Date: 08 Jun 2010 4:19 AM Title: Epilogue
I love the conclusion here. It makes perfect sense to me, and oh wouldn't I love to see what Felix looks like and if they found all the parts! I'l be looking forward to the next phase of this!!!
Date: 01 Jun 2010 5:58 AM Title: Chapter 5
Go Heidi! She's taking a tremendoous risk should Aro touch her! This is going to be excellent! Bravo on a superb storyline!
Date: 28 May 2010 11:02 PM Title: Chapter 3
Ok i loved letter but...idk bout his one....I mean i really wanna no whats gunna happen but its really confussing...i guess i just have to wait paitenly for the rest plz finsih soon :)
Date: 28 May 2010 7:28 PM Title: Chapter 3
Wow...I can't wait until Edward sees her again...update when you can!!
Date: 27 May 2010 8:10 PM Title: Chapter 3
You hooked me totally! I discovered this piece first and then backtracked and came forward. Stunning work. I especially love this piece. Heidi is a revelation and her POV is key, I think, to Bella's survival both physical and emotional. Aro goit the girl he wanted, only to loose the powers to her inner mind. Briliiant!!!! I can't wait for more!