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Reviewer: momams Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2010 11:37 PM Title: eXfactor

Could Bella really have handled the situation? Maybe, but something tells me she probably wouldn't have managed too well. Not that things ended in the best of ways. 

Does she really think he was joking? Was he honest? I guess we will find out on their date, Friday, who was joking and who wasn't.

Reviewer: ladicullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2010 8:58 PM Title: The green eyed monster

I love this story great job looking forward to reading more,

Reviewer: momams Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2010 8:34 PM Title: Don't feed the bears

The bear part was simply adorable!!! And then comparing it to Bella. If I was Edward i would be pissed at the guys too, they knew exactly what they were doing, and enjoyed it thoroughly. 

It was over all a nice day, awkward and strange, but Bella and Edward agreed on a date, until Friday. They will still see each other, hopefully a lot. 

Reviewer: momams Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2010 8:04 PM Title: SSDD

Bella is kind of in a crossroad in her life. She ended a relationship that wasn't working, has good friends, but they are far away, and has her sister closer by. Still she is a lonly person, and it seems to be so by choice. A choice Alice doesn't seem to go along with. 

She has preferred to keep her distance from people, that isn't always the wisest choice. Will her sister be able to pull her out of her shell?

Reviewer: momams Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2010 2:41 PM Title: Run this town

He is starting a new job and under some considerable pressure, so he has to vent it out somehow. Smoking is one way, checking out a nice looking girl, another. 

He is trying to find his way, and learn about the hospital. One person has got his attention already. Will he try to get closer? Perhaps.

Reviewer: momams Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2010 2:32 PM Title: Love Game

Bella seems to like her work, and some of her co-workers. Even though she enjoys her job, she doesn't seem to be very happy with her life in general.

Now there's a new member in the staff, and one who raises gossip, Bella was attracted, as most women were, and she received a compliment in front of him. Is that good? or not that much?

We'll have to wait and see.

Reviewer: Cami2186 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2010 6:20 AM Title: Love Game

Great first chapter. Really liked how Edward and Bella connected.

Reviewer: hcullen74 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2010 9:30 PM Title: The green eyed monster

cant wait till the next one

Reviewer: hcullen74 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2010 1:12 PM Title: The empty bottle saloon

cant wait till the next one

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2010 3:12 AM Title: The blue box blues

Oh  this is going to be bad but I don't know for who yet!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2010 3:07 AM Title: eXfactor

And so Jake makes his ass known now. I can't believe that  he just shows up at her work I mean stalkers do things like that!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2010 2:57 AM Title: Don't feed the bears

Well thank goodness that he actually asked her out!!! Even if he forgot to get her phone number.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2010 2:05 AM Title: SSDD

I kinna feel sorry for Bella because of all the nagging that Alice seems to do to her but hopefully she won't have to nag her for long.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2010 1:52 AM Title: Run this town

Well I guess that she isn't the only one that will be having problems.

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Date: 05 Jun 2010 1:45 AM Title: Love Game

Oh she is going to have problems if she keeps thinking about that when she is in there with patients.

Reviewer: hcullen74 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2010 1:08 AM Title: Moody's mood for love

aww that was so sweet cant wait till the next one

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