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Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2011 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 9

well I guess his father is not around to protect him soI guess he will go to jail unless her boys take care of him

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2011 8:40 PM Title: Chapter 8

scary jacob

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2011 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 7

not much different from her POV

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2011 8:20 PM Title: Chapter 6

yay!!!

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2011 7:28 PM Title: Chapter 5

you really write well, there is something about your first love that always is specal even after years go by

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2011 7:19 PM Title: Chapter 4

can't wait, I am surprised this does not hae more reviews

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2011 6:12 PM Title: Chapter 1

off to a great start

Reviewer: Craving2Read Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2010 5:52 PM Title: Chapter 43

Loved the story line you created of Alice and David Banner. His love and devotion to Alice is very heartfelt.



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: Schemering Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2010 9:18 PM Title: Chapter 49

Haha. Love the story!

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Thank you:)

Reviewer: Schemering Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2010 9:31 PM Title: Chapter 43

I love the story but is it just my phone or what happened with the chapter?

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They seem to be having some kind of glich or something that is making it so that the chapters aren't showing up. Hopefully they will be fixed soon.

Reviewer: bocasgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2010 8:32 PM Title: Chapter 20

I'm not able to read the contens of this story



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I'm not sure what you mean.

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Aug 2010 5:34 AM Title: Chapter 49

YAY!!!! What a great finale!! The lemons were so hott! Damn, I wish I was Rosie, LOL! ;)

Heck yeah, can't wait to begin reading the sequel!!!



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Aug 2010 5:26 AM Title: Chapter 48

Wow, what a cute little magical place that must've been! Jasper did great! Just what Alice needed!

So cute!

Reviewer: 4CullensandaBlack Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2010 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 49

I can't wait for the sequel!!!!!!!!!!



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Thank you! The sequel has been posted:)

Reviewer: elmarie1123 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2010 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 8

uuummmm... shit... the drama came fast!



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Reviewer: elmarie1123 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2010 2:00 AM Title: Chapter 2

OMG I've never been so excited to read a story, and trust me I LIVE for twilight fiction!

Reviewer: 30somethingmom Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jul 2010 10:32 PM Title: Chapter 49

As always, another great story. You really have a gift for writing. Look forward to the sequel.



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Jul 2010 2:58 PM Title: Chapter 49

Now that was an annoucement!!!



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Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jul 2010 4:14 AM Title: Chapter 49

They are all just so cute!!  I am sad to see this story go but can't wait for the next one to begin!!!



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Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jul 2010 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 48

Aww... Now Bella and Edward are engaged along with Alice and Jasper. Now I can't wait to see what Emmett has come up with.

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jul 2010 3:09 AM Title: Chapter 49

wow that was shocking. lol I love that there's a sequel though. :D keep up the great work. thanks again bye



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Jul 2010 2:02 AM Title: Chapter 49

The ending was so cute!! Can't wait for the sequel!

Author's Response:

Thank you:) I will start it tomorrow. I have eleven chapters of it so far done but I promise to update quickly!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jul 2010 10:31 AM Title: Chapter 48

Jasper did a great job also. Jasper is a sweet heart though. He knows just what Alice would love.



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Reviewer: jbe86 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jul 2010 4:26 AM Title: Chapter 48

lol I love that there wasn't any drama and that everyone said yes. not one of those girls said no, I mean not that they should. lol keep up the great work. thanks again bye



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jul 2010 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 48

Jasper did good!! Better than what I got; snowy sidewalk in new jersey. In all fairness, hubby did have bigger & better plans but got foiled by a 5 year old who couldn't be trusted to keep a secret!

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lol, THanks:)

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jul 2010 12:12 AM Title: Chapter 48

Jasper did great!!!!!



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Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jul 2010 12:05 AM Title: Chapter 47

Thate was awesome!!!!!

Reviewer: 4CullensandaBlack Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2010 11:54 PM Title: Chapter 48

Ashley and Jackson?? lol

I really loved Jasper's the most. It was so romantic yet private and intimate.  Not everyone can meet their true love the day they were born so Jasper's proposal is hands down the best.



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2010 4:37 AM Title: Chapter 47

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww



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Reviewer: jbe86 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2010 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 47

aww Edward's made me cry but I liked this one too. :) thanks again bye



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Reviewer: 4CullensandaBlack Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2010 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 47

Maybe it's because I'm Team Emmett but that was so sweet. I loved it.



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Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2010 2:28 AM Title: Chapter 47

EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

*jumps up and down like Tigger*

Emmett is sooooo adorable all nervous!!! LOL!

*sigh*

This was a most excellent proposal. Better than having a camera on them in their seats while he proposed--to actually go out on the field???!!! WOW!!

So they could prob get married there, too. That'd be neat! I've seen couples get married at ballparks, but don't know if the Yanks do it.

So awesome!!! I love it!! I bow to you, oh great one. LOL ;)



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2010 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 47

i wish my man would of proposed like that ! cant wait till the next chapter 



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: VampireEv Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2010 12:32 AM Title: Chapter 47

oh my god. that was so sweet. emmetts was way better than edwards. my god that was good.

 



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2010 12:00 AM Title: Chapter 47

Emmett did great!

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Thank you:)

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2010 10:42 AM Title: Chapter 46

What a sweet place to propose. Edward always does it just right.



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2010 10:34 AM Title: Chapter 45

That was a great chapter. You were sneaky having Edward there first.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2010 7:27 AM Title: Chapter 46

That was so sweet!! He even did it on the annivesary of their first date and in the same place that they became boyfriend and girlfriend 15 years ago.



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2010 6:44 AM Title: Chapter 46

That was a perfect proposal.



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2010 6:41 AM Title: Chapter 45

They were really nervous about asking Charlie a question that they knew they would get a yes to. I am glad that Jasper and Emmett asked Charlie for Rose and Alice's hands too because they really do think of him as their father.

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2010 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 46

EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEK!!!!

YEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSSSSS!!!! I was waiting for a long time for the proposal!!!!! Sneaky Edward!! Loved it!! Hope those people weren't home, LOL!

And I loved the part with Sam and Emily, and then with Mr. Greene! LOL! That was cute!

 

Hold on...with all three couples proposing at the same time(?), will there be a triple wedding??? LOL, getting ahead of myself!

 

 



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Perhaps ;) Guess you'll just have to wait and see ;)

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2010 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 46

Edward's was sweet and got me a little teary eyed. lol thanks again bye



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Reviewer: 4CullensandaBlack Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2010 2:20 AM Title: Chapter 46

It was so perfect for them and Playground Love should so be their wedding song. I love how E took her down memory lane.



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: Lilygirl88 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2010 1:49 AM Title: Chapter 46

Yay he popped the question. One down two to go

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Thank you:)

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2010 12:41 AM Title: Chapter 46

I loved Edward's proposal. It was absolutely perfect. So glad the date and place all worked out!!

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Thank you:)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2010 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 45

YAY!!!! That was great!!!

Go Charlie and Renee gettin it on in the kitchen! LOL!



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lol, THanks:)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2010 9:58 AM Title: Chapter 45

that was a good chapter



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2010 4:20 AM Title: Chapter 45

It was so cute! I could actually see the three boys sitting nervously in Charlie's office. I loved how Charlie made each boy tell him why they wanted to marry each girl. Very sweet!

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Thank you:)

Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2010 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 45

love it



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Reviewer: 4CullensandaBlack Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2010 2:28 AM Title: Chapter 45

Charlie is a dirty old man but I knew that all ready. The boys are so cute!



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: RoseMariecullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2010 2:22 AM Title: Chapter 45

I really enjoyed charlie's pov.

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Thank you:)

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2010 2:20 AM Title: Chapter 45

I love this chapter.  It was great to hear this through Charlies' POV.  I think that was one of the best justers to ask him for the three girls hand in marriage.



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: Quincy1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2010 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 45

Awesome!!!!!! I've been waiting to see how this chapter would go ever since the  chapter where Edward, Emmett and Jasper show up at Charlie and Renee's house. Can't wait till the next chapter and the upcoming proposal's. :)



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2010 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 45

aww they were soo nervous. that's too cute. Also WAY TO GO CHARLIE, getting his freak on. lol I loved it. keep up the great work. thanks again bye



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2010 4:09 PM Title: Chapter 44

mmmmmm....fluffy

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2010 6:40 AM Title: Chapter 44

They have the most interesting contest in their house. I wonder if their neighbors are that close to them and have complaints about all of them?



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Thank you:) and that's a good question!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2010 6:31 AM Title: Chapter 43

Wow!! That is a shocking thing to find out after a person is gone and you can't tell them thank you and how happy you made them. I am glad that Alice went to say goodbye to him because if she didn't she might have never known that David Banner wanted Alice as a daughter and had always seen her that way.

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2010 6:29 AM Title: Chapter 44

Oh my, I can't wait.  I know they are in for a treat with Charlie.  LOL



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2010 6:21 AM Title: Chapter 42

That is so sad about the man in the hospital but I am really glad that she let her family in because she needed them then and needs to go and say goodbye to Mr. Banner.

Reviewer: 4CullensandaBlack Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2010 4:52 AM Title: Chapter 44

This chapter was so funny and E is so romantic, I want that.



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2010 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 44

Thanks for the citrus! I liked the fluff.

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Thank you:)

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2010 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 44

They are all ready for the 3 ring circus.



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2010 1:36 AM Title: Chapter 44

Yeah I bet she did. lol I loved their game. keep up the great work. thanks again bye



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Reviewer: mz_cullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2010 1:09 AM Title: Chapter 44

awesome



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: 4CullensandaBlack Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2010 2:01 AM Title: Chapter 43

When I was reading the letter from Mr. Banner and he was speaking of his wife all I kept thinking was if she lived they so would have adopted Alice. This was a tear-worthy chapter!



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2010 12:33 AM Title: Chapter 43

That was so nice.  I thought he had actually paid her college fee.  However, I am glad he left her his estate.  I knew he would do something for her.  Great story and can't wait for the next chapter to come out.



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Thank you:) He paid for her to apply to Harvard. He would have paid for her schooling if she had let him.

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2010 12:12 AM Title: Chapter 43

That was beautiful & gave Alice the closure she needed.

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Thank you:)

Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2010 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 42

nice sad chapter .. i love this story



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2010 1:06 PM Title: Chapter 42

That was so thoughtful of Bella & Jasper!  Em and Ro are sweet as well.  Edward is always my hero.



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: 4CullensandaBlack Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2010 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 42

We still have some really great teachers out there and I wish to have a long life your grandparents.



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Yes, we do but unfortunily you hardly hear about them.

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2010 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 42

Beautiful. My dad was the oldest of 13, I had 43 cousins and couldn't begin to count the extras.

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So you get it! Thanks:)

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2010 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 42

That was so sweet. It is a good thing that the 6 of them work so hard. I would hate for any of their coworkers to say they get special priveledges. But it is nice that Daddy makes the schedule.



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: VampireEv Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2010 2:48 AM Title: Chapter 42

I bawled my eyes out. This chapter is really good. And I absolutely love this story. Your amazing.



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2010 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 42

aww that almost had me crying. :( I love that Alice is just like Bella in Charlie and Renee's eyes. keep up the great work. thanks again bye



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2010 9:59 PM Title: Chapter 41

It just gets better and better!



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Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2010 9:33 PM Title: Chapter 39

I love it.  All three at one time.  Priceless!!!!

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2010 7:43 PM Title: Chapter 33

You know Bella will kick her A*s if she comes back.  She won't tolerate it twice.  LOL, like I'm writing this story. 

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2010 7:33 PM Title: Chapter 41

Awww! Loved it! I'm speechless!

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2010 7:24 PM Title: Chapter 40

That makes perfect sense why now! Poor Alice.

Great chapter!

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2010 5:59 PM Title: Chapter 30

I love it James and Laurent lovers!  LOL

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2010 5:42 PM Title: Chapter 29

That was my type of chapter.  You go whom ever shot Jacob.

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2010 3:55 PM Title: Chapter 28

WOW, that was intense.  Way to go, this story is great!



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Thaml you:)

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2010 11:47 AM Title: Chapter 24

I loved the gift giving.  It was monumental.



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Reviewer: beccasmind Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2010 10:57 AM Title: Chapter 41

Poor Alice to lose someone so vital to who you have become in your life is hard.  Jasper cares so much for her and will take good care of her.



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2010 4:55 AM Title: Chapter 41

Hmmm....really looking forward to them all talking to Charlie! Should be interesting!

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Thank you:) A few more chapters to go before the big talk with Charlie.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2010 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 41

That is really sad that he is gone but I think that he was really proud of all that Alice overcame to get where she was.



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2010 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 8

Jacob did some serious damage. He is a nut case. The police should have been watching out for her. They saw the pictures in his house. They knew he was crazy. The system failed her.

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Thanks:)

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2010 2:39 AM Title: Chapter 41

Next up is Edward's pov right? ;) that chapter was sad but informational. lol keep up the great work. thanks again bye



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Couple more of Alice's POV's then we go to Edward. I promise it will be worth it!

Reviewer: 4CullensandaBlack Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2010 2:06 AM Title: Chapter 41

Aww Jasper so sweet, kind and caring!!!!!!! I want to be Jasper's wife.



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2010 1:28 AM Title: Chapter 41

It  is so good that Alice found her soulmate as well as a bigger family. That is 2 boys

at Charlie's. Edward already knows he wants to marry Bella. He just needs to get his arse over there to get the blessing.



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All three of them were at Charlie's so it's just a matter of what pushed them to go when they did :)

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2010 9:31 PM Title: Chapter 2

this is a twist of a story, I like it alot.



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Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2010 9:19 PM Title: Chapter 40

That is sad that Alice has lost the only person that had been there before meeting the gang. I wonder why the lawyers office contacted her.



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2010 9:17 PM Title: Chapter 1

this is the best

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Date: 22 Jul 2010 9:11 PM Title: Chapter 39

That is really funny that without knowing it all the guys had the same idea. They probally should have talked to each other.

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2010 12:07 PM Title: Chapter 40

lol I bet Jasper is thinking Alice had something going with some teacher. lol. sorry :) i can't wait. this is getting good. thanks again bye



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: beccasmind Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2010 10:32 AM Title: Chapter 40

Awe poor Alice, Jasper and her family will take care of her as she grieves the loss of the only other person she ever let in.



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Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2010 6:18 AM Title: Chapter 40

Great idea. I think it is always a great thing when a reader gets a backstory in why & how a characters acts the way they do.

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Thank you:)

Reviewer: 4CullensandaBlack Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2010 4:03 AM Title: Chapter 40

Jasper and Alice in Eclipse was so cute and I loved that scene. Who is Mr. Banner, a case worker?



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Thank you:) Mr. Banner was the teacher that encouraged Alice to apply to Harvard.

Reviewer: mz_cullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2010 3:00 PM Title: Chapter 39

lol tht wuz good



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Thanks:)

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2010 1:36 PM Title: Chapter 39

Oh how cute! The 3 boys all have the same idea! Can't wait to see how it all goes!

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Thank you:)

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