[Report This]Date: 13 Jan 2011 10:13 PM Title: Chapter 1
Ooh I love it. I can't wait till it's out so I can find out what's up with Jonah.
Date: 12 Jan 2011 7:39 AM Title: Chapter 1
Thanks for the sneak peak! Nothing better than a mysterious musician living in above you. And I'm dying to know why he rarely leaves. Can't wait for the book!
Date: 02 Sep 2010 1:00 AM Title: Chapter 1
oh wow.. she really has it bad doesn't she?
Date: 21 Aug 2010 3:25 PM Title: Chapter 1
So Jonah is the strong silent type. With tatts. And i was imagining Elle to be a works from home computer gal, which she is. I loved the scene where she finally saw his eyes but then couldn't get a word out, then she finally squeaked out her name and he responds with "i know". *swoon!*
I'm intrigued already. On to chapter 2 :)
Date: 21 Aug 2010 1:34 AM Title: Chapter 1
Hooked just by the first chapter! Jonah seems dark & mysterious.
Date: 20 Jul 2010 3:36 PM Title: Chapter 1
I like it. I can tell it's your writing, but it has a fresher element to it than your fic writing. If that makes sense. Also, I love that she's a red head. I wonder if Jonah is really as shy as he seems or just something he projects. I like the meet me at the mailboxes they got going on.
Date: 15 Jul 2010 3:57 AM Title: Chapter 1
I promised myself I wouldn't let myself get lured to anymore wips.... but then I went and read ch. 1! Can I say everything fells the same, but better without hurting your fellings? It has the same stream of consciousness that draws you in immediately, and makes the situations and emotions relatable. But not having a template makes it more exciting! I'm loving the little glimpses of who Elle and Jonah are and need to know more :-)
[Report This]Date: 28 Jun 2010 5:42 PM Title: Chapter 1
I saw this story on your blog and decided to give it a try. It is very interesting but honestly I shouldn't expect anything less from you because you are a great author. I've read all your stories here, on FF and twilighted but this is my first review for you since I am not a FF member. Keep up the excellent work!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!
Date: 20 Jun 2010 5:01 AM Title: Chapter 1
This was excellent! I can't wait for more.
Date: 19 Jun 2010 11:44 PM Title: Chapter 1
Oh bb! I loved this! So excited to see where you take it! *squish*
[Report This]Date: 19 Jun 2010 4:51 AM Title: Chapter 1
WELL!!!!! That was a lovely start and I'm totes crushing on Jonah, to be sure! You know that I know that you are one helluva talented writer, my dear, and this just proved it (and I'm not just blowing smoke up your arse either!). I'm drawn in and can't wait for more. BTW, I think I wanna hug Mrs. Kindle:) She's a sweetheart!
Thanks for sharing and I look forward to more, my darling sweetie! xoxo V
Date: 19 Jun 2010 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 1
Congrats on posting an original fic!
I like how these two met, casually at the mail boxes. I really like how she stalked him a little, kinda like we all do when we meet a cute boy.
Looking forward to more Lambie in my week
[Report This]Date: 19 Jun 2010 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 1
Loved this intro. can't wait to see what's next.
Date: 18 Jun 2010 8:48 PM Title: Chapter 1
No need to be nervous Lambie your writing is fantastic.
Loved it & can't wait to read more.
Date: 18 Jun 2010 8:15 PM Title: Chapter 1
I really enjoyed this first chapter! Trying hard not to be in a BellaxEdward state of mind but once the chapters get rolling, I'm sure I'll be able to get to know the characters better. Can't wait for more!
Date: 18 Jun 2010 7:48 PM Title: Chapter 1
I love it, can't wait for more. Thanks
Date: 18 Jun 2010 7:28 PM Title: Chapter 1
Girl, you should really try to publish. I love your storys and you inspire me (not in form of plagiarism, of course. ;) )
[Report This]Date: 18 Jun 2010 6:03 PM Title: Chapter 1
mmmmmmmmm... sex with Jonah, indeed.
I love Love LOVE Elle and Jonah's small, simple interaction at the mailboxes. :) Gets me all twitterpated!
I think you are so brave for posting an original piece.... but definitely no need to be nervous.
You already know I adore it... but I will continue to remind you. :)
ILY bb <3
Date: 18 Jun 2010 5:04 PM Title: Chapter 1
I loved it. I absolutely love anything you write, and this did not disapoint. Well done, and I look forward to more!
[Report This]Date: 18 Jun 2010 3:27 PM Title: Chapter 1
So good. I didn't want it to end! The interaction at the mailbox is so wonderfully detailed, I honestly felt like *I* was standing there. No Jonah for me though lol. I'm excited to see more! Fantastic bb!
Date: 18 Jun 2010 3:06 PM Title: Chapter 1
Ooooooh GIRL! Shock me like an electric eel!!
BABYGIRL! I can't wait to see more!! Now that I've got a sort of physical picture of these characters in my mind, and I'm beginning to see into hers, I'm so eager to know more! Their habits, their fears, their friends, their secrets :)
I'm definitely ready for chapter two. Were i reading pages in a book, Id already have begun it!
So many hearts darling, I'm so proud of you for putting this out here and happy for you too!!
Love love,
Sarah.xoxo
Date: 18 Jun 2010 3:00 PM Title: Chapter 1
WOW!!
I gotta say, i am so intrigued with this story,can't wait to read more.
Always a pleasure reading your work,even more so that is a original of yours.
Looking foward to read more.
Date: 18 Jun 2010 2:32 PM Title: Chapter 1
Oooh Lambie I love it. It is wonderful. I'm already in love with Jonah. Looking forward to seeing how these two are going to manage to get together.
Annette
Date: 18 Jun 2010 2:01 PM Title: Chapter 1
OMG bb I love it! I'm so freaking excited to read more. How often will you be posting? Every two weeks? Until next time...
Date: 18 Jun 2010 1:51 PM Title: Chapter 1
Wow here it is at last. Looking forward to seeing this unfold. A taciturn sexy, hero - what more can we ask for?
[Report This]Date: 18 Jun 2010 1:26 PM Title: Chapter 1
OOOH.
Are you going to keep writing this? Pretty, pretty please?