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Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Oct 2020 10:05 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Alice and Jasper #1

Loved it!

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Date: 16 Jul 2013 9:29 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Alice and Jasper #1

Lol, Alice is a feisty one, she knows what she wants and goes all out to get it, but sometimes that feistiness is her undoing and this time it led her to her punishment. Ah well, nobody's perfect.

Jane x

Reviewer: maryef Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2013 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Alice and Jasper #1

i think jasper is an ass. i have a hard time thinking kind thoughts about a man that will inflict such harsh punishment on the love of his life and feel no remorse about it and she was drunk, dosent that count for anything. just saying.

Reviewer: thinkingboutyou Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2011 7:23 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Alice and Jasper #1

I love the way you write.. too fucking good.

more alice and jasper please?

Reviewer: furiousstrength Signed

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Date: 24 Jan 2011 3:07 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Alice and Jasper #1

LOVE the outtake. Jasper is a hot, harsh Dom. I would love to hear the rest of what happened after they left the play room at Garrett and Kates party that first time. PULEEESE! :)

Author's Response:
Hmmm now that's a new request - let me see what I can do, okay? What would you like to see happen????

Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight Signed

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Date: 31 Dec 2010 10:29 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Alice and Jasper #1

this was really hot Michele! woowhoo

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed

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Date: 26 Sep 2010 6:13 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Alice and Jasper #1

That was an incredible chapter! I loved learning the back story on Alice and Jasper. And the punishment was seriously hot! I mean it was borderline cruel, but hot as hell!!!

Reviewer: dragonfly Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2010 9:09 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Alice and Jasper #1

Oh I really like hearing about Alice and Jasper and how they came to be... great outtake ... would make a great story in its own right!

Reviewer: twilightmecrazii Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2010 2:46 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Alice and Jasper #1

Loved it

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2010 5:35 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Alice and Jasper #1

Thank you for giving us Alice and Jasper's background. I love Alice. She is determined to get what she wants. Great Job!!!!

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2010 9:37 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Alice and Jasper #1

great chapter alice must really love jasper even before they were together she devoted herself to him, even through all that punishment she remains devoted to him, thanks tracy

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2010 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Alice and Jasper #1

Loved it! It pushes the edges and brings us deep inside Jasper and Alice's commitment to each other.

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