Date: 27 Sep 2010 11:44 PM Title: Chapter 17
well i think she should pack all his crap up and leave it on the door step and if he really wanted it then he would come and get it
[Report This]Date: 27 Sep 2010 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 17
I can't believe how one-sided Rose is being. Whether you agree or not you need to stand by your friend. You can at least say some things, but I believe that she was way tooooooo hard on Edward (of course we all love Edward), but everyone deserves a second chance. I love them together. Absolutely love the story.
Date: 27 Sep 2010 7:17 PM Title: Chapter 17
I'm not surprised about Rose. Though I hope Bella doesn't apologize first. Rose was in the wrong here. She needs to beg for forgivness.
If she wants Bella to be her friend. She should start acting like a friend. Instead of some judgmental stranger. Bella can get plenty of that from Angela.
[Report This]Date: 27 Sep 2010 6:17 PM Title: Chapter 17
Well where do I begin...Rosalie is not being fair...she should be able to see how much happier Bella is... and being her best friend she should know that she loved Jake, but was never in love with him.. so she couldn´t sacrifice her happiness to marry him...Little Bell is the bomb diggaty!!!!! She runs the show... she may ask about Jake, but she wants Ewoord to be her Daddy... and having a son myself I understand that they don´t want to confuse her.... Did I mention I wanted to pimp slap Rosalie!!!! okay rant over.... wonderful chappie...you always make Monday worth waiting for!!!!! See ya next Week...Laterzzzzz!!!!!
KRAZI
XOXO
Date: 27 Sep 2010 5:38 PM Title: Chapter 17
Reviewed on FFN hon!! :-P
Date: 22 Sep 2010 7:10 PM Title: Chapter 16
I'm so glad that Edward finally decided Bella was worth the risk. I hope he sticks to that decision.
[Report This]Date: 22 Sep 2010 1:14 AM Title: Chapter 16
Love this story as always. But dang you made me hungry for a steak sandwich and I don't have school until Thursday morning! Esme and Nessie should make a good next chapter. Garret is giving me the creaps. Its about time Edward and Bella got a personal relationship going and the truth is I could never see him as Bellas lawyer. In this story a more mature Edward and Bella make the perfect couple!
Can't wait for the next update!
Philly Jilly
Date: 21 Sep 2010 7:15 PM Title: Chapter 16
Leah should be happy now she knows that Bella and Jake are not going to get back together. Bella told him she loves him
Date: 21 Sep 2010 6:55 PM Title: Chapter 16
GREAT UPDATE!! :-D I can't review on FFFW for some reason - my internet is on the fritz... Is this it or is there more?!
Date: 21 Sep 2010 2:57 PM Title: Chapter 16
wow...great chapter! I'm glad Edward isn't running away from Bella and Ness.
Date: 21 Sep 2010 2:12 PM Title: Chapter 16
You had me worried with the call between Alice and Edward!!!! Great chapter!
[Report This]Date: 21 Sep 2010 1:49 PM Title: Chapter 16
Wow... I have no words for how much i loved this chapter... hey I agree with Bella... Yeah her a Jake are through and she finally has a chance to be happy... I wouldn´t wanna wait either... the Jake situation just dragged out anyway and he knew she didn´t feel as strongly for him as he did for her... I eff´n love Little Bell she is head over hills in love with Ewoord.. which i think makes things a bit more easier for B & E...see ya next week....
Krazi
xoxo
Date: 21 Sep 2010 1:02 PM Title: Chapter 16
Another great chapter. LOVE the music choices. I knew in my heart Leah was gonna show up as soon as things heated up. Can't we just put a bow on her and give her to Jake?
[Report This]Date: 21 Sep 2010 12:24 PM Title: Chapter 16
Amazing! Curious to see what Jake will think once he finds out.
Date: 21 Sep 2010 5:35 AM Title: Chapter 16
well i still have a feeling that hes going to try to leave again! i cant wait till the next chapter hopefuly when she talkes to jake ! i think it will be an epic chapter
[Report This]Date: 17 Sep 2010 6:05 PM Title: Chapter 15
I enjoyed the calm... but I gotta say Little Bell is a girl after my own heart... she is so wanting Edward to be her Daddy.. from the way she kept changing the subject.. If she can have mor Ewoord.. she not gonna miss Jacob too much... I´m just saying... Smart Girl!!! see ya next week!!!
Krazi
xoxo
Date: 14 Sep 2010 9:31 PM Title: Chapter 15
DEFINITELY needed some calm... Cute update!! :-P More please...!?
Date: 14 Sep 2010 5:25 PM Title: Chapter 15
LOVE LOVE LOVE This chapter! Thanks keep up the great work! :) YOU ROCK!
[Report This]Date: 14 Sep 2010 1:19 PM Title: Chapter 15
I have a feeling that their love is going to get very complicated. I feel sorry for Edward and just want to hug him. Carlisle is a jerk so far. Love it.
Date: 14 Sep 2010 6:03 AM Title: Chapter 15
That song was perfect for this chapter and I am so happy that nothing bad happened in this chapter. I love that Bella trying to explain how she felt was happy .
Date: 14 Sep 2010 3:42 AM Title: Chapter 15
well its going to be an intresting couple of chapters! cant wait till the fight brews with bella and jacob! keep the chapters comming
Date: 14 Sep 2010 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 15
Going to bed with a big smile on my face.
Date: 14 Sep 2010 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 15
Can I tell you how much I LOVE Ness! She's just perfect! Thanks a bunch for the chapter!
Date: 08 Sep 2010 5:11 PM Title: Chapter 14
Kate is going to cause shit??? I am so happy a little office sex never hurt anyone lol
Date: 08 Sep 2010 4:07 PM Title: Chapter 13
Holly shit that was a shock to poor Jacob but I am glad she did it Edward is in so much shit Bella is going to kick his ass
Date: 08 Sep 2010 5:42 AM Title: Chapter 14
Whew! I'm glad that ended sort of happily. I was deliriously happy for about five minutes and then Kate opened her big mouth. I guess it just doesn't look right to anybody for Edward and Bella to be together. So many people stand to be hurt or have misconceptions regarding the two of them. What a mess! And now I've caught up to you and will have to wait for updates. :( Do we still have a long way to go? I mean chapter-wise. Obviously, there's still a lot that needs to be resolved.
Date: 08 Sep 2010 4:56 AM Title: Chapter 14
i totally loved this chapter. Tanya and her family need to but out and stop putting there noses where they aren't wanted.
I hope we get to have the next chapter from bella's pov i so want to know what her and alice discussed
Date: 08 Sep 2010 4:27 AM Title: Chapter 13
Well, that certainly had a few twists in it! Somehow I knew the apology was from Jake, not Edward. And I felt a proposal coming on, so I knew this couldn't end well. But, personally, this was extremely painful. I keep waiting for things to perk up. In the meantime, though, Bella's life really sucks. I can hardly wait until things finally start to gel for Edward and Bella. On a happier note, I love that Leah goes braless all the time. LOL
[Report This]Date: 07 Sep 2010 5:43 PM Title: Chapter 14
CAN I GET A WHAT WHAT WOOO WOOO.... I AM DOING THE HOKIE POKIE...THESE TWO HAVE FINALLY DONE THE DEED...YAYYYYYY LAWYERWARD IS GONNNA BE LITTLE BELL´S DADDYWARD...HA..UP YOURS JAKE SHE NEVER CALLE D YOU DADDY!!!!!!!!! THIS DESERVES A DRINK!!!!!!
KRAZI XOXO
[Report This]Date: 07 Sep 2010 1:32 PM Title: Chapter 14
Whew! I thought we were all gonna have to go out on Edward's office balcony for a group cigarette after that one!
I picked this chapter up right before I went to bed last night - I actually squealed when I saw it had been posted! Got to the part where Bella shows up at the fundraiser and had to stop and squeal again. Went like that through the whole damn chapter: Read-Stop-Squeal-Read-Stop-Squeal. Got up this morning and read it all over again with the same results.
Thank you for putting me to sleep AND waking me up feeling so happy. It's gonna be a great day!
Date: 07 Sep 2010 1:15 PM Title: Chapter 14
OOOPS!! :-( Big AssWard boo-boo there!! :-( WHEN will the silly git realise he's not taking her from Jake 'cause she's never really been Jake's?!
Date: 07 Sep 2010 11:45 AM Title: Chapter 14
Me, Kate is just jumping at straws.
I don't understand. Why didn't Edward simply state yes to Kate when she asked him if Bella was the reason. It's true. Though he didn't cheat on Tanya.
He did tell her he no longer had feelings for her. She should have just taken the hint as it was. I still don't like Kate. Apologizes or not. It's hollow if she is going to constantly take Tanya's side at the next turn.
Edward should just cut himself from that family entirlel and make sure they have nothing to do with any of his projects and work anymore.They obviously aren't to be trusted.
I'm glad Bella stood up for herself. I just wish she had done it again when Kate accused her of being with Edward when he was with Tanya.
Date: 07 Sep 2010 8:00 AM Title: Chapter 12, Pt. I
That was sweet. Edward finally made time to relax and sleep. He's making progress. I'm curious about your Jasper. It sounds like the tattoos take the place of his bite marks. I want to hear about how he and Alice met. Obviously, she was waiting for him to show up in the diner, but how easily did they get together?
Date: 07 Sep 2010 6:49 AM Title: Chapter 11
Oh, I so wanted to get the break up over with before Jake's trip. Now she'll either have to tell him first thing when he gets back or wait until it feels "more appropriate"? As if there's ever a good time to break up with someone. I hope it doesn't make Jake bitter.
[Report This]Date: 07 Sep 2010 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 14
Oh I just loved the way Bella and Edward made up. Wasn't expecting that and can't believe that reaction from Kate. Hope that changes. Love them finally being together and boy were they ever together.
Date: 07 Sep 2010 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 14
im happy that they finally did the deed but now is kate goign to make their life a living hell cant wait till the next chatper
[Report This]Date: 07 Sep 2010 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 14
Amazing chapter! Loved the office sex!
Date: 07 Sep 2010 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 14
Ugh, I hate how people feel the need to butt in when they think they know everything
Date: 06 Sep 2010 11:11 AM Title: Chapter 10
I love how Edward wants to take Jake's place in Bella's life while doubting that things would turn out better than they did with Tanya. And I'm glad Bella's story is finally coming out. This is gonna get really painful for Jake, but it's for the best.
Date: 06 Sep 2010 9:23 AM Title: Chapter 7, Pt. II
It sounds like the beginning of the end of things with Jake. Of course, I knew this was coming, but poor Jake! I hope he takes it better than Tanya did.
Date: 06 Sep 2010 8:29 AM Title: Chapter 6
You're such a descriptive writer. For the record, I've never had a philly cheese steak sandwich either. When I look at one, I feel the same way Edward does, and I can't see the appeal in that.
Date: 06 Sep 2010 7:21 AM Title: Chapter 3
This is really hard to put down. I just want to know the whole story right now.
Date: 06 Sep 2010 6:37 AM Title: Chapter 1
I like it!! This is very different from my usual preferences, but something in the description drew me in. I can tell I was never meant to practice medicine because I can't imagine having to tell someone any kind of health-related bad news. Can't wait to read the next chapter.
Date: 05 Sep 2010 7:29 PM Title: Chapter 13
OOOOOHHHHHHH, update please, i so wanna know what Bella says to Edward!!! x
Date: 01 Sep 2010 3:37 PM Title: Chapter 3
So James is coming back I hope that he stays away from Bella but we all know that he isn't going to.
Date: 01 Sep 2010 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 13
run edward run. He better hope Bella dosnt make a scene at the event or that Esme is there to calm her down. Personally I am hoping for some awesome fight and then make up sex!!! I am also hoping Jake doesnt figure out what one of her main motivations behind saying no to him was eddie boy- I mean I know she realized she wasnt headed toward marriage before edward, but she had not realized how out of LOVE she was until the sparks were there btw her and edward. cant wait for the next installment!
Date: 01 Sep 2010 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 2
I wonder how long Edward and Tanya will last if he keeps this from her. I am thinking that she isn't going to stand behind him because they just don't seem to be really happy right now. I hope that Edward will let someone in because he needs a support system.
[Report This]Date: 01 Sep 2010 12:19 AM Title: Chapter 13
Phew.....that was close....I so don´t want her with Jake....and can she go to the fundraiser and bitchslap Edward and then the can have some great make up sex...hahaha...it´s just a suggestion....lol...can´t wait for the next chapter!!!
Krazi
xoxo
Date: 31 Aug 2010 11:13 PM Title: Chapter 13
woot! finally she gets to end it with jacob. love it, love it this fic.
cheers!
Date: 31 Aug 2010 6:57 PM Title: Chapter 13
I knew he was gonna do it! Awww I feel bad for him but I like Edward more :)
Date: 31 Aug 2010 6:56 PM Title: Chapter 13
OMG. Very sad chapter. But i'm glad Bella let Jake know, even if the timing was less than stellar. I sense some more angst ahead... looking forward to more :)
Date: 31 Aug 2010 2:57 PM Title: Chapter 13
Dear M/BDC,
It's been quite a while since I've written, but don't let that mislead you. I am thoroughly addicted to every single one of your stories and each successive installation makes me feel as if I'm five years old and it's Christmas. I didn't think I was going to like TPOL because I love your canon stories so much, but now I'm totally HOOKED!
Honey, just so you know, I'd think I'd read the directions on hamburger wrappers if you wrote them. You are, in my humble opinion, the very best writer on TWCS. I have slogged through enough mediocre and seriously crappy crap from some of the functionally illiterate "Favorite Authors" and "Top Tens" to fertilize a corn field, while your writing keeps bringing me back again and again...and again...and again. I've read all of your stories at least 3-4 times. (Okay, I admit the outtakes from Prelude and all of Polar Night have been read 16,742 times each because I LOVE LEMONS!) Anyway, you just keep getting better and better.
Tuesday mornings have become my favorite time of the week. Teenager off to school? Check. Husband off to work? Check. Is it my day off? Check. Has BellaDonna written something new for me? Please God, let it be a check! Do I need to get a life? Check. Am I going to get a life? No, I'm going to sit my ass right here and wait for the next chapter.
Today you should really thank God I'm not a stalker, otherwise I'd be leaning over your shoulder 24/7 to see what word you're going to type next. You would not be allowed to go to work or leave your home. Your leg would be chained to a chair and your hands would only be allowed to touch a keyboard. Hell, I'd hand-feed you and hold a straw to your mouth if it would make things go faster.
I'm a bit of a writer, too, so I have a pretty good idea of what it takes to churn this stuff out. You are seriously good, girl. You've got me checking my Ipad for updates multiple times every day like I've got OCD when I know damn good and well I'm going to have to wait at least another week.
I sincerely hope you get a big-ass book deal one day soon. You deserve one.
Now, stop reading my love letter and get back to typing. While you're at it, put Jacob's ass on a plane back to Forks with Leah. I am bored with him already and am in desperate need of some (pretty please with sugar on top) serious NC-17 and/or XXX E/B sex SOON! Gimme, gimme, gimme!
(WARNING: Addiction to Marie's stories may cause otherwise normal women to become blood-sucking leeches who attach themselves to her until she gives them what they want. You have been duly warned.)
P.S. I hope you haven't totally given up on Polar Night. I'd love to see it finished someday. I know you're busy, I'm just sayin'...you left me hanging there in Forks and my bags were already packed for fucking Alaska and I don't even like the cold.
Date: 31 Aug 2010 10:55 AM Title: Chapter 13
OMG!!! I'm sooo glad she didn't cave!! Now she can go to the ball and chew Edward out, and mid-rant he can grab her and kiss her-- that should piss her off!! lol
Date: 31 Aug 2010 8:19 AM Title: Chapter 13
Edward is in sooooo much trouble.
Poor Bella everybody is making decision for her instead of letting her make her own.
please update soon.
[Report This]Date: 31 Aug 2010 7:05 AM Title: Chapter 13
Oh SNAP!!! Edward better wear a Cup, cuz a Pissed of Bella is comin to find his ASS!!
Date: 31 Aug 2010 6:22 AM Title: Chapter 1
That is so sad that Edward is going through all of this.
Date: 31 Aug 2010 6:21 AM Title: Chapter 13
Finally she is actually going to speak her mind soon. To bad she didn't start thinking this way till the end of the chapter.
Edward is an idoit if he thinks his atitude is going to fly. And I'm going to strangle Alice personally. Espeacily, when she knows the situation for what it was. Grrr...(Rose still needs some words but hopefully it'll get much better in the next chapter.)
Date: 31 Aug 2010 6:04 AM Title: Chapter 13
oh, i hope Bella gives Edward so much crap for this that he feels like total shit. I don't like the whole thing of him urging Jake to marry Bella for the case. Nope.
Date: 31 Aug 2010 5:56 AM Title: Chapter 13
well now that shes done with jake but cant wait to see her yell at edward cant wait till the next chapter keep them comming
Date: 27 Aug 2010 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 12, Pt. II
poor edward- he is so hard on himself. he is so much better for her than Jacob
[Report This]Date: 26 Aug 2010 11:32 AM Title: Chapter 12, Pt. II
OMG he left..............Ican't wait for more. I understand a/b RL b/c I use these stories as a was to escape.
thanks for writing,
Marie
twicrazreader
Author's Response:
Thanks for being so understanding! I'll update as soon as possible. Marie
Date: 26 Aug 2010 9:40 AM Title: Chapter 12, Pt. II
No he cant leave they were so close. She does need to end it with Jake and they all know it Jake can feel it coming?????
[Report This]Date: 26 Aug 2010 4:23 AM Title: Chapter 12, Pt. I
OK they just need to jump in and take the next step. LOL
I just adore Lil Bell............and Ewoord!! lol
Marie
twicrazreader
[Report This]Date: 25 Aug 2010 11:59 PM Title: Chapter 10, Pt. II
Hey BDC:
I love every word of your story!! I also feel bad for Jake b/c we know Bella will fall for Edward.....Right???
Marie
twicrazreader
Author's Response:
Well, it's listed on ff.net as an Edward and Bella story. I'll leave it at that. Thanks again for rec'ing it out. I really appreciate it! M
[Report This]Date: 24 Aug 2010 10:11 PM Title: Chapter 5
Hi BDC:
I just found your story on TWCS and I click on it. I am so into it that I search on my Blackberry until I could bookmark it there too. I will so rec this out for you. I am also going to send it to a site called TwificPromotions. Its another site that recs new fics w/ at least 5 chapters and under 500 reviews.
thanks for writing,
Marie
twicrazreader
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for the rec! That's awesome! Let me know how you like it when you're a few more chapters in. M
Date: 24 Aug 2010 8:23 PM Title: Chapter 12, Pt. II
Edward needs to get ove his shit. But not for Bella. For himself.
I have no idea what Bella is doing but it's pissing me off. She is useing Jake as means to an end. And she is using Edward to make herself feel better.
I actually hate Emmett and Alice getting in either one of their business and thinking it's okay. It's not. And they all need to know it.
Emmett really needs to shut the hell up too.I'm getting really tired of is innuendos(exactly what I hated about him in the actual books). Rose is pissing me off too.
God, Rose needs to just stick with her own life issues because she is just being a pain in the ass right now.
Edward has enough on his shoulders and he is getting it from all sides. Tanya, Emmett, Rose..Jake? I mean come on some one give the boy a break.
I think he should find his own place just so he won't have to be bothered by all these people in his business. He should find his own place and go to therapy of some kind, maybe even music classes or something. Anything that'll make him happy and cope with his own emotions.
Bella needs to get it into her head that she can't have everyone to do everything for her. She needs to be a big girl and make decions for herself. She can't really expect Edward to cofess while she is with Jake...really? Does that not sound wrong to her? Can she not grow a pair and break it off with Jake?
Edward has been amazing and has been helping himself sense she gave him sound advice and made him want to be happy. He broke it off with Tanya. He started eating unhealthy.
Bella hasn't really done a damn thing to make herself happy. She just expects happiness to come to her without lifting a finger. I get it she had it rough. But most people in her postion would rather raise their child alone then be put in the unpromising position she let herself in. She had no feelings for Jake, yet she dragged him there knowing he could help her. She didn't think things through. She just wallowed and made Jake do all the work.
I'll start respecting her more when I see her grow a backbone and start doing things on her own. I mean, she knew about James coming and it was Jake who tried to find a lawyer cause it was 'to stressful' to her. I mean..gah...I'm really not liking Bella here....
She's no better then Rose and her assumtions.(Which btw,she needs to get over it because if Edward was really that bad would the entire family be begging for his attention as much as they do?)
Bella should also tell Rose about Emmett word for word adive that Bella gave him. He is no more a saint then Edward. Though I find Edward far more tastful then Emmett. Atleast he doesn't rub it in Emmett's face what kind of girl Rose is..Hell, he never spoke a bad word to Emmett so I don't even understand his vadetta.
I reall hope Tanya grows up soon, she is just being plain childish now. And, kate needs to tell her to grow up too! She shouldn't just be listening to Tanya simply because she is related. She should tell her like it is and give her an ultimadium because it's Tanya that is breaking everyone apart. Edward just wants to be happy and she wasn't even happy with him either so I don't even get her deal...
Don't even get me started on Victoria and James....grr
*whooosh rant over*
The words can't we all just get along come to mind....You're a lovely writer and I hope this will all wrap up nicely.
Tanya,James,Victorie and maybe a little of Rose as well all get what's coming to them or you know, a dose of each there own medicine. Alice and Emmett being told to shut up in a way that will actually make them shut up would be great as well.
ps.Edward better not confess to Bella till she break it off with Jake. I don't care how much easier it would be for Bella if he did. She needs to do that shit because she wants to not because Edward is good at being persuasive.I don't wanna hear about Edward confessing then having to wait agonzingly long while for Bella to end it with Jake. When she shouldn't even have brought him with her to begin with.
Author's Response:
Wow, you had so much to write, I feel the need to respond, but I don't really know how... Maybe I should concentrate on the part where I'm a lovely writer.
Umm, my inner Bella's going to kill me if I don't stand up for her a little. Honestly, she did/does love Jake. No, she shouldn't have jumped into a new serious relationship just after an abusive one. But, she did love him, and saw how he would always be there for her and never hurt her. She made the wrong choice, when she thought she was making the right one. She never intentionally used him. And she was with him for the past four years. She's known Edward for 17 days, at this point. To get to the point of breaking up with him in just 17 days is a big leap, one that she was about to make 2 days ago, but Jake stayed out all night. And I'm glad she didn't try to do it over the phone, or something. I don't think she's looking for Edward to declare his feelings for her, just to hear her out.
And Rose, it comes from a good place. She's looking out for her friend. B could lose her medical license. She doesn't bother me so much.
Edward is in therapy, and he doesn't need music lessons. He's a bit of a prodigy, we just don't know that yet from the story.
Anyway, thanks for reading, even though it's pissed you off, lol. I hope you like it more as the story continues. M
[Report This]Date: 24 Aug 2010 5:46 PM Title: Chapter 12, Pt. II
I thought about this story after reading it on another site and think I see what is coming. First of all Edward leaves and gets Bella another attorney and probably stays completely away from her. In the meantime, Bella will break up with Jacob and will be really upset that Edward is sending her to someone else. Then Bella will have a problem with James and maybe Little B will get taken by him (okay maybe that is a little drastic). I love your story so much I couldn't get it out of my head. Can't wait for more. 1 Week way too long to wait. Just kidding. Thanks.
Author's Response:
Hey Teri,
I love your version of events... it could be fanfan fiction! M
[Report This]Date: 24 Aug 2010 12:29 PM Title: Chapter 12, Pt. II
Wonderful chapter! I am really hoping Edward does not take off.
Author's Response:
Something tells me he won't be able to stay away...
Date: 24 Aug 2010 6:14 AM Title: Chapter 12, Pt. II
ugh, i just wanna slap him. Just up and leaving like he did was selfish.
Author's Response:
Agreed!
[Report This]Date: 18 Aug 2010 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 1
Oh Marie, I am so glad that you have come over to this site with your story. I really like this site the best and it fits a GREAT story which you have and the GREAT writer that you truly are.
Author's Response:
Hey Teri,
Thanks for the vote of confidence! We'll see... I keep posting here, but not too much traffic. Hoping it picks up. Next chapter should be up Monday! M
Date: 17 Aug 2010 8:06 AM Title: Chapter 12, Pt. I
I LOVE this story and yes, it does get a little frustrating that they haven't gotten together yet. However, it's making it more realistic seing as they were both with someone when they met. How much longer will Bella put off breaking up with Jake? When will Bella and Ewoord FINALLY get together?
Author's Response:
Well, I can't give any of that away, except to say that Bella fully intended to break-up with Jake before he left. So, she's not really putting it off. He'll be home Tuesday. Three virtual days, and three chapters away. M
Date: 17 Aug 2010 7:09 AM Title: Chapter 12, Pt. I
James has found her????? They are ment to be together even J could tell that and he just meet them. Poor Edward and his one ball just got mashed by a little girl ouch!!
Author's Response:
Now why would you want to bring up the status of his junk like that? My man had cancer! Yep... these two can fight it, but I do believe they're meant to be. M
Date: 16 Aug 2010 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 12, Pt. I
I just love your story and I hpe so fucking bad that the next chapter will come sooner than later 'cause i can't wait to read more!!!I hope B and E are going to get there soon!!!! thanks again!
Author's Response:
It will come Monday... I thought about trying to get it out sooner, but Imma gonna stick with Monday updates. Hang tight! Glad you like it! M
Date: 16 Aug 2010 9:18 PM Title: Chapter 12, Pt. I
I hope Bella ends things with Jacob soon.
[Report This]Date: 16 Aug 2010 9:16 PM Title: Chapter 12, Pt. I
Loved it!!!!!
Date: 10 Aug 2010 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 10, Pt. II
bye bye jacob
Date: 10 Aug 2010 11:10 PM Title: Chapter 10
jacob is so going to lose
Date: 10 Aug 2010 10:37 PM Title: Chapter 9
loving this story,
Date: 10 Aug 2010 1:38 PM Title: Chapter 11
Looking forward to seeing them at the beach.
Date: 10 Aug 2010 7:42 AM Title: Chapter 11
So she knows Jake has to go and the sex between the two didnt sound to exciting
[Report This]Date: 09 Aug 2010 10:53 PM Title: Chapter 11
Yay, the Cullens are going down the shore next week!! love Cape May and the Victorian houses and the fact that its one of the only beach towns where you can go to a small club and have a drink! Bella is such a good person, but she needs to get over that so she can be happy with her life (ahem Jake) and safe from James. Ps Bella, I know a few people who can put a hit out on James, give me a call will yha (or how about pushing him in front of SEPTA bus, but not the 27, thats how I get to college!) Bella and Edward soon right?? Love this story, sorry for not reviewing for a while, buisy with school stuff, finally caught up on your story. Love it, cannot wait for the next chapter.
In the words of Emitt (sp??) from Master of the Universe:
Laters Babe.
Philly Jilly :)
(yha I know, I have a account with the 3 major twilight FF websites, oh well it's a small addiction :)
Author's Response:
Good to have you back, PhillyJilly! B&E coming soon(ish). I can count the chapters in my head, but I'm not telling. I wish I could get to Cape May before writing this next chapter, I fell like I need a refresher. Haven't been there since last summer. But seriously, with these two, all we need is a little bikini, some sand and a lifeguard stand at sunset. Sigh.
Date: 09 Aug 2010 9:58 PM Title: Chapter 11
See my review on FFN. x x
Date: 09 Aug 2010 9:19 PM Title: Chapter 11
well i cant wati till the next chapter !
Date: 09 Aug 2010 6:00 PM Title: Chapter 11
Oh gosh, he can lick my fingers anytime... and Jaboc can go away for several days that I don't mind! LOL
Can't wait for more.
Date: 08 Aug 2010 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 10, Pt. II
loving it. can't wait for more.
cheers!
Date: 07 Aug 2010 2:35 PM Title: Chapter 10, Pt. II
Great story so far. Looking forward to reading more.
[Report This]Date: 03 Aug 2010 8:58 PM Title: Chapter 10, Pt. II
Awesome chapter!
[Report This]Date: 03 Aug 2010 12:53 PM Title: Chapter 10, Pt. II
Amazing chapter! That is terrible about Bella's past. I wish Edward would have stayed and talked to Bella!
Date: 03 Aug 2010 6:40 AM Title: Chapter 10, Pt. II
Did Bella add to his perscription??? Jake knows that Bella does not love him as much as he loves her??? I cant wait for more.
Date: 31 Jul 2010 6:46 AM Title: Chapter 10
I think Edward and Jake need to whip it out and see whos is bigger lol. Sorry Jake she loves you but not enough. I cant wait for more
Author's Response:
Hehe, I think that debate was put to bed in the first chapter. Bella had never seen one like Edward's before. Poor Jake. Thanks for all the reviews! M
Date: 31 Jul 2010 5:26 AM Title: Chapter 9
Holly shit Jake needs to pack his bags he is just a friend poor guy but move on lol
Date: 31 Jul 2010 2:53 AM Title: Chapter 8
Jake has to be freaking out right about now he knows there is something between them two.
Date: 31 Jul 2010 1:29 AM Title: Chapter 7, Pt. II
Is Edward the lawyer she is going to see??????? There is no way they can have a nondate LOL they cant even have a non spark talk lol
Date: 30 Jul 2010 11:04 PM Title: Chapter 7, Pt. I
Emmett is a riot he would like him a little Bella LOL. The sparks are flying who called a stoped the spark????
Date: 28 Jul 2010 1:22 PM Title: Chapter 10
poor Bella! I can't wait to read more!!
[Report This]Date: 26 Jul 2010 10:14 PM Title: Chapter 10
I adore the story, and the chapter was intense. I look forward to the chapter continuation. I love it!
Date: 26 Jul 2010 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 10
Hmmm, his attitude?! Frankly, I think he's been pretty nice for a dude who's clearly INSANELY jealous!! :-P
[Report This]Date: 26 Jul 2010 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 10
Wonderful chapter! Looking forward to finding out about the rest of her story!