Date: 26 Jul 2017 5:13 AM Title: Chapter 26
Oh poor Emmett. Grew up wiwith two loving parents (wealth)with no death, abuse, neglect or homelessness or stage III cancer. By all means let's celebrate you as the victim. Jesus he and Rosalie deserve each other. Bravo Pixie way to serve up the truth. I'm so glad Bella called I hope Lil Bell forgives her Ewoord.so freaking cute!
Date: 25 Jul 2017 8:23 PM Title: Chapter 17
Surprise surprise Rosalie is a judgemental bitch and it took Alice way to long to defend him and she did it lamely and can she disappear instead of Jake? Also hello Bella you are damaged too dear. Shit we all are right. Again love lil bell!
Date: 25 Jul 2017 4:48 PM Title: Chapter 12, Pt. II
So much to say: first Carlisle is shit sorry who abandones their twin sisters only child after she dies. You don't see bruises so that's your excuse! A 7 year old is good at hiding things? You're a family doctor FFS you know the signs. Rosalie is just as annoying as ever. It's so rare I tolerate her anway. I love Jasper in this story so far. Edward and Bella are two broken halves of a whole who settled in life to feel something...anything. So Jake and Tanya poof be gone! And more lil bell she is he sweetest! Good writing!
Date: 29 Apr 2011 6:59 PM Title: Chapter 10
im really lovin this story... just curious as to how ur gonna let jake down easy... i don't think he deserves any harm or heartache from being the good guy for so long for bella... but i do wanna see bella and edward together.... :) cant' wait to read and find out the outcome... thx for sharing...
Date: 29 Mar 2011 7:15 PM Title: Chapter 35, Epilogue 2
Sorry for the huge gap in reviews. I sort of moved to the other side of the world, and it took me a while to get back into the swing of things. I loved both epilogues, maybe the second more than the first. This was such a sweet way to end the story. The last few chapters were simply amazing!!! Edward really saved the day. And I nearly freaked when Bella took off running after Victoria. Now all that seems so long ago and far away. I can't believe Little Bell's getting married. But sometimes it seems as if life really does happen that quickly. Thanks for sharing this with us.
Date: 27 Mar 2011 12:15 AM Title: Chapter 34, Epilogue 1
This was a great fucking story. This story had all the best emotions in it, happy, funny (laughing out loud funny), sad, suspense, angst, bitterness, anger, jealousy, acceptance and let's not forget unconditional love. I loved every single bit of this story and I'm sad that is over. I have the last epilogue left and the outtakes. I can't wait to read more of your other stories. You're a great author and you have an awesome imagination.
Also, all the research from the legal and medical standpoint was right on. I used to work for an infertility clinic and a cardiovascular office and I did not find any flaws in your story in regards to Edward's and Carlisle's care. I have no clue on the legal part, but it sure has hell sounded like you knew what the hell you were talking about. 2 thumbs up!
Thanks so much for your reviews! I work in health care, so I tried to be as accurate as possible with the medical side of things. For legal, I had a family law attorney to check with. It's the shakier side of things, but she approved it. I'm sad it's over too, but I'm better rested these days, lol... I'm in the middle of an absurd comedy at the moment, and have more drama on the back burner, so look for it in the near future. Also, there are at least three more out-takes coming from TPoL, so keep the out-takes on alert... M
Date: 25 Mar 2011 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 24
OH MY! Edward is just.... gosh, so irresitible. That was a really sweet moment between Lil Bell and Edward. Makes me smile that Edward doesn't want to give up. And yipee on Alec finding Jake's truck...at Trenton. I have a feeling Rosalie reported Bella.......am I way off base here? I just can't get enough of this story.
Date: 25 Mar 2011 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 23
Edward is soooo sweet. I'm glad he understands what Bella is going through. I hope he knows Aminah told Bella to break up with him due to the custody hearing. I kinda hoped that Bella wouldn't have listened to her. After all these years, Edward is capable of loving. I also wanted to add that this story fucking ROCKS!
Thanks so much for your reviews... You made it through the hardest part, I think. Maybe. Hope you like the rest. M
Date: 25 Mar 2011 8:44 AM Title: Chapter 19
Wow, I hate stupid chicks like Tanya. Doing things like this only makes her look pathetic and desperate. I guess she's going to black mail Edward. Either dump bella and get back with her or she'll report him to the bar. Am I right?
Date: 17 Mar 2011 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 23
I am an emotional mess right now! I haven't read such a great story like this in a while. I'm so glad that I stumbled upon it because I haven't been able to stop reading for a couple days now and I hope to finish it tonight. I really hope things work out with everyone in this fic.
Date: 24 Feb 2011 10:41 PM Title: Chapter 35, Epilogue 2
Amazed doesn't even begin to cover how I feel about this story. And it takes place in my old home town.Having been transplanted down to the south I miss a lot of the things in Philly. Cheese steaks and hoagies being the important ones. They just have no idea of how to make them in Charlotte NC.
The characters of your story were so wonderful with all their flaws and the way you wrote them was just so perfect. Thank you so much for taking the time to write such a touching story. L.ooking forward to whatever you work on next.
Thanks so much!! These characters did have flaws - that was important to me. We all do. No one handles things perfectly. But you can work to make it turn out as well as possible, right? You can work to find your happy ending. So glad these characters were able to do that. M
Date: 19 Feb 2011 2:28 PM Title: Chapter 35, Epilogue 2
Well, just when I've thought I've read the best story out there, then I read another one, and this time it's yours! Couldn't keep away from reading and I have loved it!! Sometimes I wondered, but then it wouldn't be a great story if you didn't wonder where the author was taking you. Thanks so much for sharing!!
You're welcome. I'm flattered. Wow. Thanks. Sometimes I wondered too, btw. M
Date: 16 Feb 2011 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 35, Epilogue 2
You rocked this story, I loved it!!! What a nice and satisfying ending to a great story. I am so glad they got their HEA. Look forward to future stories from you!
Thanks so much for your review! M
Date: 10 Feb 2011 8:43 AM Title: Chapter 35, Epilogue 2
Oh my gosh, I don't know what to say. Top 10 of my all time favorites! Beautiful story that has made me look at my two little girls in a completely different way, and appreciate the wonderful husband who comes home to us every night.
I was late to the party here, but it was so much fun catching up when I had the whole story waiting for me to read! You don't even know what a priviledge it was to be able to read it all the way through without stopping and having to wait weeks or months for updates.
Little Bell - one of the best kid characters ever! Loved everything about this story except that it ended. Sad, will have to get used to it not being there for me. You are really an amazing writer and a great storyteller. Please come back and write more!
Please let me know again how I can be part of the group that gets to read the outtakes...was it the flood relief thing? I can't find the information here, so if you can let me know.
Thanks so much for entertaining me with this story that I will never forget. Hmm, maybe Top Five!!!!!
p.s. Aside from being a complete perv and just wanting more lemons, I would really LOVE to know what happened when Tanya found out about Edward and Bella, Ness, the baby, the marriage, etc. It would really make a fantastic outtake or perhaps a FGB charity piece! Hope you'll consider it, I would pay big bucks to see that bitch get her comeuppance!
Thank you so much! The first out-take is available now by contributing $10 to Fandom Against Domestic Violence. This one is special to me because I actually received reviews (on THIS site even) that blamed Bella for her abusive relationship with James. Anyway, here's the website: http://fandomagainstdomesticviolence.blogspot.com/p/how-to-donate.html... This out-take has more details on Will's birth, as well as a pretty decent lemon, in my opinion.
I am writing an out-take for Fandom Fights the Floods. That donation is $5, and the compilation will be ready on 3/1: http://fandomsfightthefloods.blogspot.com/p/home.html. And I'll totally think about your Tanya idea, by the way. It's a good one.
Date: 07 Feb 2011 11:48 PM Title: Chapter 35, Epilogue 2
Such a perfect ending for this wonderful, beautiful fic. Thank you so much for giving us this story and these amazing characters! I'll miss all of them and hope you start writing again soon.
Date: 07 Feb 2011 9:16 PM Title: Chapter 35, Epilogue 2
Well this just Rocked!!! Thanks for taking the time to write this and keep us all so enthralled in the story!!! Oh, who did Little Bell marry????
You rocked this FF and hope you feel inspired to do more, you have shown your Chops dearyyyyyyyy!!!!!
Date: 07 Feb 2011 8:42 PM Title: Chapter 35, Epilogue 2
"He was my Ewoord, my daddy ina takesa longtimeway." That line made me cry and my co-workers were looking at me like I was crazy!
Date: 07 Feb 2011 6:39 AM Title: Chapter 35
OH MY GOD! That was intense and I can't believe that finally, Victoria and James are going to be out of their lives. Edward, Bella, Nessie and little peanut deserve some happiness!
You are awesome! Please write a sequel or more AH fics! I don't really read the vamp stuff as much anymore, but I absolutely love this story and would love to read anything that you write (as long as Edward and Bella are in it!). Thanks so much for writing this.
Date: 06 Feb 2011 9:36 AM Title: Chapter 30
Thank God I was wrong about Carlisle - that was a wild hare up my butt! But I was right about Victoria killing Jake. Poor Jake, he was only trying to protect them and if he hadn't take that gun over there he would still be alive. Miserable, but alive.
I really love this story and I can't get enough of it. I know we're nearing the end and I don't want it to! Please tell me you're writing something new for us? Another juicy E&B story? Please?
Glad to see that Alice and Edward have held their ground against Rose, and that Bella didn't jump back into a friendship with her. In some stories Bella is so wimpy, but this Bella is so much stronger than anyone would have believed. I think she just needs to go for it with Edward! Who cares about slow...she's already pregnant with his child and her daughter wants him to be her daddy, what more could she want? Propose to him already!
Date: 06 Feb 2011 8:39 AM Title: Chapter 29
CARLISLE? Please tell me he didn't report Bella to the authorities and has now had a heart attack or something because he can't deal with the guilt?! I hope he's OK, but I wonder what is going on!
So glad the detectives got there in time to arrest James! I knew Edward would come through, but I have a really bad feeling about things! Where is Victoria?
Date: 06 Feb 2011 8:08 AM Title: Chapter 30
YES! I knew that's who she was! I just hope the police get there in time, and that there is enough evidence to put James in jail... I think Victoria killed Jake, because Edward found/saw a long red hair at the crime scene and I don't know if he even realized it.
Missed reviewing a couple of chapters because I read them on my iPad, but I just wanted to say that I LOVE that Bella is pregnant with Edward's baby! I was so hoping for that miracle, and so glad that Edward is happy about it too. I knew he would be...
Date: 04 Feb 2011 8:14 AM Title: Chapter 23
Oh my God...I am bawling right now! Gah, how the hell did this get so screwed up? And why aren't the police doing more and investigating James more and what's going on with the medical board?! I feel like Tanya started this whole thing. I know Bella and Edward were stupid and careless, but my heart is breaking for Edward right now. It took him so long to get to this point, and now he's had it all taken away and he doesn't even have his job anymore.
Poor little Bell, my daughter has night terrors and I know how traumatic it is. I wish there was something that would make this all better. I know Bella isn't projecting the ideal mother right now, but when they compare her to James in court (with his history of abuse and his treatment of her during their marriage and pregnancy) she is still by far the better parent.
Date: 04 Feb 2011 7:29 AM Title: Chapter 22
OH MY GOD! I totally had a feeling that Jake was dead! I wonder why neither Bella nor Edward thought to mention the situation with James and Victoria to the police? I mean they probably figured out that Felix has been sitting out there watching the house, right? SO was that James' wife who's been scoping out the house? I wonder if she was trying to talk to Bella about James? Maybe he's been doing the same thing to her that he did to Bella? Wow, I really do feel bad that Jake is dead....it wasn't what I wanted for him. I thought maybe he was with Leah and they found out that they were soul mates and were having great sex all week.
I feel awful for Bella, and for Edward, but especially for Nessie. She has been through so much and doesn't deserve this kind of heartbreak at such a young age. Thank God Edward was there to help her through. He's been there and knows what to say. It helped her, I know it.
I wonder how they're going to explain this whole thing to Charlie? Despite how sad this chapter was I totally laughed out loud at what Nessie said when Edward came through the front door!
Date: 03 Feb 2011 10:55 AM Title: Chapter 20
Holy Shit, this just gets better and better (or more complicated and more dramatic!). I think this woman is James new wife, sent to spy on Bella and Nessie. Am I right? I wonder where Jake is, and frankly I'm starting to worry that maybe something bad happened to him because of James.
Tanya is the ultimate bitch on wheels and the fact that she's trying to sabotage everything in Edward's life proves that she is a bitter harpy. I really hope that nothing happens to Nessie and Bella because of Tanya. Edward should have never given her the condo, she doesn't deserve it.
Edward should go work with Bella's lawyer or start is own firm. He's now has the recognition and the experience to do it. I bet Lauren would come work for him too!
How dare James file for joint custody! The nerve of him. If I were Bella I would have offered him a deal - drop the joint custody suit, agree never to see Nessie again, and in return she would drop the back child support suit. If she could only get James to agree to relinquish his parental rights, everything would be so much easier!
Loving the story! I don't do the Twilighted forums (my husband already thinks I read too much!) so I don't know anything about the story updates or teasers but if you get this message could you let me know what your updating schedule is? Just curious to know how frequently you try to update. Following on FFnet too, but I like being able to come here and read sometimes, so I have been leaving my reviews on TWCS instead. I have an iPad, but it will only allow me to review through FF, not here or on Twilighted.
Thank you so much for each and every one of your reviews! I update on Mondays, but you don't have to worry. The last (sniff) chapter is going to be posted this Monday. So I don't think you'll have to wait for an update. You've got a lot of good ideas in this past review. Keep reading, some of them are on the right track. M
Date: 03 Feb 2011 10:13 AM Title: Chapter 19
TANYA IS A FUCKING BITCH! HOW THE HELL DID SHE KNOW?! Katie must have told her. What Edward did was wrong, but Laurent should have stood up to them. It's not fair that Edward loses his job... Bella will be livid!
Date: 01 Feb 2011 11:01 PM Title: Chapter 34, Epilogue 1
Oh Marie, this is absolutely beautiful. Love the way Edward hasn't changed his language and love the way that Little Bell has picked it up. I know that's not right when it's your own child, but it was funny to read. I think that will be Will's first word besides Da. They are such a cute family that I want to cry because it is finally coming to an end. Please let me know when you are going to write something else. So when are you ever going to be published - I don't care how many times I've read something I would buy it. Thank you.
Date: 01 Feb 2011 7:01 AM Title: Chapter 34, Epilogue 1
Awh!! That was very nice, I didn't think about naming the baby after Billy, sweet, nice touch. Little Bells referring to Edward being a 2-minute daddy well just proves hysterically funny because that little girl doesn't forget a thing.
Loved it too when she said to her little brother, "Momma is a Doctor and she sayeed your gonna be fine!" that was just precious and darling because you can hear the conviction in her tone and words to her little brother, Dr. Momma says it, wells it's true.. :-)
Can't wait for the next Epilogue! I also hope your going to write more stories as well.
Date: 31 Jan 2011 8:58 AM Title: Chapter 17
So, when did Edward actually say "I love you" to Bella before this phone conversation? I think I missed it!
Rose is being a total bitch and I know she thinks she's protecting Bella from the same thing she went through with Royce, but she is overstepping and needs to back off and apologize. I get that she doesn't like Edward, but she needs to support her friend and what she's doing is really selfish and insensitive.
Great chapter, keep it up!
Date: 31 Jan 2011 8:08 AM Title: Chapter 16
“You did all this?” she asked, looking around at the flurry of activity in the hall. All words were stuck in my throat. I was too overjoyed to speak. I held her hand instead. “I fucking love you,” she whispered in my ear. And I knew in that moment that Bella and her daughter were worth the leap of faith. I loved her, and I’d own it. I didn’t want to live without either of them. YES!!!!
“You did all this?” she asked, looking around at the flurry of activity in the hall. All words were stuck in my throat. I was too overjoyed to speak. I held her hand instead.
“I fucking love you,” she whispered in my ear. And I knew in that moment that Bella and her daughter were worth the leap of faith. I loved her, and I’d own it. I didn’t want to live without either of them.
Date: 31 Jan 2011 7:06 AM Title: Chapter 15
Loved the video, loved the words. Thanks for the little respite from the drama - I agree that they did need it too.
I know more shit is probably going to hit the fan...too many things left dangling in the wind....James, Victoria, Tanya, Kate, Jake, and God only knows who or what will come out of the woodwork! I hope some of these loose ends will be resolved because just having Edward dealing with his own shit is stressful enough!
Love the way that Nessie love Ewoord so much, and that he wants to see her too. Bella should let him come over for a little bit so that he can at least spend some play time with her! Looking forward to more...
Date: 31 Jan 2011 6:12 AM Title: Chapter 14
Wow, that was close! I thought for sure Bella would be gone and Edward would talk himself out of going after her.
So, Edward did fuck around with Angela - in the office! How did Carlisle not know about this, or does he? No wonder she hates Bella. That means that Edward did cheat on Tanya before. Were there others?
I get that Katie is probably mad at Edward for what he did to Tanya, but that was pretty rude to cause a scene at the Gala. I guess I probably would have done the same thing if it were my sister too. I guess it's good that Bella knows about it now at least.
Not looking forward to what happens when Bella gets home - Jake is going to really be pissed!
You are doing an awesome job here! I totally love this story and I'm totally dreading actually catching up...I love have the chapters all ready and waiting for me! Hope you're writing fast!
Date: 31 Jan 2011 5:19 AM Title: Chapter 13
OH my God! I knew Bella was assuming incorrectly and that Jake was going to propose. He has the worst timing and absolutely has no idea how to read Bella! It's almost comical. I do feel sorry for him, but not enough to have wanted Bella to say yes just to keep Nessie away from James.
I know Edward is trying to protect Bella from himself and from his ill-conceived illusion that he can't be normal. I hope Bella goes to the ball and tells Edward taht she broke up with Jake!
Date: 28 Jan 2011 10:25 AM Title: Chapter 12, Pt. II
OH God, poor Edward. They were so close and Bella was really going to do it this time! He really is so fucked up! I don't believe he's as crazy as he thinks he is, but some therapy and Bella's unconditional love might help. He never gives her a chance to finish what she's saying - I wish he would just listen to her for once!
I do think Edward crossed the line as her attorney and I know for a fact he could be disbarred for his behavior - especially if Victoria or James or their spy has photos or witesses to their behavior. I would hate to see that happen!
Date: 28 Jan 2011 8:38 AM Title: Chapter 11
Curses, foiled again! Jake obviously knows it's coming and he's avoiding it like the plague. Bella needs to tell him she loves him but she's not IN LOVE with him. Damn, at least she's finally realized she needs to break up with him!
Date: 28 Jan 2011 7:34 AM Title: Chapter 10, Pt. II
Rollercoaster, for sure! I am still confused by what exactly took place at the end of their meeting? What was Bella going to say to him when he refused to go back and talk to her again? Dying to know...was she going to fire him? Change her mind about helping with the charity? Tell him they could no longer see each other in any capacity? Damn, did I miss the point?
Date: 28 Jan 2011 6:46 AM Title: Chapter 10
So, I am following this story on FF too, but decided to review here so that you get more! I can't tell you again, or enough, how much I just want Edward and Bella together so I don't care how it happens. I wonder if Jake contributes to things or does Bella essentially support him? I mean, I assume it's Bella's house, right? I know he takes care of Ness and works at a garage, but I almost feel like he's either the hired help or a kept man.
I want to know what Bella meant when she said she wasn't good? It sounds like she was just a naive girl who got swept off her feel by an older man who she really didn't know very well. Getting pregnant doesn't seem like an accident...I bet James did something to her diaphram!
I love the pink iPod, the Smiths, grilled shrimp and veggies and the fact that Bella is currently wrapped up in Edward's arms in her den! I want more!
Date: 27 Jan 2011 8:58 AM Title: Chapter 8
I guess I don't really care if he is being unprofessional because I think he's probably going to go above and beyond for Bella and Nessie no matter what. I so want these two together so much that I don't care about ethics - medical, legal or moral - at this point!
I know Edward thinks he can't have normal and I don't think he can with Tanya. I'm glad he broke it off and I wish she would go away. I don't think he should have given her is apartment or any of the things that were his. She has a job, a career and a family and she can take care of herself.
Jake means well, but when is Bella going to realize that she's not in love with him?
There really isn't a chance that she could be pregnant, is there? I've been secretly hoping that Edward may still be able to father a child and that he and Bella will eventually have one together, invitro or otherwise.
I love this story so much, and as I've said before I hope you're writing fast because I'm catching up!
Date: 26 Jan 2011 4:57 AM Title: Chapter 7, Pt. II
I think Bella has realized that what she feels for Jake is more like deep friendship, gratitude and maybe a little guilt. I don't doubt she loves him, but I don't think she's "in love" with him. He's always been there for her and Nessie and she owes him. Or she feels like she owes him. She was fine going along this path until she met Edward and realized that she could feel so much more from a man. I hate to say it, but I don't think what she's doing is wrong. I think you have to follow your heart sometimes, and this might be one of them.
Date: 26 Jan 2011 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 7, Pt. I
The UST is going to kill me! So, Tanya's mom is giving Edward a hard time...how difficult the whole situation is for Edward. Alice seems like she senses something is going on between her cousin and Bella, but I'm curious as to whether she has her 6th sense here? Hope there will be more party coming up!
I don't think I've commented on this yet, but I love your writing and you obviously know your locations because those details make it even better. I don't know Philly, but I trust that what you're giving us is very detail oriented. Loving this, wanting more so on to the next chapter!
Date: 26 Jan 2011 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 6
I know I shouldn't hate her based on this characterization, but I really don't like Tanya and I'm glad that Edward is leaving her. I really hope she doesn't trash the piano or his Lombardi though! Now we just have to get rid of Jake! I am cold, right?
Love the story, have abandonded all others until I can catch up on this one! I hope you're writing quickly because I will want more as soon as I'm done...
Date: 26 Jan 2011 2:53 AM Title: Chapter 33
Oh Marie, your story is so beautiful. I feel sad that it is finally coming to an end. I have to tell you that you are probably the ONLY author that I know keeps their word. I absolutely hate starting to read a story and really getting into it and then the author stops writing for whatever personal reason they have. BUT NOT YOU, you bring us absolutely to the end. I have a girlfriend that loves Twilight and I am going to turn her on to your story because like me Twilight is just too elementary school for her. I can't wait to hear what she has to say. Thank you so much for all of YOUR HARD WORK and anything I can ever do for you, please let me know.
Date: 26 Jan 2011 1:48 AM Title: Chapter 5
Whoa, Physician heal thy self, huh? Bella needs to fill her own prescription! Her life is quite complicated, but there are ways to simplify it. Can't wait to find out what happens when they run into each other at the anniversary party. What will she think of Tanya? What will he think of her having a daughter? What about Jake? Oh hell, I'm just going to read instead of asking all these questions!
p.s. Hopefully Bella will meet Emmett so that she can introduce him to Rose!
Date: 26 Jan 2011 12:17 AM Title: Chapter 4
That prescription at the end was awesome! I find myself wanting to read about Bella and Edward and not really caring about her relationship with Jake or his with Tanya! I am so glad he is cancer-free. Been there, done that and I think I was almost as nervous waiting for the next chapter (even though I only had to wait a couple minutes since it was already written!) as I was waiting for my husbands lab results!
Anxious for their next meeting and for more E&B interaction!
Date: 25 Jan 2011 10:52 PM Title: Chapter 3
So i've read the last few chapters on my iPad, which won't let me leave reviews so I came back to my laptop to follow-up because I wanted to let you know how much i am really enjoying this story. It really has so much going on and I can't believe how complicated Bella and Edward's lives are right now.
My husband is a testicular cancer survivor and the story intrigued me from the first chapter because of that. But all that Bella has been through with James and now that she has Nessie and is involved with Jake, well that adds a whole other level of baggage. Edward losing his mom to cancer, obviously having issues with drugs in the past, his surrogate family (the Cullens) and his seemingly rocky relationship with Tanya (I hope she goes away) - just more reason to find out what the hell is going to happen!
I am just getting to the part where Edward gets his test results, so I am still hoping that his cancer hasn't returned, but I have a feeling things aren't looking so good for Eddie boy. Can't stop now, but I will do my best to review from my laptop when I get the chance!
Date: 25 Jan 2011 5:45 PM Title: Chapter 33
This was just such a awesome chapter, I cried through the museum portion as you know it was emotional seeing & hearing our Ewoord express himself over his mother.
I always ATTEMPT to keep in mind that this is the Author's story; however, I would love to see Tanya show up to the engagement party or whatever you have in story for Family and Friends to show up for in the Epilouges, I would love to see Edward have a peaceful closer with her and vise versa her with him. I don't think if would still be bugging me if He did not mention her in this Chapter at the Museum. It still plagues him.
I loved how he bought the house that he saw that day, it sort of stuck out in my mind as well when they were walking and talking, and he asked her blunty of her feelings and where he stood. Bless his heart, You really have a way of writing that makes the reader feel what the character are feeling. Just BRAVO and kuddos!!! Also loved how you handled the Boards ruling on Bella's Medical Lisc.
This was just a awesome story, please write others!!!! If you so feel inspired that is.
Date: 20 Jan 2011 4:54 AM Title: Chapter 26
I just found this story and I have been sitting down and reading it all at once. I felt compelled to review at this point because I LOVE Alice here. I can't stand Rose and Emmett has his head shoved too far up his ass to see her for the bitch she is. I am sure she has her "reasons" but she is acting to high and mighty. I LOVE that Alice is standing up to them.
This story has me captivated!
Date: 19 Jan 2011 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 35
GOD YOUR BELLA IS REALLY A DUMBASS! EVERYTHING SHE DOES IS WRONG, WHY IS EDWARD EVEN WITH HER?
Um, wow. Don't know what to say. Crazy that you'd read over 300,000 words about a dumbass. I think Bella was awesome in this chapter. Overcame her fear of commitment, brought her family together, and now Victoria is dead. Cheers.
Date: 17 Jan 2011 11:00 PM Title: Chapter 35
FanTastic Chapter, did not see the Victoria stuff coming at all...Wow this was a wonderful chapter. Priceless when Sasha showed up and discovered that Vanessa is a little girl. Love it. Wonder how Tanya will take the news of Edwards impending fatherhood, you know I am not a Tanya fan, but she really just loved him and he did just want her to find love and happiness, it would be nice to see that somehow for her.
Man I was paniced for just a minute thinking that Victoria was gonna shoot him. Can't wait to find out what the talk is going to cover.....
Till next week,