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Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2010 3:33 PM Title: Alistair Scott MD

I really enjoyed this POV. It was good to see where his heart is and he is really a good guy. I hope everything works out with Mary.

Reviewer: LetRobstenLuv4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2010 3:00 PM Title: Love Game

I know about the angels too.  She used to do that all the time, look over my head and smile but I didn't think anything of it until she was 3 and started talking to her sister that was not there.  The weir thing is I never dreamed of naming my baby Leah so I wonder where she came up with the name.  Babies are miracles in themself and I totally believe in angels and I believe she really was talking to my lost child.

Reviewer: rhochradel Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2010 11:56 AM Title: Alistair Scott MD

I liked reading Al's point of view.  :)

Reviewer: LetRobstenLuv4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2010 1:48 AM Title: Alistair Scott MD

Well I knew James was shit. lol.  I think Edward is really making an effort.  But shit if I was him and all the guys were looking at my wife I would be crazy too.  Thank God I am not a guy. lol.  I am glad that Alistair doesn't seem like a jerk. 

Reviewer: LetRobstenLuv4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2010 8:00 PM Title: Mom Jeans

OMG that was so funny shit.  I loved this chapter.  Poor Alistar.  But I loved Edward more.  I love his Dom side and I love what Bella did to him with the handcuffs.  I just hope he gets her back for that.

Reviewer: momams Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2010 12:47 AM Title: My turkey leg

Each relationship is different, when there's a lot of time before marriage, you get to figure out more stuff, when there isn't you learn as you go along. This is Bella and Edward's case. There might be more situations like this one, the key will be to be able to talk about them. Having family close is helping too. Even if some family members are engaging in things they might reserve for other places ;)

Reviewer: LetRobstenLuv4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2010 10:55 PM Title: Lingerie and Lasagna

this is great for someone that doesn't have pregnancy history. ok you asked for a story and I will give you one. God honest truth.  I was about 4 months pregnant and I was cramping and bleeding, I went to the doctor and he asked how big my bloodclots were that I was losing and I told him.  He said I had already lost the baby.  I was devestated because I had already had a miscarige the year before.  Well I went back for a check up and they did a blood test when I got hom I called for the results the next day and they told me I was still pregnant.  I went to the Dr. again and asked how can that be, he said I must have been pregnant for twins.  The rest of the pregnancy was complete bed rest. It was terrible.  I had a girl.  When she was about 3 we seen her talking to herself and we asked her, "who are you talking to?". SHe said, "I am talking to my sister Leah". Our mouths dropped open. We asked her what does Leah look like?, she said, "she looks just like me".  We were spookedby the whole thing. She continued to talk to Leah for about a year then it finally faded.  True story.



Author's Response:

That's an amazing story, though I am sorry for your loss. I always believed that babies can talk to angels. I mean, don't you ever wonder why a baby can be looking at a wall, then suddenly laugh at nothing?

Thank you for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2010 12:22 AM Title: Flirting, Gossiping. Memories.

Alice is a trouble maker. She should not flirt, but she should not bring Bella into her mess.

Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2010 6:08 PM Title: Flirting, Gossiping. Memories.

I love that he gets jealous. I know that sometimes things can be brought too far but I don't think Edward has crossed that line yet. Although something tells me he's well on his way. Maybe not a hit but a push or a shake. It's going to happen because Bella likes to walk away from him when they are fighting.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2010 9:41 PM Title: Don't mess with the Jedi

alright lesson learned ! pull out method dose not work just after having a baby! great chapter! 

Reviewer: cjngrls Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2010 12:36 PM Title: Southern Deviled eggs

this was such a cute chapter.. I love it...

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2010 11:32 AM Title: Southern Deviled eggs

They were lucky it was her dad and he has a sense of humor.

Reviewer: oopsadaysey Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2010 11:09 AM Title: Crawl inside you

Geez so had this conversation with my now husband, like 40 years ago, when we were still children - really children - NOW I am a little old lady who likes to shock people     ( yeah and we have a better sex life now than then) I think I should write about Bella and Edward in there 60's. 



Author's Response:

I'd read it. Lmao. Thank you for reviewing.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2010 9:43 AM Title: The proclaimers

Edward will just have to wait. You have to prepare for anal as well. He is doctor. He should know this.



Author's Response:

He should, but I guess it's my fault because I personally don't know much about it. That was my actual experience with anal. Ran to the other side of the room, holding my butt cheeks, true story. I can laugh about it now. Lmao

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2010 9:19 AM Title: Big Day

I think it is so funny that Edward was crying over her vagina.

Reviewer: momams Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2010 4:39 AM Title: Colonial Williamsburg

Bella can be so funny, and Edward is just adorable. They were having fun and enjoying themselves, and it's only the first day. They had plenty of activities planned, but it isn't clear if they will do them all today...

Reviewer: momams Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2010 4:13 AM Title: Lingerie and Lasagna

Things are getting into a new routine, but they still find ways to make their lives fun and exciting, even when working and schedules don't seem to cooperate.

So the honeymoon had to be postponed, but that doesn't mean they can't do something else, or in this case, travel closer home.

Reviewer: christylou Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2010 9:50 PM Title: Tulips that bloom at Christmas time

I'm loving this story! but geez... does everybody in town have to want after B and /or E?

I do like E's sense of humor.

This whole intern torture thing kinda fun..

What's Bella gonna do with her free time now?

Reviewer: LetRobstenLuv4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2010 9:52 AM Title: The empty bottle saloon

Poor Edward now he doesnt how to worry only about Jake but about James too.  I love the possesive Edward. He is so sensual and possesive.  I love the MINE comment.

Reviewer: LetRobstenLuv4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2010 9:28 AM Title: Moody's mood for love

That was a great first time of making love. He didnt last too long but it has been a long time for both of them so hopefully he will do better later.

Reviewer: LetRobstenLuv4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2010 8:08 AM Title: Revelations

Well I knew Edward would lose his cool.  I am glad the family likes Bella so much.  but what was eating at Carlise????

Reviewer: LetRobstenLuv4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2010 7:50 AM Title: Mac N Cheese

Well I loved the twister game that was awesome.  As for Jake, I knew he would try something.  Too bad she couldn't even call Edward cause Jake broke her phone.  I just hope he is not following her.

Reviewer: LetRobstenLuv4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2010 7:14 AM Title: eXfactor

Wow well at least Edward was there to help her with Jake. Yeah Jake sounds like he is going to lose it soon.  He is the type of guy that doesn't know what he has until he loses it and then goes crazy cause its gone.

Reviewer: LetRobstenLuv4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2010 7:01 AM Title: Don't feed the bears

lol Dick twitch. That was funny. Well at least he has balls. I mean he had the nerve to feels her ass and to ask her out so that is good.

Reviewer: LetRobstenLuv4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2010 6:39 AM Title: SSDD

ok I am not trying to be funny but.... what is a DILF?????



Author's Response:

Doctor I'd like to F**k Lmao! Thanks for the reviews.

Reviewer: LetRobstenLuv4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2010 6:21 AM Title: Run this town

OMG I just started this story and I am loving it already.  I cant wait to get to more.  I wonder though how on earth Edward thinks people wont be able to smell the smoke on him?  I hate smoke and I can smell it even over cologne.  lol.

Reviewer: jw89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2010 9:05 PM Title: Tulips that bloom at Christmas time

Thanks for updating so regularly.  Your story makes me laugh.

Reviewer: BELLWARDC Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2010 6:43 PM Title: Don't feed the bears

Funny chapter!

Reviewer: Cami2186 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2010 8:57 AM Title: Don't feed the bears

Really enjoyed the chapter. It was funny that Edward ran from a bear cub. Good to see that Edward asked Bella out.

Reviewer: kitkatr Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2010 2:04 AM Title: Don't feed the bears

Things look promising! Looking forward to reading more!

Reviewer: kitkatr Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2010 1:55 AM Title: SSDD

Nice background information chapter!

Reviewer: kitkatr Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2010 1:48 AM Title: Run this town

Edward is a bit of a perv! Bella better look out.... :)!

Reviewer: kitkatr Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2010 1:42 AM Title: Love Game

As a nurse myself, I can appreciate a good looking doctor in scrubs! Love the story!

Reviewer: mudchic Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2010 1:31 AM Title: Mom Jeans

These two crack me up. I love this story.

Reviewer: cjngrls Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2010 10:52 PM Title: Mom Jeans

hahahahaha... I love it!!!! Oh.. he is gonna spank her ass good when he gets out of those cuffs!!!!

Reviewer: mz_cullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2010 6:49 PM Title: A Hard Day's Night

awww that was cute at the end and funny i would hate to be edwards intern he is really evil but great chapter non the less

Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2010 12:46 PM Title: A Hard Day's Night

Please tell me his cousin isn't James and he's not talking about Bella? That would be so funny

Reviewer: mz_cullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2010 12:51 AM Title: The proclaimers

i love it

Reviewer: mz_cullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2010 9:38 PM Title: Big Day

awwwww i love it

Reviewer: Cami2186 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2010 8:48 AM Title: SSDD

Nice to see Alice and Jasper in this chapter with their twins.

Reviewer: Cami2186 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2010 8:30 AM Title: Run this town

Great to see edward's point of view to see how his day was going.

Reviewer: rhapsody Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2010 5:17 AM Title: Aftermath

And this is where Bella gets pregnant with no birth control and even if she was on the shot the antibiotics would cancel lol



Author's Response:

Of course!! lmao.

Reviewer: rhapsody Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2010 3:29 AM Title: What really happened

Edward needs to get a grip and stop hiding shit from Bella, can't have a marriage built soley on omissions. Bella can't watch her own back when she doesn't know what point she's going to be attacked from. Edward's actually looking like a shitty fiancee... he was doing so well in the beginning--shame. I'm actually hoping she leaves and shocks him out of his habit.



Author's Response:

I hope you don't give up on the story just yet, it gets kinda funny. Thank you for reading.

Reviewer: rhapsody Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2010 8:34 PM Title: Ode to Joy

Bella doesn't really seem to compromise much with Edward... it's always they have to do what is important to her, the whole New Years deal she was all 'I don't care I want this' even though Edward was upset.

Reviewer: momams Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2010 8:24 PM Title: Ice Ice Baby

IT is a miracle baby, not for the conception but for all that Bella has been through. It will be a strong, tough baby. 

All the fear Bella was having, was for nothing. Edward was more than happy, he was thrilled with the news.

About Irina and Jared, they make an unusual couple, but perhaps they will be able to make it work. 

Reviewer: momams Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2010 7:55 PM Title: The reception

It was a real fun party, Edward's prank was excellent.

So Bella is waiting to tell him, and he has no clue, what soever, what will he say?

Can't wait....

Reviewer: rhapsody Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2010 1:57 PM Title: Picking up the pieces

So glad you didn't use the same lines from Twilight with the waiter, their overplayed with FF

Reviewer: rhapsody Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2010 6:23 AM Title: Revelations

Wow Jake really is a nut case, Bella should get a grip and charge him. Clearly she shouldn't go by her instincts with him.

 

Edward is a sweetie though

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2010 4:09 AM Title: Baby Baby

Bella was right to tell Edward. Bree was a threat like a guy is a threat. You still have sex at the end of pregnancy just not as much, so you were pretty accurate with the part where Bella wasn't interested for awhile. You get in moods where you don't want to be touched and then you are ok again.

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2010 3:39 AM Title: eXfactor

loved it

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Date: 15 Jun 2010 3:29 AM Title: Don't feed the bears

loved it em is so funny poor edward

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Date: 15 Jun 2010 2:25 AM Title: SSDD

loved it alice is so funny and cuts to the truth

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2010 1:56 AM Title: Run this town

that was so funny poor edward bad first day first late and then mike but was looking up when he saw bella

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2010 1:44 AM Title: Love Game

I loved it such a great first chapter can't wait to read more

Reviewer: mz_cullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2010 9:56 PM Title: Baby Baby

LOVE IT WAY TO GO KEEP UP THE AWESOME WORK BABE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: momams Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2010 6:08 PM Title: The Wedding

It seems Renee is right, Bella has been showing enough signs, we'll have to see what happens now.

The wedding was really nice, and sweet.

The night before, filled with interesting things and pranks.

Reviewer: momams Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2010 5:30 PM Title: I'm too sexy

It was the girls time to party, and party they did. Everyone was having a good time, Bella enjoyed herself too. But there's something strange going on, either she wasn't getting alcohol in her drinks, or there's something happening, her mood switches too fast and too much. And what ever it is, Renee is suspicious.

 

Reviewer: momams Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2010 5:12 PM Title: Jenna's

It's great seeing how well Bella and Edward get along. The trust in all of this group is amazing. The guys had a good time, enjoyed themselves and bonded. 

The morning after, might not be that great though. 

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2010 3:51 PM Title: Lake George Escape

Camping always sounds like fun, but it is always so much work. I need a couple days off to recover.

Reviewer: mz_cullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2010 12:51 AM Title: Lake George Escape

love it

Reviewer: cjngrls Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2010 10:52 PM Title: Lingerie and Lasagna

I'm loking forward to see what you do with Colonial Williamsburg.. I love 45 minutes from there.... and love the place



Author's Response:

I hope you find it satisfactory and that I did it justice. I have only been there once. Happy Reading!

Reviewer: soareska Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2010 6:45 AM Title: My turkey leg

 "Bella once said that they should bottle my scent and sell it. I think they should bottle her poon juice, I'd use that shit as steak sauce."

HAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAAHA... best line in fanfiction i've EVER read. HYSTERICAL!!!!!!!! F*CKING BRILLIANT!!!!!!!

LOVE this story...

MORE...

 



Author's Response:

Thank you for saying that. My sister reads all my chapters before I post them. She found that line to be disgusting and told me to remove it, I couldn't do it. Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: mflow Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2010 3:49 AM Title: Don't feed the bears

Lol@Edward, he's so cute!

Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2010 3:02 AM Title: My turkey leg

I think you are doing a fantastic job with this story! I can not wait to see where you are going with this.  I am excited about the baby.  I am also glad that you update frequently that is really nice!  I know that not all people who read leave reviews.  I try to, I know I missed a few chapters but I get on reading frenzy tryign to catch up when I start a story late....but I really want you to know that i really love this story it is great!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2010 3:20 PM Title: Colonial Williamsburg

Bella is so funny. Dreaming about food and Edward's dreamy parts. They just can't control themselves. I don't even know why they waste money on vacations.

Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2010 1:16 PM Title: Colonial Williamsburg

Ohh that was so funny!  I love this story so much.

 

Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2010 11:43 PM Title: Lingerie and Lasagna

When I was preggo with my oldest, I had gallbladder attacks the entire pregnancy.  I literally threw up everyday for 8 freaking months and since my daughter was born by emergency c-section 28 days early I was sick almost every day of being pregnant.  It SUCKED!  I think the funnest thing for me being pregnant was cravings: Peanut butter and cottage cheese together..It is actually not to bad, McDonalds french fries and hershy's chocolate candy bar as a meal..lol I know healthy!  Chicken strips dipped in ranch with tabasco sauce was a must have, grilled cheese sandwiches, the oddest thing though I believe was the obsession with CHEWING jawbreakers (like the gobstopper ones they are not HUGE and they are fairly easy to chew but just chewing them).  Mood swings I never had issues with but the lust factor was hard on my ex-husband so he says...lol



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for sharing that with me. I love hearing pregnancy stories. Thank you for reviewing.

Reviewer: mz_cullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2010 10:05 PM Title: Lingerie and Lasagna

i love it that was totally awesome!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2010 6:21 PM Title: Ice Ice Baby

wow im happy that they are having a baby that is a miracle in its self cant wait till the next chapter

Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2010 4:13 PM Title: Ice Ice Baby

The Ice Ice Baby was a nice touch excpet my kids all looked at me like I was a moron as I was singing it.  LOL

Ohh well.  Still I am loving this story, excited to see what is up next.  :)

Reviewer: jw89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2010 9:47 AM Title: The reception

Just found this story.  Thank you! It's a great read.

Reviewer: OonaCullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2010 1:48 AM Title: The reception

WOW loved the wedding chapters. Can't wait for the next one. Good job.

Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2010 1:03 AM Title: The reception

ohh she was tired she fell asleep!  Love this story!

Reviewer: momams Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2010 11:08 PM Title: Post traumatic stress

If things were like in the movies... but they aren't and we need to cope with the bad and scary, so we can get to the happy times. Dealing is part of healing, when you evade it, you're just hurting yourself more, in the long wrong. Each person deals with things differently. Bella hadn't figured out how. By going to the cemetery and cleaning the house she was able to see, she NEEDS to move on. It can't be a minute change, if only, but, it will happen, and I am certain soon.

Reviewer: OonaCullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2010 9:32 PM Title: The Wedding

Oh I loved it, so far so GOOD!

Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2010 9:08 PM Title: The Wedding

I am seriously looking forward to the humor factor!  I am excited to read the rest.

Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2010 7:20 PM Title: I'm too sexy

I really love this story!!!!

Reviewer: mz_cullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2010 6:53 PM Title: I'm too sexy

OMG I LOVE IT THE WOLE FLUCKING STORY IT IS JUST FUCKING FUCKTASTIC!!!!!!!!!!!!  WOO WOO ;P



Author's Response:

Thanks!!!!

Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2010 2:41 PM Title: Crawl inside you

I am really loving this story!  I am also here to warn Bella to not get too excited because i personally know that you can have your period and still be preggo!  Especially if it is off at all and since she is never late and all of a sudden was 2 days late....hmmmm.  Could be interesting that is all I can say.

Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2010 7:53 AM Title: Mac N Cheese

what a creep! I love jake in the Twilight series but I hate him in this book.  You are doing a great job I am tired and have to go to work in 3 and half hours and here I am reading instead of sleeping like noraml people...lol

Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2010 6:32 AM Title: Love Game

Nice use of some lady gaga I might add to the fact that I was goign to say I think this story is going to be good!

Reviewer: momams Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2010 4:40 AM Title: Aftermath

It was scary, thankfully Charlie got there, right on time. He did what he had to do, and would do in any similar circumstance, but being it his daughter, I am sure he didn't hesitate, not even for a second.

It was sad, seeing Edward so broken and lost, but Bella is strong and stubborn she wouldn't give up.

As for Jake's letter, thinking about the what if's, it was good that he apologized and realized all of his mistakes, but as he said, he made his bed.

So... one month until the wedding...

Reviewer: momams Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2010 10:49 PM Title: Take a bullet for you

At least Bella called the cops, if not twice, once. How come no one suspected something like this could happen? She is nuts!!! and seems to not care about what she does in order to get what she wants.

As for what happened at the party, it was sad, and maybe avoidable, but Bella had just had enough, can anyone blame her?

Reviewer: vampiregirl56 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2010 10:29 PM Title: Take a bullet for you

OMG'''''''''don't leave us here!! Please next chapter!

Reviewer: momams Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2010 10:27 PM Title: Maria

So now I have no clue who is more of a nut case. The big problem is, Maria is still out loose, and with a plan in her mind, heading for a birthday party, not the best scenario...

Reviewer: momams Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2010 10:16 PM Title: What really happened

So, it's not just Jake, Maria too isn't too well, she has been stalking Edward, and won't take no for an answer. It has to be really scary.

Bella has a good heart and good faith on people, that's a great characteristic, but sadly, it can bring trouble from time to time. Luckily, in this case, both her and Edward had an amazing support group.

Reviewer: mz_cullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2010 9:34 PM Title: Unemployment

keep it up i love your whole story

Reviewer: momams Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2010 9:28 PM Title: Unemployment

Jacob lost his mind, as incredible as it may sound but he did. It's so sad. It's understandable Bella feels so terrible, she was with him for 5 years; in that time, nothing like this ever happened. And then, he lost it, completely. It has to be scary, thinking something like that could have happened to her, or anyone else. Poor Maria, no one deserves that.

As for Edward, he was going to react, and he did, luckily he was stopped before something worse could have happened. Bella was a bit reckless in her actions, but they got the result, and Butch helped too.



Author's Response:

Gotta love Butch. Thank you for all your reviews.

Reviewer: momams Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2010 8:26 PM Title: Following her lead

Tough times sadly affect everyone, including hospitals. Bella was in the list, unfortunately. She is out of a job, and Bella being Bella, feels her world is crumbling around her. She was so upset she didn't even stopped to listen to Edward, she flew, but to the right place, Alice.

So things will change for them. Even now, things won't be too bad, Edward can take care of her and make her dreams come true. 

Reviewer: momams Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2010 8:08 PM Title: Ode to Joy

Edward had all planed out, and he had to change his plans. He wasn't too happy about it, but he went along, and in the end it turned out really good.

So there's someone who looks like Bella, back in town. And she had to meet Jacob. Something didn't click with her, since she wasn't too committed. Good for her. Bella did the right thing in telling her. It had to be shocking, but it was best.

Reviewer: momams Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2010 7:41 PM Title: As time goes by

Carlisle is having a difficult time making up his mind, or he is going along with his wife. The later sounds reasonable. Esme was more than thrilled with all the news. She really cares for Bella and has seen what a nice couple they make. So much, she gave Edward "the ring", which is still kept in its box.

So they found their house, it seems nice and just what they needed. Bella, being Bella, is insisting on pitching in, something Edward wasn't too happy about, but has agreed to, so far. 

What about Jake? If we could still doubt he has a problem, going out with someone who looks so much like Bella, should start clearing things up.

Reviewer: momams Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2010 7:01 PM Title: Crawl inside you

Bella was definitely overreacting, but with good reason, they needed to talk about these things and agree on another form of birth control. Since they are prone to spontaneity. Their talk was good. About, Bella's first time, maybe, in time, when Edward and James get along well, she could tell him. If it makes her feel better, she should, not that it's basic information for him.

I wonder where did the certainty came from? Not easy to know now. So the decision has been made, now they just need to look for the place, and wait until after the holidays.

Reviewer: momams Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2010 4:31 AM Title: Thanksgiving

Is it too soon? Perhaps. When ever it's time, they will both know it and feel it. Also I think I might know why Edward is waiting. It might have to do with certain house they passed by one evening. 

Meanwhile they are finding ways to enjoy each other, even with out privacy...

Reviewer: momams Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2010 4:07 AM Title: The green eyed monster

Things look different from opposite sides of the glass. To Edward, James words sounded like a threat to take Bella from him, not the words of a concerned friend looking out for his best friend. Carlisle and Esme, being older, see things clearer, so they wanted to reassure Edward that trusting Bella was the way to go. But Emmett wasn't helping the situation. So Edward decided to just go see Bella and clear things for himself. It was a good call, I think, he got to see, something he needed to see, reassure his girl and spend time with her. So all in all, it wasn't such a bad thing.

Reviewer: momams Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2010 3:29 AM Title: The empty bottle saloon

Edward had been controlling his jealousy very well. However, he hadn't had much of a chance to see if said control was working. But tonight, he did, and it wasn't easy. Apparently James is good looking and Bella, happy to see him and a bit drunk was very friendly with him. But for her, he is just a friend, Edward is her guy, she just needs to reassure him.

Reviewer: momams Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2010 3:12 AM Title: Moody's mood for love

I didn't think it would take them three weeks, but with all that happened it is in a way, understandable. They chose the fall ball to let everyone at the hospital find out about them. There probably were a few broken hearts and disappointments, not that they cared much. 

IT was perfect.

Reviewer: momams Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2010 2:47 AM Title: Picking up the pieces

It hasn't been an easy week for Bella, but she has had a lot of support, from family, co-workers, Victoria was a surprise, and of course Edward. He has been charming, and winning over to his side, her family. Charlie isn't there yet, but I am sure Renee will help there. 

So they finally went on their date, and it was, just about perfect, so far. Even with the host looking over at Bella. She handled that amazingly.

I do hope the night isn't over yet.

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Date: 09 Jun 2010 2:24 AM Title: Revelations

Is Bella being naive? Should she press charges? Perhaps. She has a good heart, and even if she doesn't love Jake anymore, she doesn't want to hurt him. She thinks it won't happen again. The thing is, that if it does, it would be worse than this, and that isn't good. 

Edward really freaked out, he was worried, nervous and couldn't do a thing for a long time. He was finally able to reach her, and see her. It only took a moment for him to realize she is the one for him.

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Date: 09 Jun 2010 2:03 AM Title: Mac N Cheese

Poor Bella, a night that was going so well, turned into a complete nightmare. There's something wrong with Jake, definitely. He is not just stalking her, he is getting pushy and dominant. And he broke her phone. At least she is out of there, going to a safe place. Edward was right, she needs to do something, and now she will. 

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Date: 09 Jun 2010 1:46 AM Title: The blue box blues

So he is getting ready for his date, figuring out where to take her. Nothing too fancy, but not too casual either, his dad should know.

Then he decided to call, just to check on her, and he ended getting a dinner invitation, to which he of course agreed. He might be a bit late now...

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