Date: 01 Jul 2010 4:10 AM Title: Chapter 16
For some reason I did not get an email update. I love the chapter and I'm happy he is awake.
Author's Response:
Hmm, I wonder why that is. I will tell you this, I will be updating this daily as it is already complete. Just to give you the heads up :) Thank you for the review.
Date: 01 Jul 2010 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 21
Three cheers for Sir Edward!! LOL
So glad they had a heart to heart. It can make all the difference if people just talk to each other! :D
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Thank you:)
Date: 01 Jul 2010 2:02 AM Title: Chapter 21
You know, I run out of things to write because there isn't much more to say. I like your stories, I love that you update so quickly, I like how you have things move along, I like that you don't feel the need to insert sex into every chapter, if you have a cliffie, we don't have to wait too long, when you do insert sex, it's appropriate. You move your stories along without a lot of same scenes but different pov's., etc.
So good job and I write to up your reviews and ratings since I think your stories deserve it!
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Aw, Thank you, hon:) I appreciate it!
Date: 01 Jul 2010 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 21
aww that chapter was cute. and this story is going so well. keep up the great work. thanks again bye
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Thank you:)
Date: 30 Jun 2010 1:35 PM Title: Chapter 20
Awww, I liked the little 'Welcome Home' party!
Hee hee, Emmett love...sigh...
Hopefully Bella sleeps soundly in Edward's arms her first night home. What was that in a previous chapter that Jake wasn't the first one to stalk her? Will this part of the story be revealed at a later time then, like Jake's trial? It'd be funny if Jake was made someone's bitch in prison! LMAO ;)
Keep up the great work, hun! Love it!
Author's Response:
Thank you. Jake is the only peson to have stalked her, but this wasn't the first time he attacked her.
Date: 30 Jun 2010 10:38 AM Title: Chapter 20
I am so glad they are home to finish healing.
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Date: 30 Jun 2010 5:06 AM Title: Chapter 20
great chapter
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Date: 30 Jun 2010 1:48 AM Title: Chapter 20
Yup, I really enjoyed it! I love how they can reminisce and just fall right back into their close relationship...all of them. That's when you can tell that it's deep. It's like the friends you have or made a long time ago, time passes and you don't see or talk to each other anymore or very rarely yet when you do, it's like no time has passed.
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Date: 30 Jun 2010 1:27 AM Title: Chapter 20
They get to be home together now. That is something.
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Date: 29 Jun 2010 2:09 PM Title: Chapter 19
Poor Bella, the nightmares are so scary!! And poor Edward feeling so helpless.
Love Emmett!! :D
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Date: 29 Jun 2010 6:25 AM Title: Chapter 19
great chapter
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Date: 29 Jun 2010 5:55 AM Title: Chapter 19
Really well done as you guide us through their journey of the past & their future.
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Date: 29 Jun 2010 2:11 AM Title: Chapter 19
Great chapter! :)
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Date: 29 Jun 2010 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 19
I am so glad that they are talking about the past. Bella needs some therapy to get over these horrible dreams, so she can heal. It won't take her long. She needs to be ready for court.
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Date: 28 Jun 2010 12:48 PM Title: Chapter 18
Awesome!! :D
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Date: 28 Jun 2010 10:25 AM Title: Chapter 18
You have to love these two. They will make it now that they are next to each other.
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Date: 28 Jun 2010 7:45 AM Title: Chapter 18
great chapter
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Date: 28 Jun 2010 5:09 AM Title: Chapter 18
Not much to say - you know I love it!
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Date: 28 Jun 2010 2:31 AM Title: Chapter 18
aww...how sweet!!
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thank you
Date: 28 Jun 2010 1:19 AM Title: Chapter 18
im happy shes awake!
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Date: 27 Jun 2010 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 17
I knew Edward would bring Bella out of it. His touch was all she needed. She could feel his love.
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thank you
Date: 27 Jun 2010 11:33 AM Title: Chapter 17
great chapter
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Date: 27 Jun 2010 7:25 AM Title: Chapter 17
Oh thank goodness! Loved Edwards dream! Long road ahead for them but looking forward to the ride!
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Date: 27 Jun 2010 3:39 AM Title: Chapter 17
oh wow!! I like this chapter...cant wait for more to read
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Date: 27 Jun 2010 3:01 AM Title: Chapter 14
LOVED the flashbacks!
Date: 27 Jun 2010 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 13
OMG i hope that will be okay!
Date: 27 Jun 2010 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 17
YAY!!!!!!!!
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Date: 27 Jun 2010 12:53 AM Title: Chapter 17
im happy she is finally up!
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Date: 27 Jun 2010 12:14 AM Title: Chapter 17
Ooooo, that chapt. Gave me goose bumps! More more more
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Date: 26 Jun 2010 8:22 AM Title: Chapter 16
great chapter
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Date: 26 Jun 2010 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 16
hopefuly he will be able to get her out of the dark place shes in cant wait till the next chapter
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Date: 26 Jun 2010 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 16
That was rough hearing Edwards pov but I love how you showed the depth & strength of his love for her. Good job!
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Thank you:)
Date: 26 Jun 2010 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 16
How hard to have such terror upon waking. Oh, if her could just hold her again.
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Date: 25 Jun 2010 10:06 AM Title: Chapter 15
I am so glad that Edward is awake. He will be able to reach Bella. She needs to hear his voice. He needs to hold her hand. They need to be in the same room.
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Thank you:)
Date: 25 Jun 2010 9:19 AM Title: Chapter 15
great chapter
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Date: 25 Jun 2010 4:52 AM Title: Chapter 15
All I can say is thank goodness I know this story is complete & you update quickly cause with a cliffy like that....it would be torture to wait for weeks to find out if Edward being awake with alarms shrieking is good or bad! I'm hoping it's good and Edward can go and be with Bella & hope his presence helps.
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Thank you:)
Date: 25 Jun 2010 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 15
update soon!!!
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Date: 25 Jun 2010 1:52 AM Title: Chapter 15
finally someone woke up.....
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Date: 25 Jun 2010 1:39 AM Title: Chapter 15
Whoa!! OME!! Dang cliffie!! LOL ;)
Loved the flashbacks, they were so endearing to each other from the beginning. <3
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Date: 24 Jun 2010 9:55 AM Title: Chapter 14
How hard it must be to wait and see.
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Date: 24 Jun 2010 7:20 AM Title: Chapter 14
great chapter
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Date: 24 Jun 2010 6:22 AM Title: Chapter 14
I appreciate the flashbacks & frequent updates! Thank you!
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Thank you:)
Date: 24 Jun 2010 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 14
aww they so love eachother and need to make it out of the funk they are in cant wait till the next chapter
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Date: 24 Jun 2010 1:29 AM Title: Chapter 14
Awww!!! Super, super, super!!! So sweet! :D Loved the flashbacks!! Such a nice touch!
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Date: 24 Jun 2010 1:25 AM Title: Chapter 14
Awwwwww, their story is do cute! Just the way they started out protecting each other at such an early age , it is just heart warming .:117;
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Date: 24 Jun 2010 1:14 AM Title: Chapter 14
Loved the chapter. Can't wait until they wake up. Update soon! :)
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Date: 24 Jun 2010 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 14
Please post soon. I can't wait for them to wake up.
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Thank you for both reviews:)
Date: 24 Jun 2010 12:47 AM Title: Chapter 14
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww.....
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Date: 23 Jun 2010 6:33 PM Title: Chapter 13
Luckily they are all doctors so they were attended to so fast. Jacob should not get out of this mess. I hope he lives a long life in jail as big Bubba's sex slave.
Date: 23 Jun 2010 1:03 PM Title: Chapter 13
Man that has to be especially hard for a father to experience.
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Thank you:)_=
Date: 23 Jun 2010 4:44 AM Title: Chapter 13
Good wrap up on what everyone was thinking even if was a bit repetitive. I think it laid a good foundation for your characters.
Looking forward th E & B's thought & what is going on with Jacob.
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Thank you:)
Date: 23 Jun 2010 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 13
great chapter
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Date: 22 Jun 2010 7:42 AM Title: Chapter 12
great chapter
Date: 22 Jun 2010 7:01 AM Title: Chapter 12
Thanks. Appreciate the entire backstory from Carlisle's POV.
Date: 22 Jun 2010 2:31 AM Title: Chapter 12
Awww!!! This was so sweet!!
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Date: 22 Jun 2010 2:22 AM Title: Chapter 12
Aww they sounded so cute together.
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Date: 22 Jun 2010 2:20 AM Title: Chapter 12
it made me tear up a little to know the reasons why he decided to leave forks with his family! cant wait till the next chapter
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Date: 21 Jun 2010 4:48 PM Title: Chapter 6
E & B are perfect together. I hope Jacob does not hurt anyone, but that would be good for drama....
keep up the good work.
Date: 21 Jun 2010 3:53 PM Title: Chapter 2
All 8 of them are doctors! That is unusual, but I like it!
Keep up the good work!
Date: 21 Jun 2010 3:42 PM Title: Chapter 1
Great start! This was rec'd to me by dlpash.
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Thank you:) I hope you enjoy the rest of it!
Date: 21 Jun 2010 2:58 PM Title: Chapter 11
Thanks for Alice's insight. A bit repetitive but I know it's neccessary.
Thanks for the update...looking forward to seeing what will happen. Obviously Bella and Edward will be out of commission for awhile.
Hard to believe how someone can be so cruel and delusional. I think Billy knew something was wrong with Jacob but he wanted to protect his son. Scary knowing there really are people like him out there just waiting for something to trigger the switch!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 21 Jun 2010 1:33 PM Title: Chapter 11
*sniff*
Thanks for Alice's pov. :)
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Date: 21 Jun 2010 9:10 AM Title: Chapter 11
great chapter
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Date: 21 Jun 2010 5:18 AM Title: Chapter 10
Wow, so sad. Unfortunately, that's how it is. They can't really do anything to the suspect, until they hurt their victim....system sucks.
Date: 21 Jun 2010 5:11 AM Title: Chapter 8
H.O.L.Y. C.R.R.R.R.A.A.A.A.P.P God, there better be more. OMG, if I didn't read it, I wouldn't have believed it.
Date: 21 Jun 2010 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 5
Oooooohhhhhhhhhh, what will Jacob think of E/B hooking up? God, that was creepy when he saw them leave, ugh.
Date: 21 Jun 2010 4:37 AM Title: Chapter 4
Thanks for the 'AN', I thought I missed the Jacob stuff. Can't wait to see Edward's reaction to the Jacob stuff. Ok, so there's no Tanya and E/B picked up right where they left off. That means there has to be someother drama...oh God, Jacob gets her again....ughhhhhh. LOVIN' this story.
Date: 21 Jun 2010 4:16 AM Title: Chapter 1
Awwwwwwwwwwwwww, PLEASE don't let him be married or engaged to Tanya. Can't wait for the EPOV
Date: 20 Jun 2010 6:55 PM Title: Chapter 10
Yay!! So glad they survived, now I have to wait to hear of their recovery. Rosalie's pov was nice, thanks for writing it. Can't wait to read Alice's next!
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Thanks:)
Date: 20 Jun 2010 11:52 AM Title: Chapter 10
How scary but at least there is some infor on what happened after they arrived. It is nice to get some backstory on Rose too.
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Date: 20 Jun 2010 11:40 AM Title: Chapter 10
great chapter! Can't wait for the next one!
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Date: 20 Jun 2010 8:28 AM Title: Chapter 10
great chapter
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Date: 20 Jun 2010 7:18 AM Title: Chapter 10
OMG I hope they will be okay. I'm happy that you didn't write that Royce raped Rose. And as always I want Jacob dead.
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Date: 20 Jun 2010 6:05 AM Title: Chapter 10
Thanks for rosalie's pov. So glad they all got to Bella & Edward in time.
Love you updates...keeps the story momentum going!
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Date: 20 Jun 2010 3:49 AM Title: Chapter 10
wow that was a horrible chapter cant wait till the next pov ! i hope they get their happy ending
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Date: 18 Jun 2010 8:45 AM Title: Chapter 8
great chapter
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Date: 18 Jun 2010 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 8
Wow! I did not see that coming! Can't wait to find out what happens.
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Date: 18 Jun 2010 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 8
OMG please tell me they killed Jacob and that Bella and Edward lived
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Date: 18 Jun 2010 2:15 AM Title: Chapter 8
Wow just wow lol just found this story and I am loving it so far
b
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Date: 18 Jun 2010 1:43 AM Title: Chapter 8
hot damn that was desprate of jacob! cant wait to read the next chapter
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Thank you :)
Date: 18 Jun 2010 1:27 AM Title: Chapter 8
OMG! Didn't see it coming! Jacob is an obsessed sick bastard. How in the world did he ever become a doctor? I hope the bit recover from their injuries. I appreciate EPOV's veer much.
BTW -had to tell you just how happy I am that you update so quickly. I know you said was complete & therefore you can post quickly. I get so irritated when authors say their story is complete but they will only post every week or even every two weeks; dragging it out for no specific reason.
Author's Response:
Thank you:) I try to stay up to date on my stories. I have nine stories in progress over on fanfiction right now. I update them at least twice a week, if not more.
Date: 18 Jun 2010 12:48 AM Title: Chapter 8
OME!!!!
NO!!!! That can't be the end!!
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Thank you :)
Date: 18 Jun 2010 12:45 AM Title: Chapter 8
All those doctors and tough guys Jacobs is bound to feel the wrath of Jasper and Emmett. I hope that kill the psycho.
Rose and Alice will save Edward I have faith.
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Thank you :)
Date: 18 Jun 2010 12:45 AM Title: Chapter 8
OMG! I really do love this story but PLEASE let there be a HEA. It is too soon to kill the two love birds already right? Please say right!!! I do love this new twist you have on the plot. Im not ready for it to end in ashes yet... pritty please!!! ;)
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Thank you:)
Date: 17 Jun 2010 12:17 PM Title: Chapter 7
Loved hearing EPOV! Can't wait for the next chapter.
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Date: 17 Jun 2010 7:57 AM Title: Chapter 7
great chapter
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Thank you :)
Date: 17 Jun 2010 4:52 AM Title: Chapter 7
ok... good story, but i think you put this chapter in the wrong place. it should have been either the first or second chapter. you just backtracked your whole other 6 chapters for this one. other than that, it's a great story with a good plot bunny. i'll be looking for more of it soon.
~angel~
Author's Response:
Thank you, You're right. I thought about that after I wrote this story and put it up but by then it was too late;)
Date: 17 Jun 2010 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 7
great insite into edward! cant wait till the next chapter
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Thank you:)
Date: 17 Jun 2010 12:58 AM Title: Chapter 7
Awe, now that was a nice introspective POV to read
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Thank you :)
Date: 16 Jun 2010 11:50 PM Title: Chapter 7
Yay, yay, yay!! More Edward please! So sweet so now I'm gonna go read chapt. 1 again!
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Thank you:)
Date: 16 Jun 2010 11:13 AM Title: Chapter 6
So Jacob is waiting to make is move or attack. I am sure they will keep her protected and make sure she is ok. They are not going ot let anythign happen to their girl Bella especially Bella.
That was romantic how neither of them have been with anyone else since eachother in their teens too.
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Thank you:)
Date: 16 Jun 2010 5:06 AM Title: Chapter 6
well somethings bads a brewing!
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Date: 16 Jun 2010 4:43 AM Title: Chapter 6
Another great chapter! :)
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Date: 16 Jun 2010 4:05 AM Title: Chapter 6
great chapter
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Date: 16 Jun 2010 3:53 AM Title: Chapter 6
That was hawt!! Can't wait to read EPOV's. Hard to believe neither of them had sex with anyone else in all the years they were apart. It's actually very romantic. Good job!
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Date: 16 Jun 2010 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 6
:)
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Date: 15 Jun 2010 8:51 AM Title: Chapter 5
oh so sweet
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Date: 15 Jun 2010 5:56 AM Title: Chapter 5
Hot reunion! Like I said, kinda fast but it's okay. Maybe some backstory on the boys a little.
Author's Response:
Next few chapers gives history on the boys.
Date: 15 Jun 2010 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 5
well her boys took it alot better than i would have! cant wait till the next chapter
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Date: 15 Jun 2010 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 5
love love love this story!
Jacob is crazy! Good drama!
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Thank you:)