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Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2015 7:59 PM Title: Epilogue: 100 Years Later

really cool little story thanks for sharing ;D

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2015 8:05 AM Title: Epilogue: 100 Years Later

It was a new experience to focus solely on Edward and Bella , with no wolves and hardly any interaction with the family.  I liked it though, since they got their happy forever after!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2015 7:57 AM Title: My Happily Ever After

No problem, just the fact they were married made me happy! I liked the future plans as well.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2015 7:51 AM Title: Crescendo

It was so easy to picture that scene in my mind! Great job!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2015 7:44 AM Title: The Aftermath

Alice is so cute when she can't see things before they happen. I think it scares her a bit. This is great, because I never like for Bella to suffer through her transformation any more than you.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2015 7:38 AM Title: Pleasure and Pain

Hope you had a good time writing vampire sex! It's supposed to be the best, since they never need to stop for any reason, and the desire is always there!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2015 7:28 AM Title: Pain and Pleasure

The way her change happened didn't bother me at all, just so it happened! The speed was probably a good thing for them both!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2015 7:12 AM Title: Enlightened

The album was kind of a surprise, until I remembered who had kept it all those years. Funny he never noticed that glimmer in her eyes was absent. Possessive Edward there at the end was lots of fun!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2015 6:59 AM Title: Waiting

Could this be the man she was with after Edward left her, never to return, supposedly?

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2015 6:52 AM Title: Little Dreamer

Thankfully it was only a dream, but why now and why another boy? This is very confusing!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2015 6:44 AM Title: Doubt

Why in heavens name would she do that when she loves Edward so much? I'm totally at a loss as to what would possess her to let anyone else touch her!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2015 6:34 AM Title: Fire and Ice

You usually know when the time is right when that much love is involved. So, now he's finally ready! And about damn time, too!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2015 6:25 AM Title: It's All In The Past

I'm still waiting, like Bella, for the other shoe to drop. Is he or isn't he, will he or won't he? It must drive her half crazy, not knowing for sure!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2015 6:18 AM Title: A Sexual Encounter

I think you did just fine and most likely stopped where he wanted you to stop!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2015 6:10 AM Title: Redemption

I hope someone talked you into it. As long as he's going to change her, why not?

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2015 6:01 AM Title: Guilt

He really is getting a second shot, and has the tears to prove it!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2015 1:03 AM Title: Tension

There have definitely been some improvements in Bella's attitude towards Edward and his ideas of what she should want!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2015 12:55 AM Title: Someone Slap Me I'm Losing My Mind

Well, he would be a damn fool not to make the right decision this time, in my opinion, anyway.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2015 12:49 AM Title: There's a Stranger In My Car

I know it's next door to impossible, but what explanation is there? It's enough to make you believe in reincarnation!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2015 12:43 AM Title: Surprise

Okay, I'm on his side, what is going on? This is spooky!

Reviewer: gmteenz Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2012 9:55 AM Title: Epilogue: 100 Years Later

I enjoyed this story, particularly liked the Ian bit, was a bit worried for a while but you tied it in quite well.

Reviewer: EdwardCullenLover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Jul 2011 7:04 PM Title: Pleasure and Pain

Smut is good! I like Smut, I like it aaaaLot!

Reviewer: EdwardCullenLover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Jul 2011 6:50 PM Title: Pain and Pleasure

It was nice to have Bella changed during sex, and the change seemed very quick and non painful for Bella which was also nice. But I am only confused about rather her heart has stopped beating or not? And what will Carlisle say about the very sudden change!

Reviewer: EdwardCullenLover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Jul 2011 6:41 AM Title: Doubt

GGGGrrrrrr!!! Isabella Marie Swan...........How Could YOU!! Why would you do this to Edward?? Bella you better be lucky I can't get to you because if I could I would so kick your ass right now! Oh, sorry I mean, wow, that was unexpected, let's see where this takes us.

Reviewer: EdwardCullenLover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Jul 2011 6:26 AM Title: Fire and Ice

Yummy! Thank you that was amazing! So sweet! Yeah, if I had an Edward Cullen, it wouldn't wait until I was married either! Just sayin' :)

Reviewer: EdwardCullenLover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Jul 2011 6:07 AM Title: A Sexual Encounter

Wow, so unbelievably HOT! Love it!

Reviewer: EdwardCullenLover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Jul 2011 5:56 AM Title: Redemption

OH come on! He never got to give her the EC lovin' in her previous life, she should darn well get it this time around, that's my opinion and I'm sticking to it! :) Besides I would love to read about some yummy E&B lovin'! :* Muuaahhh

Reviewer: EdwardCullenLover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Jul 2011 5:29 AM Title: There's a Stranger In My Car

Ok, Wow, how is this possible? Is the story going to explain how this is possible, I mean, wow....Like is this really Bella?....Ok, OK I will keep reading to find out more! :)

Reviewer: throughmyeyes19 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Aug 2010 3:28 AM Title: Epilogue: 100 Years Later

awwwwwww i love it!!!!!! what an amazing ending!

Reviewer: throughmyeyes19 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Aug 2010 3:25 AM Title: My Happily Ever After

awwww i love it!!!!

Reviewer: throughmyeyes19 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Aug 2010 3:21 AM Title: Crescendo

lol! esme!

Reviewer: throughmyeyes19 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Aug 2010 3:15 AM Title: The Aftermath

awwww lol alice!!!

Reviewer: throughmyeyes19 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Aug 2010 3:13 AM Title: Pleasure and Pain

whoa! i love it!

Reviewer: throughmyeyes19 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Aug 2010 3:08 AM Title: Pain and Pleasure

ohhh bella's a vampire!!

Reviewer: throughmyeyes19 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2010 9:12 PM Title: Enlightened

omg! i love it!

Reviewer: throughmyeyes19 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2010 9:02 PM Title: Waiting

oh my gosh

Reviewer: throughmyeyes19 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2010 9:00 PM Title: Little Dreamer

good it was just a dream i wonder why she dremt of that though luv it!

Reviewer: throughmyeyes19 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2010 8:54 PM Title: Doubt

wat waz she thinkin

Reviewer: throughmyeyes19 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2010 8:47 PM Title: Fire and Ice

i love it!!!!!!!! they just got some action!

Reviewer: throughmyeyes19 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2010 8:43 PM Title: It's All In The Past

aw i love it!

Reviewer: throughmyeyes19 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2010 8:37 PM Title: A Sexual Encounter

whoa!!!! i love it!!!!!

Reviewer: throughmyeyes19 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2010 8:32 PM Title: Redemption

lol the last sentence!

Reviewer: throughmyeyes19 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2010 8:15 PM Title: Guilt

i love it!!

Reviewer: throughmyeyes19 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2010 8:13 PM Title: Tension

aw i started crying........

Reviewer: throughmyeyes19 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2010 8:06 PM Title: Someone Slap Me I'm Losing My Mind

i love it!

Reviewer: throughmyeyes19 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2010 8:02 PM Title: There's a Stranger In My Car

amazing i wonder....how?

Reviewer: throughmyeyes19 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2010 7:58 PM Title: Surprise

i love it so far!

Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2010 5:18 PM Title: A Sexual Encounter

The term you're looking for is "erogenous zone".

Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2010 5:10 PM Title: Guilt

F-I-N-A-L-L-Y!! He gets it - HALLEJLUIAH!!

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2010 3:59 AM Title: Epilogue: 100 Years Later

very cute!

Reviewer: Raven Jadewolfe Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2010 9:29 PM Title: Epilogue: 100 Years Later

very inventive lol

Reviewer: Raven Jadewolfe Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2010 9:25 PM Title: My Happily Ever After

I like what she said to him

Reviewer: Raven Jadewolfe Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2010 9:22 PM Title: Crescendo

I need a cold shower now, excuse me.........

Reviewer: Raven Jadewolfe Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2010 9:18 PM Title: The Aftermath

lol Alice is so confused

Reviewer: Raven Jadewolfe Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2010 9:16 PM Title: Pleasure and Pain

she's right..what a way to go!

Reviewer: Raven Jadewolfe Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2010 9:12 PM Title: Pain and Pleasure

hell, as far as the readers could have known, they made love for those three days

Reviewer: Raven Jadewolfe Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2010 8:57 PM Title: Enlightened

loved it!

Reviewer: Raven Jadewolfe Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2010 8:51 PM Title: Waiting

agh!

Reviewer: Raven Jadewolfe Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2010 8:44 PM Title: Little Dreamer

something is wrong

Reviewer: Raven Jadewolfe Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2010 8:42 PM Title: Doubt

sounds like that guy messed with her head

Reviewer: Raven Jadewolfe Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2010 8:37 PM Title: Fire and Ice

woo-hoo! He finally took the initiative!!!!!

Reviewer: Raven Jadewolfe Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2010 8:34 PM Title: It's All In The Past

I don't blame her for being upset

Reviewer: Raven Jadewolfe Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2010 8:29 PM Title: A Sexual Encounter

I've had those nights where my stories have stalked me!

Reviewer: Raven Jadewolfe Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2010 8:24 PM Title: Redemption

stupid vampire rules *pout*

Reviewer: Raven Jadewolfe Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2010 8:21 PM Title: Guilt

that's a step in the right direction

Reviewer: Raven Jadewolfe Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2010 8:20 PM Title: Tension

don't screw this up again Edward

Reviewer: Raven Jadewolfe Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2010 8:17 PM Title: Someone Slap Me I'm Losing My Mind

poor Edward and Bella....

Reviewer: Raven Jadewolfe Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2010 8:13 PM Title: There's a Stranger In My Car

ah, and there's the guilt I bet

Reviewer: Raven Jadewolfe Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2010 8:10 PM Title: Surprise

I can only imagine what's going through his head

Reviewer: iwantedwardtobemine Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2010 4:52 PM Title: Epilogue: 100 Years Later

Body paint.....sex mural? Where the hell do you writers come up with this stuff? I mean you ladies can porn up anything from washing dishes to bowling. HOTTER THAN HOT I tell you!

Thanks for this wonderful story. I have really  enjoyed it.

Wendie

Reviewer: iwantedwardtobemine Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2010 4:36 PM Title: My Happily Ever After

amazing story!

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Date: 03 Mar 2010 4:33 PM Title: Crescendo

Now that was HOT. You really outdid yourself with that one. I am fanning myself, hating that I am at work and now home naked with my hubby! :P Sorry, hope that doesnt leave you with horrid visions. :P

Reviewer: iwantedwardtobemine Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2010 4:28 PM Title: The Aftermath

still waiting....

Reviewer: iwantedwardtobemine Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2010 4:25 PM Title: Pleasure and Pain

get it out of our systems? Ha....doubtful

Cant wait to understand just how her change came about.

Reviewer: iwantedwardtobemine Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2010 4:06 PM Title: Pain and Pleasure

HOT DAMN....changing while being hammered by Edward. Gah....what a dream. HOT woman...just friggin HOTTTTTT! :P

Reviewer: iwantedwardtobemine Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2010 3:57 PM Title: Little Dreamer

Edward hearing another name is cruel, but its not like he doesnt deserve alittle hurt for leaving her in the first place

Reviewer: iwantedwardtobemine Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2010 3:54 PM Title: Doubt

Oh crap here is a villian, I can feel it coming

Reviewer: iwantedwardtobemine Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2010 3:52 PM Title: Fire and Ice

See woman....you did a great job!

Glad that you didnt wait, I think that the moment couldnt have been more perfect.

Reviewer: iwantedwardtobemine Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2010 3:44 PM Title: It's All In The Past

Poor Bella, I dont even know what to say. They are both hurting so bad

 

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Date: 03 Mar 2010 3:36 PM Title: A Sexual Encounter

Seriously???!!! WTH...you stopped? I thought that you were doing a great job. I have to go find out if you make up for it.  Nipple?? shit yes its a great word, I like it better than pink pebble or some shit like that. :P

Reviewer: iwantedwardtobemine Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2010 3:29 PM Title: Redemption

what no sex scene?? Ha...dont think that I could write one, but I am confident that you have it in you! :P

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Date: 03 Mar 2010 3:26 PM Title: Guilt

I can only imagine the feelings the two are having, they have to be pretty intense.

Reviewer: iwantedwardtobemine Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2010 3:24 PM Title: Tension

Totally???!!! You are evil woman, I cant wait to see where they take this discussion. Am loving this story :D

Reviewer: Bella94 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2010 8:29 AM Title: A Sexual Encounter

LOL! Love the A/N! I know how you feel. That happens to me all the time! Glad I'm not the only one. For awhile I thought I was going crazy! LOL! Great Story!

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