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Reviewer: Petralouise Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2016 1:03 PM Title: Chapter 10

I know you haven't posted any new chapters of this story but I sure hope you pick it back up and start posting again I would love to read more 

Reviewer: bran Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2015 12:48 AM Title: Chapter 10

waiting for a update on this its a great story so far

Reviewer: loventherussian17 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2013 5:21 PM Title: Chapter 10

great story so far cant wait to see what happens next

Reviewer: CrazyDay Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2013 9:24 AM Title: Chapter 1

Please update! It is soooo good! Don't leave us hanging - better late than never. :-)

Reviewer: CrazyMazie Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2012 1:21 AM Title: Chapter 10

Is this story still in progress?

ARe you updating?

Reviewer: shortieecakee Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2011 7:50 AM Title: Chapter 10

I love this story. Why does this have to be the end?

Reviewer: frostbitten Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Mar 2011 10:56 PM Title: Chapter 10

Okay....it's been almost a year since this updated. I can only read 10 chapters over so many times!! Please update!! I would love to see what this develops into!!

Reviewer: Connie-Louise Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2011 10:30 PM Title: Chapter 1

I really hope you update Its too good to leave...... :)

Reviewer: twilightlover19 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2011 4:37 PM Title: Chapter 10

this is great please update soon

Reviewer: nanlovestwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2011 1:42 AM Title: Chapter 10

I started reading this because I thought it was a Bella/Edward story, but it looks like it's turning into a Bella/Jacob story and I'm so not into anything except Bella/Edward.  Can someone clarify which direction this story will be heading?

Reviewer: NACHO Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jan 2011 6:15 AM Title: Chapter 10

I absolutely adore this story. Please, please, please, continue. It is the reason i registered on this site, I got the link off your fanfic page. You are an amzing author with serious talent. I can't wait to begin reading your other stories.

Reviewer: AlicecullensBFF Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jan 2011 12:38 AM Title: Chapter 1

Nice... I think Edward is a bit of an asshole though

Lol

Reviewer: giosampaio Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2010 7:17 PM Title: Chapter 1

love this story ! 

Reviewer: anira4 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2010 12:01 AM Title: Chapter 10

This is a wonderful, wonderful story. Out of all your stories, this is the one I have liked best. Could you please update soon?

Reviewer: storylover Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2010 4:38 PM Title: Chapter 10

Love this story. Good Job!

Reviewer: Marybeth Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2010 2:55 AM Title: Chapter 10

love it!

Reviewer: violetflor Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2010 1:42 AM Title: Chapter 1

oie

Adorei a fic. Você escreve divinamente.

parabéns

Reviewer: Rowen Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2010 9:45 AM Title: Chapter 10

Hey,

 

will there be more updates?

Reviewer: kalaekalae Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2010 5:28 PM Title: Chapter 10

I love this story... I hope to see, real soon, an update or several... congratulations.

Reviewer: Treebeard Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2010 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 10

Is this story dead? I really liked it.



Author's Response:

Hey there.. no it isn't dead.. I am so sorry it has been a while.. but life has gotten out of hand.  Both TSO and I have so much on our plates.  I promise that we will get back to this.. I appreciate you wanting more of it.. We really love this story too, and have a great plot all worked out for it.  Right now, we are spending all of our efforts on VO, but as soon as things level off, we will get back to posting this one too..

Don't get too frustrated with us.. We really appreciate you.

Thanks,

FOOTROZA and TSO

Reviewer: Gibbs Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2010 12:20 AM Title: Chapter 10

OMG....I have been waiting for the next chapter it seems like...FOREVER lol. When are you going to post again?

Reviewer: rjsk Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2010 11:59 AM Title: Chapter 10

Enjoying the story so far. Looking forwarg to the rest. Maybe more of Edwards POV?!

Reviewer: Tasshhaaar Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2010 11:34 PM Title: Chapter 7

Are you still updating this story?

Reviewer: smartcandies103 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2010 12:56 AM Title: Chapter 1

r u gunna update soon?

Reviewer: Es My Brand of Heroin Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2010 6:31 PM Title: Chapter 10

Also, love your opening pics.

Reviewer: Es My Brand of Heroin Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2010 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 9

Can't tell you guys how many times I've actually put my hand to my face in embarassment for the characters!

Reviewer: Es My Brand of Heroin Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2010 11:43 AM Title: Chapter 1

Fucking douchebag.

Reviewer: shireentay Signed starstar [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2010 5:44 PM Title: Chapter 10

haha....pity edward.

Reviewer: shireentay Signed starhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2010 5:23 PM Title: Chapter 9

Sigh. I've finally found you !!! I thought The training school will be at here only. So, I keep on waiting you update The daddy's little girl but so far haven't so I've came to check at here...and got...huzzah~~~ ^^

 

Please make it Edward and Bella. >"<

P.S : Do ya have facebook?? I've follow you on Twitter.

Facebook = Shireen EnriQue

Fanfiction.net = Michiru Ichigo. ^^

I've admire you long time, but never get the chance to message you. Now, it got....^^ hope that I can be your friend??

 

I'll rate this for 3 for your hard work..and for not being able to write Edward in...:(

Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 May 2010 11:56 AM Title: Chapter 10

I actually felt bad for Edward.  It made sense why he hasn't contacted Bella.  Hopefully, they can talk soon.

Reviewer: childrenwith4legs Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 May 2010 9:59 PM Title: Chapter 10

I'm really enjoying your story... although, I will admit... I had to really hold back on the vomit during the 'date with Jacob' chapter.  From the sounds of it, I think he might be up to something with his buddies against Bella.  I hope not, but that is the feeling I am getting. 

Thanks for the story.  Can't wait to see what happens next.

Reviewer: Teaste Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 May 2010 10:01 PM Title: Chapter 10

Please oh please update soon.  I love the triangle of this Edward, Bella and Jacob.

Reviewer: roxie1207 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 May 2010 4:22 PM Title: Chapter 10

I really like this story--honestly, everything you guys post.  Please update soon--hoping to see a jealous Edward?  ;)

Reviewer: pixiewriter Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2010 10:58 AM Title: Chapter 10

Please update soon.

Reviewer: luv4jake Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Apr 2010 1:41 PM Title: Chapter 10

I loved it. Charlie is the man. I mean is the man but he is on Edward's ass. Poor Edward is going through it. I love his mom too.

Reviewer: luv4jake Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Apr 2010 1:22 PM Title: Chapter 9

I liked it. Jake was cool & thoughtful. I hope he doesn't turn into an ass.

Reviewer: luv4jake Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 16 Apr 2010 1:05 PM Title: Chapter 8

Oh crap I didn't think you go this direction but I was secretly hoping even though I know she is going to end up with Edward I love the drama of it all.

Reviewer: luv4jake Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Apr 2010 12:50 PM Title: Chapter 7

Oh Mike is a total douche. Rose & Alice just dropped Bella & Rachel like their underwear fast. I guess Bella will do the same to Rachel when she gets a man. Damn the circle of life it sucks. I love it though.

Reviewer: luv4jake Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Apr 2010 11:57 AM Title: Chapter 6

Tanya that bitch that was so wrong. I have no words.

Reviewer: luv4jake Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Apr 2010 11:26 AM Title: Chapter 5

Oh shit Bella gave up her v card and Edward he really is an ass. I thought maybe her drink was spiked which made so much sense because she too square of a person to give it up so easily. I can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: luv4jake Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Apr 2010 7:27 AM Title: Chapter 4

OMG This is like a train wreck but I'm too scared to see the outcome. Tanya is a hating ass whore. Bella totally is stepping outside of her box i hope she doesn't give up the goodies. 

Reviewer: luv4jake Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Apr 2010 6:50 AM Title: Chapter 3

Oh I'm loving it. Its about to go down I can feel it.

Reviewer: luv4jake Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 16 Apr 2010 5:55 AM Title: Chapter 2

Oh shit I laughed so hard about Jasper being a nerd before being turned toward the dark side. The three kings are sexy and assholes but what can you do they're hot! Watch ladies and hold on to your panties they are going hunting for virgin puntang. Will they find any? I can't wait to see.

Reviewer: luv4jake Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 16 Apr 2010 5:06 AM Title: Chapter 1

Oh Edward you're so bad you're good. I ran out of nerdward so I'm going for my second favorite badassward. I can't wait to see what happens next.

Reviewer: TropicoOfCancer Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2010 9:58 PM Title: Chapter 10

Great chapter. I can't wait for more Bella and Edward interaction. Jacob is super sweet but I hope she stays with Edward. :) 

 

Excited to read the next chapter!

Reviewer: nessie-janie90 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2010 2:37 PM Title: Chapter 1

hey,

i am really confused...i really want to add this story to favorites but i dont get how to get alerts for new chapters?

 

Xx Nessie

Reviewer: Lee Cullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Apr 2010 5:58 AM Title: Chapter 10

Just love it !

I hate and love Edward right now but no mater what I can't support the idea of Bella and Jocob together .Is not mean to be !
I'm from Brazil and I know that you have a lot of fans from here. I'm very happy that I find this estory, is difficult to find good ones.
Congratulations and please keep it up.

Reviewer: shadowcat2009 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2010 1:24 AM Title: Chapter 10

love it. update soon

Reviewer: sessahhh Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2010 3:49 PM Title: Chapter 10

Glad to see Edward finally came clean and told his mom everything (except for the drugs...). I guess this made me not want to kill Edward. We needed to hear his reasoning cause I think a bunch of your readers were pretty pissed about how quiet he's been. Good job!

Reviewer: spartangirl03 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2010 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 10

Great !!! I love me some Edward . I hope Esme goes and tell Chief Stalker off ...lol and hopefully Bella finds out soon what is going on so they can meet again .

Reviewer: Trudygill23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2010 4:08 PM Title: Chapter 10

Loved the chapter. Can't wait for the Bella and Edward (soon, right? :))

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2010 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 10

poor eddie! what is bella gonna do when she hears what charlie has been up to.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2010 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 9

wonder whats up with jake and the mood swings. is he taking roids? that's how he beefed up and now has a temper? date was good, sweet and semi innocent

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2010 12:50 PM Title: Chapter 8

uh oh edward is not fonna like this. he can try to be all cool about it but we all know he is gonna flip his lid

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2010 12:16 PM Title: Chapter 7

charlie is being a douche. one little mistake is not the end of the world!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2010 12:03 PM Title: Chapter 6

wow tanya really is a bitch. i wonder why she desided to throw the new life and new friends away?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2010 11:50 AM Title: Chapter 5

charlie better not think that e hurt her and she better set him straight if he does

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2010 11:20 AM Title: Chapter 4

oh no he is gonna hurt her feelings

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2010 5:54 AM Title: Chapter 3

let the fun begin!

what the hell is tanya playing at?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2010 5:27 AM Title: Chapter 2

did you hear that? it is the begining of the end for eddies bad ass days! actually it sounds like all 3 boys are gonna be getting more than they bargained for tonight!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2010 5:09 AM Title: Chapter 1

wow eddie is an ASSHOLE!!

bella is a goodie two shoes.

this is gonna be fun!!

Reviewer: joice84 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2010 3:09 AM Title: Chapter 10

wow I missed him!!!! poor Edward Chiefe Swan are so bad !!!!! I wanted so much them both together again

Reviewer: JustJillian16 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2010 8:28 PM Title: Chapter 10

Take long much?! I was ready to remove it from my favorites.. sorry.. haha, but it's just too bad that he'll have to get rid of his income.. ;]

Can't wait for the next chapter!! <3

Reviewer: BUTTON Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2010 3:01 AM Title: Chapter 10

EPOV is fantastic!! Funny stuff.  Thanks for the update. I luv your stuff ladies;p

Reviewer: MyBrownEyes Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2010 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 10

At least there's a reason for Edward being missing. I don't think Bella will be that understanding about it though. Charlie is definitely going overboard, but I think its something any dad would do. I want his mom...she is so cool and understanding. Great chapter and Thanks for sharing!

Reviewer: DestanyRose Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2010 6:15 PM Title: Chapter 10

It was good to see what was up with Edward.  I cant blame Charlie at all since it was his baby girl and all but he has gone over board just a little.  I wondered how long it would take Edward to have to get rid of this little green house.  If he wants a chance with Bella he will have to start straightening up other wise Charlie will never let him around her again.  Great job.

Reviewer: Belindella Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2010 2:37 PM Title: Chapter 1

Oh, wow. Edward is hate-worthy ATM. If this fic is going to be anything like "No Place Like Home" it should be fan-freaking-tastic! Look foward to diving in. But right now, I need to sleep. 1am.

Reviewer: Aldi74 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2010 11:10 AM Title: Chapter 10

Oh God, Chief Swan and his six tickets!!! It's good to have such an understanding mother. Pls. update this time sooner ;-)

Reviewer: adhita Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2010 5:46 AM Title: Chapter 10

That idiot chooses NOW to obey orders given by authority? NOW?  He started this story being so sure of himself and doing whatever he wanted and now he can't even phone Bella once (hell, even texting her would have been acceptable) to let her know that he's thinking of her.  What an idiot!  When he finally approaches Bella I hope she makes him work hard for her forgiveness.

Reviewer: SnowyHedwig Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2010 4:54 AM Title: Chapter 10

I'm glad he's going to get rid of his "babies" - yay! Chief Swan harassing him like that just isn't cool, though. Yeah, he fucked up... but what the Chief is doing isn't right, either.

As for Edward contacting Bella... I think she would understand about her dad going ape shit and Edward's fear of calling her - the way the Chief is treating her, I can see that she would be pretty darn understanding...

Reviewer: SnowyHedwig Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2010 3:37 AM Title: Chapter 9

Somehow I missed the updates on FF, and found new chapters here, yay!

I feel bad for Bella - while I appreciate Charlie's concern, if he doesn't stop reminding her of her mistakes, he'll push her away. The date was good, I'm interested in what will happen next.

Reviewer: chartwilightmom Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2010 2:33 AM Title: Chapter 10

Lovely chapter. Yes, we have been missing you, but RL sometimes can get in the way. He's still a dick, but I have a feeling it's going to get worse. Hmm, maybe arrested and Bella shows up at the station to visit Charlie. =0 J

Reviewer: frekles Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2010 1:11 AM Title: Chapter 10

loved it! While it would have been nice to know what Bella and Jake have been up to, It is nice to see how Fuckward has been..............I am glad to see you have not given up on this story, you two are the best!

Reviewer: rhapsody Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2010 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 10

Wow the Chief is being ridiculous, I'd definitely slap a restraining order against him and get those tickets dropped

Reviewer: Romix Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2010 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 10

I really don't want to know, thank you :P

well he does have a reason not to call her, but not even a text??? a text saying 'hey I want to call you but  your dad is harrasing me and I need to wait until he calms down', what about that??

ok I'll see ya guys later

much love!

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2010 6:31 PM Title: Chapter 10

Love it!

Reviewer: rachelcullen77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2010 4:46 PM Title: Chapter 10

Loved the chapter!

 

I want him Mom...she's so goddamn cool! Hehe! And seriously, I think Charlie is taking it a TAD over the top.....LOL

 

Great chapter though, I was so excited to see this updated!

Reviewer: TwilightJemS Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2010 3:46 PM Title: Chapter 10

I do feel better now knowing he wasn't just blowing Bella off!

:)

Reviewer: PennyLaneMasenCullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2010 3:33 PM Title: Chapter 10

Please udate sooner. I really like this story.

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2010 1:37 PM Title: Chapter 10

Well, I hope Charlie gets in deep trouble for his macho misuse of his badge. Lord, $2,000. worth of tickets for a kid is almost a years worth of earnings from a part time job. That's crazy.

Thanks for posting, looking forward to next chapter!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2010 1:08 PM Title: Chapter 10

I was wondering what was going on with Edward. I did not even think about Charlie going after Edward like that. That was kinda funny. Love Esme for being so understanding. Can't wait till Mama Bear gets a hold of Daddy Bear. Now that would be funny if Charlie and Esme started going out. That would be a real punishment for Edward. HaHa

Reviewer: celinewilliam Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2010 12:48 PM Title: Chapter 10

It's nice to read from you again ! Poor Edward ... Chef Swan is really tough on him. Dying to see Edward & Bella together again ;-)

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2010 12:13 PM Title: Chapter 10

I hope Edward grows up a little bit. He needs to find a way to talk to Bella. She is hurting. He needs to explain why he hasn't called. He might usually be a jerk in this story, but he actually likes her. He needs to let her know.

Reviewer: Ardanwen78 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2010 10:40 AM Title: Chapter 10

Hiya,

well, interesting to say the least :D Charlie has been houding his ass, it does get him off the hook a bit ;)

Now, will he get rid of his babies AND call bella? ;)

ttfn

Ardanwen

Reviewer: london spam Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2010 9:28 AM Title: Chapter 10

Poor Edward is being harassed by the pissed off Chief. I remember when Edward was laughing his ass off at the Chief's face when he dropped off Bella. I don't see Edward laughing any more. That's totallly what he gets for being such a shit!

 

Love Esme! I'm wonder how E&B are going to get together after all this. Even if Esme is able to get Charlie to back off, how is Edward going to approach Bella? What about all the warm, tingley feelings Jacob is giving her? Edward has his work cut out for him.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2010 7:43 AM Title: Chapter 10

Thanks for the update I thought you left.  I am so glad to find out what was going on with Edward I was getting pretty pissed at him.  I want to know what is going to happen when he finds out about Bellas date with Jacob???  How is he going to get around Charlie???????

Reviewer: MrsJakeBlack Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2010 5:05 AM Title: Chapter 10

naww poor edward

getting hassled from chief swan for not really doing anything bad much

and he has to get rid of his plants ):

saddd

oh well hope this whole thing blows over soon

anways awesome chapter

UPDATE SOON!!!!

Reviewer: lala43 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2010 4:50 AM Title: Chapter 10

You have shamed me. I almost gave up on this story, yet you just reminded me why I loved it to begin with. I beg your forgiveness and will never doubt your updates again.

Reviewer: avidreader69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2010 4:19 AM Title: Chapter 10

Okay here's my guess as to where the plot could go.  Edward is the guy who looks like the "bad" guy, Daddy wants Bella to stay away from him, bad news, yada, yada.  On the other hand there is Jacob who the Chief is puching Bella to.  Good kid, not a "troublemaker".  Jacob turns out to be tha bad seed, Edward will look good compared to whatever Jacob is into, but it will take a life endangering event happening to Bella for the Chief to get a clear picture?

Mama lion protecting her cub, nothing fiercer!  Although a peaved off Daddy is an awesome sight to behold as well.

Reviewer: erikajo Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2010 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 10

I have no idea what HUMMM means.  I'm SO not hip.  Please enlighten me?

Thanks so much for the update.  You guys are always worth the wait! 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2010 3:47 AM Title: Chapter 10

poor eddie.    chief could get into real trouble if they went to court

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2010 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 10

S.O. & Foot

Glad that Edwards mom is going to help out!!!

We need to have Edward and Bella together not apart!!!!!

Post more when you can!!!

Cory

Reviewer: Donut_Magnet Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2010 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 10

Mama Esme to the rescue! I hope she kicks some Chief ass!

Ok, so he hasn't not contacted Bella because he's a total prick (maybe just a little one), sadly she doesn't know it's mostly because of the Chief that he hasn't attempted contact. And now she's getting along super with Jake *shudder*. I'm sure that will go down well when Edward finds out!

Snicker! <3 you gals!

Reviewer: gabys Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2010 2:24 AM Title: Chapter 10

Thanks for the update and EPOV, loved it.

Reviewer: kneon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2010 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 10

Poor Edward, he wanted to call her but can't because of her father.  He should still try to contact her.  He may be turning a new leaf with his feelings for Bella.  Can't wait for the next ch.

Reviewer: Twilightobsessed09 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2010 2:20 AM Title: Chapter 10

Finally..Good to see him and apparently we know what's be keeping him occupied.

Not that I don't get the overprotective parent rant Charlie is on but seriously dude 's a pain in the ass for me right now. Totally cockblock some potential growth between these two that could have been going on. I'm fuckin' pissed off at him.

First he hardly acknowledge her and sends her to be babysits and acts like it's the best thing in the fuckin' world for her to date Jake. What is she five?! A five yrs. old is no way capable of the decisions she made. Which could have been a hell of a lot worse than Edward.

I hope it'll die down and I wnat him to go after her.

 As for Jake, don't really got anything against the kid(key word"kid") but I see him as a cockblock right now and in the immediate future.

Wonder what her reaction would be if she heard from Edward?..nonchalant with a bit of frazzle or blow him off..

He's gonna have to get rid of his fiancial backing because he definitely doesn' t want to give Charlie that kind of ammunition against him.

I'm glad he felt remorseful about the lack of contact between him and her.

May I dear say our rude boy is feeling?..

 Looking forward to more..

Reviewer: LindyP Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2010 2:15 AM Title: Chapter 10

So that's why he didn't call! Can't say I blame him there, but at least a text to Bella would have been nice! At least Edward's mom sounds cool about all this. Great update! Looking forward to TTSS & VO updates too!

LindyP :)

Reviewer: AnaCullen159 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2010 1:49 AM Title: Chapter 10

ahahah finally i have been waiting for this!

Reviewer: jessy122 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2010 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 10

Love, love the story and looking forward to more.

How often you guys update?

Reviewer: arfess96 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2010 1:41 AM Title: Chapter 10

Poor harassed Edward, cry me a river you womanizing drug dealer. But I guess the fact that he kinda likes her makes it all better. I guess I find it hard to believe he likes anyone but himself. I wonder if he will redeem himself later on.

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