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Reviewer: Dangz Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2016 4:53 PM Title: A New Leaf

Indeed...what just happened? 

Reviewer: prettylashes Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2016 10:32 PM Title: A Song is Worth a Thousand Words

Bella is the biggest BITCH i've ever seen. Hate her to the core

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jan 2016 10:12 PM Title: O Brother, Where Art Thou?

OHFORTHELOVEOFFUCK!!!!

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jan 2016 2:19 PM Title: I'm Ready... Right?

OMFNG!! I friggen was dreading this! It happened. My day is officially ruined. I don't know if I can keep going. This makes me so very unhappy. My heart hurts for Bella and for Edward. Mace, I'd like to kick him in the balls! What an awful thing to do to her and to his brother! >:(

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jan 2016 2:14 PM Title: A New Leaf

So, you hooked me with the pic of Jared! lol I can't wait to read more of this. :)

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2015 3:55 PM Title: A New Leaf

I've decided to revisit all of my favorites. I haven't had too much luck with new stories. I'm too impatient to wait for updates or abandonded ones.

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2015 7:01 AM Title: The Good, the Beautiful & Everything In Between

A lovely, heartbreaking tale. Thank you.

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2015 5:24 AM Title: White Violets

Typo alert:

year should be 2010

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jan 2015 10:40 AM Title: Can You Say Awk-ward?

Her constant rambling is nerve wracking.

Reviewer: ageise02 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Sep 2011 3:15 PM Title: Everywhere I Turn

I'm guessing that Jessica took that picture of Mace and Bella.

Reviewer: ageise02 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Sep 2011 6:10 AM Title: Why Me?

OK not a split personality but a twin?

Reviewer: ageise02 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Sep 2011 3:20 AM Title: Bored and Lonely Weekend

does Edward have like a split personality or something?

Reviewer: gthemoo Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2010 3:01 AM Title: The Good, the Beautiful & Everything In Between

omg that was the best story ever thank u so much for writing it 

Reviewer: fleur50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2010 4:11 AM Title: The Good, the Beautiful & Everything In Between

C'est magnifique, quelle belle fin!

 

J'étais impatiente de lire la fin et mon attente a été bien récompensée.  Merci, merci pour cette belle histoire.

Reviewer: fleur50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2010 3:33 AM Title: In the Wake of Delusion

J'adore, et je trouve qu'un bébé est une très bonne idée.  

 

 

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2010 6:46 PM Title: The Good, the Beautiful & Everything In Between

:) cute story

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2010 6:14 PM Title: In the Wake of Delusion

:)

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2010 5:49 PM Title: O Brother, Where Art Thou?

:)

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2010 5:34 PM Title: Operation Spock Knows Best

:)

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Date: 02 Sep 2010 5:14 PM Title: Yellow Submarine

:)

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Date: 02 Sep 2010 4:46 PM Title: White Violets

:)

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Date: 02 Sep 2010 4:22 PM Title: A Song is Worth a Thousand Words

:)

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Date: 02 Sep 2010 4:00 PM Title: The Aftermath

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Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2010 3:45 PM Title: I'm Ready... Right?

:)

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2010 2:55 PM Title: What a Tangled Web We Weave When First We Practice to Deceive

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Date: 02 Sep 2010 2:30 PM Title: Everywhere I Turn

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Date: 02 Sep 2010 2:09 PM Title: Karma is a Cruel Mistress

:)

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2010 1:55 PM Title: Why Me?

:)

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Date: 01 Sep 2010 7:50 PM Title: Firsts

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Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2010 7:32 PM Title: It's Just Like Lunch...With More Food

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Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2010 7:16 PM Title: Can You Say Awk-ward?

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Date: 01 Sep 2010 6:22 PM Title: Bored and Lonely Weekend

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Date: 01 Sep 2010 7:20 AM Title: After School Specials Don't Prepare You For This

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Date: 01 Sep 2010 1:04 AM Title: What's in a Brain?

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Date: 01 Sep 2010 12:46 AM Title: A New Leaf

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Reviewer: tracy-edwardssexkitten Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2010 4:41 PM Title: Why Me?

Wow, I was not expecting that!  So he has a twin...very interresting!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review :)  I'm glad it caught you off guard, that was my intention :)

Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2010 9:25 PM Title: The Good, the Beautiful & Everything In Between

Oh man what an ending. It made me cry. Everyone took it well. And I am glad Edward stuck by her. At least a part of Mace lives on. I wonder in the future if they will ever tell him the truth? Now that would be one hell of an out take. I am sorry to see this end hopefully we will be reading more from you. Awesome ending.

   Marguerite 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review!  I am so glad you liked it.  Thanks for coming along for the ride :)

Reviewer: bingohappy29 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2010 4:23 PM Title: The Good, the Beautiful & Everything In Between

that was good i liked it and liked how u got them back together  



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review.  I am so glad you liked it :)  Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: carlie cullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2010 7:38 AM Title: The Good, the Beautiful & Everything In Between

awesome story thanks



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!  I really appreciate it! :)

Reviewer: SpunkyBookworm Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2010 6:13 AM Title: The Good, the Beautiful & Everything In Between

I loved Troi and Riker! Thanks for the sweet story!!  



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the review!  I'm so glad you liked it :)  I loved Troi and Riker too :)

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2010 4:20 AM Title: The Good, the Beautiful & Everything In Between

She didn't wait too long between babies. Even though the Ben was Maces's child he has the same genes as the children of Edward and Bella's children because Edward and Mason are identical twins and have the same genes. I loved this story, but Bella made tons of mistakes in this story. It is a good thing that Edward is so forgiving.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review :)  I am so glad you liked it.  Thanks for sticking around through it all :D

Reviewer: unicorngirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2010 5:41 PM Title: The Good, the Beautiful & Everything In Between

that was a good chapter expecially the song and the ending.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review!  I am so glad you liked it.  Especially the song, I was kinda worried about it - I hadn't written a poem in years, LOL!!

Thanks so much for reading! :)

Reviewer: fangrl Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2010 2:25 PM Title: The Good, the Beautiful & Everything In Between

Lovely ending to a sweet yet tragic story. Really enjoyed the outtakes, too.



Author's Response:

Thank you so very much for the review!  I am so glad you liked it :)  Thanks for reading, too!

Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jul 2010 5:37 PM Title: In the Wake of Delusion

I love your story and you. You are resolving it very well. I think the baby is a good touch a way for Mace to carry on. Although instead of killing him you could have sent him to me. Sheesh where's the love. Keep up the awesome work.

   Marguerite

Reviewer: janefanatic Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2010 2:08 PM Title: In the Wake of Delusion

Clever chapter title! I loved Edward in this chapter; he was so accepting. I am SO sad that the story is ending... but I'm happy too, because E&B (And Hippy Alice/Jasper) totally deserve a happy ending. Oh, I mean, if it is a happy ending. I don't think you're mean enough to make us cry (AGAIN), are you?

Reviewer: brandyb34 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2010 5:37 PM Title: In the Wake of Delusion

Okay i like this story a lot and I think you did a great job with it...but i think it would be really awesome if Edward ended up being Mace.   That would be so fucked up and mind blowing.  It's your story do what you want. You have told a really good story, though...be proud.

Reviewer: unicorngirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2010 11:55 PM Title: In the Wake of Delusion

that was so sweet how he excepted the baby even though it is Masons update soon please

Reviewer: Sandrai86 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2010 10:28 AM Title: In the Wake of Delusion

Shit.. im in aww... This chapter rocks! Mace lost a little appeal though, he really was creepy.. But you made me happy with the pregnancy, and the sex.. shit.. all of it was good.. im gonna quit babbling now.. ;) update soon..

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2010 5:29 AM Title: In the Wake of Delusion

I was kind of happy she was pregnant the family will always have a reminder of Mace! So sad to see this story end!

Reviewer: janefanatic Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2010 11:37 AM Title: O Brother, Where Art Thou?

I am so sad. No, really. I feel a deep fondness and sorrow for Mace. And now he's gone. Is it bad of me to hope Bella is pregnant? Because then Mace can live on (kinda)... Thanks for your update; hopefully next chapter will give me good news to cure me of this despondency! 



Author's Response:

THank you so much for your review :)  I am glad you cared for Mace, I really loved him!! :(

I am more than amazed at my latest response to this fic!  With the exception of one anonymous sorta nasty review (LOL), my reviews have been so supportive!  I love you all!  I was so afraid ppl would hate me for 1.) Killing a sorta main character and 2.) the possibility of a spawn from a deranged character LOL!!!  It's amazing how many ppl are accepting of it either way.  I never thought I would have so much support with such controversial subject matter.  I am thoroughly amazed!  Thank you everyone!!!
 
Here is your teaser for chapter 19:

Edward pulled back and wiped away my tears with his thumbs, kissing the trails left on my cheeks.  He then kissed my chin and then my nose and finally landed on my lips with a searing, needy kiss.

 

We lay on his bed for several hours, just cuddling in silence.  Every so often, Edward would trail his fingers across my stomach and sigh softly, and kiss my head.  It was nice and comforting, and helped to settle my nerves.  A little.  Okay, not really.  But it was nice.

Reviewer: janefanatic Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2010 1:32 PM Title: Operation Spock Knows Best

AAAAAHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!! 

-Okay, let's ignore that CLIFFHANGER for a moment... I loved the reunion scene! Using Star Trek to win Edward back was just so perfect! But I am really feeling some sad love for poor neglected Mace. Or at least I was, before the end of this chapter. Any chance of an MPOV outtake? If I beg with puppy eyes? Pllleeeeeeaaaaasssssseeeeee????

Okay, now we return to our regularly broadcasted program- AAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!! EDWARD!! NNNNOOOOOOO!!!!!!

Reviewer: SpunkyBookworm Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2010 4:31 AM Title: O Brother, Where Art Thou?

Oh, damn. The baby in the middle. I hate that! I'll keep reading though. :D



Author's Response:

LOL!  Thanks for your review ;)  And thanks for keeping reading! :D

I am more than amazed at my latest response to this fic!  With the exception of one anonymous sorta nasty review (LOL), my reviews have been so supportive!  I love you all!  I was so afraid ppl would hate me for 1.) Killing a sorta main character and 2.) the possibility of a spawn from a deranged character LOL!!!  It's amazing how many ppl are accepting of it either way.  I never thought I would have so much support with such controversial subject matter.  I am thoroughly amazed!  Thank you everyone!!!
 
Here is your teaser for chapter 19:

Edward pulled back and wiped away my tears with his thumbs, kissing the trails left on my cheeks.  He then kissed my chin and then my nose and finally landed on my lips with a searing, needy kiss.

 

We lay on his bed for several hours, just cuddling in silence.  Every so often, Edward would trail his fingers across my stomach and sigh softly, and kiss my head.  It was nice and comforting, and helped to settle my nerves.  A little.  Okay, not really.  But it was nice.

Reviewer: terriberry Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2010 1:41 AM Title: O Brother, Where Art Thou?

Oh. My. God. I didn't want Bella to end up with Mace, but jeez I didn't want him dead. It's so sad, but I don't hate you! I kinda hope Bella is preggers. That way a little piece of Mace can live on- purely innocent; and it can give them all the chance to, in some way, do right by him. Alice was right; he was seriously screwed up; and they neglected to get him the help he needed, such a shame. I hope that Edward coulld find it in his heart to be accepting. I think that if she is, he will. He still loved his brother after all he put him through, that shows his huge capacity for love. They could always not tell anyone, the baby could obviously pass as Edwards, that way Mace's parents wouldn't have to find out about just how deep his depravity ran. Anyways, looking forward to see which direction  you take this shocking new possible plot development. So sad this "roller coaster ride" is almost over. Seriously, love your story.



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review.  I already told you privately what it meant to me *grin*

 

I am more than amazed at my latest response to this fic!  With the exception of one anonymous sorta nasty review (LOL), my reviews have been so supportive!  I love you all!  I was so afraid ppl would hate me for 1.) Killing a sorta main character and 2.) the possibility of a spawn from a deranged character LOL!!!  It's amazing how many ppl are accepting of it either way.  I never thought I would have so much support with such controversial subject matter.  I am thoroughly amazed!  Thank you everyone!!!
 
Here is your teaser for chapter 19:

Edward pulled back and wiped away my tears with his thumbs, kissing the trails left on my cheeks.  He then kissed my chin and then my nose and finally landed on my lips with a searing, needy kiss.

 

We lay on his bed for several hours, just cuddling in silence.  Every so often, Edward would trail his fingers across my stomach and sigh softly, and kiss my head.  It was nice and comforting, and helped to settle my nerves.  A little.  Okay, not really.  But it was nice.

Reviewer: carrangi Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2010 7:08 PM Title: O Brother, Where Art Thou?

NOOOOOO I loved Mace! I'm so sad lol Ok and Bella being pregnant? The girl really cant catch a break lol but I think it is an awesome twist! I cant wait to see what happens and how edward takes the news!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review :)  I am glad you are another Mace lover!  That makes me so happy :)

 

I am more than amazed at my latest response to this fic!  With the exception of one anonymous sorta nasty review (LOL), my reviews have been so supportive!  I love you all!  I was so afraid ppl would hate me for 1.) Killing a sorta main character and 2.) the possibility of a spawn from a deranged character LOL!!!  It's amazing how many ppl are accepting of it either way.  I never thought I would have so much support with such controversial subject matter.  I am thoroughly amazed!  Thank you everyone!!!
 
Here is your teaser for chapter 19:

Edward pulled back and wiped away my tears with his thumbs, kissing the trails left on my cheeks.  He then kissed my chin and then my nose and finally landed on my lips with a searing, needy kiss.

 

We lay on his bed for several hours, just cuddling in silence.  Every so often, Edward would trail his fingers across my stomach and sigh softly, and kiss my head.  It was nice and comforting, and helped to settle my nerves.  A little.  Okay, not really.  But it was nice.

Reviewer: fleur50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2010 4:32 PM Title: O Brother, Where Art Thou?

wow! encore un beau chapitre...



Author's Response:

Merci!!

Je suis plus que surpris de ma dernière réponse à cette fic! À l'exception d'un examen anonyme sorta méchant (LOL) , mes commentaires ont été si favorable! Je vous aime tous! J'avais tellement peur que les gens me détestent pour 1 .) Tuer le caractère d'une sorta principal et 2.) la possibilité d'un rogue d'un esprit dérangé caractère LOL! C'est incroyable de voir combien de gens acceptent de toute façon. Je n'ai jamais pensé que j'aurais autant de soutien avec un tel sujet à controverse. Je suis bien surpris! Merci à tous!

Voici votre teaser pour le chapitre 19:

Edward tiré vers l'arrière et essuyé mes larmes avec ses pouces, embrassant les pistes laissées sur mes joues. Il a ensuite embrassé mon menton puis mon nez et a finalement atterri sur mes lèvres avec une brûlante , baiser dans le besoin.

Nous nous sommes couchés sur son lit pendant plusieurs heures , il suffit de caresser dans le silence. De temps en temps, Edward se traîner ses doigts sur mon ventre et soupirant tout bas, et de baiser ma tête. Il était beau et réconfortant, et a contribué à apaiser mes nerfs. Un peu. Bon, pas vraiment. Mais il était gentil.

 

Reviewer: EASEmama Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2010 4:12 PM Title: O Brother, Where Art Thou?

You. Are. Evil.

I love you.  Update soon, please!  :)



Author's Response:

LOL!  Thanks so much for your review!  Sorry to be evil *wicked grin* lol

 

I am more than amazed at my latest response to this fic!  With the exception of one anonymous sorta nasty review (LOL), my reviews have been so supportive!  I love you all!  I was so afraid ppl would hate me for 1.) Killing a sorta main character and 2.) the possibility of a spawn from a deranged character LOL!!!  It's amazing how many ppl are accepting of it either way.  I never thought I would have so much support with such controversial subject matter.  I am thoroughly amazed!  Thank you everyone!!!
 
Here is your teaser for chapter 19:

Edward pulled back and wiped away my tears with his thumbs, kissing the trails left on my cheeks.  He then kissed my chin and then my nose and finally landed on my lips with a searing, needy kiss.

 

We lay on his bed for several hours, just cuddling in silence.  Every so often, Edward would trail his fingers across my stomach and sigh softly, and kiss my head.  It was nice and comforting, and helped to settle my nerves.  A little.  Okay, not really.  But it was nice.

Reviewer: viking Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2010 4:04 PM Title: O Brother, Where Art Thou?

Dang--I can't believe you killed Mace!  I wanted him for myself!  Thanks for the chapter!



Author's Response:

LOL!  Yeah, my co-conspirator wouldn't have let you have him, sorry, lol!  I am glad you were another one on his team, though, that makes me happy :D

 

I am more than amazed at my latest response to this fic!  With the exception of one anonymous sorta nasty review (LOL), my reviews have been so supportive!  I love you all!  I was so afraid ppl would hate me for 1.) Killing a sorta main character and 2.) the possibility of a spawn from a deranged character LOL!!!  It's amazing how many ppl are accepting of it either way.  I never thought I would have so much support with such controversial subject matter.  I am thoroughly amazed!  Thank you everyone!!!
 
Here is your teaser for chapter 19:

Edward pulled back and wiped away my tears with his thumbs, kissing the trails left on my cheeks.  He then kissed my chin and then my nose and finally landed on my lips with a searing, needy kiss.

 

We lay on his bed for several hours, just cuddling in silence.  Every so often, Edward would trail his fingers across my stomach and sigh softly, and kiss my head.  It was nice and comforting, and helped to settle my nerves.  A little.  Okay, not really.  But it was nice.

Reviewer: EASEmama Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2010 3:56 PM Title: A Song is Worth a Thousand Words

I had never had alcohol in my life... the first time was in college when I had the flu and took one shot of NyQuil... yep, you guessed it... I got drunk.  Turns out I'm a lightweight.

 

:)



Author's Response:

Hey, don't feel bad.  I had ONE SHOT of Jim Beam and I was out cold!  Passed out puking in the toilet (I have no clue how I got to the toilet either - I was alone....)

hahahaha

Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2010 3:24 PM Title: O Brother, Where Art Thou?

Oh lord you made me cry. A lot. I did not want to see Mace die. He was a good soul he just needed help. Sad but I can see why you did. However you could have sent him to me for rehab. I was shocked when Angela asked if she was pregnant. Oh now that would be a shocker. Keep up the awesome work.

  Marguerite



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review!  I am so glad you saw the good side of Mace ;)

 

I am more than amazed at my latest response to this fic!  With the exception of one anonymous sorta nasty review (LOL), my reviews have been so supportive!  I love you all!  I was so afraid ppl would hate me for 1.) Killing a sorta main character and 2.) the possibility of a spawn from a deranged character LOL!!!  It's amazing how many ppl are accepting of it either way.  I never thought I would have so much support with such controversial subject matter.  I am thoroughly amazed!  Thank you everyone!!!
 
Here is your teaser for chapter 19:

Edward pulled back and wiped away my tears with his thumbs, kissing the trails left on my cheeks.  He then kissed my chin and then my nose and finally landed on my lips with a searing, needy kiss.

 

We lay on his bed for several hours, just cuddling in silence.  Every so often, Edward would trail his fingers across my stomach and sigh softly, and kiss my head.  It was nice and comforting, and helped to settle my nerves.  A little.  Okay, not really.  But it was nice.

Reviewer: fangrl Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2010 1:09 PM Title: O Brother, Where Art Thou?

Mace lives on!

You certainly know how to keep us on our toes. A pregnant Bella? Now what are Mama and Papa Cullen going to think about that?



Author's Response:

LOL!  Thanks for your review!

 

I am more than amazed at my latest response to this fic!  With the exception of one anonymous sorta nasty review (LOL), my reviews have been so supportive!  I love you all!  I was so afraid ppl would hate me for 1.) Killing a sorta main character and 2.) the possibility of a spawn from a deranged character LOL!!!  It's amazing how many ppl are accepting of it either way.  I never thought I would have so much support with such controversial subject matter.  I am thoroughly amazed!  Thank you everyone!!!
 
Here is your teaser for chapter 19:

Edward pulled back and wiped away my tears with his thumbs, kissing the trails left on my cheeks.  He then kissed my chin and then my nose and finally landed on my lips with a searing, needy kiss.

 

We lay on his bed for several hours, just cuddling in silence.  Every so often, Edward would trail his fingers across my stomach and sigh softly, and kiss my head.  It was nice and comforting, and helped to settle my nerves.  A little.  Okay, not really.  But it was nice.

Reviewer: oo2uniq4uoo Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2010 12:40 PM Title: O Brother, Where Art Thou?

:0( im truly sad i was team mace!!



Author's Response:

I am so happy to hear you were team Mace!  I really loved him, too.  Thanks so much for reviewing!  Sorry to break your heart though :(

 

I am more than amazed at my latest response to this fic!  With the exception of one anonymous sorta nasty review (LOL), my reviews have been so supportive!  I love you all!  I was so afraid ppl would hate me for 1.) Killing a sorta main character and 2.) the possibility of a spawn from a deranged character LOL!!!  It's amazing how many ppl are accepting of it either way.  I never thought I would have so much support with such controversial subject matter.  I am thoroughly amazed!  Thank you everyone!!!
 
Here is your teaser for chapter 19:

Edward pulled back and wiped away my tears with his thumbs, kissing the trails left on my cheeks.  He then kissed my chin and then my nose and finally landed on my lips with a searing, needy kiss.

 

We lay on his bed for several hours, just cuddling in silence.  Every so often, Edward would trail his fingers across my stomach and sigh softly, and kiss my head.  It was nice and comforting, and helped to settle my nerves.  A little.  Okay, not really.  But it was nice.

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2010 11:55 AM Title: O Brother, Where Art Thou?

I was extremely sad to see Mase go! Love this story!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review!  I am glad you cared for Mace, I loved him dearly :(

I am also glad you love the story! :)

 

I am more than amazed at my latest response to this fic!  With the exception of one anonymous sorta nasty review (LOL), my reviews have been so supportive!  I love you all!  I was so afraid ppl would hate me for 1.) Killing a sorta main character and 2.) the possibility of a spawn from a deranged character LOL!!!  It's amazing how many ppl are accepting of it either way.  I never thought I would have so much support with such controversial subject matter.  I am thoroughly amazed!  Thank you everyone!!!
 
Here is your teaser for chapter 19:

Edward pulled back and wiped away my tears with his thumbs, kissing the trails left on my cheeks.  He then kissed my chin and then my nose and finally landed on my lips with a searing, needy kiss.

 

We lay on his bed for several hours, just cuddling in silence.  Every so often, Edward would trail his fingers across my stomach and sigh softly, and kiss my head.  It was nice and comforting, and helped to settle my nerves.  A little.  Okay, not really.  But it was nice.

Reviewer: Lisa Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2010 7:54 AM Title: O Brother, Where Art Thou?

I'm happy Edward is okay.

 

You're evil, Bella preggo with Mace? Hell no!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review!  Sorry to be evil ;)

 

I am more than amazed at my latest response to this fic!  With the exception of one anonymous sorta nasty review (LOL), my reviews have been so supportive!  I love you all!  I was so afraid ppl would hate me for 1.) Killing a sorta main character and 2.) the possibility of a spawn from a deranged character LOL!!!  It's amazing how many ppl are accepting of it either way.  I never thought I would have so much support with such controversial subject matter.  I am thoroughly amazed!  Thank you everyone!!!
 
Here is your teaser for chapter 19:

Edward pulled back and wiped away my tears with his thumbs, kissing the trails left on my cheeks.  He then kissed my chin and then my nose and finally landed on my lips with a searing, needy kiss.

 

We lay on his bed for several hours, just cuddling in silence.  Every so often, Edward would trail his fingers across my stomach and sigh softly, and kiss my head.  It was nice and comforting, and helped to settle my nerves.  A little.  Okay, not really.  But it was nice.

Reviewer: carrangi Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2010 12:47 AM Title: Operation Spock Knows Best

ooooo I wanted her to end up with Mace :( but now he is seriously crazy and the idea doesn't seem as good to me lol. I thought the star trek convention was a very cute idea though!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! :)

Here is your teaser for chapter 18, and remember, if you reviewed my outtake, I will be sending you an extra teaser shortly :)
 

My insides felt as if they had been ripped out and run through a blender. I couldn’t even comprehend what had happened. I kept thinking I would wake up and it would have all been a bad dream, but I wasn’t that lucky. None of us were that lucky.

Jasper was able to make it to the hospital mere seconds after us. I had texted him with Alice’s phone after she spoke to Mr. and Mrs. Cullen. I knew she was going to need a bit more comfort than I could provide, and if anyone could come through, it would be Jasper.

He grabbed Alice and held her tightly, allowing her to put her full weight against him. Suddenly, I found myself extremely envious of the solace Alice found in the man she loved.

<i>Because the man I loved could be dying this very second and I have no one to console me…</i>

Reviewer: fangrl Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2010 4:36 AM Title: Operation Spock Knows Best

Bella was smart to use Edward's love of Star Trek to get him to understand her side of the story without going into details until he was ready to forgive her and hear it. 

As for Mace, he continues to act selfishly. I understand he is hurt, but he needs to stop blaming others for his place in life. He needs to man up and take responsibility for his destiny. I do hope he comes to a place in his life where he can just be himself and not the evil side to Edward's good side. 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review.  I love your thoughts! :)

Here is your teaser for chapter 18, and remember, if you reviewed my outtake, I will be sending you an extra teaser shortly :)
 

My insides felt as if they had been ripped out and run through a blender. I couldn’t even comprehend what had happened. I kept thinking I would wake up and it would have all been a bad dream, but I wasn’t that lucky. None of us were that lucky.

Jasper was able to make it to the hospital mere seconds after us. I had texted him with Alice’s phone after she spoke to Mr. and Mrs. Cullen. I knew she was going to need a bit more comfort than I could provide, and if anyone could come through, it would be Jasper.

He grabbed Alice and held her tightly, allowing her to put her full weight against him. Suddenly, I found myself extremely envious of the solace Alice found in the man she loved.

<i>Because the man I loved could be dying this very second and I have no one to console me…</i>

Reviewer: Emo585 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2010 1:55 AM Title: I'm Ready... Right?

Omg!!!!! How did this happen

Reviewer: loveofjasper Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2010 1:34 AM Title: Operation Spock Knows Best

noooooooooooo



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for your review :)

Here is your teaser for chapter 18, and remember, if you reviewed my outtake, I will be sending you an extra teaser shortly :)
 

My insides felt as if they had been ripped out and run through a blender. I couldn’t even comprehend what had happened. I kept thinking I would wake up and it would have all been a bad dream, but I wasn’t that lucky. None of us were that lucky.

Jasper was able to make it to the hospital mere seconds after us. I had texted him with Alice’s phone after she spoke to Mr. and Mrs. Cullen. I knew she was going to need a bit more comfort than I could provide, and if anyone could come through, it would be Jasper.

He grabbed Alice and held her tightly, allowing her to put her full weight against him. Suddenly, I found myself extremely envious of the solace Alice found in the man she loved.

<i>Because the man I loved could be dying this very second and I have no one to console me…</i>

Reviewer: fleur50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2010 5:37 PM Title: Operation Spock Knows Best

oups!... je comprends maintenant, j'ai lu la deuxième alert avant la première.  J'ai adoré les deux chapitres même si je ne comprenais pas la fin de l'outtake, vu que j'avais lu en premier.  J'avais présumé que c'était à cause de l'anglais...

Fleur est mon deuxième vrai prénom (''Fleur'' en français) mais je suis aussi très fleur bleue.  Ton texte avec les fleurs m'ont fait rire.

Si j'avais à traduire le titre de ta fic en français, ce serait par ''Le sexy, la Belle et le vilain'', en français ça sonne bien.  Peut-être je serais tentée de traduire ta fic, un jour... mais j'attendrais qu'elle soit terminée ou presque!  Sinon, je proposerais ta fic à qqn d'autres. Je suis bêta pour la traduction française ''The perfect wife'' et je suis bonne en grammaire française.

Naturellement avec ton autorisation, si je l'ai.

 

Fleur

Montréal, Québec

13h37,

heures de Montréal 

 

 

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2010 4:17 AM Title: Operation Spock Knows Best

Can't believe Mase would do that!!! Can't wait for the next update!



Author's Response:

Thank you so very much for your review!!

Here is your teaser for chapter 18, and remember, if you reviewed my outtake, I will be sending you an extra teaser shortly :)
 

My insides felt as if they had been ripped out and run through a blender. I couldn’t even comprehend what had happened. I kept thinking I would wake up and it would have all been a bad dream, but I wasn’t that lucky. None of us were that lucky.

Jasper was able to make it to the hospital mere seconds after us. I had texted him with Alice’s phone after she spoke to Mr. and Mrs. Cullen. I knew she was going to need a bit more comfort than I could provide, and if anyone could come through, it would be Jasper.

He grabbed Alice and held her tightly, allowing her to put her full weight against him. Suddenly, I found myself extremely envious of the solace Alice found in the man she loved.

<i>Because the man I loved could be dying this very second and I have no one to console me…</i>

Reviewer: terriberry Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2010 2:40 AM Title: Operation Spock Knows Best

No, no, no! Please don't kill Edward. Mace has gone completely delusional and desparate. He really needs help. On a happier note, I loved how Bella won Edward back, so them and so perfectly quirky and romantic.  Love this story!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for your review!  I really appreciate it and Im so glad you love the story :)

 

Here is your teaser for chapter 18, and remember, if you reviewed my outtake, I will be sending you an extra teaser shortly :)
 

My insides felt as if they had been ripped out and run through a blender. I couldn’t even comprehend what had happened. I kept thinking I would wake up and it would have all been a bad dream, but I wasn’t that lucky. None of us were that lucky.

Jasper was able to make it to the hospital mere seconds after us. I had texted him with Alice’s phone after she spoke to Mr. and Mrs. Cullen. I knew she was going to need a bit more comfort than I could provide, and if anyone could come through, it would be Jasper.

He grabbed Alice and held her tightly, allowing her to put her full weight against him. Suddenly, I found myself extremely envious of the solace Alice found in the man she loved.

<i>Because the man I loved could be dying this very second and I have no one to console me…</i>

Reviewer: terriberry Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2010 2:08 AM Title: Yellow Submarine

OMG, no way, only four more! *tear* Too bad she just can't have both, hehe.  Okay, I desperately miss Edward. He's kinda being a douche right now and seriously needs to man the hell up, but he's still my darling. I believe that Bella will end up back with Edward. She's a bit torn right now, but she loves Edward. What she feels for Mace is lust, not love. He looks exactly like the man she loves, but has the added sex appeal of the confident dirty talking bad ass. Mace may say he loves her, but actions speak louder than words; and everything he's done to her, that is not love. He covets her. Mace does seem to be remorseful though, and I feel sorry for him. Especially considering since losing to his brother would only add to his inferiority complex. Hopefully he will come to realize that Bella was never his to lose, and this experience with her can help him to become a better man. What she had with Edward was the real thing; and his only deficit compared with his brother is his lack of "experience," which is definitely something they can work on together.



Author's Response:

I absolutely LOVED your review!!  Thank you so much!  You put a lot of thought into that and I absolutely adore that!!!  Thank you!! :)

Reviewer: vampirereader Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2010 1:30 AM Title: Operation Spock Knows Best

Didn't really expect that to happen!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review :) I really appreciate it!

Here is your teaser for chapter 18, and remember, if you reviewed my outtake, I will be sending you an extra teaser shortly :)
 

My insides felt as if they had been ripped out and run through a blender. I couldn’t even comprehend what had happened. I kept thinking I would wake up and it would have all been a bad dream, but I wasn’t that lucky. None of us were that lucky.

Jasper was able to make it to the hospital mere seconds after us. I had texted him with Alice’s phone after she spoke to Mr. and Mrs. Cullen. I knew she was going to need a bit more comfort than I could provide, and if anyone could come through, it would be Jasper.

He grabbed Alice and held her tightly, allowing her to put her full weight against him. Suddenly, I found myself extremely envious of the solace Alice found in the man she loved.

<i>Because the man I loved could be dying this very second and I have no one to console me…</i>

Reviewer: misswhiting14 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2010 12:58 AM Title: Operation Spock Knows Best

... mean ... just... mean!



Author's Response:

I'm sorry, lol :(

Thanks for reviewing!  I appreciate it so much!

 

Here is your teaser for chapter 18, and remember, if you reviewed my outtake, I will be sending you an extra teaser shortly :)
 

My insides felt as if they had been ripped out and run through a blender. I couldn’t even comprehend what had happened. I kept thinking I would wake up and it would have all been a bad dream, but I wasn’t that lucky. None of us were that lucky.

Jasper was able to make it to the hospital mere seconds after us. I had texted him with Alice’s phone after she spoke to Mr. and Mrs. Cullen. I knew she was going to need a bit more comfort than I could provide, and if anyone could come through, it would be Jasper.

He grabbed Alice and held her tightly, allowing her to put her full weight against him. Suddenly, I found myself extremely envious of the solace Alice found in the man she loved.

<i>Because the man I loved could be dying this very second and I have no one to console me…</i>

Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2010 12:54 AM Title: Operation Spock Knows Best

Oh damn Mace went off of the deep end. I never thought he would go that far. I only hope Edward isn't dead. I still kinda think in a way she loves Mace but won't admit it. I would love to see this turned into a longer story since it is very addicting. Keep up the awesome work and please update soon.

  Marguerite



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review!  I'm glad you love the story enough to want it to be longer, lol. 

Here is your teaser for chapter 18, and remember, if you reviewed my outtake, I will be sending you an extra teaser shortly :)
 

My insides felt as if they had been ripped out and run through a blender. I couldn’t even comprehend what had happened. I kept thinking I would wake up and it would have all been a bad dream, but I wasn’t that lucky. None of us were that lucky.

Jasper was able to make it to the hospital mere seconds after us. I had texted him with Alice’s phone after she spoke to Mr. and Mrs. Cullen. I knew she was going to need a bit more comfort than I could provide, and if anyone could come through, it would be Jasper.

He grabbed Alice and held her tightly, allowing her to put her full weight against him. Suddenly, I found myself extremely envious of the solace Alice found in the man she loved.

<i>Because the man I loved could be dying this very second and I have no one to console me…</i>

Reviewer: carrangi Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2010 11:47 PM Title: Yellow Submarine

No0o0o0 I want her to end up with Mace! I don't know why but it just doesn't seem like she loves Edward. I feel bad for Mace but at the same time I want to tell him to get over it lol



Author's Response:

LOL!

Thanks for reviewing and telling me your hopes ;)

Reviewer: stellabella Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2010 12:58 PM Title: A New Leaf

I can honestly only hope that she choses Mace. Yeah I f***ed up big time, but Edward just behaves like the biggest loser. If he loved her as much as he said he did, he would have at least heared her out by this time. And I admit, I have always had a thing for the bad guys...=)

Great work, can't wait to see how it turns out!

Reviewer: terriberry Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2010 11:17 AM Title: White Violets

Emmett is too flipping adorable. I must say I'm really missing Edward. Yay Alice, I have a feeling that her  perspective should be enlightening for us!

Reviewer: terriberry Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2010 10:33 AM Title: A Song is Worth a Thousand Words

Oh that Mace is infuriating, so sneaky and so damn sexy! I'm so disappointed in Edward, what the hell? How could he just walk away and give up on Bella like that? Emmett is a sweetheart, a good friend and a nice distraction right now. Maybe she ought to give Em a shot because at this point, I don't think either twin deserves her!

Reviewer: fangrl Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2010 9:47 AM Title: Yellow Submarine

i like hippie Jasper. It would be nice to read a separate story featuring this version of Jasper. 



Author's Response:

Lol, yes, hippie Jasper was fun :)  My beta would love a whole separate story featuring him too lol :)

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: fleur50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2010 5:05 AM Title: Yellow Submarine

J'adore



Author's Response:

Merci mon ami ;)

Reviewer: SpunkyBookworm Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2010 2:44 AM Title: Yellow Submarine

I like how this is turning out! Love the new AU, btw....Keep it up!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the review and I am so glad you like my AU, I love writing it :)

Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2010 11:26 PM Title: Yellow Submarine

Awesome chapter and you gota love Jasper. And I hope she ends up with Mace or he at least finds someone to love him. He would be my first choice. Anyway keep up the awesome work and I will check out your other story.

  Marguerite



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review :)  I'm glad you loved Jasper, he was a lot of fun to write :D

Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2010 11:07 PM Title: White Violets

Woohoo. She set them up. It takes a woman to figure out things like that. I can't wait for Alice and Jasper. Then Bella and Mace.  Seriously I think they belong together. Better than her and Edward in this one. Keep up the great work.

Marguerite

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2010 11:01 PM Title: Yellow Submarine

I have no idea how this is going to wrap up!!! I can't wait to find out though!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review!

Reviewer: fleur50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2010 5:54 AM Title: White Violets

Quel beau coup de foudre!

J'ai hâte de revoir Mace et Edward... après Jasper/Alice



Author's Response:

Merci beaucoup pour vos paroles! Je suis heureux vous avez aimé les choses entre Emmett et Rosalie . J'ai bien aimé l'écrire. Par ailleurs, "Google translate" vraiment foiré 'coup de foudre', disant que c'était 'la foudre belle'! LOL!

Reviewer: carrangi Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2010 4:11 AM Title: White Violets

I absolutely love how you went about the whole emmett situation! It turned out perfect! I cant wait to see what Alice thinks about everything. I have a feeling she is going to be on team Mace. I know I am!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you loved the Emmett situation, cause I did too! :)

Thanks so much for reviewing!!

Reviewer: fangrl Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2010 10:57 PM Title: White Violets

Love the relationship between Emmet and Bella. Fun stuff. Glad we're seeing the couples start to pair up. 



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I love Emmett so much!  I wish I had one of him in my life, lol!

Reviewer: SpunkyBookworm Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2010 10:40 PM Title: I'm Ready... Right?

Sister, that outtake didn't make me feel any better. OH THE ANGST!! Why do I read FF again???



Author's Response:

Lol, so sorry!

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2010 9:49 PM Title: White Violets

beautiful quote!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reviewing!  I agree, the quote was lovely :)  She has such a way with words!

Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2010 3:33 PM Title: A Song is Worth a Thousand Words

Yes my dear I know it is possible to get drunk off of 1 drink. I have done it. I am shocked however that Edward won't even listen to her explain. I can see being hurt but at least listen for a few minutes. After all he knows how Mace can be. Funny thing is Mace is the one fighting for her and Emmett is being her friend. Maybe Edward could learn from them. Keep up the awesome work and I look forward to your next update.

   Marguerite

 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  I'm glad I'm not the only one who can get drunk on one drink, LOL!

Thanks for reviewing!! :D

Reviewer: oo2uniq4uoo Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2010 12:37 PM Title: A Song is Worth a Thousand Words

awesome chapter!hopefully mace and bella can b together!!



Author's Response:

lol, Thanks so much for your review :)

Reviewer: fleur50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2010 4:52 AM Title: A Song is Worth a Thousand Words

moi aussi , je suis comme cela, un verre et c'est trop!

 

vite, vite la suite... svp, svp...



Author's Response:

Merci beaucoup pour vos encouragements . J'apprécie chaque mot que vous écrivez ! Je suis si heureux que vous apprécierez cette histoire!

Reviewer: carrangi Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2010 3:41 AM Title: A Song is Worth a Thousand Words

hmmmm is it just me or is emmett looking mighty good right about now? I am more concerned about Emmett getting hurt than anyone else lol he is just an innocent bystander. Looking forward to the next update!



Author's Response:

Yes, I love Emmett.  He's one of my faves in this story!  He's uber sweet :) lol

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2010 1:54 AM Title: A Song is Worth a Thousand Words

I think I am falling more in love with Mase now!!!! I love that he comforted her!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  I'm glad you are liking Mace, I love him and it's hard to see ppl hating on him, lol!!!

Thanks for reading and reviewing!  I appreciate it so much!

Reviewer: edward4life Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2010 6:00 AM Title: The Aftermath

great chapter



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I really appreciate your reviews :)

Reviewer: fleur50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2010 3:23 AM Title: The Aftermath

Impressionnant, passionnant et génial.  Vous êtes un auteur pleins de surprises.  J'ai hâte de lire la suite.



Author's Response:

Merci beaucoup!

Reviewer: unicorngirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2010 2:09 AM Title: The Aftermath

oh my god what will happen next update soon



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!

Reviewer: Rion Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2010 10:28 PM Title: The Aftermath

Ok , this story is so FRESH and original I can't wait for more……………
Damm I feel for Bella and come on Edward!!!!!!! you know what your brother is like
How could you blame Bella.. anyway so addicted to the story I am reading it work.
GREAT JOB

Author's Response:

Thanks for your nice words about this story!  It makes me smile to know ppl like it!  Thank you so much!

Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2010 10:10 PM Title: The Aftermath

Oh I do think Mace is right. She knew in the back of her mind that it was Masen and she did it anyway. Although I do think Edward should have let her explain.

Awesome chapter keep up the great work.

  Marguerite 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review!  I'm so glad you are enjoying it :)

Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2010 9:52 PM Title: I'm Ready... Right?

OH HOLY FUCKING SHIT!!!!!!!!!!!! I knew it was Mace. Oh man will there be hell to pay. Did he honestly think she would think it was him? Awesome update keep up the great work.

Marguerite

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