Date: 09 Aug 2021 8:00 PM Title: Chapter 23
Been loving the story but seems unfinished?
Date: 28 Mar 2016 4:17 AM Title: Chapter 23
Read-complete at 23 but still have some unanswered story lines
Date: 04 Mar 2015 10:39 PM Title: Chapter 23
WOW, I'm sorry you had to end it this way....
Date: 26 Oct 2014 8:04 PM Title: Chapter 23
I am loving this story. It is very well interesting with all the ways their mating works.
Date: 26 Oct 2014 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 22
They are so connected to one another.
Date: 26 Oct 2014 5:57 PM Title: Chapter 21
Interesting
Date: 26 Oct 2014 5:55 PM Title: Chapter 20
How in the world did Carlisle escape? Lots going on in this chapter.
Date: 26 Oct 2014 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 19
I hate that Carlisle got to her. I hope the Major makes him pay dearly for what he did. How did Tanya get to her and drug her?
Date: 26 Oct 2014 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 18
So Esme is Charlie's mate. How interesting.
Where is Bella? Did someone take her or did she go on her own? Glaf I do not have to wait n a update. I am so off to read the next chapter.
Date: 26 Oct 2014 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 17
I was wondering what Jasper thought of Bella and Charlotte being together. Is Carlisle on his way???
Date: 26 Oct 2014 2:25 AM Title: Chapter 16
So Bella does not remember Jacob. I wonder if she will ever get all her memories back.
Date: 26 Oct 2014 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 15
Glad she got to meet Charlie. I am thinking that Carlisle is watching them.
Date: 26 Oct 2014 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 14
Thanks for explaining the "rules". Bella gets to meet her father!!!!!
Date: 25 Oct 2014 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 13
OK this explains what he meant about Peter. Bella is not going to be happy about having to be with Peter. I am wondering if while Bella is with Peter if Carlisle will try to take her.
Date: 25 Oct 2014 9:37 PM Title: Chapter 12
What did Jasper mean that Peter would not touch Bella until it was time, and even then it would be a nder Jasper's watch? What is the deal with James? I am really enjoying this story.
Date: 25 Oct 2014 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 11
Carlisle is obessed with Bella. I am really surprised that JASPER has let him live this long.
Date: 25 Oct 2014 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 10
I am glad that Bella has the girls to talk to. I am thinks ng that for some reason Carlisle has been having inappropriate thoughts about Bella over the last 16years and Edward knows about them and that is why Edward does not feel comfortable around Carlisle. Can't wait to find out what is going on with Carlisle.
Date: 25 Oct 2014 8:07 PM Title: Chapter 9
Thanks for explaining what was going on with the Cullen's. Boy Michael sure was stupid. He must not have been working for Jasper very long.
Date: 25 Oct 2014 7:34 PM Title: Chapter 8
OK, what is the deal with Carlisle? Does Jasper not feel what Carlisle is feeling? I would think Jasper would not tolerate Carlisle having those kind of feelings for Bella.
Date: 25 Oct 2014 7:15 PM Title: Chapter 7
Glad he said he was sorry. I don't blame Bella for being upset. I would be to. I could not help laughing at what Jasper did to Carlisle. Lol
Date: 25 Oct 2014 4:23 AM Title: Chapter 6
Very interesting that they both drink from each other
Date: 25 Oct 2014 4:14 AM Title: Chapter 5
So that is the accident that Bella was referring to. I am surprised that Jasper did not kill Carlisle. What did Bella do for Carlisle to do that to her?
Date: 25 Oct 2014 3:57 AM Title: Chapter 4
I just knew that it as going to be James that hit er. Lol.
Date: 25 Oct 2014 3:39 AM Title: Chapter 3
What accident is Bella talking about? Does Carlisle have feelings for Bella???
Date: 25 Oct 2014 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 2
Very interesting. Can't wait to read more.
Date: 24 Oct 2014 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 1
Sounds very interesting.
[Report This]Date: 20 May 2014 9:14 PM Title: Chapter 23
Please, please post more chapters! I am such a fan of many (most) of your stories. Yet none (except shorts are completed) . Indeed many have not been updated in a long time. Either here or FF. If you were to add to your stories, I'd jump for joy :)) Truly, your are one of my top fav authors. Best wishes.
Date: 23 Jan 2014 8:50 PM Title: Chapter 23
Really wish you would finish this story. It is really intense and very intriguing. Would be interested to see where you were going with it. I don't normally read different pairings but this one is great. Please finish it.
Date: 07 Jul 2013 4:15 AM Title: Chapter 11
Damn, he's sick! yuck
Date: 31 Mar 2013 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 23
As it always has been,this story is my favorite fanfiction EVER! You make me love them more with each situation and each chapter you write.
Date: 15 Aug 2012 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 1
This sounds like my kind of story. I love the dark stuff. And I'm loving your style already.
[Report This]Date: 15 Jul 2012 10:02 PM Title: Chapter 23
Damn I really loved this story. Please update soon. I need to know more about Evil Carlisle. I also can't wait to read more of Jasper and Bella.
[Report This]Date: 10 Jul 2012 12:44 AM Title: Chapter 23
please update soon caqnt wait gto what happens next
Date: 11 Jun 2012 7:41 AM Title: Chapter 8
I like the jealousy with Carlisle.
Date: 09 Apr 2012 7:22 AM Title: Chapter 1
Woah did not think this was a Jasper/Bella fic.
[Report This]Date: 08 Jan 2012 4:48 PM Title: Chapter 23
What is the upside of this mating for Isabella?
As far as i can see, he is treating her like his sex slave and someone he can claim as his. she may as well be shackled to his bed.
Tormenting her by bringing a young woman in to feed from her in front of your mate... not so smart, major idiot.
I still do not see why she has to give her body to another vampire just because some law sais she has to... but hey, i am old fashion in that way.
It was a good fic and i hope to enjoy it more. so i will await the next chapter to see where you are taking it.
I do hope it is a good direction because i love most your fics
[Report This]Date: 29 Oct 2011 7:33 AM Title: Chapter 23
Its good to see Jasper/Major is as hot and as hot headed as ever. I am also glad to see Isabella is not a complete doormat.
I am so sorry to hear about your grand-mother. My thoughts are with you both.
[Report This]Date: 28 Oct 2011 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 2
Something tells me that 'accident' was anything but...
Wow...this story just got all kinds of interesting...you really can draw the reader in, you know? :)
[Report This]Date: 28 Oct 2011 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 1
Man, it feels pretty intimidating, but at the same time...the God of War is still pretty hot, so I am intimidated and intrigued at the same time hee hee :)
[Report This]Date: 28 Oct 2011 8:33 PM Title: Chapter 23
*giggles* I dont think the massage is gonna help AT ALL! ;)
[Report This]Date: 28 Oct 2011 4:50 PM Title: Chapter 23
woo hoo fInally married. marcus is an annoying party isn't he? why was he trying to make them wait? just to have more time with her?
[Report This]Date: 28 Oct 2011 3:34 PM Title: Chapter 23
Need more! ASAP please! You know how I get, I can never get enough!
Date: 28 Oct 2011 3:32 PM Title: Chapter 23
sorry to hear about your grandmother. prayers and thoughts go out to you.
I guess i am just confused.. i can't remember the story so i guess i am going to go back and re-read it cause i am totally confused about the whole thing.
thanks for the updates and again your family is more important then a FF story!
Date: 11 Oct 2011 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 22
Has jasper been body snatched? he seems bipolar or tripolar or maybe just psycho. He switchs between manically horny, manically possesive, angry and protective. i'm honestly surprised bella hasnt left him because i havent seen the upside of the bond yet, it seems like she only wants him because the bond tells her to. All he's done is protect what's his and have large amounts of animalistic sex. I think we need a comparison mated couple, because we havent heard too much about the other couples lives, but none of them seem to be about love. Eventhough marcus' clingy behavior was explained, i still feel like he's a pedophile or another carlisle in the maing because of bella being a succubus and all. what grandparent has their 16 year old grandchild sit in their laps for extended amounts of time?i'm still enjoying the story but i feel like i need a little more development of character.
Date: 07 Oct 2011 2:48 PM Title: Chapter 22
Your back, yipee! great chapter.
Date: 05 Oct 2011 10:36 PM Title: Chapter 22
No more chapters, really....I, I, I, need some.
[Report This]Date: 05 Oct 2011 1:36 AM Title: Chapter 22
Seems pretty lame keeping them apart when Esme and Charlie were allowed to speed things along. Great chapter though. Glad to see you posting again.
[Report This]Date: 04 Oct 2011 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 22
Wonderful to have an update. I love this story so much. Thank you.
[Report This]Date: 04 Oct 2011 11:07 PM Title: Chapter 22
Loved it! More please!!!
Date: 04 Oct 2011 10:48 PM Title: Chapter 22
thank for the update... man it's been a long time!! had to remember what was going on!! wowo what a link they have. intersting to say the least can't wait for more!
[Report This]Date: 04 Oct 2011 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 22
Save the castle! lol :)
Awesome chapter!
[Report This]Date: 04 Oct 2011 8:26 PM Title: Chapter 22
Love this can't wait for the wedding. Please don't make us wait so long for the next update as this is bye far my favorit story!!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 02 Aug 2011 9:55 PM Title: Chapter 21
huh whathappened the story was sooooooooooo good whats gonna happen next and are you gonna update pretty pleeeeeeeeeeeeeez
kristen a faithful reader
[Report This]Date: 29 Jul 2011 6:19 AM Title: Chapter 21
I was hapy to find you here and I really hope that you will write more :-)
[Report This]Date: 29 Jul 2011 4:14 AM Title: Chapter 3
mmmmmmm yummmy thats all i can mutter for now LOL
[Report This]Date: 26 Jun 2011 1:46 PM Title: Chapter 21
please give us more updates. i am just one of the many who absolutely love your work. but every time i get e-mails about updates, i search them and have no really big luck in finding too much at all like yours. i always search though. one day you will surprise us i am sure.
[Report This]Date: 24 May 2011 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 20
Loving your story!! Your doing an amazing job and your a very talented writer!
Date: 28 Apr 2011 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 1
i absolutley love this story keep it up
Date: 27 Mar 2011 5:43 AM Title: Chapter 20
love it i cant wait to c what happens next!!
Date: 22 Mar 2011 2:15 PM Title: Chapter 21
this is something i didnt expect. how long before you grace us with another chapter. as per usual, i am hanging with bated breath gor some of your stories to be updated.
Date: 25 Feb 2011 10:17 AM Title: Chapter 21
AMAZING !!
please, update soon !!
Date: 22 Feb 2011 4:45 PM Title: Chapter 21
Not quite sure what this chapter is?
Date: 22 Feb 2011 4:43 PM Title: Chapter 20
Loved the ending!
Date: 22 Feb 2011 11:44 AM Title: Chapter 21
Aww. How sweet. I just love how Jasper calls her his little dove. I really loved this story. Just wish I could read about what happens in Voltura. It would be great if Carlisle could get what is coming to him too. Oh well, I can just imagine. Thanks again for writing such a terrific story.
Author's Response:
You will read about what happens in Italy. That was just the end of the first part of the story.
Date: 22 Feb 2011 11:42 AM Title: Chapter 20
Oh my. Lots to process. The Major is very sexy though.
Date: 22 Feb 2011 11:10 AM Title: Chapter 19
Wow Bella. Possessive much? Can't blame her though. Wish I was in her shoes.
Date: 22 Feb 2011 10:52 AM Title: Chapter 17
Oh my gosh! Is EVERYONE in love with Bella? Poor Jasper must really be a nervous wreck. I Love it!
Date: 22 Feb 2011 10:34 AM Title: Chapter 16
Carlisle, James, and now add Jacob to the mix? Are Jasper and Bella ever going to get some peace of mind? This is ridiculous.
Date: 22 Feb 2011 10:25 AM Title: Chapter 15
Jasper, a motorcycle and the woods. Need I say more? Yum!
Date: 22 Feb 2011 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 14
Wow. How much more can Jasper take? It seems eveyrone is a threat to his and Bella's relationship in one way or another.
Date: 22 Feb 2011 12:54 AM Title: Chapter 13
Wow. He sure is possessive. How is he even going to handle the ceremony?
Date: 22 Feb 2011 12:45 AM Title: Chapter 12
Oh boy. First Carlisle, now James. Can't they just get a break?
[Report This]Date: 22 Feb 2011 12:07 AM Title: Chapter 11
OMG! Jasper is going to kill him. Can't wait!
[Report This]Date: 21 Feb 2011 8:29 PM Title: Chapter 10
I can't wait to see what Carlisle does when he finds out everyone is gone. He deserves it bastard. On the plus side though, Bella is very lucky to have Jasper to love her. Who wouldn't want to fall asleep like that?
Date: 21 Feb 2011 8:20 PM Title: Chapter 9
Uh ohn, girl talk. Bella is going to be so embarrassed. I can't wait.
Date: 21 Feb 2011 8:05 PM Title: Chapter 8
Uh oh. Carlisle is going to be a problem. I can feel it. Does he want Bella to himself? Hmmm.
Date: 21 Feb 2011 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 7
Aww. He feels bad. I love the part where he was nuzzling her anad whimpering. That is just too sweet.
Date: 21 Feb 2011 7:17 PM Title: Chapter 6
OMG! Very Hot! Great chapter.
Date: 21 Feb 2011 7:10 PM Title: Chapter 5
Wow. Enough said.
Date: 21 Feb 2011 6:59 PM Title: Chapter 4
I think I would pass out too. Jasper is just too yummy!
Date: 21 Feb 2011 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 3
Yep. Just as great as I remember. A shower with Jasper...ahhh. A girl can dream, right?
Date: 21 Feb 2011 6:07 PM Title: Chapter 2
Oh what I wouldn't give to be Bella right now! It is just as great as I remembered.
[Report This]Date: 21 Feb 2011 5:55 PM Title: Chapter 1
I was so glad to find this story on TWC. I was on story alert when it was on fanfiction. I am so glad that you have not decided to just give up writing it. It really made me angry to know that someone else was stealing your story and posting it elsewhere as theirs. That is just f*cked up! Anyway, I am rambling. I cannot wait to read this story again and see what else you have written. Thanks for continuing it. :)
Date: 14 Feb 2011 4:44 AM Title: Chapter 21
is that the end or will there be more? it is very intense and i like it a lot! i hope there is more!!!
Date: 14 Feb 2011 2:55 AM Title: Chapter 19
wasn't expecting all that so he got her and when he tried to have sex with her he basically broke all her bones so they had to change her... ok now what?
Date: 14 Feb 2011 2:42 AM Title: Chapter 18
they played right the way he wanted... i am sure she did not run away someone got her but who.. well carlisle that's who with james or maybe jacob's help!!
Date: 14 Feb 2011 2:29 AM Title: Chapter 17
ookay i thought bella would get in trouble for that... does that mean the ceremony is off.. well at least it is not going to be as bad as i thought...but i think they are playing into what carlisle wants by stopping the ceremony. i have a really bad feeling about this
Date: 14 Feb 2011 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 16
damn poor girl it seems like she is going to be f-ed to death! hahaha
Date: 14 Feb 2011 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 14
ok public f-ing in front of everyone but why? why can' t he just turn her so he doesn't have to do it. if she is soo important to marcus why whould she have to do it? kinda make me want to vomit!
Date: 14 Feb 2011 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 13
ok a public f-ing is she going to have to do it with peter too? both at the same time? poor bella....
Date: 14 Feb 2011 1:16 AM Title: Chapter 12
ok now she is going to james and carlisle after her... he is the one who is going to help get her away... what is up with this public taking that is going to happen?
Date: 13 Feb 2011 11:34 PM Title: Chapter 11
knew he was a sick MF-er damn jasper better protect her what does it mean that they are mates but not his wife will that stop something? hum this is interesting i hope nothing bad happens to bella she can be with that sicko!!
Date: 13 Feb 2011 11:20 PM Title: Chapter 10
ok at least he knows he is being butt head but i hate his exuse that it's just because he is a vamp.. but anyway
Date: 13 Feb 2011 11:12 PM Title: Chapter 9
damn up the butt hole hard that does suck... he is hot but then he does crap that i totally don't like if your turned on and ready that 's one thing but yuk! why does he act that way? he is going to hurt her for heaven's sake she is only 16! carlisle is going to be pissed and he is going to go after them i have a bad feeling about it!!