Date: 02 Apr 2015 4:26 AM Title: S: Epilogue
I have read this story at least 4 times... I was so upset when u deleted it from fan fic when u started rewriting them, i Started googling one day n found it on here. This story makes me laugh cry smile I love it truly you did an amazing job can't wait to see what you write next.. Thank you for a wonderful read!! 😊
Date: 31 Oct 2014 2:30 PM Title: Unknown
I am sorry, I just dont get it. The title is Married to the Ememy. But she never treated him like the enemy.
Oh, your The Edward Cullen, yes I will stay married to you for a year. Even though you treated me like crap for 7 years. Oh yes I will sleep in your bed for a year. Cause the couch sucks. Oh yes kiss me and lets pretend that all is good.
This not a woman that hates this man!
You need to re name your story to BELLA SWAN, SPINELESS VIRGIN!
He is still a bully! He is still has his own agenda.
Date: 13 Jun 2014 3:44 AM Title: Husband and Wife
**Insert Supernatural Reference just to test the readers who's a Supernatural fan.
Well, great, you found one in me.
Chevrolet Impala, a '67 at that.
I'm a huge Dean and Sam fan, not to mention the Destiel bromance. :)
Date: 03 Aug 2013 1:03 PM Title: Birthday
I think her friends need to teach her how to have a man. Little things like that is not something to get overly angry about. I wasn't like he was be possessive, it's a man thing. The same way she put his arm around her when the waitress came around to show her who he belonged to, well, that is his way of showing someone who she belongs to. Get over yourself girly. She's lucky that he even cares because if he didn't that would be a whole set of different problems. Too angry too quickly. She needs to feel the love!
Date: 21 May 2012 11:24 PM Title: Vegas
I used to read this fic weekly on FF and but I cannot remember if I reviewed.. If not I am so very sorry because this fic rocks :) I almost cried when I found you pulled from FF. :( But I found it again, Yay!!
Date: 28 Apr 2012 5:11 AM Title: Mrs. Cullen
I hate Alice, overbearing friends annoy me. Her character is always pushy, it's the thing I hate most about E&B fics. Alice is always pushing her opinions on Bella about her relationship when E&B should do that themselves.
Date: 30 Sep 2011 9:46 PM Title: S: Epilogue
Great freaking story. I truly loved and enjoyed every single minute of it. I wanted to smack Bella most of the time with all the crying and her freaking moods but let me tell you I appreciate u giving a lil piece of urself for our entertainment. Thank you
Date: 24 Feb 2011 2:32 PM Title: The Date
I've been accused of not understanding psycological problems. Know it's a problem to face fears but sometimes to me it seems it's self imposed. Anyone could have a problem if you let yourself. I feel sorry for Edward not her.
Date: 23 Feb 2011 8:11 PM Title: The Past
You may think I'm cold hearted but I guess I've gone through so much worse than this and think Bella is really overreacting. Sorry. Been dealing with too many crisises since I was 10(probably younger), This really feels like a cake walk to me. Grow up Bella.
Date: 21 Feb 2011 8:19 PM Title: Starting of a new life
guys are the living proof of that love actually do concur everything. Cheers!"
should be does conquer
you really need a spellchecker this one made the line confusing, there have been many more but this one bothered me, I still love the story
Date: 18 Feb 2011 6:07 AM Title: The Past
my uncle had als (also known as lou gehrig disease after a famous mlb baseball player who had it.) it is a horrible disease that destroys the body while leaving your mind in tact, basically a prisoner in your own skin. my uncle passed away in the summer of 1995. i can not believe your friend had it and it progressed so quickly for how young she was. i am sorry for your loss.
Date: 18 Feb 2011 1:47 AM Title: Vegas
It would have been cool if there was a playlist with this story! I really like your Bella so far. She reminds me of myself. I do the same thing when I read a new story - I read the first chapter and the last because I don't want to waste my time either! ha ha!
Date: 17 Feb 2011 6:49 AM Title: Mrs. Cullen
she wakes up married to a person she hates and who she thinks hates her right back and the first thing she does is run out and get a tatoo?!?!??! my ass would have been marching somewhere to get an annulment! why has she not thought of that?
Date: 05 Feb 2011 9:50 PM Title: S: Epilogue
I really dont see a problem with this getting published it is a wonderful book and you should be very proud. I feel very privlaged to be able to read it and enjoy every minute of it. Thank you and I wish you the best and I am so happy you will be in the same state as me and please never stop writing. I look forward to all of your other stories. Your friend Teresa Roberts