hum which one  will you tell us?  i would go with jasper

okay that sucks ass charlie!!!! 

WTF they didn't kill him!?!?!?

the mother f-er needs to die anyone who molests a child should be killed.  there is nothing that makes my skin crawl like that...

wtf a baby come on bella grow up!!

wow lots of crap hitting the fan i hope everyone is going to make it out ok!

wow.... what a fight...

how sad  james huh should have figured that one out.

oh bella daddy is going to be MAD MAD!!!!

okay.. intersting i would want to crawl in my hole and die!!! love already?

poor carlisle....

tha twas good i liked it

Ummmm... I can't see the chapter either...

This chapter for some reason is not visible. 

Ooooo great outtake!  I love being a visualizer - I could just picture everything that Bella was dishing out!

Thanks so much sweetie and I miss ya!!!!!

Oh Diane - I am sooooo sad this story is over but I LOVE how you ended it!!!!  Of all the fanfic's I have read, and I have a read a LOT, this one is definitely in my top 3. :) Did I tell you I love the ending?  Is he dead or isn't he?  Don't tell me I wasted good champagne...that would be evil of you :)  I certainly hope you continue to write as I love your style.  Please post the outtakes!  I've added you as a favorite author so I don't lose contact or miss anything.  Thank you again for this fantastic journey - it was one hell of a ride <3

Thank you! This was a great ending!

loved the story!! the ending is a good one!! I normally don't like stories that don't have canon pairings but this one was a good one.

Serves home right to die that way sick bastard!

Author's Response:

LOL...I would have to agree with you on that Emo! Love the coffee. Sorry my last chapter seems like it is going to be a day or two late. :) Coffee is so good girl, thank you....Diane

UHHHHH DIANE!!!  You cannot leave me hanging like this without knowing who killed the son of a bitch!!!!!  BUT, I am dancing and twirling and spilling the new CASE of champagne all over me now that he is dead!!!!!!  My money is on Rosalie..  :)

Thank you so much for the new chapter!

Cheers!  o0o000oo00oo00  (Champagne bubbles)

Hugs!

You are soooo mean!  lol

I hope that you plan on telling us who shot James in the next chapter.

I loved that Charlie is finally starting to understand what they have been through.  I hope that he will now start to support Carlisle and Bella.

Wonderful Story!          

**hugs**     Kat

aww brill the bastard got his comeuppance nd iv got a feelin that the cullen whodunnit is rose

fab chapter

Great addition to the story but I did get confused at the end with Jasper walking in what went on there

Author's Response:

Oh it dawned on Carlisle whenever Bella called him a caveman, he remembered cave. When he said cave to Jasper he understood as well. They both remembered a cave where they used to live, and thats where they think their mother is. :)

You I'm really feeling sorry for Charlie right now.  He's got a tough job and no one in this whole mess is making things any easier for him.  He's stuck between a rock and a hard place in every situation.  He doesn't want to hurt Bella but he has to arrest everyone she cares about, which is essentially going to turn her against him.  He, of all people, knows how hard it is to raise a child alone and he doesn't want Bella to have to do the same thing but he doesn't want Carlisle anywhere around Bella or her baby either.  Hopefully when the stresses of this whole situation pass, Charlie will be able to see what a good man Carlisle really is and how much he truly loves Bella.

Thanks for bringing back Carlisle the Caveman.  He is too funny.  It's so cute how he tries to be careful with Bella so he doesn't hurt the babies.  I'm very curious to see how long it takes for everyong to realize that Carlisle keeps using the word 'babies' instead of just 'baby'.  No one has picked up on that yet.  I loved how Carlisle laid it all out on the line and told Bella exactly how he felt for her and asked her to marry him.  It was so sweet.  Again, I love how bad ass Carlisle turns into a big softy where Bella is concerned.

It's good that they are finally able to figure out what happened to their mother.  God, I can't even imagine the scene when they go there to find her. That will be so extremely hard on all of them. The three of them will definitely need to lean on each other and they are lucky enough to have the girls, Emmett, Edward and now Uncle Cass to help them get through.

Great chapter again.  I can't wait to see where this goes next.  Love ya girl...D

Hmmmm - so James the Prick has been out for days....wonder what the little shit has been up to???  So now that our Carlisle has figured out where the body is will he get blamed or will James the Prick move the body?  So many unanswered questions that I need a drink :) or two :)

Thank you for the update Diane!  Wish I could give you more than 10 coffees - oh oh oh - my 10 for you are spiked, hows that?  :)

Charlie is a heartless bastard!

I knew the conversation wouldn't be a good one when Alice and Bella finally got together to talk.  I know she's hurting but Alice needs to see that, if the situation was reversed, she would have done the same thing.  I'm glad that Rosalie stepped in and set them straight.  James was the one to blame and I'm glad they finally realized that and were able to start putting their anger aside.

I think I like Uncle Cass.  He isn't going to take any shit from anyone when it comes to helping the kids.  I am glad that he is willing to help Edward and Emmett get out of jail. He didn't have to but he did it because they were there to help his family.

I'm glad to hear that Charlie was on Carlisle's side about James being the baby's grandfather.  It was sad to hear that he doesn't hold Carlisle any higher than James though.  I know he's done some bad things but he didn't really have a choice.  Hopefully Charlie can learn what Carlisle is really like and open up to him and accept him in Bella's life.  And I really hope he doesn't go for that fourth charge of statutory rape because that would absolutely break Bella's heart.

Another great chapter girl.  I can't wait to see how Bella reacts when Carlisle gets arrested. Bring on the next chapter...D

:'-)
Sniff sniff I'm sohappy
This chapter made me tear up

Author's Response:

:) Thank You Emo. I was wondering where you had gotten to. I guess whenever they changed this site around it messed things up. I found the reviews I was missing in my bulk mail. Take Care and I'll be hoping to hear from you next chapter.

Yeah - I'm glad Bella and Alice worked things out!!!  Oh oh oh, now that James is off to jail, (YES), maybe Bubba will make him his girlfriend and James will get what he deserves :)  Then it will be time for the tequila shooters...sorry I drank the champagne already...hehehehehe

I always hate to see my favorite stories start to wrap up but did I read you will have outtakes?  See me Alice dancing over that????  :)

Thank you for the update Diane!

This is a very different story line from what I usually find.  I am really enjoying it.  Good job.      Kat

*Is sitting on her seat bouncing like Alice*.....Diane, I am going to have to color my hair when this story is done due to all the grey from your cliffhangars!

Fab chapter sweetie - I loved Carlisles "near death experience" and that he will have twin girls - that makes me smile. 

But poor Edward and Emmett - they can't go to jail *insert whine here*

Thank you for the chapter hun!!!  :)

This chapter was so great i loved iti read it three times before i even started reading this. you should definitely keep wrighting this story.

awwww fan fuckin' tastic luved it lol

I just hope that Alice and Jasper don't hold Bella's decision against her after all Carlisle is in a bad way and I think she kinda knew Alice would help him n e way

James needs to die an awful painful slow death pref at the hands of jasper i think lol

Still keeping that champagne on ice - for now :)

This chapter made me laugh and cry at the same time. Carlisle's words to Bella just about killed me!  But I do love that Alice shot James in the ass - that's perfect! :)

Thank you so much for the chapter!

NO!!!!!! Why noooooo I don't want him gone! :'-/

Author's Response:

There has to be drama darlin'. Carlisle is the lead hottie after all. ;0)  Thanks for the coffee, always...Diane

OMG!!Thats where you are leaving off!!!!! What a cliffy, I need the next chapter STAT!

OMG how could you leave it like that!!  I'm afraid for all of them.  For the girls...I know Charlie tried to keep them out of the way but how big can that room really be with everyone shooting at once.  For Rosalie...it's not quite clear if she is really there or not but if she is and having to watch this stand off and not be able to help is going to kill her.  For Emmett and Edward because they were so close with no weapons at all since they dropped them.  For Jasper because if he makes it and Carlisle doesn't could he really handle the guilt of thinking he caused his mother and brother's deaths.  For Carlisle...Jasper watched as he fell to the ground but there is no knowing yet if it was a defensive thing so he wouldn't get hit or if it was because he really did get shot. He has to be okay.

Their confrontation with James was very informative. He is so awful talking about the way their father died like he took some intense pleasure in watching it happen.  I bet it took all of Jasper and Carlisle's strength to not shoot him when they heard that.  I'm not surprised that James finally admitted his absolute hatred for Carlisle and when he called Jasper "sweetheart" it made my skin crawl.  Speaking of Jasper, how could he willingly stand naked in front of James knowing that it would give him some sort of sick satisfaction to see him that way?

As much as I absolutely hate to agree with James, the guys did mess this plan up a little.  With as protective as Carlisle has been over the years with Jasper and Rosalie, him not doing anything about James cutting Rosalie's hair waved a big red flag in James' face.  It doesn't surprise me that he called the cops himself and tried to play the innocent good guy surrounded by four crazy teenagers with guns.

While this is an intense chapter, I seriously can't believe they went in there naked.  That was funny.  The song they sang coming into the room creeped me out a bit but it was perfect.  I loved Edward and Emmett's responses to Charlie's questions. Jasper seemed like he lost it a bit when he told Charlie that he was going to kill James. It was so calm and matter-of-fact that it was kind of scary.

Now here I was thinking I could make it through one more without crying and you had to give me the image of Carlisle's body dropping to the ground after the guns go off.  You're just trying to kill me I know it.  I soooo loved this chapter but if you don't stop reading this ridculously long review and start writing so I know that everyone is okay (except James of course), I'm gonna have to hunt you down and I won't be responsible for my actions.  I'll be like the guys and claim temporary insanity.  LOVED IT...LOVE YOU and I can't wait for more.   Dee

*screams*  OMG Diane - I was ready to crack open the champagne and drink a toast to the assholes death!!!!!  I will keep it on ice for the next chapter..  :)

Loved your twist on the Freddy Krueger song - that was was brilliant  hehehehe

Thank you for the update sweetie!!

nnnnnnnnoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo Need....More.....Soon!!!! aaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

I had sleepless nights reading your story!

It is yours, so if you think James has to rape Jazz…..well what can I say.

Something has to happen. No one want`s  Rose to be raped either.

It will be tricky but in the end you have to write it. And only you know how you want it to end. Of course, I can let you know what I would like but then I could just sit down and write my own story. And why should I if I can check my emails, telling me someone updated.

(Don´t let Carlisle leave Bella because he thinks he is not good enough for her…hint hint…..PLEASE)

What a web of secrets.. A destructive web..

-Sofia(:

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Heartbreaking! I hope Carlisle survives, now Bella is with child. I wonder how stupid James is. Playing games with three grown up teenagers. Does he really think he can get away with everything? Is Bella talking to her dad about this? She has to let him know about the baby.

He works for the Police. Maybe they already know there is something going on. ………

We don’t want any of them in prison because they killed James.

Drug overdose should be safe, if he is not only selling……LOL

Okay the question about Bella...asked and answered. Thank you very much.  I am so happy for them.  If things work out right, they will make great parents.  They are so sweet together and Carlisle knows what it's like to have a great mother and an ass for a 'so called' father. He will know what it takes to treat a child right.

Carlisle has known that James would probably kill him one day but Rosalie's confession just made it more real.  I know Carlisle has some major insecurity issues when it comes to Bella but I hope he realizes that she would never hide his child from him.  I believe that once she saw him the day after he got beat up she knows enough about his life that it wouldn't matter to her if he took matters into his own hands to save his own life.  I know she's a cop's daughter but, to save Carlisle, she would do anything.

I'm glad Jasper, Rosalie and Carlisle are on the same page now...kinda. I say that because Jasper still has one major secret.  I do think that Jasper shouldn't tell Carlisle about their mother yet because he needs to be in the right frame of mind to carry out whatever plan they come up with.  I'm glad they have Edward and Emmett to step up for them.  The four of them together should come up with something good enough to take care of James.

Okay now that you got one on me, I'll just have to watch you more closely.  just kidding.  I love your work.  This was another good one. I'm off to work on my own story now. Can't wait for your next update.

I have difficulty reviewing and favoriting this! I have it booked marked on my web browser on my I touch :-)! That does include the cups!



Just know I'm always reading and anxious for more!

Author's Response:

I have an iphone and I can hardly get my fingers on the correct letters. Thank You for letting me know you are anxious and reading. Those kind of comments keep me going. Take Care Emo. MMMM that coffee is good...lol. :)

Poor Jasper...thats alot of secrets for one person!

great chapter! i feel bad for Rose:( hopefully all will be sorted out soon..

wow Bella is prego! Whats her dad going to say? i can't wait to see them get James!

Oh that was good. I am so excited to see what happens.  It's like watching a movie and always hitting pause at the good moments! Aahh! Please update again soon!

Wow, what a bed time story! But we needed the information, now we can sort out James.  I am not sure if Jasper does it though.  After watching Eclipse...... we need more girl power.....

Alice and Rose! BDSM- scene goes wrong.....

Once Alice finds out about James molesting Jasper.......her revenge will be evil.

damn that was an intense chapter! and FYI James is a sick f**k!! i'm really interested in seeing how this plays out