Date: 15 Jun 2010 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 5
Great chapter! I wonder if they will actually catch Jacob before he does something else to Bella.
Can't wait for the next chapter!
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Thank you:)
Date: 15 Jun 2010 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 5
great chapter
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Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 15 Jun 2010 1:19 AM Title: Chapter 5
Psycho Jacob is on the hunt and determined. No way any of them especially Edward will let him near Bella if he has anythign to say about it. Yeah they are officially back together now :)
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Date: 15 Jun 2010 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 1
Awesome, I love your stories. Keep up the awesome writing. I've read all of yours stories so far. Looking forward to more. :)
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[Report This]Date: 14 Jun 2010 3:53 PM Title: Chapter 4
i have to say, i have gotten to where i enjoy jasper/bells stories more than the orginal couples stories. but... you are doing a great job with this story. i completely enjoy reading this story. cant wait for the next update
Author's Response:
thank you. I am actually working on a Jasper/Bella sotry right now. Once I have a few chapters written, I'll post it.
[Report This]Date: 14 Jun 2010 11:02 AM Title: Chapter 4
I am curious about psycho Jacob. I am sure Edward will be her valiant protector now that he has her back he surely is not going to let anyone hurt her.
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Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 14 Jun 2010 6:45 AM Title: Chapter 4
As much as I think B & E are moving a bit too fast, I actually love that they aren't afraid to show their feelings towards each other. Damn, their kiss was a hit! So Jacob is the creep, huh? Glad tonsee it wasnt James for once. I think the boys, or at least Edward has to move in to protect Bella. Ok, ready for the next chapter! BTW - how many are there? Love your stories but you must know that!
Author's Response:
Thank you. There are 49 chapters. Plus, I'll tell you now that there is a sequel as well. As of today, I have five chapters of it written. I like to mix it up with the badguys. I get tired of James always being the creep, you know?
Date: 14 Jun 2010 5:18 AM Title: Chapter 4
really great story, can't wait to find out what Jacob did to Bella
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Thank you:)
Date: 14 Jun 2010 4:05 AM Title: Chapter 4
Great chapter! Can't wait for the next update!
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Thank you:)
Date: 14 Jun 2010 2:25 AM Title: Chapter 4
great chapter
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Thank you:)
Date: 14 Jun 2010 2:07 AM Title: Chapter 4
well thats intresting! cant wait to know the back story on jacob
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Thank you;)
[Report This]Date: 13 Jun 2010 1:14 PM Title: Chapter 3
A filler chapter but a great one for sure. It gives a great backround and explains the lack of communication all those years. Of course he adores her too. Silly girl. :)
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Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 13 Jun 2010 12:04 PM Title: Chapter 3
This is a good story! Don't know if I care for the girls calling eachother bitches tho! That's just my opinion , I still like the story tho. Great work.
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[Report This]Date: 13 Jun 2010 4:57 AM Title: Chapter 3
so sweet loved it
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Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 13 Jun 2010 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 2
loved it
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[Report This]Date: 13 Jun 2010 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 3
Thanks! It answers some of the questions....both were caought up in school and never forgot their 1st loves. It's like they know each other, still are attracted to each other and now have to see if childhood love can materialize into an adult love. They've got a past so I'll love to see if they will have a future!
BTW - love how you update so quickly. Helps keep the stories fresh in the mind!
Author's Response:
Thank you. This story is already completed so it makes updates so much easier!
Date: 13 Jun 2010 1:07 AM Title: Chapter 3
great chapter
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Date: 12 Jun 2010 6:27 PM Title: Chapter 2
great chapter
Date: 12 Jun 2010 12:17 PM Title: Chapter 2
great chapter - this is gonna be a good one, I can tell!!
Date: 12 Jun 2010 12:12 PM Title: Chapter 1
love it! I just don't know how you do it!! one winner after the next!
Date: 12 Jun 2010 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 2
I'm sticking with it 'cause I love your stories. Please don't be offended but I find the beginning of this story very "jerky". I get that they were bff's, got separated and lost contact and now they are all back together. Just find it a bit difficult to believe the way B&E are interacting. I am assuming dinner will give more insight and I know they are doctors in a hospital that is busy but something just feels a bit disjointed for me right now. Maybe a "boys" POV or a bit more back story, etc.
Author's Response:
Not offended at all. I think dinner will help, and Edward's POV comes in a couple chapters.
Date: 11 Jun 2010 9:42 PM Title: Chapter 1
great chapter
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Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 11 Jun 2010 8:10 PM Title: Chapter 1
This looks good. Looking forward to reading more.
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Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 11 Jun 2010 8:01 PM Title: Chapter 1
I love it and I cannot wait to read some more.
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Thank you:)
Date: 11 Jun 2010 11:40 AM Title: Chapter 1
The stories that can come out of the emergency room, what tv shows are made of.
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Thank you:)
Date: 11 Jun 2010 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 1
Very good start---am REALLY looking forward to this story as it moves along! What a way to leave us though!! :-)
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Thank you:)
Date: 11 Jun 2010 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 1
Absolutely love your new story!!! Keep going! Update soon please!
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Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 11 Jun 2010 2:24 AM Title: Chapter 1
OMG!!! I just got the alert that you started a new story and I have to tell you.....I think I'm going to LOVE it!!! First love....time passes and he's back! So, with the risk of heart failure, can I assume her "boys" are still single???
I loved how you did a brief backstory and their first time. It was Edward's first as well, right? Doesn't matter...I appreciate the back story without it going on ad nauseum!
You're so great at updating so I am looking forward to reading more!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much:) Yes, it was both of their first times:)
Date: 11 Jun 2010 2:22 AM Title: Chapter 1
aww cute. I love your stories!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)