Date: 13 Feb 2011 10:57 PM Title: Chapter 8
cool shopping... carlisle not cool don't trust him at all.. something is going to happen.
Date: 13 Feb 2011 10:40 PM Title: Chapter 7
ookay. yeah i wouldn't be too happy with him either i hope that he doesn't do it again but i won't hold my breath. stil don't understand how he left her with carlisle and not pick someone else.
Date: 13 Feb 2011 10:27 PM Title: Chapter 6
damn jasper is sooo f-ing HOT!!!!!!
Date: 13 Feb 2011 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 5
ok sorry i haven't reviewed till now. had to read more to see if i was going to stay with it. carlisle man what a bastard! what's up with that doing it in front of bella with esme watching her like that yuk!! and all the rules if jasper knew she was being treated so badly why didn't he take her sooner. what was the accident and what did she do it get beat? are you going to fill it in? i hope this won't be all about spanking bella.... i do like it so far
Date: 09 Feb 2011 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 21
Is this the end?
thanks for the update!
<3
Date: 08 Feb 2011 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 21
Where the heck is Carlisle? I can't wait to see what life for Bella is like once they settle into Italy.
[Report This]Date: 08 Feb 2011 12:26 AM Title: Chapter 20
I know vampires can be cruel creatures and I know that they can also be fantastic lovers. Jasper is both. The Major just seems to be cruel.
I think Bella will be more able to tolerate and even to challenge Jasper as she grows into her part as his mate. But can she live through being mated with the Major.
Love this story, glad you are posting again. You are the very best author.
[Report This]Date: 07 Feb 2011 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 21
Lovely =)
[Report This]Date: 07 Feb 2011 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 20
Loved this chapter!!!! =D
Date: 07 Feb 2011 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 20
Is there a traitor among the guards? How else could he have gotten away?
Bella is behaving a little strange but still quite adorable!
And this no sex until the wedding is a bit confusing, but I guess that will speed up the whole process a bit, at least where Jasper is concerned.
I like the chapter and kind of missed this story!
[Report This]Date: 07 Feb 2011 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 20
Why did Marcus tell Jasper to not have sex with her?
Date: 07 Feb 2011 7:22 PM Title: Chapter 21
Jasper's wedding vows?
[Report This]Date: 07 Feb 2011 4:48 PM Title: Chapter 20
I liked it =)
[Report This]Date: 07 Feb 2011 4:25 PM Title: Chapter 21
I think that fit with the story nicely.
[Report This]Date: 07 Feb 2011 4:24 PM Title: Chapter 20
I think Jasper is a little harsh since she doesnt know everything she needs to know. Good chapter.
Date: 07 Feb 2011 3:46 PM Title: Chapter 21
didn't really like this chapter
[Report This]Date: 07 Feb 2011 3:45 PM Title: Chapter 20
that was a good chapter
Date: 07 Feb 2011 3:30 PM Title: Chapter 21
I don't get it
[Report This]Date: 07 Feb 2011 1:10 PM Title: Chapter 21
Can't wait for more!!! Lovin it!
Date: 07 Feb 2011 12:49 PM Title: Chapter 20
Like a breath of fresh air.. i have sooooo missed this story. I reread it all the time. This was a wonderful chapter. (And very long too.. hahaha) I enjoyed it, and I agree, poor Bella and Jasper need some alone time. no.. they need ALOT of alone time. lol
Thanks
Date: 07 Feb 2011 12:48 PM Title: Chapter 21
Loved the poem! Thank you!
Date: 07 Feb 2011 12:37 PM Title: Chapter 20
I really enjoyed it
[Report This]Date: 07 Feb 2011 6:34 AM Title: Chapter 20
Awesome chapter!!!!!! I hope Cullen is caught soon. I cant wait to see him go down for what he did.
Why did he have such a strong connection to Bella? Or was that all in his head?
Anyhow, I cant wait to see what her reaction is to Italy! :)
Date: 07 Feb 2011 5:33 AM Title: Chapter 20
Holy hell!! That was hot! Love me some hot sexy Major. Loved it, and can't wait for more.
Date: 07 Feb 2011 5:31 AM Title: Chapter 20
hmmm now how did the scumbag get away i wonder
Author's Response:
Let's say it was an inside job by someone you haven't meet yet
Date: 09 Jan 2011 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 19
I haven't reviewed yet because I just read all 19 chapters. I wasn't sure how I was going to like this story after the first chapter-being a diehard B & E girl. Got to tell ya...I am soooo glad I stuck with it. I love this story... The way you have weaved the canon characters together to fit within your plot is amazing. I am now just disappointed that I have caught up and have to wait like everyone else for an update...damnit!Ü Can't wait to see how Master Jasper deals with a newborn Bella ;)
[Report This]Date: 12 Dec 2010 3:22 PM Title: Chapter 19
this is just so awesome
[Report This]Date: 12 Dec 2010 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 4
I probably would have preferred it to be Edward instead of Jasper but it still looks to be the making of a great story.
I'm just a little partial to Edward
[Report This]Date: 12 Dec 2010 1:22 AM Title: Chapter 3
is Carlisle dead?
Date: 11 Dec 2010 3:47 AM Title: Chapter 19
I love it, awesome job update soon.
Date: 09 Dec 2010 8:07 AM Title: Chapter 19
next update?
[Report This]Date: 07 Dec 2010 1:16 AM Title: Chapter 19
Carlisle is going to be sorry!
[Report This]Date: 06 Dec 2010 7:23 AM Title: Chapter 19
Loved it! I'm anxious for more =)
Date: 04 Dec 2010 8:10 PM Title: Chapter 19
oh, I hate creepy Carlisle, I am glad they found her so quickly and you did not drag that out - Can't wait to see what happens next
Date: 04 Dec 2010 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 19
awesome. it was very good. hope you update soon
Date: 02 Dec 2010 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 19
I never thought of it being her to take her. I thought of Carlisle, James, or Jake i really didn't see that one coming can't wait to hear more.
Date: 01 Dec 2010 4:18 PM Title: Chapter 19
Where have you been?! I love your stories, but I was worried you were gonna leave us hanging! Please don't scare us like that again. Nice chapter, but it's something of a cliff-hanger.
[Report This]Date: 01 Dec 2010 2:51 PM Title: Chapter 19
I thought you left us hanging. I was so happy to see an update! Will there be more chapters? Thanks for the update. :~)
[Report This]Date: 01 Dec 2010 4:46 AM Title: Chapter 19
This story has no words to say how great it is!! Can't wait for the next update!
Date: 01 Dec 2010 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 4
I woudn't mind a little bloodletting ceremony with Jasper! Loved the chapter!
Date: 01 Dec 2010 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 3
Jasper on a bike --- awesome!
[Report This]Date: 01 Dec 2010 3:40 AM Title: Chapter 19
I can only imagine the pain that Jasper will put Carlisle threw. At least Bella will no longer be human.
Date: 01 Dec 2010 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 2
Loving it!!! Can't wait to see how things go!
Date: 01 Dec 2010 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 1
Oh my....very interesting! Lucky Bella!
Date: 01 Dec 2010 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 19
Finally an update!!!!
Date: 01 Dec 2010 1:16 AM Title: Chapter 19
PLease post more soon!
Date: 01 Dec 2010 12:15 AM Title: Chapter 19
Great chapter! can't wait for more!
Date: 30 Nov 2010 9:53 PM Title: Chapter 19
good chapter. glad to see the story going again.
Date: 30 Nov 2010 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 19
well, i guess Carlisle had it pretty bad for B.
They're together now;D)
Date: 30 Nov 2010 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 19
Uuh, creepy chapter. i guess Carlisles death wish will be granted eventually.....
I´hope Bella is fine. She wil be a strong vampire, and JAsper......do I want to know what he is capable off......doing to Carlisle.......LOL
[Report This]Date: 30 Nov 2010 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 19
wow it was so worth the wait i cant wait to see what kind of punishment they have in mind for Carlisle! you did a great job!
[Report This]Date: 30 Nov 2010 5:37 PM Title: Chapter 5
I'm really loving your jasper xx
Date: 30 Nov 2010 5:21 PM Title: Chapter 19
AHHHH - thanks for the update and a bit of closure...I so love your Major!
Date: 30 Nov 2010 4:57 PM Title: Chapter 19
I was so excited to see a new chapter. And it was certainly worth the wait. I was expecting there to be chapters of Carlisle torturing her (thank you for NOT doing that). They should take Carlisle apart and fuse him back together enough times to give each person that loves Bella a chance at him. And then the Volturi should take him to Italy under "grandpa's" supervision for a few years of servitude (spelled sex slave) to any who want to use him. Vengeful, aren't I? Anyway, great chapter. p
[Report This]Date: 30 Nov 2010 4:30 PM Title: Chapter 3
ok carlisle is starting to creep me out a little bit x
[Report This]Date: 30 Nov 2010 4:08 PM Title: Chapter 19
Whoa! Sweet niblets! That was awesome!
I cannot WAIT to see what happens to Carlisle!
Date: 30 Nov 2010 3:53 PM Title: Chapter 1
OOO this looks good :) amazing start to a story xx
Date: 30 Nov 2010 3:44 PM Title: Chapter 19
i have been waiting so long for this............
mine, mine ,mine :-)
Date: 30 Nov 2010 2:25 PM Title: Chapter 19
you're alive!!!!!
hmmm carlisle oh carlisle.....I'd start with ripping his shriveled little dick off and shoving it up his own arse
Date: 30 Nov 2010 1:12 PM Title: Chapter 19
Oooooo. Interesting chapter. Definately worth the wait. Can't wait to see how she tries to show Jasper she isn't a weak human anymore.
Date: 30 Nov 2010 10:34 AM Title: Chapter 19
Omg, that was a lot for one chapter. I didn't see Bella's change coming at all, I can't remember Tanya being Marcus' mate.
the last little bit from Bella is a bit like someone is visiting her mind while she is going through the change - doesn't seam like something Bella would say or think unless she was reading.
And the last line - “My mate, my master, my Major, my Jasper. ALL MINE” can only imagine how Jaspers reaction will differ to the Majors. Either way its gonna make for one hell of a chapter.
Date: 19 Nov 2010 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 18
you have to continue please it's getting so good plzzzzzzzzz
[Report This]Date: 01 Nov 2010 7:13 PM Title: Chapter 18
Awesome chapter! =) Plz post more soon.
Date: 01 Nov 2010 4:22 PM Title: Chapter 18
plz plz give us more :P
Date: 18 Oct 2010 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 18
OMG where is she!
Date: 17 Oct 2010 8:58 AM Title: Chapter 3
i wonder what happened in the office
Date: 09 Oct 2010 1:27 PM Title: Chapter 18
Hi i have followed this story since fanfiction and i was gutted when you took it off, then i found it on here but you have only done two chapters and i was wondering when you are going to post the next chapter as i have been waiting for ages.
Thanks, Shannon
Date: 02 Oct 2010 3:01 AM Title: Chapter 18
holy fuzz. Dude, u better write more cuz i am so freaking uptightright now. I NEED MORE OF JASPER AND BELLA!
this story is the shit. KEEP GOING XOXOXO
Date: 26 Sep 2010 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 18
Hello Jaspers Black Rose -
I hope this note finds you well!
Just wanted to share with you how much I enjoyed reading your story, "Once Upon a Vampire." It is very compelling; in fact I read all chapters to date in one sitting. Looking forward to future chapters! Thanks and regards.
Date: 23 Sep 2010 10:37 PM Title: Chapter 18
Cannot wait for next chapter.
Date: 08 Sep 2010 2:23 AM Title: Chapter 18
Update? when? soon hopefully....!!!!
Date: 06 Sep 2010 1:40 PM Title: Chapter 18
What a way to end a chapter! A very evil cliffy but it keeps me in suspense. I love this story and love Jasper to pieces. I was so happy that Esme and Charlie are chosen mates :) But lets hope Jasper can retrieve Bella from Carlisle *coughs* Bastard *coughs* Cullen as I'm guessing he's the one that kidnapped her or paid someone to.
Excellent chapter! Keep up the amazing writing skills you possess.
~Anna-Margaret
xx
Date: 01 Sep 2010 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 9
i couldn't forgive him so easily for forced sex. but the chapter was great.
Date: 01 Sep 2010 11:51 AM Title: Chapter 8
I'm wondering why is Edward and Alice so... out of the picture.
And for the rest: i love all the characters you formed, but Carlisle... he may cause some problem.
Date: 01 Sep 2010 9:57 AM Title: Chapter 7
I think i couldn't forgive him so easily. But, sadly, I'm not Bella and i have not to deal with something like this.
Thanks for the chapter.
Date: 01 Sep 2010 8:44 AM Title: Chapter 4
Wow, you mixed the TB idea with Twilight! I love it! It's much better than the stone cold, rock hard bodies! :)
Thanks!
Date: 01 Sep 2010 6:52 AM Title: Chapter 3
thanks for the chapter! And for Jazz in the shower! :)
Date: 01 Sep 2010 6:32 AM Title: Chapter 2
it's getting interesting!
[Report This]Date: 30 Aug 2010 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 18
Love it write more soon!
Date: 29 Aug 2010 7:08 AM Title: Chapter 18
I do so love this whole story!!!!
Date: 28 Aug 2010 9:54 PM Title: Chapter 18
WAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OHK THAT WAS NOT FAIR AND YOU KNOW IT!!!!!
Date: 27 Aug 2010 7:19 PM Title: Chapter 18
omg i love your stories more please.......:)
Date: 25 Aug 2010 4:29 PM Title: Chapter 18
Ack! I knew that would happen or it would be over too soon, but Carlisle is such a creepy character that it makes me kind of sick to my stomach. Having the whole Volturi guard on their side should not bode well for him though. I really love this story and am looking forward to the next chapter already. p
Date: 25 Aug 2010 11:38 AM Title: Chapter 18
OMG!!! pls pls pls update soon! That was suuuuuuuch a cruel cliffie!!!!
[Report This]Date: 25 Aug 2010 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 18
Wow I was not expecting that at the end of the chapter. I have a feeling it is Carlisle behind all of this because he is dead set on make Bella his. I really hope you will be able to post the next chapter soon. I have missed this story greatly. It was the first one I read that made me fall in love with Jasper/Bella stories along with Peter/Bella stories as well. Hell all three of them together is sweet. I cant wait to see what will happen next. This is an awesome story.
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Date: 24 Aug 2010 1:32 PM Title: Chapter 18
hey i am always thrilled about an update of your story,
hope that there will be a new one soon :-)
Date: 24 Aug 2010 12:38 AM Title: Chapter 18
Ugh! You can NOT leave a cliffy like that! :-p Love your story; pleeezzzz update sooonnn!!