Date: 17 Feb 2011 6:11 AM Title: Vegas
poor little bella!
Date: 05 Feb 2011 9:50 PM Title: S: Epilogue
I really dont see a problem with this getting published it is a wonderful book and you should be very proud. I feel very privlaged to be able to read it and enjoy every minute of it. Thank you and I wish you the best and I am so happy you will be in the same state as me and please never stop writing. I look forward to all of your other stories. Your friend Teresa Roberts
Date: 05 Feb 2011 8:19 PM Title: S: Father's Day
That was wonderful so happy Masen is here. Poor baby girl you never know what is going on in there little minds thinking she was going to be repalced. They are the perfect family
Date: 05 Feb 2011 6:58 PM Title: S: High School Reunion
I loved the way they put every one straight and how he appoligized to her in front of all of them. I cant believe it is almost over.
Date: 02 Feb 2011 8:46 PM Title: A visit to the Hospital
cool i forgot to tell you, you gave ed and bells my wedding anniversary!! yup our wedding was July 9th too!! cool! i never hear of anyone having that one!!! the baby thing... i cried like a baby when i found out the first time because i wanted it but didn't want it at the same time. never was sick till the end.
[Report This]Date: 02 Feb 2011 10:24 AM Title: S: Epilogue
Hi
Wow... I love your story. A++++++ It is sad that it is over. Wow. True love. Have a great night. Smiles
Date: 02 Feb 2011 7:58 AM Title: S: Epilogue
It's sad to see a good story end. I have read this from the stat and can't believe that it is over.
I'm glad that they have a happy ending.
Thank you for all the hard work that you put into this story and I'm happy to hear that you actually accomplished something on a list. I shoulds give that a try sometime.
[Report This]Date: 02 Feb 2011 7:13 AM Title: Epilogue nr 1
Hi
It took me a bit because I had the update of other story's that I'm reading. But I love your story. True Love or your soul mate is very powerful. You might not like each other at first. or no each other. But some where down the line you finial meet. and sparks fly. and that what happen in your story. I can't expess how wonderful you story is. I love it. Have a great night. I m off to read your squeals. I can't wait. Smiles Leona
Date: 01 Feb 2011 3:36 PM Title: S: Epilogue
This has been one of the best stories I have read. You have done an amazing job on this story and I look forward to reading other stories you have written. I have already recommended this one. Again, GREAT job.
Date: 31 Jan 2011 9:24 PM Title: The Date
darn don't tell me one time and you are going to get her pregers that would suck!!!
Date: 31 Jan 2011 9:03 PM Title: I love you
damn ruining the moment with aunt flow.... how mean!!1
Date: 31 Jan 2011 8:37 PM Title: Goals
come on bells you know you love him just say it!!!
Date: 31 Jan 2011 7:56 PM Title: Unknown
okay it's just a business trip he is not leaving....
Date: 31 Jan 2011 7:39 PM Title: Birthday
oh bella you gotta love ed... he loves you lots!!!
Date: 31 Jan 2011 6:10 PM Title: The Past
great kiss can't wait till it leads to more.... again i keep repeating myself but i love ed!!! <3
Date: 31 Jan 2011 5:35 PM Title: Time goes by
ok it's all in the family!! hahaha! again i love your edward!!
Date: 31 Jan 2011 4:29 PM Title: The Wedding
cool they are getting closer!! love it... i really like your ed. i may have been a huge asshole in school but he really is sweet!
Date: 31 Jan 2011 4:13 PM Title: Husband and Wife
ok come on bella give in he seems sooo nice but i know it's not going to be that easy!
Date: 31 Jan 2011 3:59 PM Title: Secrets
Just started the story yesterday and I love it.
Date: 31 Jan 2011 3:27 PM Title: Road trip
oh boy can't believe she agreed... this is going to get really sticky!!! i hope hahahah!!
Date: 31 Jan 2011 3:13 PM Title: Mrs. Cullen
go ed get her... i hope you explalin everything!!
Date: 31 Jan 2011 3:04 PM Title: Purple Nurple
oh boy this is going to be sooo GOOD!!
Date: 31 Jan 2011 1:52 PM Title: Vegas
it's going to get interesting.. i want to know why she stays married to him once she does marry him
Date: 30 Jan 2011 9:47 PM Title: S: Epilogue
AWW!! that ended nicely. really. I'm glad it ended like that. it was sweet and Emily got her date with Jarod. :D too cute. I'm sad to see this go but glad there might be outtakes and who knows maybe more stories that I will read from you in the future. :D thanks again soo much
[Report This]Date: 30 Jan 2011 6:39 PM Title: S: Epilogue
You did an amazing job :)
I didn't review very often but I loved every chapter :)
And I just realized we are the same age. My 21st birthday is next month ;)
Date: 30 Jan 2011 5:06 PM Title: S: Epilogue
This Edward warms my heart! I love how he is with his children. It's so real. Sad to see it end! :(
Date: 30 Jan 2011 10:20 AM Title: The Letter
I just have a question. If Esme found out about Edward getting married from her sister, wouldn't that be Emmett's Mom? I cannot imagine him calling his Aunt about her nephew after getting back from Vegas. But then at Thanksgiving you said his parents were deceased. So I guess I am a little confused.
Date: 30 Jan 2011 9:05 AM Title: Secrets
That was HOT!!! I cannot wait for the office fantasy to happen!
Date: 30 Jan 2011 8:52 AM Title: S: Epilogue
awesome ending to the story. So for a sequel maybe a tale about Jared and Emily . . .
Date: 30 Jan 2011 8:11 AM Title: Together
I think the sex scene was the most realistic I have read. It is not always a bowl of cherries and there are mixed emotions about it. All in all I think you did a fantastic job with it!
Date: 30 Jan 2011 5:27 AM Title: S: Epilogue
Congratulations! I loved your story and can't wait for the out takes. You did a fine job. In fact, I was suprised that you weren't more familiar with the States since the story takes place here. What a challenge you took on and you've completed it extremely well. Again Congratulations!
Date: 30 Jan 2011 3:44 AM Title: S: Epilogue
Wow it was great! Before I forget I would love a PDF file!! So I love how Edward says that they better not run off to Vegas but they did that! I love that ems first date is Jared and Sophia was adorable! I can't wait for outtakes, thanks for such an amazing story!!!
Date: 30 Jan 2011 1:41 AM Title: Unknown
There is something that I have been thinking about. How come there has never been a conversation about Aro being Edwards Godfather. I though that it would have been mentioned right away and was not.
Date: 29 Jan 2011 11:17 PM Title: S: Epilogue
I absolutely loved the chapter. i felt bad for Jared, but found it hysterical at how Edward was acting. I'm glad they were finally able to have a third baby. They seem like a wonderful family.
Great chapter . I Loved the Story.
Date: 29 Jan 2011 8:33 PM Title: S: Epilogue
Hey you - I know long time right! I had to leave you this review especially as you remarked about losing readers along the way and I wanted you to know I for one didn't disappear but stayed behind the scenes. As I went from being a regular reviewer to becoming non existent I feel obliged to give an explanation:-
On Aug 24th last year my hubby lost a long battle with bowel cancer at the age of 39 which is why I have been MIA but I have read and enjoyed every single chapter Gelix and because you were always on time with updates for this and your new story When love and hate collide you sort of became a constant for me and the stories have and are a total diversion and have gotten me through some tough nights. My daughter is only 10 and the last 6 months have been quite awful to say the least
Suffice to say please carry on writing as I would read a shopping list if you had written it, I wont promise to review but please be assured I will be reading - pls email me if you start a new story.
So from me many thanks your hard work is appreciated -
Laters Debs (uk).xx
Date: 29 Jan 2011 7:54 PM Title: The Past
I love how Edwards feelings came to light for bella. I think it was the shock she needed to move on.
Date: 29 Jan 2011 8:24 AM Title: S: Epilogue
loved it, the whole thing. this was by far one of my top tens.
Date: 29 Jan 2011 4:20 AM Title: S: Epilogue
Just finished reading the epilogue, obviously. I have really enjoyed reading Married to the Enemy and you have done an amazing job with it. Good work.
Date: 29 Jan 2011 4:09 AM Title: S: Epilogue
Perfect ending. Excellent job. ;)
Date: 29 Jan 2011 3:16 AM Title: S: Epilogue
well i hope he has a heart attack when she does something outragous! sad its over but great ending!
Date: 29 Jan 2011 3:12 AM Title: S: Epilogue
Been a good story. Thank you,
Date: 29 Jan 2011 1:33 AM Title: S: Epilogue
I am sorry to see this story end, but all good things have to. Love this story from begining to end.
[Report This]Date: 29 Jan 2011 1:25 AM Title: S: Epilogue
sigh.. sorry to see it end but i did like the ride .
thank you for sharing
Date: 29 Jan 2011 1:21 AM Title: S: Epilogue
Thank you for the story. I just started reading the story a few weeks ago. i loved it.
Date: 29 Jan 2011 12:22 AM Title: S: Epilogue
this story is actually amazing! i loved getting my weekly update!!! i am only sad that i will no longer get my sunday fix!!
amazing i loved it!!! :D xx
Date: 28 Jan 2011 11:53 PM Title: S: Epilogue
Thank you for such a wonderful story look forward to more stories from you in the future
Date: 28 Jan 2011 11:19 PM Title: S: Epilogue
I loved this story. Great job and keep up the wonderful stories!!! Congrats on completing your goal!
Date: 28 Jan 2011 11:18 PM Title: S: Epilogue
I loved this story so much. It was very well written. As a fellow author we all grow with our first story. I know I certainly have. I can't wait to see what else your beautiful mind comes up with.
[Report This]Date: 28 Jan 2011 10:48 PM Title: S: Epilogue
thanks was an awsome story
Date: 28 Jan 2011 10:41 PM Title: S: Epilogue
what a very nice ending. Thank you for doing this. I hope you will do another amazing story Thanks again. More power and God bless.
[Report This]Date: 28 Jan 2011 10:30 PM Title: S: Epilogue
Hay I loved this story very much But I have been in the hospital for a few weeks I would love a PDF so if I am off Line I can still read Loved it all very much and Thank you so much for sharing this with us........
[Report This]Date: 28 Jan 2011 10:30 PM Title: S: Epilogue
I loved reading this story! Congrats on finishing :)
Date: 28 Jan 2011 10:26 PM Title: S: Epilogue
I am very sad to see this story end but it has been amazing! Thank you so much for taking time to write about this Edward and Bella. I can't wait to read/hear more from you!
Date: 28 Jan 2011 9:50 PM Title: S: Epilogue
Very sweet. Congratulations on completing your first story.
Cheers, Balti K
Date: 28 Jan 2011 9:49 PM Title: S: Epilogue
I have truly enjoyed this story. Thank you for givinig us a true love story.
Date: 28 Jan 2011 9:18 PM Title: S: Epilogue
I enjoyed this story so much! Thank you!
I look forward to reading more from you (I already am, actually) and I thought you were in my favorite authors, so I'll get any new story from you in my mailbox!
xxxLiss
Date: 28 Jan 2011 9:07 PM Title: S: Epilogue
Loved the entire story! Can't wait to read your new stories :)
Date: 28 Jan 2011 8:29 PM Title: S: Epilogue
This is a great story! I really enjoyed reading it. I can't wait to read the outtakes. :)
Date: 28 Jan 2011 8:02 PM Title: S: Epilogue
I love it, but I am sad that it is over. Edward is so funny now that he is the Dad with a teenage daughter. He would hunt down any boy that treated his daughters the way he treated Bella...even if they did really like her. He also wouldn't put up with his son doing those things. I am glad they worked through everything and have a very happy life now. Great job...thanks so much!!! I will miss these characters!!!
[Report This]Date: 28 Jan 2011 8:01 PM Title: Vegas
Hi
I just started to read your story today. I hopfully be caught up in a couple of days. I kind of like it when I don't have to wait for the next chapter.
But I can see that I 'm going to like this story very much. I can't wait.
My Parents hated each other has teenagers. but one day my dad drove my mom home and they never left each other side. So this is going to be a fun and sad story. but very exciting I can feel it in your proluge. I will leave a review at the end of your last chapter once I get there. I might once in awhile leave reviews. or at least rate it. Have a great weekend Smiles Leona
Date: 28 Jan 2011 7:54 PM Title: S: Epilogue
I loved this story and I don't remember if I ever reviewed before or not. Just keep up the good work and I'll be waiting for your next story anxiously. I think this one had the right amount of good and bad. I like a little something to spice things up but nothing overboard most of the time and this had just the right mixture.
If I can figure out how to do it, I'll try to add you so I can get an alert when you have a new story or chapter.
Thank you for the story and I'm sorry to see it end.
[Report This]Date: 28 Jan 2011 7:28 PM Title: S: Epilogue
Congrats! It was a lovely story and I enjoyed it. Yes, it had some rough patches, but you smoothed them out as you went along. I rarely noticed that English is not your first language - only one or two little syntax or grammatical errors, but US english is different from EuroEnglish, so I can't knock you on that. Thanks for sharing your talent with us!
Date: 28 Jan 2011 7:18 PM Title: S: Epilogue
i'm kind of sad that this is the end of such a great story..I really loved to read it and i really think your ending fits really well with this..although i'm going to miss this story..so i proberbly end up re-reading this
Date: 28 Jan 2011 7:10 PM Title: S: Epilogue
one of the best stories i've every read!!
you've got alot of talent, i've been here since the beginning,
and really enjoyed this story, thank you for uploading every chapter!
can't wait to see what other stories you have in mind!
Date: 28 Jan 2011 7:08 PM Title: S: Epilogue
awwe first dates are cute.
Date: 28 Jan 2011 7:00 PM Title: S: Epilogue
Edward's worse than Charlie.
[Report This]Date: 28 Jan 2011 6:54 PM Title: S: Epilogue
Wonderful story with a wonderful ending!! I loved every single chapter!!! I can't believe you're only 20 years old!! Amazing that you can write like this at such a young age!!! You did a great job and I can't to see what else you have in store for everyone!!!!!
Date: 28 Jan 2011 6:41 PM Title: S: Epilogue
Great ending to a great story!
Date: 28 Jan 2011 6:33 PM Title: S: Epilogue
I thought you did a wonderful job with this story, I loved it. I would like to see an outtake with Emily getting married to Jared in Vegas and then see Edward and Bella's reaction to it.
[Report This]Date: 28 Jan 2011 6:28 PM Title: S: Epilogue
You did a wonderful job with this story, sorry to see it come to a end, but WLHC is wonderful as well and I am very happy to continue on with the wonderful story as well.
Take care,
Kathy xoxo
[Report This]Date: 28 Jan 2011 6:21 PM Title: S: Epilogue
O my lovely, I will miss these two!! Can't wait until the pdf.. Great Story!!
Date: 28 Jan 2011 6:13 PM Title: S: Epilogue
For a first time author you did great. Congrats
Date: 26 Jan 2011 8:11 PM Title: S: Father's Day
That was really cute when Emily introduced herself to Masen. I think that she is going to be fine and help Bella with Masone in no time at all.
Date: 26 Jan 2011 11:59 AM Title: S: Father's Day
Yeah!!! so sweet!
we have Father´s day in June! I live in the Netherlands (Holland) by the way, so it depends on the country I guess!
xxxLiss
Date: 26 Jan 2011 10:43 AM Title: S: Father's Day
ahh this chapter was cute and sad with emily..haha the funny thing is it makes me wonder how i reacted when i was her age and my parents came home with my baby brother..
[Report This]Date: 26 Jan 2011 6:55 AM Title: S: Father's Day
I loved it very much and he is so very cute thank you for sharing them with us and update when you can.....
[Report This]Date: 25 Jan 2011 10:28 PM Title: S: Father's Day
Gelix, You are so funny!!! Seriously when Edward passed out, I am still laughing!!! Priceless. Now for Father's day in the US it's the Third Sunday in June. But November is fine for the story, after all this is your Story and you live somewhere else. That is no problem for me.. I love your story. I really hope you stay motivated and encouraged in your futher creative writing endeavors and look forward to the next update. Are we going to see who little Masen looks more like Edward or Bella or a combination of the two.
Again love the story and have a great day!!!
Laters Kathy xoxo
Date: 25 Jan 2011 9:48 PM Title: S: Father's Day
aww what a happy family!
Date: 25 Jan 2011 9:21 PM Title: S: Father's Day
It was so sweet! Em was so cute she was aonscared and shy, inloved it!
Date: 25 Jan 2011 7:53 PM Title: S: Father's Day
That works FINE for me! lol and aww! Emily is too precious. I loved that she was thinking they were going to replace her and that they reassured her. that's too cute. poor thing. keep up the awesome work. can't wait till they're back to being all Edward/Bella snugglies. :D thanks again bye
Date: 25 Jan 2011 7:11 PM Title: S: Father's Day
Loved the chapter and am so glad that Masen is finally there.
Date: 25 Jan 2011 5:22 PM Title: S: Father's Day
awww poor em. getting a sibling can be scary. woo hoo masen here
Date: 25 Jan 2011 5:20 PM Title: S: Father's Day
I am so glad Masen is here. It was perfect that he was born on Father's Day. I felt so bad for Emily that she thought they were going to send her away. I hope she understands now that they would never give her away. Great job...thanks so much!
Date: 19 Jan 2011 5:29 AM Title: S: High School Reunion
Loved this chapter. Was nice to see Bella standing up for herself. Car sex was awesome as well. Hope you get the job where in the states are you coming to in August. ``
Date: 18 Jan 2011 3:18 AM Title: S: High School Reunion
Aw they're having a boy!!! I just love the three soon four of them together!!! I hope i have a familyblike theirs someday! I love how strong they were at the reunion and em was just so adorable here she was so great!! And you are one of the most reliable authors! Incant wait for more!
Date: 17 Jan 2011 5:23 PM Title: S: High School Reunion
Aww a baby boy, car sex and a little bit of a spoiled girl. lol perfect chapter. I love the real life stuff thrown in. too cute. I can't wait for more but I'm really sad to see this story go. :( keep up the great work. thanks again bye
Date: 17 Jan 2011 1:03 PM Title: S: High School Reunion
Ok I'm confused... you said 4 months along, and yet she's "big" even if Edward said she's tiny and hardly showing... and Em could feel him kicking?
[Report This]Date: 17 Jan 2011 6:24 AM Title: S: High School Reunion
Loved it very much sorry i have been gone I had some tumors removed and a heart sugery so I am a little behind on my reading thanks for sharing and see you next week....
Date: 17 Jan 2011 3:41 AM Title: S: High School Reunion
Oh good luck with the job interview! I loved the update!!! It was sweet. Let us know what part of the states, I'm sure the twi-verse could hook ya up with rec's that can help ya with the moving part WHEN, not if you get the job :)
[Report This]Date: 17 Jan 2011 3:02 AM Title: S: High School Reunion
thanks good chapter
Date: 17 Jan 2011 12:44 AM Title: S: High School Reunion
Great job, I loved how Bella and Edward were united. ;)
Date: 17 Jan 2011 12:27 AM Title: S: High School Reunion
someone should kick Jessica and James.
[Report This]Date: 16 Jan 2011 11:58 PM Title: S: High School Reunion
Gelix-
This has been a wonderful story!!! I was not disappointed in the reunion! You did them justice. Until next week!!!
Kathyxoxoxo
Date: 16 Jan 2011 10:28 PM Title: S: High School Reunion
I think you did a very good job with the reunion. This would have been a hard chapter for anyone to write. Just in case you ever decide to write a reunion chapter again...it has a whole lot of stuff going on and usually kids are welcomed. I'm proud of how you had Bella stand up for herself against Jessica, she did a great job.
Date: 16 Jan 2011 9:43 PM Title: S: High School Reunion
I love it! Bella was awesome at the reunion. She didn't take any crap from anyone and I am so proud of her for that. She has grown so much and I think she even sees that now. I also love what Edward did. He will always take care of his girls. Great job...thanks so much!!! Good luck with the job interview!
Date: 16 Jan 2011 9:39 PM Title: S: High School Reunion
Bella got the ultimate revenge!
Date: 16 Jan 2011 9:35 PM Title: Mrs. Cullen
Poor Bella...
Date: 16 Jan 2011 9:22 PM Title: Purple Nurple
oh.. no... LOL
Date: 16 Jan 2011 9:11 PM Title: Vegas
hmmm this could get rather interesting.. nice start :)
Date: 16 Jan 2011 7:26 PM Title: S: High School Reunion
Look! Bella found a spine! Yay for her, standing up to bitchy bullies. And for her and Edward having their priorities in the right place to leave a lame reunion and go home to their baby.
Cheers, Balti K