Date: 25 Oct 2014 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 10
I am glad that Bella has the girls to talk to. I am thinks ng that for some reason Carlisle has been having inappropriate thoughts about Bella over the last 16years and Edward knows about them and that is why Edward does not feel comfortable around Carlisle. Can't wait to find out what is going on with Carlisle.
Date: 20 May 2014 9:14 PM Title: Chapter 23
Please, please post more chapters! I am such a fan of many (most) of your stories. Yet none (except shorts are completed) . Indeed many have not been updated in a long time. Either here or FF. If you were to add to your stories, I'd jump for joy :)) Truly, your are one of my top fav authors. Best wishes.
Date: 23 Jan 2014 8:50 PM Title: Chapter 23
Really wish you would finish this story. It is really intense and very intriguing. Would be interested to see where you were going with it. I don't normally read different pairings but this one is great. Please finish it.
Date: 08 Jan 2012 4:48 PM Title: Chapter 23
What is the upside of this mating for Isabella?
As far as i can see, he is treating her like his sex slave and someone he can claim as his. she may as well be shackled to his bed.
Tormenting her by bringing a young woman in to feed from her in front of your mate... not so smart, major idiot.
I still do not see why she has to give her body to another vampire just because some law sais she has to... but hey, i am old fashion in that way.
It was a good fic and i hope to enjoy it more. so i will await the next chapter to see where you are taking it.
I do hope it is a good direction because i love most your fics
Date: 28 Oct 2011 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 2
Something tells me that 'accident' was anything but...
Wow...this story just got all kinds of interesting...you really can draw the reader in, you know? :)
Date: 28 Oct 2011 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 1
Man, it feels pretty intimidating, but at the same time...the God of War is still pretty hot, so I am intimidated and intrigued at the same time hee hee :)
Date: 28 Oct 2011 3:32 PM Title: Chapter 23
sorry to hear about your grandmother. prayers and thoughts go out to you.
I guess i am just confused.. i can't remember the story so i guess i am going to go back and re-read it cause i am totally confused about the whole thing.
thanks for the updates and again your family is more important then a FF story!
Date: 11 Oct 2011 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 22
Has jasper been body snatched? he seems bipolar or tripolar or maybe just psycho. He switchs between manically horny, manically possesive, angry and protective. i'm honestly surprised bella hasnt left him because i havent seen the upside of the bond yet, it seems like she only wants him because the bond tells her to. All he's done is protect what's his and have large amounts of animalistic sex. I think we need a comparison mated couple, because we havent heard too much about the other couples lives, but none of them seem to be about love. Eventhough marcus' clingy behavior was explained, i still feel like he's a pedophile or another carlisle in the maing because of bella being a succubus and all. what grandparent has their 16 year old grandchild sit in their laps for extended amounts of time?i'm still enjoying the story but i feel like i need a little more development of character.
Date: 26 Jun 2011 1:46 PM Title: Chapter 21
please give us more updates. i am just one of the many who absolutely love your work. but every time i get e-mails about updates, i search them and have no really big luck in finding too much at all like yours. i always search though. one day you will surprise us i am sure.
Date: 22 Mar 2011 2:15 PM Title: Chapter 21
this is something i didnt expect. how long before you grace us with another chapter. as per usual, i am hanging with bated breath gor some of your stories to be updated.
Date: 22 Feb 2011 11:44 AM Title: Chapter 21
Aww. How sweet. I just love how Jasper calls her his little dove. I really loved this story. Just wish I could read about what happens in Voltura. It would be great if Carlisle could get what is coming to him too. Oh well, I can just imagine. Thanks again for writing such a terrific story.
You will read about what happens in Italy. That was just the end of the first part of the story.
Date: 21 Feb 2011 5:55 PM Title: Chapter 1
I was so glad to find this story on TWC. I was on story alert when it was on fanfiction. I am so glad that you have not decided to just give up writing it. It really made me angry to know that someone else was stealing your story and posting it elsewhere as theirs. That is just f*cked up! Anyway, I am rambling. I cannot wait to read this story again and see what else you have written. Thanks for continuing it. :)
Date: 14 Feb 2011 2:29 AM Title: Chapter 17
ookay i thought bella would get in trouble for that... does that mean the ceremony is off.. well at least it is not going to be as bad as i thought...but i think they are playing into what carlisle wants by stopping the ceremony. i have a really bad feeling about this
Date: 14 Feb 2011 1:16 AM Title: Chapter 12
ok now she is going to james and carlisle after her... he is the one who is going to help get her away... what is up with this public taking that is going to happen?
Date: 13 Feb 2011 11:34 PM Title: Chapter 11
knew he was a sick MF-er damn jasper better protect her what does it mean that they are mates but not his wife will that stop something? hum this is interesting i hope nothing bad happens to bella she can be with that sicko!!
Date: 13 Feb 2011 11:12 PM Title: Chapter 9
damn up the butt hole hard that does suck... he is hot but then he does crap that i totally don't like if your turned on and ready that 's one thing but yuk! why does he act that way? he is going to hurt her for heaven's sake she is only 16! carlisle is going to be pissed and he is going to go after them i have a bad feeling about it!!