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Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2011 8:10 PM Title: Chapter 35

wow SO INTENSE!

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jan 2011 6:20 AM Title: Chapter 31

Awww, what a nice reunion for Ewoord and Nessie.  This was a great chapter, it was nice to see Bella rally the troops at the office with Carlisle out, and work out something with Angela. And thank god Bella finally said out loud that she wants a future with Edward in it, can't wait to read what happens next!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jan 2011 8:08 AM Title: Chapter 31

Okay we are almost there. I am so glad this is back together. Gave me heart failure with the ethics on both of them.  I still say when they got into the situation they both did the right thing. Love is messy!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jan 2011 7:40 AM Title: Chapter 31

I am just so happy that Bella and Edward are going to be together.  The talk that they were having during her lunch  was a big turning point for them.  Alice can be hole again with Jasper back.  I hope Rose has pulled her head out of her ass and is going to accept Bella and Edward.  That was so sweet with the book of memoris for Jake and she wanted to put Edward in it to.

Reviewer: Mrs Edward B Cullen Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 11 Jan 2011 5:58 AM Title: Chapter 31

Oh My Gosh this was adorable. I loved how emotional Edward got! You are really great at making the characters come to life. But I can't believe this story is almost over :(

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jan 2011 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 31

well i hope it starts to look up for these 2 ! keep the updates comming

Reviewer: almoncla Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jan 2011 4:00 AM Title: Chapter 31

That was a great chapter love it!!!!

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2011 8:41 PM Title: Chapter 31

Okay you had me in tears throughout the entire chapter!!  My heart was breaking for Little Bells Ewoord!  First when they were having lunch, he just wanted to know where he was going to fit and IF she was ALL in or not, Poor Guy come on!!! we know we are all just screaming at Bella to put him out of his misery and jump his bones for petes sake!!!  

Oh, and then.... (LOL!!)  getting really excited here, Bella and Nessie remembering things about Jake and Nessie is drawing pics of Ewoord in the drawings that was just so precious.. 

That at the end was way, way cool!!! I just loved Little Bells reaction to everyone and how she told them things in her own little precious way, Oh and who couldn't love the reaction she had to her Ewoord....tears, tears, sniffle, sniffle!!! 

Loved, this chapter!!!  Yay!!!  Jazz came back, I thought that's who called Edward at the end of Chapter30! 

Understand that the story is comming to a close, really have enjoyed this very much and I hope that you see how much everyone likes you writing and will feel inspired to write more...till next update!!!

Later

Kathy  xoxo

 

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2011 8:25 PM Title: Chapter 31

great chapter, glad you have more,hate stories I love to have crappy endings just because the writer is wanting to start somthing new or just getting bored with it, cause we all know that it's not how you start but how you finish that is important, a least that's what I tell my husband or he tells me lol

Reviewer: Teri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2011 8:25 PM Title: Chapter 31

Oh Marie,
This was such a beautiful and sensitive chapter. I absolutely loved it and cried at work. The way you put words together cannot be described. How touching. I LOVED IT.

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2011 8:17 PM Title: Chapter 31

I loved it! Loved Edward's mouth at the end! So great!

Reviewer: Fluent in Sarcasm Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2011 7:27 PM Title: Chapter 31

Ok, I'm gonna go all Ness and say...

"pa-lease update real soon, 'coz I miss-ed you when you don't update an I lo' this story!!!!"

FinS x

Reviewer: leAnn0388 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2011 7:27 PM Title: Chapter 31

Great chapter! 

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2011 1:03 PM Title: Chapter 30

Loved it!

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2011 12:35 PM Title: Chapter 30

A+

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2011 7:00 AM Title: Chapter 30

This has been hard to read. I get so upset (why I can not figure out,it is fiction) when they were breaking up. I thought we had it then all that mess with ethics. Well come on they addressed that business, that is why they got her a new attorney and him a new doctor. Pretty much worked for me.

Jacob's death was hard on her because she had guilt.  Never live with someone you don't love that loves you of the opposite sex... NICE NEW RULE.

 MISTERY>> DRAWL>>J.................Jasper

I still say screw Rose Bella is right.

 

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2011 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 30

Sweet!!  Priceless!!!  So happy that it turned out that it really was Victoria that reported Bella and not someone else like Rosealie, which I was personally fearful was the case.  I'm releived it wasn't.  I think Carlilse wants to offer Rose a job in the practice and that will help with things between Rose and Bella and eventually bring Rose around to liking Edward.  That was a pretty sweet and logical way of dealing with the Ethics Committee and the Complaint that was filed against Bella!

Thanks so much for this latest Chapter and ready for more.  Lemon times are ahead one might hope, on knees pleading and begging....will that work.  Pretty Please!!!

Till next time,

Laters BB

Kathy

xoxo

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2011 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 30

Phew... glad that hurdle is over!  Now hopefully on to happy times with Bella, Little Bell, Edward and the peanut!  Great chapter!

 

Happy New Year!

 

~Krazi~

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2011 9:05 PM Title: Chapter 30

Lots of good progress in this chapter, from James being in jail to finding out exactly what happened to Jake, I am glad that everything is out in the open now.  Hopefully the ethics board will also be smooth sailing

I am also so happy that they are both excited about the peanut and maybe their future together...they are so cute together and with all the drama and angst of previous chapters, it is nice to see them together and smiling, and I for one hope they can't take it slow much longer.

Thanks, can't wait to see what happens next

 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2011 8:51 PM Title: Chapter 30

So glad Carlisle is going to be ok.  I dont see slow happening for Bella and Edward.  When are they going to tell Esme about the baby she is not going to be happy not knowing.

Reviewer: Teri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2011 7:00 PM Title: Chapter 30

Oh Marie,
You are just too much. Everything was going along just fine and then you had to drop a bomb at the end of the chapter and leave us hanging. I guess that James just wants to call Edward and congratulate him or wish him a very Happy New Year! Ha, ha. HAPPY NEW YEAR to you and thanks for the update.

Reviewer: leAnn0388 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2011 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 30

Great chapter!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2011 4:32 PM Title: Chapter 30

well im glad that they have  talked and  i hope for her sake that everything starts to level out! keep the chapters comming

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Dec 2010 10:35 PM Title: Chapter 29

Whoa!!! Another cliffie!  Happy Holidays!

 

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: leAnn0388 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Dec 2010 11:48 AM Title: Chapter 29

Yay!  I'm so glad that James got arrested and his petition was dismissed. :) Happy Holidays!

Reviewer: zanyzay Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Dec 2010 6:16 AM Title: Chapter 29

Thanks for another great chapter.  I love your story!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Dec 2010 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 29

James in jail is a very good thing Carlisle in the hospital is a very bad thing.  Have a wonderful holiday.  looking forward to more please tell me Carlisle will be ok.

Reviewer: evilangel813 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Dec 2010 1:37 AM Title: Chapter 29

Waiting very impatiently.

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Dec 2010 1:31 AM Title: Chapter 29

what happened to Edward, he better be fine

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Dec 2010 11:04 PM Title: Chapter 29

Wow!  That was Amazing, Awesome, Glorious, Spectacular!  Just not enough adjectives to describe that!!!!  Way to go detectives!!!  Now goodness what on earth happened to Carlilse, I hope he's okay!?!?  Please don't let it be Edward too! 

Thanks for this wonderful Chapter and Merry Christmas to you and Happy New Year as well!!!

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Dec 2010 10:59 PM Title: Chapter 29

Oh no!!!! Can't wait for the next update! Amazing chapter as always!

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Dec 2010 10:36 PM Title: Chapter 29

That was the best gift ever BD .I was so sure the judge was going for joint custody but now he is in jail LOVED It. I just hope Carlisle will be ok .

Reviewer: Teri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Dec 2010 10:32 PM Title: Chapter 29

Oh Marie,
What an exciting chapter! I am so glad that James was carted off. I had a feeling when the Judge paid attention to Edward's name that he was the same judge who wanted Edward to work on that project with him. But of course, you threw that monkey wrench that we didn't see coming about Carlisle. I just hope that he is okay or maybe he is taking care of Mary and I also take it that that is where Edward is. Happy holidays to you and I am so happy that it has worked out for Bella, but would be more comfortable if Edward were with her now.

Reviewer: Sabs Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Dec 2010 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 29

OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Thank you SO MUCH! Just cleared the custody for now, but leaving us with Carlisle at the hospital? How evil is that? Please - it is Christmas time - the time of love and peace...

So also for the peace of minds of your readers.

Anyhow - that was a good chapter. To find Bella still intimidated by James, was hard, but she kept fighting. For me, it is completely not understandable, how women stay with these kind of men. I am lucky to have a wonderful husband (and father of our kids), some would say I am the intimidating person here. LOL But thank you, this story just helps me, not taking him for granted - he is a great man and does everything to keep our family running - through good and bad (and we had lots of bad, this year). So I do not only have fun reading your story, I get even more of it.

Therefore I wish you a wonderful Christmas with family and friends and a very happy and successful New Year

Sabs

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Dec 2010 8:11 PM Title: Chapter 29

her life is just spiling out of control ! now i hope that she can get out of the medical board hearing! i hope carlisle is alright! keep the chapters comming

Reviewer: nilo24 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2010 9:44 AM Title: Chapter 11

wow , your story is very intense really good written , you brought many feeling by reading this story , im sorry not to respond for each chapter , you know every time i put review for a chapter but when i click to submit , the page goes to log in and than i am too lazy to write what i written before. back to your story , Thanx for writting and taking time , i feel a littile ... i dont know what it called in english , but if i were bella and i had some one for 4 years to love me and care for me it really hard to betray it ....

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Dec 2010 1:56 PM Title: Chapter 17

OMG, excellent story.  Keep your interest going.  I sometimes forget to review between chapters.  I will go back though!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Dec 2010 2:44 AM Title: Chapter 30

WOW.

 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Dec 2010 9:30 PM Title: Chapter 30

Thank god they found her now if they can get to the people they need to to stop the hearing.  What has James done to her and will she tell all????  I cant wait till they can tell the rest of the family and that includes Rose she is going to shit.

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Dec 2010 12:20 AM Title: Chapter 30

james is in trouble noe...I hope

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Dec 2010 12:15 AM Title: Chapter 30

Such an awesome chapter...we are finally unraveling some of the secrets of the story, like who was driving the blue car, and what happened to Jake.  I hope he can get her to talk to police and save Little Bell from joint visitation with that animal.

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Dec 2010 10:58 PM Title: Chapter 30

whoa... this just got so fricking hot!  I knew James was still a demented douche bag!  I´m glad Edward never gave up. This just proves that him and Bella are meant to be together!  God, you always leave wanting more!  Great chapter!  I´m going to miss you for a while!

 

krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: Teri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Dec 2010 10:47 PM Title: Chapter 30

Oh you have really given us an exciting and suspenseful chapter. Hopefully, you will also be giving us a Christmas gift by letting James be arrested during the hearing. Come on, you can do this. You have all of the POWER.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Dec 2010 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 30

well i hope they are able to !! keep the chapters comming i cant wait to see if they are able to get him in jail!

Reviewer: Fluent in Sarcasm Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Dec 2010 9:09 PM Title: Chapter 30

OMG!!!

A lead, finally!

love this story as much and so much more each chapter!!!

FinS x

off to vote...

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Dec 2010 9:07 PM Title: Chapter 30

I hope they make it on time, while they are still holding James! So wonderful!

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Dec 2010 8:16 PM Title: Chapter 30

GREAT CHAPTER  ONCE MORE!!!!!   But Crap!!!  I'm alway on the edge of my seat reading this story!!! LOL! It was getting so good too!!!!  Oh well anticipation is the name of the game!  Your really a great Author and I truly enjoy this story.   Edward and his OCD is a kick in the pants for me to read, you can just picture him and how he is just bouncing off the walls, so to speak, trying to figure everything out, sorry when he was in the Pharmacy was it, and he found the therm. I just couldn't help but chuckle! He is so funny!

I still think Rosalie is the one that turned Bella in to the Medical Ethics Board, but we shall see. 

So glad they caught up with the wife of James, that low life having the nerve to say that about Bella to Edward!  Now I don't mean to sound rude, but Aminah’s starting to really tick me off here!  I know she is trying to do her job for her client, but why isnt she asking Edward for help?  He could brief her on what to say, I don't know I just think she is being rude and biased against both of them.  Maybe you will let her redeem herself during the hearing, but she is really setting my ears on fire here!!!

Great story and look forward to more.  Thanks for your dedication to this story and keeping updated so frequently!! You Rock and Happy Holiday's to you!!!

Reviewer: Sabs Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Dec 2010 7:37 PM Title: Chapter 30

Hi M,

Wow - what a developement! I was totally on the wrong track, thinking the woman in the blue car woud be Victoria.

But now it seems there is a big hope for Bella against James. So if Mary talks to the police, there is one down and one still to go - the big bad sister.

I am convinced, that you will let our beloved couple get some good news in the next chapter - they still have so much sh** going on.

Thanks for sharing your fantastic story with us.

Sabs

 

Reviewer: Collette29 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Dec 2010 11:05 PM Title: Chapter 27

Totally love this story, read it since the beginning but life got crazy and I stopped for a bit. Today I caught up on the 15 chapters I'd missed and wow what a journey. Absolutely love your characters especially Little Bell. I can so easily imagine her and I love that she's not just some generic toddler that you see in a lot of fics. She's intelligent and feisty like her mother and incredibly fun. Can't wait for the next chapter now, yay for peanut!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Dec 2010 8:54 AM Title: Chapter 27

I am thrilled she is pregers.  I am so excited about the family reaction to the baby.  Will Edward be able to keep it to himself???  I cant wait for the hearing James better not get to see the baby

Reviewer: zanyzay Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Dec 2010 5:30 AM Title: Chapter 27

You are such a wonderful writer.  This chapter was perfect, as is your story.  I am looking forward to the next update.

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Dec 2010 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 27

well I have finally caught up and I just am in love with this story.

you are really a great writer, you compose great dialogue and develop great characters, keep up the great work

Cheryle

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Dec 2010 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 26

emmett and rose deserve each other ad not in a good way

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Dec 2010 1:22 AM Title: Chapter 23

had tears in my eyes

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2010 10:10 PM Title: Chapter 19

that sucks

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2010 7:43 PM Title: Chapter 17

I don't understand Rose or Jacob they are both being asshats

but I am loving this story

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2010 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 27

Bella is definitely getting her priorities straight when it comes to her life.  With regards to her medical license, I am interested to see the fallout.  I was thinking Edward is technically Carlisle's patient, not Bella's, she just treated him while Dr. C was on vacation, and I don't believe their relationship started until Dr. C was back, so would her license still be in jeopardy because he is a patient of that practice, regardless of the treating doc? 

I think it must have been Victoria that reported them if it wasn't Angela...I love this story and can't wait for the next chapter!!!

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2010 4:58 PM Title: Chapter 16

awwwww

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2010 4:43 PM Title: Chapter 27

Whooo Hoooo! I thought she was pregnant, but I didn´t want to jinx it.  What I was really afraid was that she was going to move to Forks.  I can´t wait until Little Bell gets to see Edward again, and Bella finds out the promise he made to her.  Great Chapter!!!

 

Krazi

xoxox

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2010 4:27 PM Title: Chapter 15

it was a great song just like your story

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2010 4:11 PM Title: Chapter 27

Oh come on now. Sleezy people have children and keep them. She took the right steps to alter the situation as doctor patient. She got him as a patient by default. He left soon after to go to another doctor.

 

people fall in love and make things work by being honest.

 

Reviewer: leAnn0388 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2010 11:19 PM Title: Chapter 27

Great chapter!

Reviewer: Teri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2010 10:51 PM Title: Chapter 27

Well, as always, you threw me a huge curve ball. I did not for one instant think she was pregnant. I was so afraid that she was going to move back to Forks and break it off with Edward. 1 in a million. Wow! This is great. I just hope the hearing goes just as good. Maybe the cops will come in the middle of the hearing and arrest James for Jacob's murder. That would be the icing on the cake. Cannot possibly wait a week for more. Just great!

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2010 10:04 PM Title: Chapter 4

I am really liking this

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2010 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 27

***on hands and knees clapping hands over and over again*** Shouting yes, Edward is going to be a Daddy!!!  Now for the Drama that's going on!  Humpf!!  Well really, really glad she is going to be honest about this, after all what sort of example would that be for Little Bell, and she's right they will eventually find out, once your branded a liar that's it, trust is gone and well we all know the rest, but truth is this is a story so you have creative abilities, and I for one really appreciate you bringing this out in Bella, we already saw that in Edward, I think we knew that about both of them from the get go!!! 

So now the story is really going to get interesting isn't it???  So much left to happen and then we have to deal with Rude and Mean Rose, don't think I have forgotten, hey I wonder if Rose had anything to do with the Ethics Panel?? Hummmm!!!  Wow I just knew for sure Angela did that, but I guess that was toooooo obvious!

Okay, I will quit and say again,  love the story, love your creative mind and can't wait for more updates!!! Have a good one......

 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2010 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 27

well im happy that shes preggo and hes able to be a daddy but i hope for her sake that she wins everything and dosent loosethe baby! keep the chatpters comming

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2010 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 27

So wonderful! I am happy she is pregnant! I also loved Edwards reaction to the news!

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2010 6:17 PM Title: Chapter 1

is Bella married?

 

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2010 8:28 PM Title: Chapter 26

I hate to see all the Cullens fighting, but I am so happy to see that Edward and Bella are speaking to each other again...I love this story and can't wait to see what happens next

Reviewer: 3kdz4me Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2010 6:42 PM Title: Chapter 18

I love this story, but the constant use of "dude" is driving me nuts!  LOL



Author's Response:

Dude, I hadn't realized, lol. Thanks for your review.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2010 7:45 AM Title: Chapter 26

The red hair that is a clue????  Edward is finely becoming the man he is ment to be he needs to believe in himself.  Thank god Bella called please tell me it is enough and she is not going to try to leave enough of that shit.  Love this story but at times it make me want to punch a wall LOL

Reviewer: songster51 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2010 3:42 AM Title: Chapter 4

I am sorry to be an erratic reviewer. I am normally not but I read on my phone at work. I know, it's a complete waste of taxpayer's money.  If only I cared. Anyway, I hate using a teeny tiny keyboard to write more than a text. Ok, there's my excuse, now to the actual review. I am enjoying this so much. I was rolling when Edward's diagnosis was revealed. That was sort of amazing paybacks for all the douchey Edward types out there.  Seriously, amidst the funny though, I felt glad for him. He's so locked down in every way, kind of waiting for the ax to fall.  First, his mother, then his father checks out and then he dies, then his own body fails him. He's just going through the motions, scared to reach out for happiness because it will hurt worse when it gets snatched away. To find out that his worst fear had not been realized must have felt like an incredible weight had been lifted off.

Reviewer: dapocalypsem Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2010 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 26

love this story!

Reviewer: leAnn0388 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2010 10:06 PM Title: Chapter 26

Nope, you got tears from me.  That phone call did it.  Great chapter!

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2010 11:35 PM Title: Chapter 26

I just want it to be over.  I want them to get back together!  James is so weird, and don´t think I missed the red hair that Edward saw.  Mmmhmm ... I saw that, Edward may have been to preoccupied with thoughts of Bella, but I saw it all.  What´s the deal with James´missing daughter and wife?  One and one ins not equalling two here, but I will continue to hold-on.  Great chapter as always!

 

P.S. I voted for Little Bell as the best kid, she is so hilarious!

 

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: Sabs Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2010 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 26

Oh my - fighting siblings - maybe it is time for the family to get all the shit out of their system? Can't wait to read how it is going on and what Carlisle wants to talk about to Edward.

And that red hair.... hint or fake hint??? And where are wife and daughter of James? Questions over questions, so I will wait patiently for your next update. Thank you for sharing your fantasy with us readers - it is really great!!!

Sabs

Reviewer: Teri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2010 8:01 PM Title: Chapter 26

First of all the lunch with the Judge is an opening for Edward to do the work he is meant for. Secondly, the table fight - just too much, but at least Alice let them both have it (which in my opnion she is definitely justified). Finally, Bella calling and telling Edward that she loves him, but I have a feeling that when she comes back that she will be telling him that she will be moving to Forks, and I will CRY. Happy Thanksgiving.

Reviewer: unicorn_bliss Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2010 6:42 PM Title: Chapter 26

I'm with Alice in this. Even if Rose did all that shit because she cared. She knows she was wrong. Yet, she won't apologize or even admit it.

So screw her and that high horse she imagines herself to be on.

I also kind of want to laugh at Rose too. Rose makes a stupid mistake by insulting Alice's other brother in front of Alice. But instead of acting like a decent person or atleast someone who knows what's good and bad to say in of others. She refuses to apologize and then ignores Alice every meeting after that. Even when she was sitting right next to Esme.

And then Rose has the nerve to be pissed when she put Alice's anger all on herself?

What a moron.

If she would just sincerely apologize and admit she was wrong. She wouldn't be having all these problems with the Cullens.

I'm still miffed she had the nerve to get mad that Edward called Bella, Alice's friend. Rose hasn't been a friend to Bella since she started dating Emmett. It's been more then a fews weeks and she didn't try making anything up to Bella then.

The fact that Rose knows she is wrong and have been wrong but won't apologize about it. Is what really gets me. And her still making excuses about the situation. I mean come on. Accept you were wrong and apologize woman. Stop being mad for being called out on your shit and accept it. Geez.

Even if Bella does listen to Rose. I hope she doesn't become friends with her again. She so isn't worth it. And Bella should tell her that too. Along with telling her she won't be at her wedding. If Rose invites and tells her about that as well.

And Emmett. You're a bad guy dumbass because your bitch of a fiance is what caused a lot of the problems between Bella and Edward. *shakes head* What an idoit.

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2010 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 26

I love your story. Full disclosure!! Okay  Bella, she is just having a hard time!  (I'm being soft right! Well it's true)  Edward - Love my Edward sorry peoples I do regardless of any issues he might have.. I have a rather deep appreciation for our OCD Vegan...hahahaha!!!  Carlilse - We all love him what more can you say. Little Bell well she is so flippin smart it's crazy how smart she is.  Esme - Love her!!! Alice- is just being Alice what more can you say!!!  Bless her heart she will figure things out with Jasper.  Emmett has a point with what he said at the table, I love my Edward and Alice but Emmett made valid points now, I just think he needs to remember that Edward IS his family after all, now that's all I'm going to say on him.  Rosalie - humpf I'm not even going to adress her... 

Needless to say, this is a awesome story, love your mind and your writing abilities. Please hang in with all of US fans and keep on with this lovely suspensful story.  Stay encouraged Please and motivated.  You are wonderful!!

Hum... Just where was Leah when Jacob died? Now I still think its James or his crazy sister, but I wonder......

Reviewer: Fluent in Sarcasm Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2010 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 26

<3

FinS x

Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Nov 2010 4:13 PM Title: Chapter 25

Did I review on FFN, already?! If not, my apologies. If so, my review over there stands...

*clenches fingers wishing he could be twisting them around James' neck*

Reviewer: songster51 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2010 8:56 PM Title: Chapter 1

I am always excited when I find a new worthy fic amongst the drivel when fic diving.  This looks quite interesting. I do hope Edward is not going to be dying (I suck at angst). I am already reading two fics with an Edward recovering from cancer and they are making me nervous. When I think testicular cancer I automatically think of Lance Armstrong. No matter what people may think of him personally, he has certainly highlighted both the struggle and the impact of the will on recovery. I will continue reading now.

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Nov 2010 1:13 AM Title: Chapter 25

I love your story...good to send Jake off with a proper burial, and boy do those Quilette ladies hate Bella. I agree, it does nothing to let Billy know except to absolve her own guilt. Can't wait for her to get back to Philly and Edwoord

Reviewer: missielynn Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2010 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 25

please tell me she's not going to move in with charlie i mean come on!!!!!!! charlie's a horrible father who in every story pretty much loves jake more than bella so um.. yea he's a douche bag

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2010 10:02 AM Title: Chapter 25

Very emotional chapter.  Have you ever been to the Hoh river?  One of the places that makes you feel close to a Higher power.  What has she decided because she should have it figured out that she cant live without him in her and nessies life??  Have a great Thanksgiving.  Waiting for more

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2010 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 25

I think poor edward is going to be slightly devastated if her news is what i think it is. but i also get the feeling that edward would follow bella to the ends of the earth. and hey he has nothing tying him to where he is now.

Reviewer: Teri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2010 9:30 PM Title: Chapter 25

This was soooooooo sad. I may be Team Edward, but I hated seeing Jacob die. I am confused, what has Bella decided to tell Edward. I really don't like the sound of this satement. I didn't read where she made up her mind about anything unless she has decided to move back home, or maybe it is the Will having her Dad get Vanessa if anything were to happen to Bella. Hmmmmmm.

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2010 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 25

Ha...I´m trying to hold on but the angst is killing me.. i voted for Nessie and the kid for the Avant Garde Awards, cause let´s just face it. Nessie is the bomb... she is totally awesome and gives it to ya straight..lol..great chapter!!!!

 

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

Hold on a little longer... I hate the angst too! I'm pretty damn sure it's over, but then I'd need to know exactly what angst is. A lot more action than ruminating from here on, ok?? M

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2010 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 25

Thank you very much for this chapter, it was wonderful "OF COURSE" each chapter is.  So I think Bella and Ewoord are going to have a baby, she sure has been sick alot if she isn't... hummm and she needs to pick Ewoord not going back to forks, not a good move, well UNLESS Ewoord is going to follow her there.  But then she wouldn't have the rest of the Cullen's.  Your the author I'm just rattling.  I love your creative mine and I'm sure whatever you see happening will keep us on the edge of our seats with anticipation.  Happy Thanksgiving and can't wait till Next week for the next chapter....

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2010 7:31 PM Title: Chapter 25

well i hope for her sake that she can figure out the way to keep james from her and nessie! keep the chapters comming

Reviewer: Fluent in Sarcasm Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2010 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 25

Oh my lawd, great chapter, ness is the cutest, and i think you portray her perfectly! x

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2010 6:22 PM Title: Chapter 25

So sad!

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2010 5:23 AM Title: Chapter 24

Great Chapter, thanks for the detail and letting us see what was happening from Edwards POV that is always wonderful.  Now we're getting somewhere, I guess next Chapter we have to have the funeral.  Hey didn't we cover several chapters ago that James got married again,  I think that's who the lady is in the Blue Car!!!  We shall see.  Can't wait for the next InstallmentChapter. 

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2010 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 23

Yes, I read the A/N and I am not going to be a Bella hater, but say that one can sympathize with her situation, yes, this is a story...one never knows what they would do given a situation !!  With that being said, I am very addicted to this story and can't wait to read more, I have one last chapter to read before you have to update more chapters, I want you to know how talented I think your writing is and would love to keep encouraging you in your creativity....  Poor Little Bell, and Edward I just cried and cried as Bella was reading what he put together for her.  Even Mr tuff guy Felix was feeling symphaty for Ewoord!!! Awwhh poor little family.. I say family because that is what they were so rapidly becoming...Okay nough said, on to the next chapter.

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2010 6:33 PM Title: Chapter 16

yes, yes, yes.... He is going to F_____g own it, he loves her too!!  I love how Little Bell says Edward's name  Ewoord!! That's just so cute.  Love - Love - Love this story.  Keep up the wonderful writing.  Moving on to the next Chapter ------->

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2010 5:34 PM Title: Chapter 15

I love the way this was handled with Little Bell, very sensitive and tender.  Love the story keeps me motivated to keep going to the next chapter.... Please stay motivated and inspired to keep on writing.  Thanks again for this Story!!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2010 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 24

I am glad he is not just laying there doing nothing he is a man of action.  The dectives need to pull there heads out of there ass.

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2010 5:53 AM Title: Chapter 24

Good chapter to get us caught up to present day...the care package idea was perfect and I hope it helps these two make it back to each other. And nice cliffy at the end, can't wait for the next chapter

Reviewer: zanyzay Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2010 4:48 AM Title: Chapter 24

Great chapter!  Thanks!

Reviewer: unicorn_bliss Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Nov 2010 9:00 PM Title: Chapter 23

I blame Bella for not leaving James the moment she found out she was pregnant. She waited untill she nearly lost Vanessa, to get it.

I don't blames Edward because he never forced Tanya to stay. He never told her they were going to get married and have kids. He had been avoiding sex for who knows how long. She had been assuming things from the get go. She could have left any time she wanted. She didn't discuss the future so she shouldn't be upset there isn't one. All things considered, she strung herself along as well.

Bella has always had supporting perants. Being a cops daughter I don't understand how she let James go as far as she did. You would think that, that kind of situation would be something Charlie(a cop) would have warned her about(constantly).

Edward had a weak mother and an abusive father. He never really got the support he needed for his self-esteem like Bella did. So, yea, I consider his abuse a lot worse because there was nothing he could have done to avoided it.

Bella had her parents to reassure her to come to them at anytime. She had Jake to be there to lean on.

Sure, Edward had Carlisle and his family. But they didn't raise him. He also got a rude awaking with cancer.

I also want to point out that he wasn't using Tanya like Bella was Jake. He didn't have a kid to be strong for. And he got every ounce of independence taken from him the moment his dad died.

Bella didn't. She leaned on Jake for most of the work and sunk herself pretty deep for leading him on  along with Vanesse.

Ergo, Bella's mistakes far out weigh Edward's.

 

 

 

 



Author's Response:

Hehe... this is fun.

Bella filed a protective order against James while she was still pregnant.  At this point she hadn't nearly lost Vanessa.  But James broke that order, broke down their door and threw Bella and Vanessa down the stairs.  Try as hard as I might, I can't blame Bella for that.  

You don't have to blame Edward with regard to Tanya, but I certainly don't think it was the right thing to do. He never proposed, but he moved her into his apartment, he hung out with her family.  

Bella had a supporting dad.  Her mom walked out on her when she was little.  I think this need for approval and love, maybe sticking around too long, may have its roots in trying to make up for the fact that her mom didn't stick around when the going got tough.  

And dude, Edward's mom was not weak at all!  She just died and was a concert pianist and loved him to death. I think the difference in B & E with regard to moms is that while they both lost them at a young age, Bella's mom intentionally abandoned her, while E's mom had no choice.  

Jake, just like Tanya, chose to stay.  Bella said from the very beginning that she wasn't getting married again.  Jake was there willingly.  It's as much his fault as it was hers.   

But, again, thanks for all of the thought that you've put into this.  M

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