[Report This]Date: 16 Jul 2013 9:36 PM Title: Chapter 5
Tingle button, bwahahahaha!!
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 03 Oct 2010 11:57 PM Title: Chapter 5
Wow! I loved how Jasper took control of Alice after her temper tantrum. And when he held her and cried I totally fell in love with him.
Date: 27 Sep 2010 8:20 AM Title: Chapter 5
So many interesting things happening LOL wink wink
[Report This]Date: 25 Sep 2010 10:13 PM Title: Chapter 5
loved it very much an some of it was pretty funny thanks for sharing....
Date: 24 Sep 2010 11:54 AM Title: Chapter 5
Loved it like I love the rest of the story I hope there's more outtakes to come
Author's Response:
thank you so much and I'm sure that this lot will come around again sometime
Date: 23 Sep 2010 1:43 AM Title: Chapter 5
Loved the inside perspective to the other relationships!
Author's Response:
thanks so much for the review
Date: 22 Sep 2010 8:04 PM Title: Chapter 5
"boundary issues" ... big smile at that one
awesome outtakes ... you could have a whole new story with any of these couples as the center
Author's Response:
thanks for the review - these characters are rather colorful aren't they?
Date: 22 Sep 2010 6:49 PM Title: Chapter 5
LOVED THIS OUTTAKE!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
thank you - it was such fun to write
Date: 22 Sep 2010 3:54 PM Title: Chapter 5
I can't believe Alice freaked out like that. I guess it is a good thing that Jasper can control her. She must have been a bratty child. This is one loving family and it is nice to see that.
Author's Response:
thanks for the update!!!
[Report This]Date: 22 Sep 2010 3:23 PM Title: Chapter 5
i loved getting a view into their aftermath. always wondered what happep behind closed doors
Author's Response:
well, wonder no more :) thanks for the review sweetie!
Date: 22 Sep 2010 3:19 PM Title: Chapter 5
I think alice needed a physical release. I'd rather her break a room than go off on a person.
Author's Response:
yeah, I think so too. thanks for the review