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Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Feb 2016 4:14 PM Title: Satellites

He's either madly in love or just crazy. How can he just forgive her like that? He should be so pissed. She disappeared, whored herself out, while pregnant, put herself and children in danger, knowing what could happen to them BECAUSE she's a nurse. He should take taht little girl and make sure Bella lost all rights to her.

Her excuse was pathetic.

Reviewer: bingohappy29 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2010 1:58 PM Title: Mine Again

that was good and different   i llked it

Reviewer: eddiejazz Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2010 4:55 AM Title: Mine Again

aw good; stoey. lvoed it

Reviewer: Magos186 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2010 1:48 AM Title: Mine Again

interesting. Interesting ending. cool that they moved though. this was a pretty decent story.

Reviewer: Magos186 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2010 1:03 AM Title: Incomplete

I had one theory and one theory only when Bella said Jessica gave her the picture. That theory was that the picture was photoshopped. NICE! I KNEW it wasn't real! Have you mentioned Edward's job before though cause I'm a little confused. You mentioned Carlisle's job, but did you say Edward's? Why would the paparazzi care if he's just a business man?

Reviewer: Magos186 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2010 12:04 AM Title: Devil Wouldn't Recognize You

I'm not sure yet, but I'm definitely curious to know what happens, so you win in that you got me hooked. BTW, just a suggestion, but I don't speak spanish and I'm curious to know what Bella and Enrique were saying to eachother. You might want to consider putting the translation in your end notes.

Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2010 12:22 AM Title: Mine Again

thanks for sharing this story!

Reviewer: o2b18 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Mar 2010 7:30 PM Title: Mine Again

That Primark in Oxford street is an amazing place for bargain outfits :)

I love it when I can actually know where people are writing about. For most fics I am at a disadvantage, as I have never been to the states.

I enjoyed reading your fic, thanks a lot.

Reviewer: arialismom Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2010 3:52 AM Title: Devil Wouldn't Recognize You

Win!

Author's Response:

Thank you! <3

Reviewer: Janiceelynn Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2010 6:59 AM Title: Devil Wouldn't Recognize You

I'm going to be honest -- and please know I'm not trying to flame you -- I don't like Bella. I wish you would have turned her into Bella instead of turning her into someone else, someone unreconizable to us. I feel like it's an entirely different character now (and maybe that's what you were going for...) and can't really relate to her in anyway. So, for this story, I'm going to pass. I just thought you deserved to know why.

Keep writing, and enjoy it!

Author's Response:

Thank you for taking the time to review. What I learned from writing this fic was that people can be very judging after only reading the prologue -- I received over 15k hits on FFn, and most didn't return for Chapter 1.

Reviewer: sprazinko Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Feb 2010 6:32 PM Title: It's All Over Now, Baby Blue

That was sad about the other baby



Author's Response:

Hey, thanks for the review!

Well, one died and this one survived and it's the girl, so we'll take it from here. It was a really sad chapter to write so I'm still a little shocked myself. Wait and see, I guess :)

Reviewer: DollFace Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Feb 2010 12:52 AM Title: Devil Wouldn't Recognize You

This is an amazing story, I love it. But I hate you for leaving me there like that! It wasn't the end was it?



Author's Response:

Thank you :)

This obviously wasn't the end, I'm writing more!

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