[Report This]Date: 08 Mar 2010 11:39 AM Title: Chapter 16
Please Please atleast catch up to what I had read on fanfic LOL you are almost there but I Seriously NEED to continue with this read it is one of my major Faves :D Update again ASAFP
Barb
Date: 07 Mar 2010 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 1
I understand that you are revising your story, but my goodness , it sure has been a long time since we had a new chapter. I hope you haven't abandoned this story. It is really a great story.
[Report This]Date: 02 Mar 2010 5:40 PM Title: Chapter 16
I am really enjoying this story. I hope you will be updating soon.
Date: 27 Feb 2010 9:47 PM Title: Chapter 16
please update this story soon i love it
Date: 27 Feb 2010 7:23 AM Title: Chapter 7
He gave no word on/for anything, just asked for forgiveness.
Date: 23 Feb 2010 6:59 PM Title: Chapter 16
well its time for the next chapter
Date: 22 Feb 2010 4:20 PM Title: Chapter 1
Can't wait for the next chapter:P Such an awesome story... I LOVE IT!
Date: 22 Feb 2010 6:50 AM Title: Chapter 16
i love this story cant wait to till the s=ceremony chapter and bella and peters talk
Date: 22 Feb 2010 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 16
I followed this story over from FF and was wondering if you plan on updating anytime soon.
[Report This]Date: 22 Feb 2010 1:38 AM Title: Chapter 16
Glad to find your story again. Hopefully we will get a new chapter! *crosses fingers*
Date: 21 Feb 2010 10:47 PM Title: Chapter 1
I am glad I found you. I am really looking forward to the next update this is one hot and scary story:)
Date: 20 Feb 2010 7:11 AM Title: Chapter 16
Interesting concept in your story. You have me hooked despite the fact this is the first non Bella Edward story I have read. You Carlisle creeps me out, just as you planned :)
Looking forward to watching the rest of the story unfold
[Report This]Date: 19 Feb 2010 6:56 PM Title: Chapter 16
I hope that once she is changed she kicks his ass.Just to let him know he dominates the relationship only because she allows it.
[Report This]Date: 17 Feb 2010 8:34 AM Title: Chapter 16
I have been following this story on ff and I cant tell you how happy I am to see it here. I cant wait for the next chapter. I wonder what Bella will ask and how she will be with Peter. I love this story so much. It is one of the best I have read.
Date: 16 Feb 2010 9:29 PM Title: Chapter 1
hey i followed u from fanfic and i'm trying to make an account do i have to wait for an confromation email or something please let me know i want to read ur updates sextons.mail@inbox.com help me please i miss ur stories
Date: 16 Feb 2010 8:27 AM Title: Chapter 16
If she gets to have Peter when she needs time away from Jasper and his monster, does this mean that Jasper gets to have someone else too? I don't know about anyone else but I'm guessing that Bella isn't going to be happy about that
Date: 16 Feb 2010 4:10 AM Title: Chapter 7
This story has me all over the place. It's real good but I have so many questions. Like why did Daddy C do that to her? Why did Edward growl at the house, what did he read in Daddy C's mind? Those are just for starter's
Date: 15 Feb 2010 11:24 PM Title: Chapter 16
I have been following your stories on ffn and would love to see them updated. It makes me made when people are critical of a story that they are mostlikely not going to keep reading. I love this story and look forward to reading it here. Thanks for giving me the chance to keep reading it and keeping us readers informed of were you are posting it.
Date: 15 Feb 2010 6:54 AM Title: Chapter 16
I love this story! It is very unique! Update soon! ;)
[Report This]Date: 14 Feb 2010 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 16
Cant wait for the next chapter!!!!!!!
Date: 14 Feb 2010 7:00 AM Title: Chapter 16
I am so glad you brought this here!! dana
[Report This]Date: 14 Feb 2010 4:35 AM Title: Chapter 1
i love it so far
Date: 14 Feb 2010 1:31 AM Title: Chapter 1
Keep rockin it. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. EAGERLY!!
[Report This]Date: 13 Feb 2010 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 16
i adore all your stories. you are awesome. cant wait for more!!
[Report This]Date: 13 Feb 2010 12:46 PM Title: Chapter 16
Can't wait to hear all the crazy shit w/ the ceremony!
[Report This]Date: 13 Feb 2010 12:27 PM Title: Chapter 15
it is interesting how his words when he is loving affects her so much now.
[Report This]Date: 13 Feb 2010 11:49 AM Title: Chapter 14
finally she gets made love to!
[Report This]Date: 13 Feb 2010 11:40 AM Title: Chapter 13
yuck! she has to comprimise the fact that she has only received pleasure from her Master!
[Report This]Date: 13 Feb 2010 1:24 AM Title: Chapter 12
James and Daddy C are buddies I bet!
[Report This]Date: 13 Feb 2010 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 11
HOLY CREEPY DADDY!
[Report This]Date: 13 Feb 2010 12:53 AM Title: Chapter 10
Still can't believe she is 16yrs.
[Report This]Date: 12 Feb 2010 10:10 PM Title: Chapter 9
wow...Jazz has some heart under there!
[Report This]Date: 12 Feb 2010 9:41 PM Title: Chapter 8
OMG! He is soooo clingy!
[Report This]Date: 12 Feb 2010 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 7
mushy empath warrior!
[Report This]Date: 12 Feb 2010 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 5
She has awesome powers!
[Report This]Date: 12 Feb 2010 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 4
Bloodlettting and venomletting! Yummy!
[Report This]Date: 12 Feb 2010 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 3
I am glad you are no making her more slave like
[Report This]Date: 12 Feb 2010 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 2
Wonder how Bella will do with him?
[Report This]Date: 12 Feb 2010 8:33 PM Title: Chapter 1
Awesome tale to tell :-) You have a super imagination...so happy you share it :-P
Date: 12 Feb 2010 4:49 PM Title: Chapter 16
love the story. when is the next chapter going to be on?
Date: 12 Feb 2010 4:11 PM Title: Chapter 15
I think it's clever how you have intertwined people from SM's saga into your fic to create a believable AU.
Date: 12 Feb 2010 3:59 PM Title: Chapter 14
I take it Charlotte isn't exactly 100% into the plan with Peter and Bella.
Date: 12 Feb 2010 3:51 PM Title: Chapter 13
I enjoyed seeing a softer side of Marcus. Nice job there.
[Report This]Date: 12 Feb 2010 1:16 PM Title: Chapter 16
Love this story and followed you from FF!!! Keep up the great work!!
Date: 12 Feb 2010 12:47 PM Title: Chapter 12
So, I think I read that Jasper will share Bella with Peter....
And, it looks like james is rearing his ugly head.
Date: 12 Feb 2010 10:32 AM Title: Chapter 16
this story is soo intense and i bet you're bot to kick it up a notch.
[Report This]Date: 12 Feb 2010 8:00 AM Title: Chapter 16
Keep going I love it.
Date: 12 Feb 2010 7:10 AM Title: Chapter 11
It's rare to see Carlisle the villain, and you are writing it well.
Date: 12 Feb 2010 7:03 AM Title: Chapter 10
Ima thinking carlisle is gonna be angry. Yeah, duh?
Date: 12 Feb 2010 6:57 AM Title: Chapter 9
You've really twisted things around in a good and unique way.
Date: 12 Feb 2010 6:44 AM Title: Chapter 8
yep, Carlisle is creepola.
Date: 12 Feb 2010 6:33 AM Title: Chapter 7
It's interesting how Jasper is supposed to be the head vampire, etc, yet he seems to cower under Bella asking for forgiveness.
I like him that way. Shows he's vulnerable.
Oh, btw, I liked the vulture on the crest. Creative and original.
Date: 12 Feb 2010 6:23 AM Title: Chapter 6
Jasper is actually a very nice Darksper.
Date: 12 Feb 2010 6:17 AM Title: Chapter 5
Like how you've created classes, interesting
Date: 12 Feb 2010 6:05 AM Title: Chapter 4
Bloodletting? that's another original idea, and an interesting one.
So, do your vamps have blood then? And, obviously, Jasper didn't change Bella, correct?
Date: 12 Feb 2010 5:53 AM Title: Chapter 3
I'm not normally a B/J person, but I am like Darksper. He's a force, isn't he?
I was a bit wigged out about what Bella said about Carlisle looking learily at her.
Date: 12 Feb 2010 5:40 AM Title: Chapter 2
So, this isn't a B/E story? I am guessing a B/J story?
Date: 12 Feb 2010 5:36 AM Title: Chapter 1
This sounds like an original concept for a fic. I'm going for it.
Date: 12 Feb 2010 5:13 AM Title: Chapter 16
i have followed this story from FF. I love this Bella/Jasper story. please write more soon.
Date: 12 Feb 2010 2:16 AM Title: Chapter 16
Im really sad that you had to pull your story from fanfiction. I dont see why there taking N-17 off it makes me mad. I will gladly follow your story here i cant wait to see what happens next :)
Date: 11 Feb 2010 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 1
I found you!!! Hope for a new chapter soon!! Cant wait!!
Date: 11 Feb 2010 12:54 PM Title: Chapter 16
Yay! you found a new site....hope a new chapter will be up soon.
Date: 11 Feb 2010 10:03 AM Title: Chapter 16
I'm not really a Jasper/Bella fan but this is really good. Look forward to reading the rest.
Date: 11 Feb 2010 9:03 AM Title: Chapter 1
Yay I am so glad you are not pulling your stories I love them and am looking forward to reading more. Thanks for keeping your readers who appriciate you in the loop. I look forward to more.
Date: 11 Feb 2010 6:12 AM Title: Chapter 12
love the story. i can't stop with reading it
I keep on going reading it, but i have to go to my work. times up, till next time
[Report This]Date: 11 Feb 2010 5:10 AM Title: Chapter 1
love this story alot
Date: 11 Feb 2010 5:02 AM Title: Chapter 16
I found you!! Wherever you write, I'm there! You know I adore this story and love your other works, so whatever you do let me know where you'll be and I'm there! So good to read your work again! Joanie
Date: 11 Feb 2010 4:48 AM Title: Chapter 16
I loved it...I can't wait to read more. Kat
Date: 11 Feb 2010 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 16
were you told to remove your stories from FF or did you chose to? Well for whatever reasons I'm glad they're here. Hope you start updating them again.
Date: 11 Feb 2010 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 16
Okay I have followed you from ffn because I can't get enough of your stories! I love them all! I wish you would have continued the Peter/Bella and Jasper story but I can live with it! You are amazing I love what you write! Sorry I could not review on ffn but I have trouble there you are my all time favorite! I can't wait till you post new stuff!
Date: 11 Feb 2010 2:06 AM Title: Chapter 8
Carlisle is going to be trouble.
Date: 11 Feb 2010 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 1
I'm really glad you didn't just get rid of the stories and quit them altogether, Once Upon A Vampire is so awesome and different! I've loved every minute of this story so far and I cannot wait for another chapter!! I'm sorry you've had so much trouble with FF.net and with someone trying to steal your story, that sucks majorly!
[Report This]Date: 11 Feb 2010 1:41 AM Title: Chapter 16
Well Please tell me that you will finish this story over here I fell in love with it and have been waiting for the Update Hoping for more but nothing :( anyway Please Update again asap
Barb
Date: 11 Feb 2010 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 16
I'm glad I found you again!!! Update soon!!!
Date: 11 Feb 2010 12:55 AM Title: Chapter 16
i cant wait for more chapters sorry some one was steling them off you in fan fiction. how i know tjis is because i am britt cullen on there just so your not like "oh my god a stalker."
[Report This]Date: 11 Feb 2010 12:27 AM Title: Chapter 16
love it and can't wait for more
Date: 11 Feb 2010 12:08 AM Title: Chapter 16
I love this story and i am so glad that i found it...
Date: 10 Feb 2010 11:30 PM Title: Chapter 16
Just wanted to know that I loved this story so much that I followed you from fanfiction.net - cause I need to see how this story plays out. Looking forward to seeing a new chapter.
Date: 10 Feb 2010 10:59 PM Title: Chapter 1
Interesting...Can't wait to see what life for Bella will be like with the God of War.
Date: 10 Feb 2010 8:22 PM Title: Chapter 16
yes its official i am now your stalker....after following you all the way from fanfiction. just lettin you know i don't think your stuff is too dark!!!
i cannot wait for more of this
Date: 10 Feb 2010 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 16
I read that story that is very much like yours and I can see why it would upset you. It is very close to yours, all they did was change a few words here and there but basically its the same. I like your story WAY better!!!
Chelsea
[Report This]Date: 10 Feb 2010 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 1
I'm sooooo happy you brought them here!!! I can't wait for new chapters!!! ;o}
Date: 10 Feb 2010 5:24 PM Title: Chapter 16
Awesome story glad you are here
Date: 10 Feb 2010 4:20 PM Title: Chapter 16
So glad you're here!!!
Date: 10 Feb 2010 3:37 PM Title: Chapter 1
im so glad you decided to continue this story...cant wait to read more
Date: 10 Feb 2010 3:34 PM Title: Chapter 1
hiya hun..im so glad you have decided to carry on and not delete them..i love ALL your stories and look forward to being able to continue reading them....xoxoxo
Date: 10 Feb 2010 2:09 PM Title: Chapter 16
love this story. glad you found a home here with us.
Date: 10 Feb 2010 1:53 PM Title: Chapter 16
So glad you're going to continue this over here. Sorry that you had to move, but I love your stories so I'm estatic that you decided to keep going.
Date: 10 Feb 2010 1:50 PM Title: Chapter 16
was reading on FF, look forward to more of the story. Love your writing.
Date: 10 Feb 2010 1:22 PM Title: Chapter 16
I am soooooo glad to see your stories over here. Please update soon!
Date: 10 Feb 2010 12:11 PM Title: Chapter 1
SOOOOOOO EXCITED...you are here..you are here.... Best way to wake up EVER!!!...
I love this story..(BEST HOT JASPER in the world)
I am so sorry about all the crap that you have been going through....but you have found a good home...Cause we love this story..
YEAH..Thanks for coming over...