[Report This]Date: 22 Jul 2010 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 17 Jasper Remembers How and Why his Mother Died.
Oh wow that was intense. That must have been hard to write. Good chapter. So sad though. I can't wait for James to get what coming to him.
Author's Response:
Thank You, it was hard to write....I had it outlined-but once I started working on it I spent two days re-writing and editing, worrying. I felt exausted afterward and I'm worried about the up-coming ones now as well. Drama, and more drama. It's still easier then writing a lemon...lol. Thanks for the coffee and review....Diane
[Report This]Date: 21 Jul 2010 11:31 PM Title: Chapter 17 Jasper Remembers How and Why his Mother Died.
WOW Diane - very powerful and emotional chapter. No matter how disturbing, I am happy to have Jasper's story. At first I wanted Carlisle to kill James, now I want Jasper to do it. Thank you so much!!
Author's Response:
Thank You Tamara, I have been so nervous about this chapter. I know alot of people have been asking, I was worried that you all might get upset with me over it. But it explains so much about the 'Cullens' and why they act bad ass, I think. I have three different people in mind to kill him, cause lets face it he's got to die....lol. Thanks for the review and coffee....Diane
[Report This]Date: 21 Jul 2010 11:22 PM Title: Chapter 17 Jasper Remembers How and Why his Mother Died.
poor baby! That evil sob. I would love all the kids to get a part in killing that ass!
Author's Response:
I know I hate hurting Jasper after seeing him in 'Eclipse' he seems so much more real to me now. Thanks for the coffee and for caring enough to read and review this story. :) Diane
Date: 20 Jul 2010 4:02 PM Title: My Obsession
Nice one. Poor Jazz. I hope you have mercy with him. You mentioned his story a couple of times.....please be nice!
What else could happen to James? He could shoot himself. Wolf attack, poisoned mushrooms, just feed him all the drugs he´s got. (Need more help? I´ve got some ideas!) And the kidz need condoms!!! LOL
Author's Response:
I'm thinking Jazz might want to have mercy on James whenever he flips....nah....lol. Poisoned mushrooms?...lol...mama like! I hate condoms woman...lol...but all the kids are using them except for one couple because thats part of the story, I like you, you are funny and the idea's you come up with are very good ones. :)
Date: 20 Jul 2010 12:36 PM Title: Chapter 16 Bella Loves Sex
OH NO.. poor Jasper. This is not good
Author's Response:
:( I agree
Date: 20 Jul 2010 5:15 AM Title: Chapter 16 Bella Loves Sex
OK. James needs to die and I doubt I'm the only one to say it. He weilds way to much power and he needs to be brought down... It's hard to remember they are still just kids that have lived in this environment with no savior besides Carliesle for years. Growl..........
Author's Response:
You're right everyone seems to want James dead-but Jasper's story needs to come out somewhat first. I think we might be at that part next, I need to check. I may go ahead and put it out this week if it is. I'm glad you kept in mind that they are still very young, and even though they are 'Bad Boys' James is the one person who has been there to manipulate them for years. They all fear him to an extent, even our Carlisle, who tries so hard to be the strong, protective big brother.
Thank You Kat for the review! :) Diane
Date: 20 Jul 2010 2:34 AM Title: Chapter 6
he he he.. Bella is going to be SURPRISED
Author's Response:
Hi Footroza, Thank you for reading the story and reviewing it for me. I love getting feed-back from everyone. :)
Date: 20 Jul 2010 2:25 AM Title: Chapter 5
Damn.........Carlisle knows how to lay it out there huh? Was he shocked to hell about the sketches. Charlie is a bad....clueless man...hee hee
Author's Response:
Aren't all dad's at some point? They have to embarrass their daughters, it's their job...lol.
Date: 20 Jul 2010 2:07 AM Title: Chapter 5
WOW.. he was very honest with her.. I am guessing that he has been watching her for some time TOO. lol
Author's Response:
Carlisle is a very honest person, or at least he tries to be. He knew she was around, most guys notice girls that watch them as much as she did. I bet he didn't even think that she really liked him, 'cause guys never have a clue even when it's in their face like that. :)
Date: 20 Jul 2010 1:58 AM Title: The Ride
that was cute.. I love the Bella/Charlie interaction...
Author's Response:
You gotta love Charlie, right? I think he's awesome and clueless...lol.
Date: 20 Jul 2010 1:49 AM Title: Bantering with Carlisle
oh gosh.. poor Bella.. I am soo glad that wasn't me.
Author's Response:
But it was kinda funny though, don't ya think? .... Diane
Date: 20 Jul 2010 1:45 AM Title: Trouble
FUN!!!!.. This is going to be GOOD...
Author's Response:
I'm glad you liked it, happy readers make me smile. :)
[Report This]Date: 20 Jul 2010 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 16 Bella Loves Sex
Does Jasper get raped or molested by James?!
Author's Response:
Things are getting ready to come out about Jasper, sweety. The next chapter I think, not sure without checking my outline first. I think I may have told another reader and I'll tell you as well. I may try to go ahead and post another chapter this week. I am ready for things to start coming out myself. Thank You for always taking the time to read and review for me Emo. It means so much to a first time writer who has started three stories at once and is still trying to get the hang of it all. :) oh and thanks for the coffee, they feel like rewards to me....Diane
[Report This]Date: 19 Jul 2010 3:48 PM Title: Bantering with Carlisle
it was funny, i was actually rather surprised, you made lil bella all fiesty xx
Author's Response:
I'm glad you got a laugh at of it, I like Bella a little fiesty, don't you? Thanks for the coffee Miss King....Diane XX
[Report This]Date: 19 Jul 2010 3:32 PM Title: Chapter 16 Bella Loves Sex
im glad your back and writing, and hope you had a great time! That ass hurt Jasper again, i cant wait for you to kill him. Slow and painful i hope!
Author's Response:
Thanks Fanette, I'm glad to be back home and writing. I had a nice time on vacation-but there's no place like home sweet home afterwards. James will get his, I'm just not sure who is going to do it yet. I'm open to opinions...thanks for the coffee. I love seeing those things, they make my day and I don't even drink it. Later, Diane
[Report This]Date: 19 Jul 2010 3:15 PM Title: My Obsession
Well, I am hooked, I love your writing style.
On to the next chapter :)
xx
Author's Response:
I'm glad to hear that....I got off to a slow start grammar wise-but I'm working on it. Thanks for the coffee, you will find that I love those cups...lol. Diane XXX
[Report This]Date: 19 Jul 2010 2:36 PM Title: Chapter 16 Bella Loves Sex
How I love starting my mornings with hot Carlisle sex.. :) Hope Jasper and the rest of the family (except James) are ok. Thank you for this chapter Diane!!!!
Author's Response:
HI Tamara, Carlisle sex is a good way to wake up...lol. Oh how I wish he were real :). Wow everyone is really wanting James dead....perfect! Thanks for reading and reviewing for me, lovin' the coffee.....Diane
Date: 11 Jul 2010 4:27 PM Title: Chapter 15 Caveman Carlisle
Awesome Story :D I can't however figure out how to put this story on Alert...I joined this site to read this story, like I said...awesome story
Author's Response:
I'm glad you joined the site to read this story, I have read a lot of good ones on here. I think you click the add to favorites and then you have to scroll down and remember to hit "submit". I forgot to do that on a few stories and had to go back and find them. I try to blame it on being blonde-but truthfully I just forget.
Date: 11 Jul 2010 2:48 PM Title: Chapter 5
I love this bad Carlisle...He's awesome. Sexy Carlisle all the way
Author's Response:
Carlise is one sexy vampire, or man. He's just sex on legs, jmo though...lol.
[Report This]Date: 10 Jul 2010 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 15 Caveman Carlisle
that was cute! Have fun on your vacation!
Author's Response:
Oh how I love those coffee cups, and I don't even drink the stuff...lol. Thanks for reading and reviewing for me. I had a nice vacation. But as I have said a couple of time already, home, I love it.....lol. Diane
Date: 09 Jul 2010 11:15 PM Title: Chapter 15 Caveman Carlisle
Good chapter, have fun on your vacation!
Author's Response:
Thank you Bee, and I had a great vacation! Diane
Date: 09 Jul 2010 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 15 Caveman Carlisle
What about the birthcontrol, kids
Author's Response:
There is a reason for everything dear. :)
Date: 09 Jul 2010 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 14 Jasper and Alice
They need a plan on how to get rid of James. Drug overdoze. Car accident. Missing and noone reports to the police. Vampire attack. A new patio area.....
Author's Response:
I like your idea's...lol....a new patio area...lol. Those are actually great idea's, you made me chuckle. :)
Date: 09 Jul 2010 8:29 PM Title: Chapter 13 Surprise, we're here!
this was perfekt. you are so comfy now writing stuff......WOW
Author's Response:
Well thank you, I just love Carlisle, and Jasper is really becoming one of my favorite's as well. I actually feel bad about the things I have to do to them.
Date: 09 Jul 2010 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 11 Pressure can be relieved with Phone sex.
You should see the silly grin on my face. I would love to believe that Bella (virgin) has phone sex in that way. Talks like that. Uh, I am not sure about it, though, nevermind.
The story has really improved. It is getting better and better. thank you for your time and sharing this with us - addicts -. LOL
Author's Response:
It a better read though, I know virgin's don't usually have great phone sex....lol. It was never like that for me when I was younger. I would just listen and then lie and say "um, yeah I'm doing that" ...lol.
Thank you for thinking this story has improved, it's getting easier for me to write properly. I am from the south, and we word things so differently down here, people used to point out my grammar a lot.... :)
Date: 09 Jul 2010 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 6
Mr. Birdie is popular, I guess! The sum up went well. Very polite. LOL.
I need the check out the ratings for this story. I want to know where all the piercings and tattoos are.
Author's Response:
Well thank you for taking the time to read and review for me Alecandra. I hope you continiue to do so :) Diane
[Report This]Date: 09 Jul 2010 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 15 Caveman Carlisle
YES! I love Carlisle and his "big stick" hehehehe. Fun chapter Diane! Thank you so much and have a wonderful vacation!
Author's Response:
Carlisle has to have a 'big stick' it would just be wrong if it was a little one..hehe. Glad you liked it and thanks for the well wishes, I had a really nice time...oh I almost forgot, thanks for the coffee, Diane
[Report This]Date: 09 Jul 2010 5:36 PM Title: Chapter 15 Caveman Carlisle
Great happy chapter! i think we all need that. Have a wonderful vacation, and be safe! Where are yall going, anywhere fun, or just quiet and relaxing? Both sound great to me!
Author's Response:
Hey there, we went to PA to visit family and we did have a nice time. But there's no place as wonderful as home. I wanted to kiss the ground and do cartwheels...lol. Thanks for the coffee cups! Later, tater, Diane
[Report This]Date: 09 Jul 2010 4:29 PM Title: Chapter 15 Caveman Carlisle
OMG Carlisle the Caveman...that's hilarious. It's nice to see him playful and not so serious all the time. Not only that but I never thought I would see the day when bad ass Carlisle would use the word pumpkin...nice one. And I definitely don't mind the mental picture of Carlisle doing a little strip tease. Thanks for that one.
On a serious note, I do hope there isn't something seriously wrong with his head. I know he doesn't have the money to go to a real doctor and he's gonna downplay the seriousness to Bella so she won't worry. Hopefully if there is something wrong, Bella can pick up on the signs so she can help him.
Again, you're great. Thanks for not making me cry this time. I hope you have an awesome vacation. I'll be anxiously awaiting your return. Have fun...D
Author's Response:
Hi Mizzdee, I'm baaaaacck. I'm glad you enjoyed the mental of Carlisle's little strip tease, such a nice ass. *sighs* The next chapter will be skipping ahead two months, I'm hoping to get it out Monday or Tuesday. I think your great as well and I always love seeing your name pop up on my reviews. I know I'm going to get a good talking too..lol.
I did have a nice vacation and I am so glad to be back home. Thanks for the mugs, I love them, Diane
Date: 08 Jul 2010 5:31 AM Title: Chapter 14 Jasper and Alice
Why not just kill James? I mean there's three of them and like they keeps saying no one know about what goes on in their house. So why not kill his ass and get rid of the body. They are all smart, they should be able to figure out how not to get caught. Plus they have Bella, who's not going to believe the police chief's daughter
Author's Response:
James will get his in the end...but secrets need to come out first. The kids are smart but scared for each other and James manipulates that. :) Thanks for taking the time to read and review, I love hearing from everyone.....Diane
Date: 08 Jul 2010 12:35 AM Title: Chapter 14 Jasper and Alice
Jasper...go down and shoot him while he sleeps! Take him and bury his crazy ass!
Author's Response:
LOL....wow , everyone seems to want Jasper to shoot James. I'm betting on Alice though...lol J/k....So do you all agree that Jasper is going to be the one to lose it on James? :)
[Report This]Date: 07 Jul 2010 6:13 PM Title: Chapter 14 Jasper and Alice
Jezuz James is a real prick. I'm hoping they shoot him :) Thank you for this chapter!
Author's Response:
:) James always gets his in the end. He's a great villian.....thanks for reviewing Tamara and your very welcomed. Love the coffee, btw, Diane
[Report This]Date: 06 Jul 2010 10:36 PM Title: Chapter 14 Jasper and Alice
Another good one. I'm so glad that Alice didn't let Jasper get rid of the one good thing he has going in his life. He needs her whether he thinks so or not. She will help him keep his sanity.
I'm glad that Jasper has the strength enough now to not let James near him. As a kid there's nothing you can do but now there are too many years of pain built up and Jasper could easily snap and kill him if he got too close. Speaking of killing James, is there someone else out there that they would have to watch out for? I'm surprised they haven't killed him by now. Jasper knows he's asleep. He could easily do it right now and have years of abuse to back up any defense.
Also, I hate the feeling at the end that Carlisle has given up. He wants to give Bella the only piece of him that he has left before its all over. Please let him get better so he can be with Bella giving her the chance to save him. They deserve a life together.
Now I just have to say that I told myself before to stop reading your stories at work because you always make me cry. I couldn't resist this time and, of course, this time is no different. That and my marathon review. Great chapter. I'm ready for more.
Author's Response:
Hi Mizzdee, I was afraid I had lost you. Last review I got you seemed rather upset because you were starting to figure things out. I'm sorry I made you cry at work-maybe not so much-I take it as a compliment actually. It sounds like there as real to you as they are to me.
Carlisle will be okay, don't worry. He just had a close call with death and knows James was behind it. This will actually start changing his personality some making it easier for Bella to become closer to him. So it's all going to be good there. Jasper is also getting hit with a lot of reality and is stepping up to the plate to protect their leader and brother in his time of need.
I will be putting out a light-hearted and a 'little bit funny' chapter later this week. I am going on vacation, and I want everyone having a good memory of them going on while I'm away. Thanks for the coffee and you know I love your reviews....Diane.
[Report This]Date: 06 Jul 2010 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 14 Jasper and Alice
no,no,no,no, he can't die!!!!!! He has to get better, and get James out of the way, and help with future babies.
Author's Response:
Hi Fanette....Now you know I might put the boys through hell and close calls.....but kill Carlisle off...no way, don't worry! :) I'm one of his biggest fans.
Thanks for the coffee cups, you know how much I love them. ttyl.....Diane
Date: 06 Jul 2010 6:21 PM Title: Chapter 14 Jasper and Alice
i love this story!!
Author's Response:
Thank You Twilightgirl :)
[Report This]Date: 06 Jul 2010 5:09 PM Title: Chapter 14 Jasper and Alice
awwwwwwwwwwwwww your making me cry!!!! More please!!!!
Author's Response:
LOL.....maybe chapter after this next one you can cry. The one coming up next you can only cry if you laugh hard. :)
Thanks for the coffee cups and the review Brickgirl.....Diane
Date: 06 Jul 2010 4:57 PM Title: Chapter 14 Jasper and Alice
OH NO!!!
Author's Response:
Hi Anadabyel.....oh yes......I hope to hear from you next chapter sweetie, and thanks for taking the time to review for me...Diane
[Report This]Date: 06 Jul 2010 3:42 PM Title: Chapter 14 Jasper and Alice
:-( This is a very good story
Author's Response:
Hi Emo, I'm really glad your enjoying it. I always look forward to hearing from you.
Thanks for the coffee cups...you know I love em' :) Diane
Date: 01 Jul 2010 12:07 AM Title: My Obsession
Wow!! Thanks for your hard work. I am absolutely ADDICTED to this story. You are a great writter! Looking forward to the next chapters.
Author's Response:
Thanks you are so on my good side...lol. I;m glad your ADDICTED. Thanks for the review hun, Diane,
[Report This]Date: 30 Jun 2010 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 13 Surprise, we're here!
:-) thanks for all your hard work
Author's Response: Thank You for taking the time to say that. :)
Date: 29 Jun 2010 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 13 Surprise, we're here!
Great chapter.
And I'm really freaked out about Jasper. James didn't rape him did he? Oh god...that just makes me feel sick.
Author's Response:
It's all going to come out soon. Like I've said before Jasper has and knows lots of secrets...Later, Diane
Date: 29 Jun 2010 4:07 AM Title: Chapter 11 Pressure can be relieved with Phone sex.
yay they made up!
Author's Response:
:)
Date: 29 Jun 2010 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 5
I love your carlisile. I've always wanted to read a fic where they are both human...and not like the usuals where edward leaves, and carlisle saves the day vamp/human.
=D
Author's Response:
I'm glad because I have definitely messed with their personalities in this one. I started writing because I just felt like there weren't enough stories out there about Carlisle. I love that Carlisle is compassionate and all that is good in Twilight. However, I wanted to shake his personality up. I figure Edward has been into a lot of crap in these stories, why not Carlisle? Thanks for reviewing....Diane
Date: 29 Jun 2010 3:42 AM Title: The Ride
I'm new to the coffee shop. I mostly read on fanfiction.
But I'm loving this. =D
Author's Response: I really like this site as well. If you type in my name over there I wonder what might come up....Thanks, Diane
[Report This]Date: 29 Jun 2010 12:23 AM Title: Chapter 13 Surprise, we're here!
You have great squeezing skills! That was great,and sweet and i am so glad that he said that he loves her. Hope there is more squeezing soon.
Author's Response:
I have no choice but to squeeze more soon. I just hope they end up with a better flavor to them...lol. Thanks for the review and the coffee cups... I love them.....Diane.
Date: 29 Jun 2010 12:06 AM Title: Chapter 12 I Just Wanted Some Time with my Girl
Poor Guys, and Jasper is getting it worse that Carlisle thought! Man Jamse is such a ass. I hope he dies a slow painful death. hehe
Author's Response:
We can arrange that I bet....or I know someone who can....he he. Thanks Fanette...laters, Diane
Date: 28 Jun 2010 10:47 PM Title: Chapter 13 Surprise, we're here!
very good story.. I cannot wait till next chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you, Sherry. I'm usually pretty good at staying on top of this one. I update at least once a week, sometimes twice, so I hope to hear from you again soon. Laters, Diane
[Report This]Date: 28 Jun 2010 10:23 PM Title: Chapter 13 Surprise, we're here!
Awesome chapter! Thank you!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you as well. Glad you liked it, and you must know by now that I love the coffee cups. They always make me smile. Hope to hear more from you next chapter.....Diane
[Report This]Date: 28 Jun 2010 10:00 PM Title: Chapter 13 Surprise, we're here!
I agree with the lemon writing. I hate writing them, actually. You did really well though, if that makes you feel any more confident. Loved the new chapter!
Author's Response:
It actually does make me feel more confident, thank you. I spent hours writting this chapter and I was drained whenever it was finished. Now that I know you write on here as well, I'll have to check your stories. Thanks for the coffee cups, I just love those little suckers.
Date: 28 Jun 2010 2:45 PM Title: Chapter 13 Surprise, we're here!
The lemon was written very well. You squeezed good ;)
Author's Response:
Thank you, I have a feeling I'll have to squeeze plenty more before it's over with...lol.
[Report This]Date: 27 Jun 2010 2:45 PM Title: Chapter 12 I Just Wanted Some Time with my Girl
Omgoodness
Author's Response:
Hey there Emo....thanks for the coffee. :) Diane
[Report This]Date: 25 Jun 2010 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 12 I Just Wanted Some Time with my Girl
I wonder what that SOB is up to. I think he set Carlisle up so he'd have a reason to do something.
Author's Response:
I think so to-but we may never know for sure about that little tid bit. Love hearing from you and Thanks for the coffee....Diane
[Report This]Date: 24 Jun 2010 9:35 PM Title: Chapter 12 I Just Wanted Some Time with my Girl
I bet Jasper goes off the deep end and kills James!
Author's Response:
It's all starting to come out now...Jasper has more then one secret to tell.
Date: 24 Jun 2010 7:23 PM Title: Chapter 12 I Just Wanted Some Time with my Girl
Oh crap - he's raping Jasper?
Author's Response:
You now I can't answer something like that...lol. :P ......Diane
[Report This]Date: 24 Jun 2010 5:13 PM Title: Chapter 12 I Just Wanted Some Time with my Girl
OH I'm not liking this. I have a really bad feeling about what is going on with Jasper. I'm sure you know where my mind is heading but I can't bring myself to say it out loud. Please tell me I'm wrong.
I feel bad for Jasper. The fact that he is hurting so badly that he wished for Bella to be the subject of James' threats just goes to show that his mind isn't right. Carlisle was right to throw that back at him to say that neither of the girls should be.
I really liked how Carlisle called on his mom for help when he didn't think he was going to be able to get away safely. It's also too bad he didn't get to see Bella like he wanted. At least he got the chance to kind of explain why he didn't show up.
Another great chapter. Maybe one of these days I'll stop writing these epic reviews but you just give me so much to think of and talk about. You're awesome. Can't wait for more.
Author's Response:
Please don't stop writing your epic reviews, ever. I look forward to them. I feel bad for Jasper as well, Jasper does have more then one secret that will come to light. I sometimes sit back and have to remind myself while writting this, that the story needs to focus more on Carlisle and Bella-because I want to get into whats going on with Jasper so much.
The girls are up to something next chapter, hum, will Bella finally get her some Carlisle? Even if he is all battered up?
Thanks Mizzdee for reviewing. I love hearing from you, I can't say that enough. Later, Diane
Date: 24 Jun 2010 4:36 PM Title: Bantering with Carlisle
It was very funny!
Author's Response:
Thank You, I really enjoyed it myself. The mental piture I had going on was a pretty good one. Thanks for reviewing it...Diane
[Report This]Date: 24 Jun 2010 4:11 PM Title: Chapter 12 I Just Wanted Some Time with my Girl
i love this story
Author's Response:
Thank You...It's just starting to get into the what's really going on. I'm a little excited. Thanks for the coffee, you know how I love it....Diane
Date: 23 Jun 2010 7:01 AM Title: Chapter 11 Pressure can be relieved with Phone sex.
great chapter
Author's Response:
Thank You ! :)
Date: 22 Jun 2010 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 11 Pressure can be relieved with Phone sex.
I have to say I absolutely love this Carlisle. Where can I get one? :) Can't wait for another update.
Author's Response:
Idk, but I would pay full price at the local mall for that. :) .....Thanks for your review.....Diane
[Report This]Date: 21 Jun 2010 8:40 PM Title: Chapter 11 Pressure can be relieved with Phone sex.
Yum! I want hot phone sex with Carlisle!!!! Whew - it's hot in here :)
Thank you - looking forward to the next chapter!!!!
Author's Response:
That was my very first try at a lemon. Carlisle sure knows how to get my fire burnin' as well. I think this is the first time anyone has thanked me... so Thank You and as Always I love the Coffee....Diane
[Report This]Date: 21 Jun 2010 7:54 PM Title: Chapter 5
*sigh* I want bad-boy Carlisle :D
Awesome story!!!
Author's Response:
And just what do you plan on doing with him? lol...thanks for the review and love the coffee.....later, Diane :)
[Report This]Date: 21 Jun 2010 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 11 Pressure can be relieved with Phone sex.
phone sex...hot! I'm dreading what James has planned.
Author's Response:
James is certainly up to no good....Glad you liked phone sex with Carlisle.....thanks for the coffee.....Hope to hear from you next chapter, Diane
[Report This]Date: 21 Jun 2010 2:07 PM Title: Chapter 11 Pressure can be relieved with Phone sex.
Great job on a first lemon, i cant wait for them to have the real one! I love your Carlisle he is HOT.
Author's Response:
Hey there fanette....I never knew how difficult writing a lemon was....lol. I have so much respect for people who do it now and manage to give me that warm and fuzzy feeling. My Carlisle thanks you for thinking he's hot. :)
Thanks for the coffee that always makes my day. Hope to hear from you again next chapter....I might put another one out this week. Later, Diane
[Report This]Date: 21 Jun 2010 1:36 PM Title: Chapter 11 Pressure can be relieved with Phone sex.
Loved this chapter. I really hate the way Carlisle thinks of himself. He believes that he is this bad person because he hasn't helped his family the way he wants to but he doesn't give himself the credit for doing everything he has done for them so far.
As for Bella, I wish he could say everything to her that he wants to say. To just admit to her the things he is saying only to himself would give her exactly what she wants from him. She wants his love and she wants to know that he needs her enough to let her help him. I hope he can let go enough to love and trust her fully. One question though, is he really thinking of a future and family with her or was he just saying that because that's what she wanted to hear?
Can't wait for the next chapter. You rock.
Author's Response:
Carlisle thinks lowly of himself because of James. He has far too much responsibility on his shoulders for his age. Jasper and Carlisle love each other but see things differently because of their separate set of circumstances involving James. I will soon start reveling more of what's happening with Jasper. Eventually, you'll see and understand both very clearly.
Carlisle does want a future with Bella but is afraid to admit it. His cold heart is starting to melt and walls are coming down. She's afraid of losing him at a young age and who can blame her. Nevertheless, he did mean what he said, being drunk, made it easier to say, as well as helping her finish.
I think you rock as well Mizzdee, thank you always, Diane
Date: 17 Jun 2010 4:08 PM Title: Experiencing that Cullen Temper
this story is really great.
Author's Response:
Thank you, I am really enjoying writing it....have a great day.....Diane
Date: 16 Jun 2010 2:40 AM Title: Experiencing that Cullen Temper
Boooo, Carlisle is being gay. I always feel like I spell his name wrong... And Bella's a freak. But I'm definitely ready for more. Still loving it, despite the stress it causes in my life.
Author's Response:
lol...well bad boys have bad tempers. Boy if your upset now ....lol...j/k....thank you so much bee.....later, Diane
Date: 15 Jun 2010 11:45 PM Title: Experiencing that Cullen Temper
great chapter
Author's Response:
Thank You Edward :)
[Report This]Date: 15 Jun 2010 6:43 PM Title: Experiencing that Cullen Temper
:-0 woah!!!
And what does Carlisle want at four in the morning?
Author's Response:
lol....what do drunk men always want? .... thanks. Diane
Date: 15 Jun 2010 2:05 AM Title: Experiencing that Cullen Temper
Poor Bella, i hope they work it out. I sure hope drunk carlisle is going to be nicer.
Author's Response:
Well, as long as he isn't a crying drunk I guess she'll be okay....lol. Thanks fanette, for taking the time to read and review.....Diane
[Report This]Date: 11 Jun 2010 12:37 PM Title: Jasper's Plea for Help
Great chapter. I feel sorry for Alice. I have a feeling that Jasper hasn't been quite as honest with Alice as Carlisle has been with Bella regarding everything that goes on at home. Bella should have pulled Alice away when she saw Rosalie shake her head. She knows enough to know that if Rosalie is warning them then it can't be good. I just hope this incident doesn't effect Bella and Carlisle's relationship. She already has enough insecurity as it is. Can't wait to read more.
Author's Response:
I really love the fact that you let me know what you think. If I could give you coffee cups for that I would, I think your awesome......What doesn't kill Bella will certainly make her stronger though. Carlisle can be a handful with that temper of his and his closed off heart. Jasper will be coming into the plot of this story more in the future. I Love writing this story, I think alot about it and I'm happy with where it will go in the later chapters. Hope to hear from you again soon.....Diane
Date: 11 Jun 2010 8:18 AM Title: Jasper's Plea for Help
great chapter
Author's Response:
Thank You, Edward4life. I love that you take time to review for me ! :)
Date: 11 Jun 2010 3:14 AM Title: Jasper's Plea for Help
Alice knows how they are and how their family works. She should have thought about that instead of running her damn mouth so much. If I was Bella would be pissed at her because now Carlisle will probably break up with her to keep her safe. Alice and her big ass mouth
Author's Response:
Wow, I love how passionate you are about this story...Thanks for the review....Diane
Date: 10 Jun 2010 11:33 PM Title: Jasper's Plea for Help
Oh, I HATE James, and hope he gets what is coming to him SOON!
Author's Response:
Oh James always does in the end.....he's a great villian. Thanks, Diane
[Report This]Date: 10 Jun 2010 8:42 PM Title: Jasper's Plea for Help
Aww this was a saddening but heartfelt chapter! :-)
Author's Response:
Thanks for the Review Emo.....I'm trying to get some of the reasons they're like this now in the story. ....Diane
Date: 10 Jun 2010 2:39 PM Title: Carlisle's memories Good and Bad
I just started this story today, and i think it is really good. I LOVE bad boys, I have one, but all bad boys have to give up a little bit of their ways after a bit.
Author's Response:
I couldn't have said it better myself....Thanks, Diane
Date: 09 Jun 2010 3:30 PM Title: Carlisle's memories Good and Bad
that was a really good chapter and hope you post another one soon.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much. I try to post on Tuesday's.....Later, Diane
[Report This]Date: 09 Jun 2010 1:25 PM Title: Carlisle's memories Good and Bad
Awww poor Carlisle! Jasper is one smart man!
Author's Response:
I would have to agree with that.....Jasper will heard from in about three or four more chapters. Thanks for the coffee cups......Diane
Date: 09 Jun 2010 4:12 AM Title: Carlisle's memories Good and Bad
Love the story so far can't wait to read more.
Author's Response:
Thank You I'm so glad you like it....Diane
Date: 08 Jun 2010 4:22 PM Title: Carlisle's memories Good and Bad
love it
Author's Response:
Thank you...I could just picture them as little kids.
Date: 08 Jun 2010 3:45 PM Title: Carlisle's memories Good and Bad
Okay, I'm hooked.
Author's Response:
Well I'm glad to hear that.....it's great newa!......Diane
Date: 08 Jun 2010 3:39 PM Title: Chapter 6
LMAO. Hilarious. This is so weird, but I like it.
Author's Response:
I know I go from serious to silly. I guess that is kind of wierd.....Diane
Date: 08 Jun 2010 2:20 PM Title: Carlisle's memories Good and Bad
Carlisle is just a little boy missing his mom, that's real sweet.
Author's Response:
I love the little boy inside the man to......Diane
Date: 08 Jun 2010 2:19 PM Title: Carlisle's memories Good and Bad
Thats sweet
Author's Response:
I think their sweet as well.....I like the way the look out for each other......bad or not they still have a bond....Thanks, Diane
Date: 08 Jun 2010 2:06 PM Title: My Obsession
Awww! Bella is too sweet with her super crush of a badass!!
Author's Response:
I think they might even each other out in the end....Thanks, Diane
Date: 05 Jun 2010 9:05 AM Title: Chapter 7
great chapter
Author's Response:
thank You
[Report This]Date: 01 Jun 2010 3:39 PM Title: Bantering with Carlisle
Adorable
Author's Response:
Thanks this was one of my favorite chapters to write. That and the one were Bella defends Carlisle's private's...lol. Later, Diane.
[Report This]Date: 01 Jun 2010 3:39 PM Title: My Obsession
GOod
Author's Response:
Thanks you again !!! Diane
[Report This]Date: 01 Jun 2010 3:38 PM Title: Chapter 7
This is super duper adorable!!!!
Continue! I am a devoted reader now
Author's Response:
Awesome news Emo....Thanks !
Date: 28 May 2010 5:26 AM Title: Chapter 6
great chapter
Author's Response:
Thank You my dear! <smiles>
Date: 19 May 2010 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 5
great chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you....glad you liked it. Are you going to be watching Rob on the Ellen show today?....Diane
Date: 18 May 2010 7:19 PM Title: The Ride
this is really good
Author's Response:
Thank You,
Your review just made my day!!!
Diane
Date: 16 May 2010 9:11 AM Title: The Ride
great chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you, that means alot to me...Diane