the ending is perfect, don't fret! *hugs* i don't really know how else to review other than to compliment on things, but i will say that from a moody-writer's-perspective, i''d say "More" is perfect as it is, imho. to make it longer would ruin the atmosphere. "less is more". pun or no pun, it's true. *nodnod* def' checking your other stuff out! *squee*

Nicely written. I think it stands alone fine just the way it is. :)