at us!

Reviewer: viking Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2010 4:17 PM Title: Chapter 3

Great chapter!

Reviewer: viking Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2010 3:28 PM Title: Chapter 2

Great first date!  Thanks for the chapter!

Reviewer: viking Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2010 2:31 PM Title: Chapter 1

I think this is a great start!  Thanks for the chapter!

Reviewer: ougirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2010 1:13 PM Title: Chapter 4

Love it!! Update again soon please

Reviewer: bearygirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2010 12:58 PM Title: Chapter 4

Cant wait to read more.

Reviewer: slyt2 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2010 11:09 AM Title: Chapter 4

OK so even though Cullen was in Arizona seeing Faith? He still had to be the one who set this up with Bella's boss.. I am actually Bella didn't question or figute it out.. I guess maybe she is just so happy to have the extra cash it didn't dawn on her .... So back to this 'Faith' i am going to say it's either a ex of some kind that something bad happened to or i don't know .. Or Faith is the obvious Cullen's daughter... perhaps. But the way this family is so close i mean look at Collin and the family i would think any child would be with them even if Cullen is to busy to 'raise a child ' i would think Esme and Carlisle would 'baby sit' oh well we will found out soon enough about Faith.. Now i am a bit worried.. I just assumed since the last chapter it was mentioned the car that keeps driving by was Cullen, but it could have been since he was out of town all week..and with Bella living in a bad neighborhood that can't be good .. unless Edward hired someone to drive by and watch her... I wish he would have mentioned something about it in his POV..  so Alice is color blind huh, and now that Bella knows Jasper is part of the family i'm surprised she isn't dying knowing she forced him to take 5.00 dollars the other day... Surprised he didn't bring it up . Seth is just too cute.. i've always loved Seth character anyways but u just made him adore in this story. So sweet of Esme to make food for Bella... and Edward comes off bad ass (sexy) but he really is caring.. i mean he really thinks things through . how many guys would realize how hard and long she works and goes to school so she doesn't have time to make 'huge dinners and healthy ones at that' ... Great chapter can't wait to read next one..

Reviewer: Sherry80 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2010 11:14 PM Title: Chapter 3

that was good can't wait for more really love Cocky Edward so hot

Reviewer: Flynnstones Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2010 5:17 PM Title: Chapter 3

very well written chapter

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2010 8:45 AM Title: Chapter 3

Loved it that is so cool that he includes Seth in thing.  I hope things are working out for you. 

Reviewer: Nara13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2010 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 3

I really, really, really loooove this Edward. He is all kinds of awesome! So excited to read about Sunday dinner with the parental units. :)

Reviewer: twilightmom96 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2010 3:10 AM Title: Chapter 3

loved it!

Reviewer: bbydoll703 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2010 12:08 AM Title: Chapter 3

They just need to do it already lol ;)

 

But seriously, great story.  I can't wait for the next update.

Reviewer: inked-mom Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2010 12:08 AM Title: Chapter 3

Awesome fuckin' chapter!!

Reviewer: inked-mom Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2010 11:46 PM Title: Chapter 2

I'm lovin' this story!! I just came across it tonight and decided it's a deff must read....

Reviewer: falcon56 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2010 9:36 PM Title: Chapter 3

hurry back....

Reviewer: jnc420 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2010 9:33 PM Title: Chapter 3

LOVED IT!

Reviewer: Panda_Blitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2010 10:03 PM Title: Chapter 2

Dude! I love it! please update soon!

Reviewer: Sherry80 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2010 7:29 PM Title: Chapter 2

yeah great chapter can't wait for more

Reviewer: hcullen74 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2010 6:18 AM Title: Chapter 2

loved it

Reviewer: Flynnstones Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2010 5:26 PM Title: Chapter 2

loved this chapter :)

Reviewer: bearygirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2010 2:54 PM Title: Chapter 2

Cant wait to read more.

Reviewer: jnc420 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2010 1:30 PM Title: Chapter 2

OMG I LOVE THIS.....can't wait to read more

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2010 8:50 AM Title: Chapter 2

That was on amazing first date so she broke the rule of not kissing til the second date what rule is she going to break on the second one.  I love Jake the heshe with a heart of gold.  What an amazing 13 year old willing to hang with Jake and not have issues with it.  I cant wait for more you have me by the short hairs on this story LOL

Reviewer: soundsofmusic Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2010 7:10 AM Title: Chapter 2

I'm so glad you decide to make it a full length story, it is way too amazing to leave as a one shot! And I'm glad you finally answered the mystery of what happened to Bella and Seth's parents, that was driving me crazy, lol. This chapter was so good, and I loved the entire scene in the car. It was nice to see a more caring side of Edward. I can't wait to see where this story goes!

Reviewer: birdfobe Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2010 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 1

Why does Seth not live with Charlie and Sue? Just wondering

Reviewer: Nara13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2010 9:07 PM Title: Chapter 1

I definitely think you should continue this into a full story. It's really great. If you do continue it can you change it to a M or NC-17 so we can experience some action other than motorcross? LOL! Seriously though, it really is a great story. I hope you keep it going.

Reviewer: NKTwiworld Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2010 6:33 AM Title: Chapter 1

I love it, please, please add more!

Reviewer: fazza Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2010 6:45 PM Title: Chapter 1

really good i think know it'd be a great story,got a great storyline...so i'll be waiting =]

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2010 3:22 PM Title: Chapter 1

Why are you even asking?  Of course we want you to continue!!!!!!!!!   So, when can we expect the new chapter?????

Reviewer: Sherry80 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2010 1:32 PM Title: Chapter 1

I totally agree you should continue it great storyline really like it

Reviewer: Blue eyed angel Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2010 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 1

I love this.  I agree that it should be a story.

Reviewer: katj83 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2010 9:45 PM Title: Chapter 1

awesome start....u definately cant just leave it there!!!!!!

Reviewer: Lizzie Ashden Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2010 3:30 PM Title: Chapter 1

YES CONTINUE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Awesome story

Pleassseeee continue

xx

Reviewer: lollyblu Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2010 7:13 AM Title: Chapter 1

STORY!

Reviewer: bearygirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2010 4:21 AM Title: Chapter 1

Would love to read more.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2010 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 1

Yes this needs to be a story.  Love it so far.  What happened to Charlie and Sue???  I love the guy Jake the queen lol



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the review. LOL glad you liked Jake the queen. If I expand the story I will get into what happened to Charlie and Sue. As well as Phil and Renee.

Reviewer: kymmie Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2010 1:52 AM Title: Chapter 1

I think this would be a great story. I hope you write more.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the review :0)

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2010 12:19 AM Title: Chapter 1

um YEAH? you should definately make this a story. I can see this going places but would this remain T or would it go up to maybe a M rating? just curious. I would read it anyway. :) thanks again bye



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the review. If I do expand it, it will go to an M or NC-17 rating.

Reviewer: soundsofmusic Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2010 11:41 PM Title: Chapter 1

This is so good so far! I have to say I'm kind of a sucker for a cocky Edward. ...And that sounded a lot dirtier than I meant it, lol. I am really excited about this stroy and I can't wait to see where you take it!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the review. LOL I love a cocky Edward too ;0)

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