Date: 18 Jun 2010 2:38 AM Title: Reason Fourteen
It seems like you could use some help with a Beta-- theres times where you call Edward Ethan & your tenses are not correct. I could help you, if you'd like.
Author's Response:
That would be great! When can I send you the next chapter?
Date: 18 Jun 2010 12:54 AM Title: Reason Six
Oh wow... no wonder she hates Edward-- he definitely doesn't deserve her & the whole speel about not having his life is pretty much garbage if he did that to her.
Date: 18 Jun 2010 12:00 AM Title: Reason Three
Thats kinda odd... she mention'd Jessica's baby having his eyes, yet he is going to marry Bella?
Date: 17 Jun 2010 11:30 PM Title: Reason One
hmm, definitely curious as to what Edward did to make her hate him, probably cheating or something
Date: 16 Jun 2010 8:41 PM Title: Reason Nineteen
Love that little girl she has had to grow up to fast. I think Edward is the admirer.
Date: 16 Jun 2010 2:18 PM Title: Reason Nineteen
i hope the admirer is edward but i have a bad feeling it is james
Date: 16 Jun 2010 12:11 PM Title: Reason Nineteen
can you please get rid of Tanya!! Selene needs to stay but Tanya has to go. maybe she could be hit by a truck, although i'm not picky how she goes as long as she is gone soon. xx
Date: 16 Jun 2010 9:53 AM Title: Reason Nineteen
Selene never fail to amazed me with her maturity, wise beyond her age. How the hell did she end with Tanya as her mother? Thank God it's not genetic and she's not like her mother.
Date: 15 Jun 2010 7:27 PM Title: Reason Eighteen
where did edward go. i am getting kind of annoyed with his dumb behavior
Author's Response:
He's... lurking around somewhere you won't see.
Date: 15 Jun 2010 6:33 PM Title: Reason Eighteen
Good thing this is fiction, otherwise I'd be getting out my soap box and writing about lawyers and forced marriages. I don't get why Bella doesn't let the parents on both sides know about Tanya and the child. It doesn't sound as if Carlisle and Esme know they are grandparents to Selene. That ought to put a kink into the business, as well as Edward being the one to impregnate Bella.
Date: 15 Jun 2010 8:35 AM Title: Reason Eighteen
I think he is going to be a shit starter and try to break Bella and Edward up because he wants her?????
Author's Response:
Who? Jacob or the secret admirer guy?
Date: 14 Jun 2010 4:58 PM Title: Reason Seventeen
I want to rip Tanya's eye's out
Date: 14 Jun 2010 3:22 PM Title: Reason Seventeen
i hate tanya. stupid jerk
Date: 14 Jun 2010 2:54 PM Title: Reason Seventeen
yea eddie....your really trustworthy.....have you told her that the kid really isnt yours.
[Report This]Date: 13 Jun 2010 3:45 PM Title: Reason Sixteen
yeah being the new wife i would be fucking pissed that he agreed to let Tanya stay in the house. Poor Selene have to witness everything and her being the innocent victim. man her mom is a piece of work. poor kids don't pick their parents. too bad. she has to just endure her poor mom's bad behavior. i am at least glad selene has edward and bella and bella seems to truly like the girl
love it
Date: 12 Jun 2010 5:57 PM Title: Reason Sixteen
WHAT IS IN THE FOLDER you are not being nice LOL. Tanya needs to be kick to the curb and they need to take custody of the little angle.
Date: 12 Jun 2010 4:45 PM Title: Reason Sixteen
ugh bella needs a backbone. I would have walked out, and called Alice and the parents.
Now why is eddie allowing her to blackmail him when the kid is not his.
Who cares if she goes to a psychiatrist. There are so many who do. She hasnt lied; she just never told him the truth......and doyou blame her?
Lemme guess. The biatch is related to Irina and has her confidential medical files.
Date: 12 Jun 2010 3:44 PM Title: Reason Sixteen
She has a possible way to have the parents agree to a divorce, why wouldn't she use it? Or at least let the parents know of the granddaughter? Does not seem logical.
Date: 12 Jun 2010 3:42 PM Title: Reason Sixteen
aww cliffe :(
Date: 12 Jun 2010 11:56 AM Title: Reason Sixteen
geez i hate tanya!!where does she get off ruining their honeymoon and selene isn't even edwards. i'm so angry, you really need to get rid of her. xx
Author's Response:
I will get rid of her, I assure you.
Date: 11 Jun 2010 6:45 PM Title: Reason Fifteen
hmmm been wondering when Tanya would show up again.
Date: 11 Jun 2010 4:08 PM Title: Reason Fifteen
OH HELL NO!!!!!!
Date: 11 Jun 2010 3:41 PM Title: Reason Fifteen
wow! I wasn't expecting that!
I do like it though, and I'm looking forward to you next update :)
Date: 11 Jun 2010 2:54 PM Title: Reason Fifteen
What the F@#$#@##@ this cant be happening.
Date: 11 Jun 2010 11:21 AM Title: Reason Fourteen
Never a good idea to get drunk AND naked.
Date: 11 Jun 2010 10:56 AM Title: Reason Fifteen
I'm sorry but WTF!!!!!!!??????? you need to update asap xx
Date: 11 Jun 2010 8:57 AM Title: Reason Fifteen
OMG,but i love all
your Chapterss..)
Date: 11 Jun 2010 8:40 AM Title: Reason Fourteen
She should of told him who EJ is maybe he will understand better why she doesnt like him but really she does.
Date: 11 Jun 2010 8:27 AM Title: Reason Thirteen
At least he is getting some where she dont believe him. What is the story with Tanya did she have his baby?????
[Report This]Date: 11 Jun 2010 7:59 AM Title: Reason Thirteen
awesome story.
Date: 11 Jun 2010 3:16 AM Title: Reason Twelve
Id just say no to the sex. what is he going to do, unless he forces her.
Date: 11 Jun 2010 3:11 AM Title: Reason Eleven
dumb ass should have told her parents.
Date: 09 Jun 2010 5:50 PM Title: Reason Twelve
Haha I love it. Great dress modifications.
Date: 09 Jun 2010 2:42 PM Title: Reason Twelve
loved it :) great chapter
Date: 09 Jun 2010 10:40 AM Title: Reason Twelve
lmao, that is so funny i thought she would cut the dress but dying it as well...genius. but can bella just yell at him and fall in love already? xx
Date: 09 Jun 2010 10:27 AM Title: Reason Twelve
It may not be safe for her to eat the food???? What she did to the dress is unbeleivable. She has balls of brass.
Date: 09 Jun 2010 10:08 AM Title: Reason Eleven
She is in denial oh ya what is she doing to the dress???
Date: 08 Jun 2010 4:13 PM Title: Reason Ten
bravo bravo :) that was wonderful i think that later in the story you should give bella a baby boy and a baby girl :)
Date: 08 Jun 2010 1:20 PM Title: Reason Ten
she needs to take an educational ride and take all of the parents and him to the gravesite, maybe then they would all understand...... of course that is probably her private place.
Date: 08 Jun 2010 6:51 AM Title: Reason Ten
She was kissing him back and liking it thank goodness about time this should confuse the shit out of her. Poor little girl was exacly what Bella needed. Food is not a good thing for Edward to eat around Bella LOL
Date: 08 Jun 2010 6:07 AM Title: Reason Nine
I want to thank you for informing me that you posted on this site. I really missed your story and i've been wondering what could have happened to you. I'ts always enjoyable to read your story all over again, that's why I freaked out when you didn't update in a long time. Salamat kabayan. I'm proud of you, I think you're already good writing stories. Update again soon. I really want to know if Bella will miscarry or if the spotting she experienced was just a normal thing . Please, let her have a healthy pregnancy. Thanks.
Author's Response:
Don't worry about that, I've finished most of the chapters so I THINK that you won't experience anymore of the two-weeks pause or the five months scare.
jumarxie
[Report This]Date: 08 Jun 2010 4:18 AM Title: Reason Nine
I so love that she is trying to have fun with him. i don't think i could ever do that to someone's dinner. so proud of bella.
i can't get to twcs at work so i looked you up on fan fiction. i love that you are up to chapter 23 on there and i printed everything out and read it all 109 pages. I so love the story. I am having alot of fun with it. is the fan fiction story the same as her? thanx for writing
Author's Response:
I'm sorry but I can't post anymore chapters in FF since January so that's why I changed sites so I may not be able to post the complete story at FF. And the story is still the same, i only revised some of the typos here at twcs.
jumarxie
Date: 08 Jun 2010 3:45 AM Title: Reason Nine
I think that she just needs to see that he isn't going to back down from this!
Date: 07 Jun 2010 6:21 PM Title: Reason Nine
What's up with Edward being called Ethan? You called him Ethan when the waiter brought them their meals and in a previous chapter also.
Author's Response:
I'm sorry about that. I originally posted this story back in FF at the Twilight category but then I started experiencing problems in FF so I thought I should just post it as an Original Fiction in fictionpress but then I discovered twcs so now I'm changing every name back to its original state.
Please just report to me any of the other confusing names you might see in the future chapters.
jumarxie
Date: 07 Jun 2010 6:11 PM Title: Reason Nine
Update soon.
Date: 07 Jun 2010 5:44 PM Title: Reason Nine
oooo very nice edward. turn the tables around i see how it is :)
Date: 07 Jun 2010 10:54 AM Title: Reason Nine
u asked me but what in the previous chapter, if u have still kept it the same the kid is actually Mikes, who refused to accept her ;)
i find it funny that u hav got everyone hating Edward, even i hated him in the beginning then my opinion changed...
Author's Response:
Ooooh... now I get it.
Really? I managed to change your opinion? Wow, I never thought I could convince anyone that until they read the penultimate chapter which I've only finished typing today. :)
I wonder what changed your opinion of him though...
jumarxie
Date: 07 Jun 2010 10:48 AM Title: Reason Nine
Holy crap, that thing she done was awesome! I want more ;)
Date: 07 Jun 2010 10:23 AM Title: Reason Nine
I noticed you wrote Ethan instead of Edward. Just wanted to tell you that. Is there an Ethan in your story?
Author's Response:
Actually, there isn't. That was just one of my plans to post the story at another site.I was thinking fictionpress so I changed everything so that it could be Original Fiction but then I discovered twcs so I changed everything back to the original names.
If ever you see a name out of the blue, don't hesitate to ask me so I can change it.
jumarxie
Date: 07 Jun 2010 7:52 AM Title: Reason Nine
He is an idiot...... and what about Tanya and the baby..... althought I expect the baby wasnt his anyway and mama and daddy cullen forced a DNA test when it was born
Date: 07 Jun 2010 7:40 AM Title: Reason Nine
that was cruel but good glad she got a laugh at least for a few. Ethen is Edward right????
Author's Response:
yeah, sorry about that. I was trying to solve my problem in FF where I can't post chapters at the site so I decided to change it to Original Fiction and just post it at fictionpress but then I discovered this site so I didn't get to change everyone's names.
I've fixed it now.
jumarxie
Date: 07 Jun 2010 6:24 AM Title: Reason One
i bet alice is the only other person who knows about them
Date: 07 Jun 2010 4:50 AM Title: Reason Eight
wow great chapter. i really love this story. i hope bella does not forgive edward soon. because she really had to deal with a lot of things such as knowing that her and edwards relationship was based on a bet as well as her losing their son.
Author's Response:
Hmm... she's not going to forgive him soon but she'll still forgive him. That's how I saw Bella in New Moon, the forgiving kind. So...yeah, they'll make up later in the story.
jumarxie
Date: 06 Jun 2010 11:11 PM Title: Reason Eight
The letter is a good thing I wrote one to my bio father he was a bastard and after I put it into words I felt better he was not a nice man and did bad thing. Please tell me Tanya was not preg or if she was it wasnt Edwards ??????
Author's Response:
You'll see what happened to the baby soon.
juamarxie
Date: 06 Jun 2010 10:54 PM Title: Reason Seven
What does that bet say about Tanya if Edward was to be her boyfriend why would she have him sleep with a nother girl. Tanya is a slut. I want to hear Edwards take on all this.
Date: 06 Jun 2010 10:44 PM Title: Reason Eight
ok wonderful chaper cant wait for more :)
Date: 06 Jun 2010 6:12 PM Title: Reason Eight
hmmmm Now either eddie finds the letters or she gives them to him.
Author's Response:
Or... something- rather someone -helps him find those letters and I'm not saying who.
jumarxie
Date: 06 Jun 2010 6:06 PM Title: Reason Seven
Woo Hoo go angry Bella.
[Report This]Date: 06 Jun 2010 3:12 PM Title: Reason Seven
man he is a pig. he was caught red handed. how dare he try and defend himself. man oh man she should have never cried tears over him totally not worth it. i screw everyone of his friends to get back at him.ughh i am so mad
[Report This]Date: 06 Jun 2010 3:05 PM Title: Reason Eight
well i feel for her. i am not sure i believe they slept together but if they did bella is to good for edward and he needs to move on. he doesn't deserve her. he was childish and a pig. ohh he makes me mad
Author's Response:
Don't be too hasty to judge... he might have his reasons.
Date: 06 Jun 2010 2:09 PM Title: Reason Eight
16 more chapters left!!! Tanya.... Baby... pregnant... Daddy....Edward MWAHAHAHAHA evil twist, but ;)
Author's Response:
But... what??
Date: 06 Jun 2010 6:46 AM Title: Reason Five
well now they both lawyered up this is getting good
Author's Response:
Thanks.
jumarxie
[Report This]Date: 06 Jun 2010 6:40 AM Title: Reason Four
oh bella seems like you have a whole group against you. maybe if you where honest and tell them what he did they would be a little more understanding. can't wait for the next chapter
[Report This]Date: 06 Jun 2010 6:31 AM Title: Reason Three
and the plot thickens. so i take it he never knew she was pregnant. she never spoke to him after what happened i take it. now she is slapped int he face with baby daddy. i wonder did renee know who the baby's daddy was?
Author's Response:
Let's just say... she had her suspicions but she didn't ask Bella who the father was. She just assumed.
jumarxie
Date: 06 Jun 2010 3:05 AM Title: Reason Six
Wow. That's all I can think.
Date: 05 Jun 2010 10:31 PM Title: Reason Six
wow great chapter and story. plz continue soon
Author's Response:
Thanks and I'll update soon, don't worry.
jumarxie
Date: 05 Jun 2010 5:30 PM Title: Reason Six
WHAT?????? oh she SOOOO needs to tell moomy that this is the same edward.
Author's Response:
You think so...? Maybe she will... or maybe she won't.
jumarxie
Date: 05 Jun 2010 5:22 PM Title: Reason Five
muhahaha. can SOOOO see Alice as a lawyer
Date: 05 Jun 2010 5:14 PM Title: Reason Four
Blackmail....not bribery. And at this point it only benefits the parents.
Date: 05 Jun 2010 5:06 PM Title: Reason Two
still might not be as they seem.... hmm he is an arse who caves to peer pressure.
Date: 05 Jun 2010 4:26 PM Title: Reason Six
tanya had a baby...oh great. i hope she miscarries. please update :)
Author's Response:
Miscarries? Hmmm...
jumarxie
Date: 05 Jun 2010 7:13 AM Title: Reason Six
ok i completely understand why bella hates edward now, before i just thought she was whiny but now i completely agree with her. im just hoping it was a misunderstanding. love the story though xx
Author's Response:
She was whiny? Haha, I hadn't thought of that before but now that you said it...
Thank your for reviewing and- about the misunderstanding? We'll see...
jumarxie
Date: 05 Jun 2010 6:04 AM Title: Reason Six
OMG I need more info. So did Tanya have a baby????? Has to be a mistake????
Author's Response:
She had the baby and... you'll know the details soon.
jumarxie
Date: 04 Jun 2010 10:55 PM Title: Reason Five
omg i cant wait for the next chapter :)
Date: 04 Jun 2010 4:46 PM Title: Reason Five
Haha funny. I'm guessing Alice isn't really a lawyer.... Love the story.
Author's Response:
You'll see...
jumarxie
Date: 04 Jun 2010 2:57 PM Title: Reason Five
I'm definitely intrigued by this story.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm glad I got your interest. :)
jumarxie
Date: 04 Jun 2010 2:45 PM Title: Reason Five
Wow contract LOL and Alice and Jasper are the lawyers should be very interesting.
Author's Response:
We'll see about that...
jumarxie
Date: 04 Jun 2010 2:36 PM Title: Reason Four
So he had no clue what happened to her and that she was pregunt????
Author's Response:
He wasn't able to find out about it because something happened before Bella could tell him which you would know- I think-at the next chapter?
jumarxie
Date: 04 Jun 2010 1:58 PM Title: Reason Five
great chapter!
update soon.
Author's Response:
Thank you!
jumarxie
Date: 04 Jun 2010 12:52 PM Title: Reason Five
fine another review, the end of this chapter was funny, again its awesome! ur a fantastic writer!!! i friggin cant wait!
Author's Response:
Thank you!
I'm also rereading the chapters to see if I missed something so the chapters come once a day- I posted Chapter Five because like I said the words in Chapter Four were too few.
jumarxie
Date: 04 Jun 2010 12:51 PM Title: Reason Four
i re-read this story on fanfic! again another brilliant chapter! only 19 more chapters left.. w8 after d next one 18 woooooooooooooooooohooooooooooooooooo
Date: 03 Jun 2010 8:34 PM Title: Reason Three
Absolutely love it. I'm glad I caught this story because I didn't add it to my favorites for some reason. Must have forgot.
Author's Response:
Thank you!
At least, you managed to catch it, right?
jumarxie
Date: 03 Jun 2010 12:51 PM Title: Reason Three
This is a really good start!!! A great cliffhanger and I want to read more of this story!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you!
I hope you enjoy the rest of the story.
jumarxie
Date: 03 Jun 2010 11:45 AM Title: Reason Three
OMG cant wait for more
Author's Response:
Haha, I can't wait for more either!
I wonder what will happen next?? (smiles mischievously)
jumarxie
Date: 03 Jun 2010 7:43 AM Title: Reason Three
Another GREAT chapter! awesome work! cant wait till u catch up with fanfic
Author's Response:
I can't wait too! I have it all finished up to the moment she gives birth!
jumarxie
Date: 02 Jun 2010 9:06 PM Title: Reason Two
What a chicken shit he was being but he gave his friends a lot of info about her if he didnt date her he would not know Tanya and his friends are to stupid to figure it out. So she loses the baby and blames him.
Author's Response:
Yes, he was being a coward at the party but... he has his reasons.
jumarxie
Date: 02 Jun 2010 4:52 PM Title: Reason One
sounds great cant wait for more
Date: 02 Jun 2010 2:41 PM Title: Reason Two
poor bella i am now guessing that the baby dies that is probably part of the reason why she hates him. cant wait for more of the plot :) sincerely this is a amazing story :)
Author's Response:
Thank you! I also can't wait to post the rest of the story!
Hope you enjoy it till the end,
jumarxie
Date: 02 Jun 2010 2:04 PM Title: Reason Two
W-O-W this is real good, its better than the one on fan fic great changes!!! soz u must be wondering who i am, i'm mysteryisgr8-girl, regular reader, when i saw ur message i was relieved that u hadnt stopped writing!!!
anyways it was AWESOME!!!
lots and pots of hugs
Liverpoolfc4lyf aka Mysteryisgr8-girl
Author's Response:
Haha, whew! For a moment there, I thought I made it worse. Thanks for all the support! I plan to post the chapters as quick as I could WITHOUT the delays this time.
jumarxie
Date: 02 Jun 2010 1:39 PM Title: Reason Two
Thank you for continuing with the story.
Are you just copying them of fanfiction and posting them up here because it would be great if you are as it wouldn't take you very long to get back to where we were before.
Update soon.
Amanda*} Capture It... Remember It...
Author's Response:
I have the chapters saved in my MS Word so it wouldn't be long before I have all the chapters that I had in FF in here. Though I'm still checking to see if I have some typos so I might post a chapter a day.
I've done most of the chapters up to the one where Bella finds out who her real "admirer" is so I think I'll have it all posted before the month ends.
jumarxie
Date: 02 Jun 2010 1:31 PM Title: Reason Two
Thank god you didn't totally stop the story. I was sad you didn't update for so long. Looking forward to read your wonderful story.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I plan to post the chapters that I have in FF by the next two weeks after I'm done revising it. And post the chapters I've done since then.
Hope you enjoy the rest of the story,
jumarxie
Date: 02 Jun 2010 10:21 AM Title: Reason Two
She loose the Bany right
and he still dond know
that,but i like it how you write..)
Author's Response:
Thank you! And yes, she WILL lose the baby and it would be a long time before he will know.
Date: 02 Jun 2010 10:17 AM Title: Reason One
Amazing how you put your
Words,toughs,Idees,emotion
and feeling in here..)
Date: 01 Jun 2010 7:22 PM Title: Reason One
I like it. It's cute well the ending is.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I hope you enjoy the rest of the story as well! :)