Date: 21 Jul 2010 11:54 AM Title: Chapter 39
We now just need to get Edward there and it will be perfect.
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Edward was there. Thanks:)
Date: 21 Jul 2010 7:42 AM Title: Chapter 39
Oh shit..: lol their all there to get his blessing.. Cant wait to see how Charlie will mess with them just for kicks.
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[Report This]Date: 21 Jul 2010 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 39
LMAO!!!!
Perfect!!
No wonder Renee was giddy, ROFL!!
Totally loved Em's POV again, too! Awesome!
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Date: 21 Jul 2010 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 39
great chapter...
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[Report This]Date: 21 Jul 2010 3:53 AM Title: Chapter 39
OMG I knew it once Charlie openned that door, guess Bella doesn't know everything!
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Date: 21 Jul 2010 3:19 AM Title: Chapter 39
aww they are all going to get engaged! cant wait to see what happens next
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[Report This]Date: 21 Jul 2010 2:53 AM Title: Chapter 39
omg tew funny... i love yhis
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Date: 21 Jul 2010 1:47 AM Title: Chapter 39
Well all of them? at the same time? that's the way to do it. lol I can't wait for more. thanks again bye
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 21 Jul 2010 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 39
Omg, what silly boys they are! LOL, it figures that they'd all go separately and end up there at the same time.
Heh, they should have thought of that sooner. Safety in numbers and all that.
Sorry I haven't reviewed sooner! I absolutely love your story!
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Date: 21 Jul 2010 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 39
ooooh, great ending..that's hilarious!!!
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Thank you:)
Date: 20 Jul 2010 2:36 PM Title: Chapter 38
I think they should all plan a 3 ring wedding. They are all ready and they would all invite the same people. It would be the event of the year.
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Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 20 Jul 2010 1:31 PM Title: Chapter 38
Love the different mini stories! You're doing a great job!
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Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 20 Jul 2010 6:51 AM Title: Chapter 38
EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!
How I love Emmett!!!! *swoon*
Totally surprised that B&E aren't first, but oh well!! YAY!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
lol, Thanks:) I think you are going to enjoy the rest of this story:)
Date: 20 Jul 2010 6:21 AM Title: Chapter 38
Emmett is going to ask Rose to marry him!! I am glad that she didn't let her parents get to her because she is right she has all the family that she needs.
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[Report This]Date: 20 Jul 2010 5:53 AM Title: Chapter 38
This is why I love Emmet, he is the best! He is so proposing!
Author's Response:
Em's a sweetie.
Date: 20 Jul 2010 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 38
great chapter
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Date: 20 Jul 2010 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 38
wow the focus from Edward and Bella to Rosalie and Emmett was shocking but so good. keep up the great work. thanks again bye
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 20 Jul 2010 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 38
'I hope Vivian and Arthur Hale never come across Bella in a dark alley. Actually, maybe I do.' <THAT CRACKED ME UP! LOL!!!
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Thank you ;)
Date: 19 Jul 2010 5:50 PM Title: Chapter 37
I hope she stands tall and shows them that she doesn't need them. She is a strong independent women and I hope she remembers this at this important conversation. I am glad Emmett is with her to give her extra strength.
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Thank you:)
Date: 19 Jul 2010 4:59 PM Title: Chapter 37
fucking awesum story yo!!
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Thanks:)
[Report This]Date: 19 Jul 2010 10:06 AM Title: Chapter 37
Awe a little drama and insight from the others. I see.
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Date: 19 Jul 2010 9:57 AM Title: Chapter 36
This was such a beautiful and romantic chapter.
[Report This]Date: 19 Jul 2010 9:02 AM Title: Chapter 37
love Rose's point of view - afterall your title is my boys - hearing about Em and J will be wonderful.
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Thank you:)
Date: 19 Jul 2010 7:24 AM Title: Chapter 37
Sounds like a plan, Batman.
Sorry, I couldn't resist. I think it's because I'm tired, and it's late, and I woke up early. :S
Ignore the geeky insanity. ;)
But yeah, I like the idea of getting a couple chapters on the other characters. Getting an idea how things are going for them.... ;D
Can't wait for more, love this story.
Author's Response:
lol, I totally use that phrase all the time!
[Report This]Date: 19 Jul 2010 7:04 AM Title: Chapter 37
OH SHIT!! Geeez, poor Rose!
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Thank you:)
Date: 19 Jul 2010 6:28 AM Title: Chapter 37
Oh damn her parents are making an appearance that can either be very good or very bad.
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[Report This]Date: 19 Jul 2010 5:21 AM Title: Chapter 37
Nice & interesting pov and story twist. I'm enjoying the various aspects of the story.
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Thank you:)
Date: 19 Jul 2010 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 37
i would bitch slap them ! cant wait til lthe next chapter
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[Report This]Date: 19 Jul 2010 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 37
It just get just so good, why are her parents there? I hope they won't be rude to Em. I love that you are switching up the points of view.
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Thank you:)
Date: 19 Jul 2010 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 37
oh boy
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Date: 19 Jul 2010 1:42 AM Title: Chapter 37
oooh Rosalie has MONEY! and CLASS! poor emmett. lol I can't wait for more. thanks again bye
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Date: 19 Jul 2010 1:39 AM Title: Chapter 37
Wow of all the places for her to run into her parents!
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Thank you:)
Date: 18 Jul 2010 5:53 PM Title: Chapter 36
They are finally getting back to where they were and that is good.
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Thank you:)
Date: 18 Jul 2010 5:06 PM Title: Chapter 36
I love this story ... *sigh* it makes me feel good.
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Thank you:)
Date: 18 Jul 2010 3:57 PM Title: Chapter 36
aww that conversation between Edward Bella, Natalie and Hazel was sweet. I loved that and then the first time, again. that was hot. lol keep up the great work. thanks again bye
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[Report This]Date: 18 Jul 2010 8:31 AM Title: Chapter 36
That was perfect & just what they needed. I loved that Edward got a hotel room for them to reconnect physically. I think they needed the anonymity & privacy a hotel room provided.
Good!
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Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 18 Jul 2010 6:54 AM Title: Chapter 36
So so beautiful! I loved the interaction with the little girl and the widowed woman while they were on their date. Very nice touch.
I was hoping for a proposal on top of the Empire State Building but it didn't happen. When they got to Rockefeller Center I thought, 'This is it!' And it didn't happen. And then the romantic ambiance of the hotel room...and again NO. AARGH!! LOL ;)
Just love this story too much!! *sigh*
Author's Response:
lol, sorry to keep teasing:) I promise you will love the real propasal so much more!
[Report This]Date: 18 Jul 2010 4:36 AM Title: Chapter 36
That was so romantic and beautiful!
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Date: 18 Jul 2010 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 36
great chapter cant wait till the next one !
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Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 17 Jul 2010 7:48 AM Title: Chapter 35
Good for Bella!! Nice chappie!
Um...it's almost V-Day. Any chance of Edward proposing?? Hmm?
;)
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lol, Thank you:) The next chapter is about V-day....
Date: 17 Jul 2010 7:03 AM Title: Chapter 35
She is finally getting her life back on track!! I am happy that she was able to go back to work and move past this.
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Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 17 Jul 2010 5:14 AM Title: Chapter 35
Laurent and James' drama sound really good! I would love to learn more about that.
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Thank you:)
Date: 17 Jul 2010 1:36 AM Title: Chapter 35
poor Jane and poor Laurant. i love the teamwork between Rose and Bella thought. that was nice. keep up the great work. thanks again bye
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Thank you:)
Date: 17 Jul 2010 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 35
they are becomming normal now cant wait till the next chapter
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Thank you:)
Date: 16 Jul 2010 1:16 PM Title: Chapter 34
That was so funny. I bet it was a good stress reliever.
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Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 16 Jul 2010 6:10 AM Title: Chapter 34
How fun! :)
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Date: 16 Jul 2010 4:34 AM Title: Chapter 34
Well that was a sweet gathering wasn't it?
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Date: 16 Jul 2010 3:37 AM Title: Chapter 34
Just what the doctor ordered!
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Thank you:)
Date: 16 Jul 2010 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 34
lol that was cute. I love the conversation they were having in the "middle of the battlefield". lol I can't wait for more. thanks again bye
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Thank you :)
[Report This]Date: 16 Jul 2010 1:36 AM Title: Chapter 34
She shot him in the ass, classic!
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Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 16 Jul 2010 12:06 AM Title: Chapter 33
I think it was a real wake up call...to everyone. No means No! No exceptions!
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Thank you:)
Date: 15 Jul 2010 3:35 PM Title: Chapter 33
Bella needs to get her anger out, but not on her family.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 15 Jul 2010 1:09 PM Title: Chapter 33
If Jessica comes back I hope it doesn't turn out to be a whole Jacob situation. I am glad that things seem to be looking up for them.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 15 Jul 2010 9:43 AM Title: Chapter 33
So, I think I'm liking this more than your other stories. I mean, I like your other stories, but I like this MORE XD
Now, I was wondering, are we going to see Ro's parents? I would love to see their reaction to Ro's life now. A great doctor with great friends and a handsome boyfriend. It would be nice. I love vengence like that. It has a sweet taste to it.
Also, will Alice see her parents ever again? I've always wondered whether Alice was curious or not about why her parents left her. Being an intellegent woman, she know the many possibilities of why her parents abandoned her and maybe she's open minded to their reasoning.
IDK, I love the Edward/Bella plot in this but you also have great minior plots as well. I hope to see more Charlie and Renee. I know it's harder to tie them into the story since they're not doctors but I love Charlie and Renee.
Anyways, great job so far. I can't wait to read the rest of the story.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. Yes, I will be bringing out the others. I ahve several chapters dediacated to Ro/Em and J/Ali. I think you will like where I take this, and I'll go and ahead and tell you, there is a seuel already started for this one as well ;)
Date: 15 Jul 2010 5:48 AM Title: Chapter 33
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW SCHUKS and i was so waiting for Jessica to get the beating of a lifetime. I mean better her than the poor punching bag, right?
Why is it that humanity thrives on violence? the Romans where right-pane et circum-bread and violence is all that we need in our lifes apparently...
ANYWHOOO great story,great chapter CANNOT wait to read more!
xoxo
NaMaDRI
Author's Response:
Because the violence makes us feel stronger, better, even just reading about it! I really wanted Bella to beat the crap out of Jessica but, I thought she was above that, you know?
Date: 15 Jul 2010 4:17 AM Title: Chapter 33
its about time that ho was set in her place. I can't wait till they both are fully 'recovered' so the lemons will be back. :D I know I'm a perv. lol keep up the great work. thanks again bye
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Thank you:)
Date: 15 Jul 2010 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 33
Please don't Jessica come back unless to say sorry. Team Bella!
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Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 14 Jul 2010 7:42 PM Title: Chapter 32
OHHHH hooo OOOOHHHH haaaaa, boy oh boy...Jessica!! Geez!! First Jacob, and now Jessica?? I can't wait for the next chapter! I hope Bella doesn't cause too big of a scene, LOL!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 14 Jul 2010 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 32
I am thinking that it isn't good to be Jessica right now. It is good that Bella is getting help that she needs.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 14 Jul 2010 7:15 PM Title: Chapter 31
Well hopefully Edward isn't in trouble for that. I wonder who Aaron's doctor was before that couldn't ever see him?
Date: 14 Jul 2010 7:01 PM Title: Chapter 30
hopefully that helps them both heal because they deserve to heal from this mess that wasn't their faults.
Date: 14 Jul 2010 5:40 PM Title: Chapter 32
you meanie! lol okay I trust there's a reason for keeping us waiting so long so I'll forgive you now. lol thanks for the great work. keep it up. thanks again bye
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lol, thank you for trusting me! I promise the next chapter will be worth it, I hope ;)
[Report This]Date: 14 Jul 2010 11:29 AM Title: Chapter 32
Love that Em relly got through to her and helped her find a way to vent. Now I wish I had seen some of the altercation with Jessica too.
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Thank you:)
Date: 14 Jul 2010 11:28 AM Title: Chapter 32
I am ready for Bella to tear into her. Jessica needs to learn her place is no where near any Cullen family member, especialy Edward.
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Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 14 Jul 2010 7:00 AM Title: Chapter 32
Darn...thought for we'd get the Bella showdown! Oh well, glad you update quickly. Jessica has to be put in her place. Poor Edward....loved how Bella was glad she didnt have to kill him..hevsaid the right thing!
Author's Response:
lol, thank you:)
Date: 14 Jul 2010 6:45 AM Title: Chapter 32
Ahh I was expecting Bella to kick jessicas ass. Can't wait for the ass kicking to start.
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Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 14 Jul 2010 6:14 AM Title: Chapter 32
uggggggggg....... i wanted to see what hasppened next ... uggggggggggggg
good chapter tho *giggle*
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lol, thanks:)
Date: 14 Jul 2010 5:50 AM Title: Chapter 32
God I love Emmett and you really are tease.
Author's Response:
Thank you:) I know I am a tease but this was a big step for Bella and, trust me, she needed to get some rage out before she saw Jessica...
Date: 14 Jul 2010 5:24 AM Title: Chapter 32
great chapter she needs to work thru her demons!
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Thank you:)
Date: 14 Jul 2010 5:11 AM Title: Chapter 32
Great chapter!
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Thank you:)
Date: 14 Jul 2010 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 31
great chapter love the shower lemon
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Thank you for reviewing here too!
Date: 14 Jul 2010 12:43 AM Title: Chapter 30
so sweet good chapter
Date: 14 Jul 2010 12:27 AM Title: Chapter 28
still think they got off way to easy i know already skipped ahead and read this on Ff but like to be consistent on my reviews for my favorites
Date: 13 Jul 2010 1:25 PM Title: Chapter 31
I am so glad that Bella and Emmet were there to see the slut in action. They could see that Edward tried to get away from her. Carlisle needs to get rid of her for inappropriate behavior at work.
Author's Response:
Thanks:)
Date: 13 Jul 2010 9:36 AM Title: Chapter 31
I hope Bella hits Jessica with her crutches.
Author's Response:
lol, Thanks:)
Date: 13 Jul 2010 6:23 AM Title: Chapter 31
*cue spooky music* RUT ROH... Bella gonna kick some Stanley ass..lol
Author's Response:
*snickers* spooky music, good one! THanks:)
Date: 13 Jul 2010 6:18 AM Title: Chapter 31
OMG! They just got rid of Jacob...do they have to worry about Jessica now? Is she going to obsess over Edward? Damn...wish these kids would catch a break!
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Thank you:)
Date: 13 Jul 2010 4:43 AM Title: Chapter 31
bitch beat down! cant wait till the next chapter
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Date: 13 Jul 2010 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 31
I want to fuck Jessica shit up...how dare she after everything that happened with Jacob. You do not try to make people uncomfortable! Was Jacob Aaron's ped? I hope Edward doesn't become weird around Natives now.
Author's Response:
Thank you:) No, Jacob was not Aaron's ped:)
Date: 13 Jul 2010 2:36 AM Title: Chapter 31
oooh the shit is going to hit the fan now. that girl better not blame Edward when obviously she heard what Jessica said, that two timing HOOCHIE! lol I can't wait to find out how Bella puts her in her place. PLEASE let her show Jessica who Edward belongs to. :D this is going so great. keep up the great work. thanks again bye
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Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 13 Jul 2010 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 31
Hope they don't have a nother psycho just a cluless twit that Bella can put in her place. UGh let the couple be for heavens sake. Jess is a sleaze to even bother him after he has made it clear he is not interested.
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Thank you:)
Date: 13 Jul 2010 2:30 AM Title: Chapter 31
I'm loving the story... Keep up the good work! Can't wait for the next update.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 12 Jul 2010 2:44 PM Title: Chapter 30
Bella needs to let go of the hate of Jacob is going to win. He will of ruined her life. She will have no happiness unless she lets go of all of this hate and anger.
Author's Response:
Yes, she does:)
[Report This]Date: 12 Jul 2010 6:37 AM Title: Chapter 30
Well I'm listening to a Christmas album and that always makes me feel better.
Author's Response:
Love Christmas music :)
Date: 12 Jul 2010 4:35 AM Title: Chapter 30
It's tough so I hope Bella gets the help she needs to get better. If not the Jacob wins. Nice transition chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 12 Jul 2010 4:11 AM Title: Chapter 30
well it was great. I loved James and Laurant especially with them being gay. lol thanks again bye
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 11 Jul 2010 7:02 PM Title: Chapter 29
Wow, amazing!! And yes, I did enjoy Charlie's pov. Thanks for that. :)
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Thank you:)
Date: 11 Jul 2010 3:57 PM Title: Chapter 29
I really hope that everyone chan start moving on from this now that he is dead.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 11 Jul 2010 3:40 PM Title: Chapter 28
That is terrible that Bella had to watch him die. Good news though he can't hurt her anymore.
[Report This]Date: 11 Jul 2010 7:21 AM Title: Chapter 29
I know they have a lot to get through. Hoping Bella doesn't suffer too much. She's got a lot of anger in her so hoping she gets the help she needs.
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Thank you:)
Date: 11 Jul 2010 5:59 AM Title: Chapter 29
I feel for what Renee and Charlie had to go through/
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Thank you:)
Date: 11 Jul 2010 5:16 AM Title: Chapter 29
I loved this chapter. I learned quite a bit through Charlies eyes. He is more reserved so he watches and listens. I am so glad that the family is all together because this is how Bella and Edward will heal.
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[Report This]Date: 10 Jul 2010 7:44 AM Title: Chapter 28
Can't say I'm sorry cause I'm not. Wish Billy didn't have to die. It seems he was trying to help his son even if he knew it was wrong but he realized Jacob was sick and he did the right thing. At least the nightmare is over and they can heal and get back to normal.
I've enjoyed this story. Don't know how much more you got but it's been great!
Author's Response:
Thank you:) We still have a ways to go on this one :)
[Report This]Date: 10 Jul 2010 7:42 AM Title: Chapter 28
Wow!! You really killed him! And Billy too! OMFG!!
Awesome!! :D
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 10 Jul 2010 7:22 AM Title: Chapter 28
OMG ive never been so breathless during a story in all of my life. I was sitting at the edge of my chair wondering what was going to happen next!! I love it
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Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 10 Jul 2010 5:40 AM Title: Chapter 28
Billy should have lived to deal with the horrible things his son did and what he did to his son but I'm happy Jacob is dead at least Bella doesn't have to worry about him calling her from prison or escaping and finding her.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 10 Jul 2010 5:30 AM Title: Chapter 28
i'm glad you killed that s.o.b.!!! great chapter
Author's Response:
lol, Thanks:)
Date: 10 Jul 2010 4:07 AM Title: Chapter 28
well at least jacob cant get her anymore! cant wait to see what happens next
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Date: 10 Jul 2010 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 28
First off that whole thing with Billy, as morbid as it sounds was hilarious as hell. I loved those lies and then the whole story line between Jake and Billy was disturbing but good for the story. keep up the great work. I can't believe they died so easily though. thanks again bye
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Thanks ;)