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Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2013 9:34 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Jasper & Alice #2

I think Alice and the whipping bench will always be close friends, lol.  She had a point though, I don't know of any girlfriend that would be happy with her boyfriend working with their abusive ex.  It showed great courage on Jasper's side and he was right also, Alice has to trust his decisions and that he's making the right ones.

Jane x

Reviewer: Trm Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2012 10:42 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Jasper & Alice #2

Wow, Master Jasper is freakin' intense!

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Sep 2010 4:14 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Jasper & Alice #2

I love that Jasper knows how to bring Alice back down.  Forbidding her to speak is like telling most people not to breathe.  I love their chemistry.  You write them so well; so balanced.

Reviewer: dragonfly Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2010 11:20 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Jasper & Alice #2

loving the Jasper & Alice outtakes ... you simply must write their story in full ... it would be awesome



Author's Response:

I'll think about it 

Reviewer: twilightmecrazii Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2010 4:08 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Jasper & Alice #2

Loved it

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2010 5:39 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Jasper & Alice #2

I LOVED LOVED LOVED this!!!!!!!! You did a wonderful job with this chapter. I am soooooo very glad that you showed us Alice's punishment. This was awesome!!!!

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2010 1:29 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Jasper & Alice #2

bloody hell that carol really did a number on poor jasper i totaly get where alice is coming from,  but jasper went to town with alice's punishments i dont think i fully understand this bdsm stuff sometimes cause as jasper husband alice has a right to be upset but she gets punished for it, would jasper prefer her not to care and say nothing, i loke to see them make up after, thanks tracy

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2010 1:26 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Jasper & Alice #2

loved that chapter!, yup Alice really needed to be reminded.

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2010 1:08 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Jasper & Alice #2

I love the outtakes since they add so much sub story and yet because they are outtakes, they don't detract from the flow of the original story.  Good job!

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