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Reviewer: Sassy_jj_101 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2016 4:18 PM Title: Family Tree: Kids and Imprints

I was obsessed with this story by the first chapter and I'm absolutely dying for the sequel!!!!:D BriyerRose had me at the edge of my seat the whole way and I beg you to keep writting because you do have true talent. So keep rockin' gurl!!! I await your sequeland I know it will be just as marvellous as the first. And I always tell the truth no matter if it hurts. 

xoxo

Reviewer: swayrabbit Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2014 2:52 AM Title: Family Tree: Kids and Imprints

love it

Reviewer: Curlykate Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2011 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 19

REALLY ENJOYING YOUR STORY.

Reviewer: kymmie Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2010 1:18 PM Title: Chapter 53: Epilogue

I love this story. Its so different from others and I've found very few that are unique and the one's that I have found have stopped before finished.

Reviewer: bingohappy29 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2010 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 53: Epilogue

that was good i liked it cant wait to start the sequal

Reviewer: Dillinger910 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2010 9:21 PM Title: Intro/Chapter 1

I have to criticize. If Bella were a werewolf she would have reacted to Edward, possibly imprinted and there would be no reason for his leaving as she would have been far more stronger than a human. I just find it unconvincing that only after Edward left, she suddenly becomes a werewolf.



Author's Response: If you read further this all explained, but Bella is not only a wolf but a unique mythical creature! Keep an open mind please that is all I ask!

Reviewer: goldfishie1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2010 9:15 PM Title: Family Tree: Kids and Imprints

I definitely want a sequel!!! How did you ever keep those names straight??

Reviewer: goldfishie1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2010 7:07 AM Title: Chapter 49

I am so glad Paul was able to get there in time!! 3 little wolfie pups! 

Reviewer: vicki219 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2010 9:59 PM Title: Chapter 48

Oh no that is so not good! Please let the Babies and Bella be okay. Please update asap!!

Reviewer: goldfishie1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2010 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 48

Wow. Sue pregnant? I hope Bella and the babies are ok! Can't wait to find out.

Reviewer: gdbyexalmondeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2010 8:03 PM Title: Intro/Chapter 1

for real!? lol bellas a wolf ^^ hehe cool. can't wait to read more

Reviewer: goldfishie1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2010 6:22 AM Title: Chapter 47

Daddy Paul is so cute! 

Reviewer: Dyxie Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2010 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 46

Wonderful chapter, giving Bella the closure she needed to let go.

Reviewer: Dyxie Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2010 7:55 AM Title: Chapter 45

The letters were poignant and tender, the perfect ending to Edward's life. I've read a lot of stories where Edward was treated as a villain because of his mistakes, and it was refreshing that you gave him the opportunity to atone for them and make a true difference in this one. I'm eagerly anticipating the last few chapters of the story, and would like to say that I've truly enjoyed reading this and am looking forward to reading other stories by you in the future.

Reviewer: Mana Lusk Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2010 5:20 PM Title: Chapter 45

wow the letter brought tears to my eyes.

Reviewer: Nette91 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2010 7:45 AM Title: Chapter 45

Ok, cried all the way through this chapter....  nice job!!

Reviewer: goldfishie1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2010 4:37 AM Title: Chapter 44

Edward and Leah??? I wish my Edward didn't have to die! Ready for wolfie pups.

Reviewer: Mana Lusk Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2010 4:34 AM Title: Chapter 43

wow that was awsome

Reviewer: goldfishie1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2010 11:26 PM Title: Chapter 42

I hope Bella will get her powers back. And Edward....wow. Hope he can protect Bella.

Reviewer: Mana Lusk Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2010 12:55 PM Title: Chapter 42

Hurry Hurry put up more chapters....Wow what a twist can't wait to see what happens.

Reviewer: vicki219 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2010 12:14 PM Title: Chapter 42

Wow wicked way to start the fight off with the Volturi. Please update some more soon, i am dying to know what happens next!

Reviewer: goldfishie1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2010 4:26 AM Title: Chapter 41

Glad Jasper was able to kill that bitch Maria. Loved that the boys were able to protect the loved ones too and when Bella had to be momma wolf and check them over!

Reviewer: Mana Lusk Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2010 4:22 AM Title: Chapter 41

that was sweet hurry up and post the next battle

Reviewer: vicki219 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2010 11:33 AM Title: Chapter 40

Absolutely wicked chapter!! So can't wait to read how the battle plays out with both M&V as well as The Volturi. Please update soon :-D

Reviewer: Mana Lusk Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2010 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 40

WOw can't wait to read what happens.

Reviewer: goldfishie1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2010 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 40

Can't wait for the battle!

Reviewer: Mana Lusk Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2010 6:16 AM Title: Chapter 39

that was awsome the rings where a great idea.

Reviewer: goldfishie1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2010 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 38

Poor Jazzy! I'm glad Bella is so close to him. 

Reviewer: Mana Lusk Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2010 11:38 AM Title: Chapter 38

I can't wait until the battle. But i am worried that it will not all come out like Bella says. though i am hoping it does.

Reviewer: Blissaboveallelse Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2010 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 36

Balle is gonna win.. no way she can fail with all the cool powers she has now.

Reviewer: Poppy Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2010 4:40 AM Title: Chapter 36

psh bellas not a vampire idiots. aragont much aro.

hehe cant wait for an update

Reviewer: cullen74 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2010 9:20 AM Title: Chapter 3

Just great I hope you can keep up the amazing witing in all your chapters.

Reviewer: cullen74 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2010 9:08 AM Title: Chapter 2

I like the storry so far it is a great combination of action and suspense i can not wait to see the next chapter.

Reviewer: goldfishie1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2010 7:14 AM Title: Chapter 35

Wow. Don't piss off Bella! 

Reviewer: Blissaboveallelse Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2010 5:50 PM Title: Chapter 34

Loved it, very cool powers...Maria and victoria are gonna get it now..

Great job with the chapter, and as always thank you for sharing it with us..

Reviewer: Mana Lusk Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2010 1:01 PM Title: Chapter 34

That chapter was so good can't wait to read the next.

Reviewer: Mana Lusk Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2010 12:26 AM Title: Chapter 33

Loves this story can't wait until you post more chapters. sitting here wondering what the new powers could be.Hope that they name one of the little girls Leah.

Reviewer: Blissaboveallelse Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2010 9:56 PM Title: Chapter 33

This is my Favorite chapter so far!.. i loved it!..

Thank you sharing it with us, as always..

I look forward to the next chapter.

Reviewer: vicki219 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2010 11:22 AM Title: Chapter 32

that was such a good chapter, although it was also quite sad. hope you update some more soon

Reviewer: Blissaboveallelse Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2010 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 32

I need a selene, someone to come sit me down and tell me why my life is so messed up..lol

As for bellas eyes.. i think they are glowing again.. but a new color like blue maybe..loved the back story.

Keep it up.. can't wait for the next chapter...

Reviewer: Blissaboveallelse Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2010 11:22 PM Title: Chapter 31

ok, i guessed that one wrong, i was hoping it was leah because she is one of my least fav's.. but i thought she would have to help bella..hehe.

i am so glad it wasn't one of the boys.

edward.. hmm. i think he'll try to join up with the she-devil.  double cookies if im right!..

Reviewer: Blissaboveallelse Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2010 8:26 PM Title: Chapter 30

It's nice to see edward a little crazy for a change. as for who got bitten...i think it's one of Bella and pauls boys.

Still lovin the story, keep up the great work, and once again thank you for sharing it with us.

Reviewer: Blissaboveallelse Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2010 7:03 AM Title: Chapter 29

Hehe, saw it coming.. i should get s cookie....

But i am still loving the story and really looking forward to the next chapter..

I think the imprint is strong enough for Bella to stay with Paul.but then with the moon goddess thingy something bad has to happen so Maybe someone is going to die?... hope not one of the boys. but it would have to be something big.



Author's Response: You do get the cookie for guessing correctly. Thanks for the review and the next chapter will have the confrontation.

Reviewer: goldfishie1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2010 4:23 AM Title: Chapter 28

I love excited Alice! Beautiful wedding. 

Reviewer: VampireEv Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2010 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 28

OMFG!!!! I HATE CLIFFYS BUT THIS STORY IS AMAZING!!!!!

Reviewer: Blissaboveallelse Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2010 8:42 PM Title: Chapter 28

Loved the wedding, It had anice relaxed family feel without all the drama of an over priced nightmare.

I am still really enjoying the book, you are still doing a great job.

I think edward is the drama that is coming.. do i get a cookie if im right?..lol

Reviewer: vicki219 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2010 10:10 AM Title: Chapter 28

Absolutely brilliant chapters!!! This is such an awesome story and i am so looking forward to the next update. Can't wait :-D

Reviewer: goldfishie1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2010 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 26

Bella sure is powerful! I love Alice's excitement for shopping for the babies!

Reviewer: goldfishie1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2010 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 25

Wow. Bella sure has a lot on her shoulders. Good thing she has a great family to help her along the way.

Reviewer: goldfishie1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2010 6:02 AM Title: Chapter 23

Triplets! Is she trying for a litter of wolfy pups? 

Reviewer: Blissaboveallelse Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2010 2:53 AM Title: Chapter 22

didn't see it coming, really excited about the next chapter. keep up the great work!

Reviewer: goldfishie1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2010 7:11 AM Title: Chapter 22

A wolfy pup!

Reviewer: Blissaboveallelse Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2010 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 21

Still loving it and looking forward to reading more. in fact i can't wait for the next chapter to come on. again thank you for sharing this with everyone.

Reviewer: goldfishie1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2010 3:40 AM Title: Chapter 21

Alice is Alice wanting to plan the wedding! Loved it.

Reviewer: Blissaboveallelse Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2010 1:55 AM Title: Chapter 19

so far i love the story, this is only the second one i have found with bella as a wolf.

so i am really enjoying the newness of it. at least to me.

keep up the great work, and thank you for letting us all enjoy it.



Author's Response: Thanks for the review and I am glad that you are enjoying it so far! BR

Reviewer: goldfishie1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2010 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 19

Loved it! I want a Paul of my own!



Author's Response: Thanks for the reviews!

Reviewer: goldfishie1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2010 7:10 PM Title: Chapter 18

So sad. Poor Leah and Seth. Glad Bella was able to calm Leah.

Reviewer: lacedlove Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2010 6:15 PM Title: Chapter 6

Brilliant



Author's Response: Thanks for all the reviews!!!

Reviewer: lacedlove Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2010 6:15 PM Title: Chapter 5

Oh wow nice work..Still got my attention..lol

Reviewer: lacedlove Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2010 6:14 PM Title: Chapter 4

Wonderful..Great job.

Reviewer: lacedlove Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2010 6:14 PM Title: Chapter 3

Loved it ...I am team Bella...I love her when she is badass...

Reviewer: lacedlove Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2010 6:13 PM Title: Chapter 2

First off wonderful chapter..Second my pregnant beta saw your name and has decided to name her daughter Briyer..She loved it alot...Again beautiful work.



Author's Response: Oh wow that is great! Let her know that Briyer Rose was the original name for Sleeping Beauty in the Hans Christian Anderson fairy tale. It is what I am going to name my daughter too because I thought the it was originals. Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: lacedlove Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2010 6:11 PM Title: Intro/Chapter 1

I've very new to the Paul loving everyone is going gaga over..Your story has me hooked.Great start.

Reviewer: goldfishie1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 May 2010 7:22 PM Title: Chapter 17

Loved it. Nothing like a hot sexy wolf! 

Reviewer: goldfishie1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 May 2010 7:33 AM Title: Chapter 13

I hope Paul get there fast! At least Bella could protect herself better now.

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 May 2010 5:03 PM Title: Chapter 10

I loved the save.  It did what it had to, but left him free so that you always wonder,"What if he shows up some day?"  Loved it!

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 May 2010 4:09 PM Title: Chapter 6

Perhaps Bella's inner "Mama Wolf"  is the beginnings of her being the Alpha Female?  The only female wolf that mates and bears young?  Collin and Brady's dad better watch his butt now!

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 May 2010 3:49 PM Title: Chapter 4

Lovin' Empowered Bella!  I especially love her sharing her memories of the Cullens with the pack.  Knowing there's a treaty with this one group does not mean acceptance.  Edward sucking the venom out, Esme cooking for her, Carlisle caring for her, Emmett playing video games with her, Alice being Alice and shopping with her might.  they know that they can believe what they've seen.  Brilliant twist I'd like to say!

Reviewer: vicki219 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 May 2010 8:44 AM Title: Chapter 10

Aww thats is so cute!! I can't believe you updated 5 chapters so quickly, really awesome! So can't wait for the next the next update

Reviewer: goldfishie1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 May 2010 8:34 AM Title: Chapter 10

Awww. That is so sweet she wants to save the twins. And yummy Paul. I am Team Edward, but love some hot sexy wolves too. Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: vicki219 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2010 5:37 PM Title: Chapter 5

cool story, cant wait for the next chapter

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