[Report This]Date: 07 Feb 2015 7:06 AM Title: Chapter 31 Outtake 1
Wow, this was really good! you did a fantastic job giving just the right amount of angst and even more joy!
Date: 05 Jun 2014 5:32 AM Title: Chapter 1
I have to say that I didn't make it halfway through the first chapter before I was lmao see my last name is Goodson, I have never read a story that had a person who last name was Goodson in it.
[Report This]Date: 19 Aug 2010 12:07 PM Title: Chapter 31 Outtake 1
You constantly thanked your readers/reviewers throughout this story...and although I may be late to the game (no pun intended...ok, maybe a little pun ;)) as one of them, can I just say, thank YOU for sharing your journey with US!
This was a beautifully sweet story, with just enough 'coming into their own' and heartache to show they earned their HEA in spades. You did a wonderful job with spinning this tale seamlessly, description changes aside because by the end I could see the dimples flashing and black eyes sparkling in my imagination with every smile they shared.
Your talent, and astounding football knowledge, made for an incredible story. Thank you again for allowing us to ride along with you!
whyuh
Date: 04 Aug 2010 6:52 PM Title: Chapter 31 Outtake 1
that was an amazing story i very much enjoyed it,
Date: 29 Jun 2010 5:45 PM Title: Chapter 10
NO PROTECTION?! Damn it. Not fair. She's going to get pregnant and then everything will go to hell.
Crap.
The lovin was hot, but I couldn't enjoy it without the protection... *pouts*
Date: 29 Jun 2010 5:16 PM Title: Chapter 7
Finally boyfirend and girlfriend. I would be happy if there were no tragedy at all to break these two apart. But I'm absolutely positive there will be so... off I go to read some more.
[Report This]Date: 29 Jun 2010 5:07 PM Title: Chapter 6
That kiss was hot! And sweet, and hot again! Loved that. They don't say much to each other, now do they? Hmmm. Hopefully they'll talk at lunch tomorrow.
Date: 29 Jun 2010 4:58 PM Title: Chapter 5
They're cute! I hope Edward isn't scared off by Charlie, but I have a feeling he's going to be a big roadblock.
[Report This]Date: 29 Jun 2010 4:41 PM Title: Chapter 3
I like the tension in this fic and am really enjoying the fact that you changed their physical descriptions. Edward and Bella's romance would be the same no matter what they looked like. And it's refreshing to read about small physical differences.
Can't wait to read more.
Date: 29 Jun 2010 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 30 Epi
I loved this story!! I wasn't sure I would like the football storyline, but this story captured me and I couldn't stop reading. Thank you so much for writing this!!
[Report This]Date: 09 Jun 2010 6:09 AM Title: Chapter 30 Epi
Ok well thank you first of all for sharing this story I loved it completely! I HATED Charlie, loved Edwards and Bellas off the cuff comments. I have got to say this story is well written, and it is worth reading. Thanks again for sahrign with us all your amazing talent at telling a story.
[Report This]Date: 09 Jun 2010 4:59 AM Title: Chapter 28
My Favorite Bella line is now "As for the NFL…well…they can just…fuck off.”
[Report This]Date: 09 Jun 2010 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 25
All I can say is thee best line IMO is “Yes, I took something…” he snapped, “I took her virginity.”
BAAAHHHH HAAHAAHAA
Date: 01 Jun 2010 5:17 PM Title: Chapter 31 Outtake 1
WOW I loved the story really it's great. Im really happy I finished reading it. When I started the first chapter I almost erased it from my favorites cause I didn't like that you changed the appearance of E & B. But then I got used to it and I couldn't stop reading it. You even made me cry XD
Congratulations for the story it's one of the best I've read.
Date: 26 May 2010 12:11 AM Title: Chapter 30 Epi
that was a good story and i liked it i thought it was conch all a long and just glad that they worked everything out nad that charlie in the end got back with renee alos
Date: 02 May 2010 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 1
Your story held me all the way through. I really enjoyed it.
One thing that I found myself questioning was Jasper's character. You don't really flesh him out, but since he played his senior year as Edward's wide receiver, he had to have known the things that went on. They might not have been close friends, but then Jasper should have hated Edward with Bella and Alice, believing the lie they did. Or if they were close as teammates and friends, I would think he would have tried to get Edward's side of the story. I kept wondering when he was going to defend or indict Edward. Sorry if I missed it, but where did he go the school, and for what? I think by keeping Alice and Jasper together, it left a hole for me when he was such a bit character.
Despite my questions on that, I couldn't stop reading. Keep up the good work.
Many thanks,
mtglasses
Date: 07 Apr 2010 12:56 PM Title: Chapter 30 Epi
i loved this story, i love football and twilight and for you to combine the two was great
Date: 09 Mar 2010 6:02 PM Title: Chapter 4
hey i think your story is really cool :) just startet reading it and like it very much. i think it´s a nice idea to give them other looks. it geats boring to read the same descriptions again and again and their looks match quite good ;)
Author's Response:
Thank You! I hope you enjoy the rest of the story, it is going to take you on quite a journey! :)
MBella
Date: 23 Feb 2010 7:53 PM Title: Chapter 31 Outtake 1
Absolutely fell in love with this story. I love how you made the characters your own. And really the only thing you used was the names. If I were you I'd change the names. Then I'd get it published. I would so buy this!
I... I'm speechless. Best Story I've ever read, and I've read a lot. I really think you should find a way to publish this. I would buy it, A thousand times over! Best Thing I've ever read. Book, story, or fanfic. My favorite Writing by far. You're an Amazing writer. You blew me away.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! You don't know how much your words mean to me! :) I am so happy you liked it. I hope I see you on the review page of my new fic coming March 1st. :)
MBella
Date: 18 Feb 2010 12:15 AM Title: Chapter 31 Outtake 1
this story was amazing and emotional ! i loved it !!
I am a little confused on one point though i though bella said that she couldn't have children any more so how did they have two children in the end???
Date: 15 Feb 2010 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 5
what does mi riena mean??
Author's Response:
It means my queen. :) Thanks for reviewing!
MBella
Date: 14 Feb 2010 4:07 PM Title: Chapter 31 Outtake 1
Aww......... bless
Author's Response:
Thank you! I hope you loved it! :)
MBella
Date: 14 Feb 2010 3:54 PM Title: Chapter 30 Epi
This story is bloody brilliant i was wondering if u could email mii a copy of it just 2 have on my laptop or 2 print 2 have around please my email is Bethanywebb111@hotmail.com enen if u cant or wont polease let mii kno
Author's Response:
Thank you! Your words mean so much to me! I will email you a copy. :)
MBella
Date: 10 Feb 2010 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 3
good story. i cant wait to read more
Author's Response:
Thanks! I hope you love the rest of it.
MBella